My main issue with this book is that it had a tendency to fixate heavily on (supposedly) key moments in the character’s lives that were, ultimately, not expanded on or all that insightful in shedding light on their decisions and actions. The most notable example is the prologue, which is later revealed to be Layla’s family’s discovery (particular her mother’s) of her relationship with Nate, with Layla locking herself in a room to prevent her arranged engagement (and eventual marriage) to Sameer. Despite this memory coming up time and time again as an insight into Layla’s relationship with her mother, it doesn’t do so in a way that reveals anything new - since pretty much every conversation between Layla and her mother reflects the same theme of her US and Indian identities being at odds with one another. In the same vain, despite its intention to represent Layla’s defiance to her family’s ideals, this flashback doesn’t really inform Layla’s character arc - since she spends most of the middle portion of the novel focusing on how to adapt before shifting to the desire to flee from her husband and his family. Instead of connecting that adapt vs. flee mindset to the struggle between her competing identities, the inciting incidents for Layla’s rebellion are the reveal of Sameer’s affair and the death of Henna - which sends a completely different message than what was built by the author in these flashbacks.
As such, it honestly felt like a lot of the plot points were their own, individual stories rather than a unified narrative - since there was so much jumping around, and in particular, a lot of plot twists at the end that weren’t given enough time to be expanded on (Sameer’s affair, Henna’s death, etc)
In terms of positives, I did love the depiction of the wedding and thought the author did a fantastic job of incorporating very rich descriptions about different religious and cultural traditions. Although there were certain elements that I think could’ve been excluded - in particular, the consistent reference to Sameer licking the space in between his teeth - the author is clearly effective at putting together a vivid yet digestible narrative.