Okay, so here’s the thing…the story had potential, I actually enjoyed the overall idea, but the pacing completely threw it off for me. It felt like everything was in fast-forward. Nothing had the time to breathe. The plot itself could’ve easily been stretched into five volumes and honestly, should have been. Instead, it rushed through moments that were supposed to hit emotionally and just… didn’t.
Because of that, the characters ended up feeling kind of flat. Not because they didn’t have anything going on, but because the story didn’t give us the space to sit with them. Especially when something big happened, like the kidnapping in volume two or when the ML suddenly pulled a gun on his dad…i was like, wait, what?? This just came out of nowhere with barely any buildup.
Same thing with the death of the MC’s mom. It should have been a devastating moment, but it just kind of happened and then the story kept going like nothing. There wasn’t enough time to feel anything. And that really killed the emotional weight this story could’ve had.
Also…the romance? They went on one date, had sex, and then suddenly we’re supposed to believe they’re in love. I’m all for love developing fast in stories if the shift is believable but here, we never really get that moment where either of them clearly starts falling. Like, give me something. A shift in how they look at each other, a scene where something clicks. But this just felt like insta-love with no foundation.
So yeah, I liked the story at its core. It had a lot of potential. But the pacing and lack of character development really held it back. I'm not mad I read it, but I’m disappointed because this could have been so much better if the author just slowed down and let the story breathe.