So if unsolved Vampire Cultists' obsession with her, a still absent magical artifacts, an unconscious mystery man, an apprentice with buttons for eyes, and the political unrest of the Realms wasn't enough for Jax, now she's got to be reunited with someone she'd rather forget. Izzy Crowe, witch coven leader and former mean girl from paranormal boarding school needs help after receiving a death threat. And then there's the new drug in town causing chaos that has a whiff of something distinctly magical about it...
I had hoped that this would be the installment where we finally learned something about the Copperfield Institute and Jax's difficult past related to it considering it involves one of her old school frenemies. Sadly this is all glossed over with the good ol' ex-prankster/bully stories without any detail. There's still not a great deal of character development for side characters or Jax. At least she's not inexplicably whining about wanting to know more about her family anymore - that was out of step with her supposed tough-as-DMs persona (also she has her own memories, so how come she's never looked for herself if she's so desperate, had a hotline to The Council, and is such an amazing PI?) She does seem to have gotten more illogical in her actions.
Jax doesn't spend enough time interacting with anyone but her own inner monologue, so relationships remain superficial tell-not-show affairs. I expected more frisson between her and Izzy, but nothing much happens. I feel bad for the characters who are off-screened; poor old Liz who only got half a chapter of appearance in book 2 has been relegated to recounting rather than actually surprising Jax as events happen. Darick's more or less a no-show and all I know of Bron is he's a shifter-boy who has buttons for eyes (makes me think of Coraline even if that's not the literal idea).
We pick up straight after the events for book 3, but again the plot-lines feel simultaneously spread too thinly and like there's too much going on all at once. Scenes hops from one strand to another meaning nothing feels overly satisfying. I'm glad the central mini-mystery got resolved in a good way, but all those other bits floating around diluted the story down.
Also the writing is still choppy. Descriptions remain vague. Events are repeated (for example a burst eardrum self-diagnosed, then five minutes later Jax is surprised to self-diagnose herself with it once again). The hop between past and present tenses is a lot more frequent than in previous books and doesn't make a lot of sense stylistically. Jax's thoughts are sometimes just long rambles, but other times highlighted in italics; one style or the other would have flowed much better.
It's breezy enough if you don't mind the written for TV style, but I really wish we could get some answers about all this "mysterious" stuff; pasts, politics, magic... Half way through the series and things aren't very clear yet.
-Read as part of the Blood Magic Box Set-