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129 pages, ebook
First published September 2, 2011
I have two main problems with this. First, the ending felt rushed. The ending itself wasn't bad but after the last bit of action a whole ton of important things happened really fast with little textual backing.
The second problem is that this was a romance with semi-erotic scenes yet the scene I was looking forward to the most (the two main characters AFTER they admitted their feelings) didn't occur in the text, it was merely suggested as happening. I was really looking forward to it so I was dissapointed when it didn't happen.
Outside of these two issues you have a well written story. I think the formatting could have been handled better though. I also feel like the content of this story could have been expanded to be two or three times the length without detracting from the story. In fact it would have only added to it.