A really good issue.
# short stories
Flipped, by Leah Cypess
A high school love story where the characters randomly shift places with their alternate universe selves. Pretty enjoyable. There's a good amount of centrifuge and manipulation that was fun. A lot of "but what if he's thinking that im thinking about double crossing him? I should double cross him first". Was confusing at some points. I think some formatting or a bit extra description would have gone a long way. Having space where the character reacts to something that's happened (e.g. The first dimension swap) would have helped communicate that what happened was a big deal, and why it was a big deal. Instead that stuff is kind of glossed over without giving any context, like the intention was to encourage retreads. Still good tho.
Tamaza's future and mine, by Kenneth Schneyer
The story of a sleeper agent in a silent rebellion, who gets a bit too close to the enemy civilians she's living amongst. Pretty enjoyable. I really liked the setting. It was realised really well through the characters, their habits and world building details. It was really well done. The actual story is only fine, but that was kind of the point. Highlighted the small people and why they mattered, to make the character and readers wonder if the MC should go through with their mission.
Future perfect, by Genevieve Valentine
Workers at a futuristic museum replicate the horrible recipes and living conditions of 1950's housewives for the benefit of the rich 1%. Meanwhile a war rages. I wanted to like this one more than I did. The premise/setting is cool (albeit somewhat similar to the last story), but it was very disjointed. This was clearly intentional but it was still hard to follow. I think more could have been done with a really cool setting.
The weight of oceans, by Mark D. Jacobsen
A city is due to be destroyed in the morning, as dam defences protecting it from sea level rise are removed. In the meantime, two young people go on a romp through the doomed city. Fantastic. Loved it. The descriptions were vivid, the setting was lush and realised, and the story was engrossing. No complaints at all. Go read it.
# novelettes
Sisters of the Flare, by Stephen Case
A prequel to another story. Skipped it.
A family matter, by Robert Morrell Jr.
Really good. A fast paced thriller with tons of action. A guy in the South Carolina marsh county gets persued after doing a family genetics test and strange results come up. Really good, but fumbled the ending. It just stops, and then gives a sort of half-explanation that wasn't very well explained. Like they sit the character down to explain things and didn't really explain very well. Otherwise really good
This good lesson keep, by James Van Pelt.
Cringe. I'm happy the author got to work through his feelings, but yeah, not for me. An old teacher goes through hamlet with her class. Also there's some tech embedded in their desks. And the kids learn that actually, hamlet really is great, and they don't need their technology as much as they thought, that love conquers all and they have have really good discussions where they're quoting lines from the play that they memorised. Then they get swords out for a duelling scene and actually whack each other with them? The author bio said he was a teacher. OK. What the fuck kind of school did you teach at, that this would be OK? The main characters are all unlikeable, the students are all unrealistic, and the way technology is delt with in the classroom is super unrealistic. As a high school teacher myself, I grade this novelette a 👎
Yarns, by Susan Palwick
Really good. A sad look at a future where the hate groups that are springing up around us, continue to grow more dominant. The fictional fascists are not reminiscent of any particular real group as far as I know, but they seem very realistic. Just the sort of dumb weapon-obsessed macho dorks that you could see becoming prominent. The story is really well told and easy to follow. The descriptions are vivid and its paced really well. All the characters seem really well written, and their dialogue seems really natural. Super great job by the author, especially as most of the characters are EAL/D. just a really well written story.
Untouchable, by Garcia Y Robertson
The author bio at the start of the story tells a really boring story about their kid, and how they were really sneaky. And then it explains some historical context about blimps. Then the story starts, and all the characters are named after Norse mythology and are aboard a Norse mythology-inspired space station and I just had no idea what was happening. Tapped out. Completely uninviting read.
You know me Al, by Alex Irvine.
Well, Al, I wasn't too fussed about this one. A baseball player goes on a tour to a bunch of different moons and planets. Like when the AFL teams play in random other countries to spread the sport. The whole thing is narrated in first person past tesnse, Al, like a diary entry, to the baseball player's bestie back on earth. I thought for a while, Al, that the bestie Al had died before the story, but nah. I mean, I ended up skipping big chunks, Al, so I might have missed it. It's very focused on the baseball, you see Al, which just wasn't my thing at all. It's 90% describing baseball and 10% guff like "I went to Europa today it was nice. End of message." there's some enjoyment from the POV character being a thick wanker, Al, but he's not very engaging. And the way the text was continually interrupted, Al, by the narration saying 'Al' throughout, made it annoying to read. Yeah, not for me. My eyes just kept glazing over.