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Darkest Dynasty #1
A Tale of Treachery: Darkest Dynasty Book One
Dahlia has spent her life running from a monster, only to fall into another’s path.
It’s been ten years since she escaped the darkness. Ten years spent hiding her magic in a kingdom where magic is outlawed. Despite neglecting that side of herself, Dahlia is happy with the life she’s built in Cambriel.
Not only is she on the fast track to becoming a Royal Scholar, but the love of her life, Prince Aiden, is finally returning her long-held affections.
However, the infuriating Royal Assassin, Ryken, shadows her every move. He's always watching and waiting to catch a glimpse of whatever makes her tick. In his relentless quest to figure her out, Ryken uncovers Dahlia’s darkest secret—and he’s not above using blackmail to get what he wants.
Dahlia will do anything to keep her secret, even if it requires getting close to the mysterious assassin. Because if the truth gets revealed, everyone she loves will pay a deadly price. And that price is delivered at the hands of a monster.
A Tale of Treachery is a dark fantasy romance with fae, witches, and morally gray characters who will stop at nothing to get what they want. This book contains explicit content and darker elements, including mature language, violence, and explicit sexual content. It is not intended for anyone under 18 years of age. This is book one in a series.
It’s been ten years since she escaped the darkness. Ten years spent hiding her magic in a kingdom where magic is outlawed. Despite neglecting that side of herself, Dahlia is happy with the life she’s built in Cambriel.
Not only is she on the fast track to becoming a Royal Scholar, but the love of her life, Prince Aiden, is finally returning her long-held affections.
However, the infuriating Royal Assassin, Ryken, shadows her every move. He's always watching and waiting to catch a glimpse of whatever makes her tick. In his relentless quest to figure her out, Ryken uncovers Dahlia’s darkest secret—and he’s not above using blackmail to get what he wants.
Dahlia will do anything to keep her secret, even if it requires getting close to the mysterious assassin. Because if the truth gets revealed, everyone she loves will pay a deadly price. And that price is delivered at the hands of a monster.
A Tale of Treachery is a dark fantasy romance with fae, witches, and morally gray characters who will stop at nothing to get what they want. This book contains explicit content and darker elements, including mature language, violence, and explicit sexual content. It is not intended for anyone under 18 years of age. This is book one in a series.
332 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 20, 2023
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Mellie T. Tollem
3 books36 followersMellie T. Tollem is a fantasy romance author who survives on a diet of coffee and cheese. You can find her traveling, fostering cats, or living in an imaginary world when she is not writing.
Mellie firmly believes that the best stories are somewhat tragic, and the most loveable characters are morally grey.
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June 1, 2023
There's fae and I'm a sucker for fae so i thought I might find something different here. I did. The idea of the plot is really good but the execution fell flat and the plot has so many hole its frustrating.
From the beginning we learn D is abused by M who is obsessed with her cause they are the same species. Their group and another are at war and she hears screams and see cambriel armour and M uses black flames to turn everyone to ash. Silence. Noone left. But then we find our later that none of her group actually died as they are all caught by the prince and put in cages? So how exactly did a 14 year old M burn all their enemy to ash and portal their group to safety in the blink of an eye? And they all remain hidden from a country who hunts magic and none of their group seen or heard from for 10 years. And M who disappears and is same species and same magic as her cant walk through the rift. Weird.
Oh but only 1 boring human lived and saved her. How exactly did R do that? It sounds like he blindly stumbled out of nowhere and the death of all the soldiers who were with him had no effect on him?
So many gaps in the plot.
10 years later and she's somehow bff with the only prince in the land and his 2 frends. Played with them as children. Sorry but 13+ isn't a child, they are teens. This is the age girls stop horsing around with boys so not sure why she got to until 23. Also don't really explain why she became bff with them when R is just a scholar. 2 of the boys are the princes soldiers but you never hear of them training.
She loves her prince but then he turns into a dick. So for 10 years she never saw that side of him once but she was with them all the time and she never even thought he would be promised as a child to someone else. Is she clueless? She really loved him in a world where everyone saved themselves for marriage, which she ignores and jumps a lot of magic creatures at a tavern. Yeah true love.
In a world where everyone is a virgin, magical creatures r killed on the regular. Not once did 3 virgins in 10 years die. Hmmmm. Mass public executions. Yet magic users meet at a tavern regularly. 3 virgins at once that unlocks the rift. But not really. Because nothing actually happens until the assassin goes and picks up his powers. So what did the 3 virgins actually do.
Let skip to the good part... the assassin. Who never does anything but stand guard. Who is fae royalty but serves the human king and we dont know why except he's looking for his magic.
The assassin obviously hasn't made a deal with the human king as he walks away from his duties. So why was he wasting time being as assassin at all. You would have thought he made a fae deal. Nope.
He also knows her for 10 years. But then suddenly she's his fated mate. No explanation about how mates work in this world. Assassin is hot n cold to her. How can a mate call her a whore, and bite her and have sex which increases the bond, then he causes her pain in her chest when he walks away but have no reaction himself. Doesn't a mate feel the same things in this world. Why does she suffer alone. If there is a bond, how can it go one way only. Mates usually feel the same things thats why it's called a bond. She gets burning iron and thrown in a dungeon and her mate can't feel that. But she can feel his location at all times until he blocks her at the last 2nd? So much doesn't make sense. So much isn't explained. She knows what a mate is as the witch and the assassins bf are mates and she knows its special. So why isn't it explained then when it's revealed the witch has a mate.
Apparently she's promiscuous but besides jumping the prince once in a tent with their frends nearby listening... gross and once with the assassin she is just a tease and she shies away from any other affection in the book.
She comes across as a bland blur to me. No real solid description of her alluring looks or her lack of charm. She has no real talent except for not using her magic. She lived with a scholar for 10 years yet she has no intellect. She was always around the prince and his bff but she learnt no fighting skills. She was around witches and didnt learn anything about magic. Until 1 day she made a flower from nothing all on her own with no practice and noone to show her how. She just willed it. Uh huh. Its like she says she's amazing but we don't see what makes her amazing.
The rift makes no sense. It was open. M walked through. At the exact same time the assassin fae brother threw a object with fae powers at it and created a barrier. Then it somehow disappeared? For 10 years. Then it reappears but the barrier isn't letting anything through except her but its weakening. How if nothing comes out? What evidence, Mr scholar, shows you its weakening when you only got a small sentinent blob to play with.
But then the assassin can walk through it and grab his powers. He never tried this b4 but was searching for his powers even knowing his brother used them to save them from the shadows. He didnt put 2 and 2 together? Not once? For a 60+ year old he isnt very smart.
He never even though huh the blob hates me I wonder why when they were experimenting.
The princes betrothed acts like a child. She's 17. Been promised and in love with prince whole life. And suddenly he has a mistress. So she decides to be bf with her. This is not normal female behaviour at all. She tells us how Cambria is so diff from her home so much restriction and how she was freer in her own city, “Brighter. Warmer. Better. We welcome all religions. All beliefs. People are free to choose who they want to be. We don’t have public executions, like the ones I’ve heard of here, and nobody cowers in fear of my mother or father like they do with your king.” but she was never allowed to do anything but she isn't watched as she is expected to behave as she's a princess so going to a tavern with magical creatures is exciting for her and new for her as she has never seen one. Wtf. Wouldn't those who are magic inclined want to live in her city where there are no executions. You would think this would be a safe haven so the population would be much bigger. Nope. The princess who doesn't have a personal guard even in a visiting Kingdom has never thought to go out for a walk. She just sits and stares at walls until D came along. Uh huh.
Its like all the characters are playdoh and do nothing until D interacts with them and then they go back to doing nothing while she interacts with someone else.
From the beginning we learn D is abused by M who is obsessed with her cause they are the same species. Their group and another are at war and she hears screams and see cambriel armour and M uses black flames to turn everyone to ash. Silence. Noone left. But then we find our later that none of her group actually died as they are all caught by the prince and put in cages? So how exactly did a 14 year old M burn all their enemy to ash and portal their group to safety in the blink of an eye? And they all remain hidden from a country who hunts magic and none of their group seen or heard from for 10 years. And M who disappears and is same species and same magic as her cant walk through the rift. Weird.
Oh but only 1 boring human lived and saved her. How exactly did R do that? It sounds like he blindly stumbled out of nowhere and the death of all the soldiers who were with him had no effect on him?
So many gaps in the plot.
10 years later and she's somehow bff with the only prince in the land and his 2 frends. Played with them as children. Sorry but 13+ isn't a child, they are teens. This is the age girls stop horsing around with boys so not sure why she got to until 23. Also don't really explain why she became bff with them when R is just a scholar. 2 of the boys are the princes soldiers but you never hear of them training.
She loves her prince but then he turns into a dick. So for 10 years she never saw that side of him once but she was with them all the time and she never even thought he would be promised as a child to someone else. Is she clueless? She really loved him in a world where everyone saved themselves for marriage, which she ignores and jumps a lot of magic creatures at a tavern. Yeah true love.
In a world where everyone is a virgin, magical creatures r killed on the regular. Not once did 3 virgins in 10 years die. Hmmmm. Mass public executions. Yet magic users meet at a tavern regularly. 3 virgins at once that unlocks the rift. But not really. Because nothing actually happens until the assassin goes and picks up his powers. So what did the 3 virgins actually do.
Let skip to the good part... the assassin. Who never does anything but stand guard. Who is fae royalty but serves the human king and we dont know why except he's looking for his magic.
The assassin obviously hasn't made a deal with the human king as he walks away from his duties. So why was he wasting time being as assassin at all. You would have thought he made a fae deal. Nope.
He also knows her for 10 years. But then suddenly she's his fated mate. No explanation about how mates work in this world. Assassin is hot n cold to her. How can a mate call her a whore, and bite her and have sex which increases the bond, then he causes her pain in her chest when he walks away but have no reaction himself. Doesn't a mate feel the same things in this world. Why does she suffer alone. If there is a bond, how can it go one way only. Mates usually feel the same things thats why it's called a bond. She gets burning iron and thrown in a dungeon and her mate can't feel that. But she can feel his location at all times until he blocks her at the last 2nd? So much doesn't make sense. So much isn't explained. She knows what a mate is as the witch and the assassins bf are mates and she knows its special. So why isn't it explained then when it's revealed the witch has a mate.
Apparently she's promiscuous but besides jumping the prince once in a tent with their frends nearby listening... gross and once with the assassin she is just a tease and she shies away from any other affection in the book.
She comes across as a bland blur to me. No real solid description of her alluring looks or her lack of charm. She has no real talent except for not using her magic. She lived with a scholar for 10 years yet she has no intellect. She was always around the prince and his bff but she learnt no fighting skills. She was around witches and didnt learn anything about magic. Until 1 day she made a flower from nothing all on her own with no practice and noone to show her how. She just willed it. Uh huh. Its like she says she's amazing but we don't see what makes her amazing.
The rift makes no sense. It was open. M walked through. At the exact same time the assassin fae brother threw a object with fae powers at it and created a barrier. Then it somehow disappeared? For 10 years. Then it reappears but the barrier isn't letting anything through except her but its weakening. How if nothing comes out? What evidence, Mr scholar, shows you its weakening when you only got a small sentinent blob to play with.
But then the assassin can walk through it and grab his powers. He never tried this b4 but was searching for his powers even knowing his brother used them to save them from the shadows. He didnt put 2 and 2 together? Not once? For a 60+ year old he isnt very smart.
He never even though huh the blob hates me I wonder why when they were experimenting.
The princes betrothed acts like a child. She's 17. Been promised and in love with prince whole life. And suddenly he has a mistress. So she decides to be bf with her. This is not normal female behaviour at all. She tells us how Cambria is so diff from her home so much restriction and how she was freer in her own city, “Brighter. Warmer. Better. We welcome all religions. All beliefs. People are free to choose who they want to be. We don’t have public executions, like the ones I’ve heard of here, and nobody cowers in fear of my mother or father like they do with your king.” but she was never allowed to do anything but she isn't watched as she is expected to behave as she's a princess so going to a tavern with magical creatures is exciting for her and new for her as she has never seen one. Wtf. Wouldn't those who are magic inclined want to live in her city where there are no executions. You would think this would be a safe haven so the population would be much bigger. Nope. The princess who doesn't have a personal guard even in a visiting Kingdom has never thought to go out for a walk. She just sits and stares at walls until D came along. Uh huh.
Its like all the characters are playdoh and do nothing until D interacts with them and then they go back to doing nothing while she interacts with someone else.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 21, 2023
BOBOBOBOOOOORONNG
January 28, 2024
When she burned her best friends village causing them to flee their only safe haven... I mean maybe Malachi is a little bit right for wanting to keep her under his thumb because girl cannot be trusted 😂
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 25, 2023
ugh
This is quite possibly the worst book I’ve ever read. The FMC is whiny, wish’s washy and insipid. Utter garbage
This is quite possibly the worst book I’ve ever read. The FMC is whiny, wish’s washy and insipid. Utter garbage
May 3, 2023
Possible spoilers but I will try to keep them to minimum and will not give too much away.
This story is about Dahlia, a girl who is half human half shade, who has spent the last 10 years hiding alongside the humans, right in amongst the court of a kingdom that executes anyone with magical abilities. However, Dahlia is hiding from a larger threat than the ruthless king; Malachi, the only other half human half shade. He is an abusive man who feel Dahlia and him are destain to be together. Malachi disappeared ten years ago when the portal to the shades world closed and with the portal threading to reopen so does the thread of Malachi returning.
I really enjoyed the large cast of characters that were in this story and how all these characters had their own sub plot that intertwined nicely with the overall main plot of the story. I also loved how each charter felt like they had a unique personality. The pacing of the story was nice and it kept you wanting to keep reading to see want happened next. It had a good balance of fast paced action scenes and slower more intimate scenes. Those spicy scenes were right on point, I loved them and thought they were beautiful written. Especially the one with the prince. It’s not often the male is the inexperienced one, and I loved seeing that for a change. I also loved the love/hate relationship between Ryken and Dahlia.
The few things I felt this story was lacking on was; one the world building and explaining the magic systems. I feel like the author was trying to deliver shocking news at certain points by telling us some one was certain class of magical creature or they were mates. I think it fell flat because the reader didn’t understand how big of deal it was or what that meant for the characters in this world. I also didn’t fully understand how the darkness effect the world or why some of the trees were crystallized.
Second, I felt the main character tried to tell us about what the characters personalities should be without reader actually experiencing it. For example, she kept saying how Ryken was this deadly assassin but other then lurking in the shadows we never see him kill anyone or really even hurt anyone for that matter. Another example the main characters tell us she visited tavern and sleeps around but we never experience that sort of behavior and she acts embarrassed when standing outside the door of someone who is. Not the reaction you would expect from someone who frequents that type of establishment. The writer just need to work a little more on “show, don’t tell”, and using the word “I” less.
Overall the plot was interesting enough that I could look past the flaws in the writing and the ending left me wanting to know what has happened next.
This story is about Dahlia, a girl who is half human half shade, who has spent the last 10 years hiding alongside the humans, right in amongst the court of a kingdom that executes anyone with magical abilities. However, Dahlia is hiding from a larger threat than the ruthless king; Malachi, the only other half human half shade. He is an abusive man who feel Dahlia and him are destain to be together. Malachi disappeared ten years ago when the portal to the shades world closed and with the portal threading to reopen so does the thread of Malachi returning.
I really enjoyed the large cast of characters that were in this story and how all these characters had their own sub plot that intertwined nicely with the overall main plot of the story. I also loved how each charter felt like they had a unique personality. The pacing of the story was nice and it kept you wanting to keep reading to see want happened next. It had a good balance of fast paced action scenes and slower more intimate scenes. Those spicy scenes were right on point, I loved them and thought they were beautiful written. Especially the one with the prince. It’s not often the male is the inexperienced one, and I loved seeing that for a change. I also loved the love/hate relationship between Ryken and Dahlia.
The few things I felt this story was lacking on was; one the world building and explaining the magic systems. I feel like the author was trying to deliver shocking news at certain points by telling us some one was certain class of magical creature or they were mates. I think it fell flat because the reader didn’t understand how big of deal it was or what that meant for the characters in this world. I also didn’t fully understand how the darkness effect the world or why some of the trees were crystallized.
Second, I felt the main character tried to tell us about what the characters personalities should be without reader actually experiencing it. For example, she kept saying how Ryken was this deadly assassin but other then lurking in the shadows we never see him kill anyone or really even hurt anyone for that matter. Another example the main characters tell us she visited tavern and sleeps around but we never experience that sort of behavior and she acts embarrassed when standing outside the door of someone who is. Not the reaction you would expect from someone who frequents that type of establishment. The writer just need to work a little more on “show, don’t tell”, and using the word “I” less.
Overall the plot was interesting enough that I could look past the flaws in the writing and the ending left me wanting to know what has happened next.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 13, 2023
I'll admit it: I like "bad boys" and morally gray characters. And I love when that bad boy turns out to actually be more of a good guy with a good heart in disguise. I do not like stalking and sexual harassment, and unfortunately, that's how we're introduced to our MMC. I'm not interested in learning more about him.
June 1, 2023
The main character literally makes such poor decisions? The MMC is mad for no reason??? I’m all for enemies to lovers to enemies but it didn’t make any true sense. Oh well, I’ll read the second one cuz I’m trash like that. We love fae shit.
July 24, 2024
This book was so boring and I had *issues* with so much.
May 20, 2023
Betrayal, Manipulation and Deceit
This was a very good debut book for a new series. This isn't your typical happy fairy tale Fantasy. This story does have some dark elements entwined within it's pages.
What To Expect:
🥊Enemies To Lovers
💔 Lovers to Enemies
🌍 World Building
✨ Magic
🏰 Royal Family
🤔 Kingdom Politics
🐉 Shifter's
🧙 Witches
👫 Fated Mates
🌶️ Spice
Dahlia has been on the run from a monster of her past that she unfortunately share a connection with. Being born of darkness (shadow gods) and light (human) Dahlia has spent that last decade hiding her magic, living in a kingdom where magic users are sentenced to death.
The world building in this story was descriptive and imaginative. You have elements of Magic, Witches, Demons, Shifters and Fae. A slow burn Romantasy with an Enemies to Lovers vibe.
I wanted to root for the FMC but I couldn't connect with her because she was a bit annoying at times. Dahlia was so stubborn and cocky thinking she knew everything and didn't know anything. She was powerful beyond means but didn't have control of her power; because no matter how hard she tried, the darkness within was determine to make itself known.
Dahlia was way to naíve and trusting. She was pining over Prince Aiden who she fiercely defended even though he never gave her a reason too; she has been living a lie for over a decade leaving people none the wiser except for Ryken who is the King's Royal Assassin. Ryken uncovers Dahlia's secret because he's hiding a secret of his own. He's a Fae working in enemy lands but he sticks close to Dahlia whether she wants him too or not.
Dahlia was the epitome of a liar and a sneak. Not only had she been living a lie but she was forever telling half truths and because she was so desperate for friends she truly believed everyone had her back and her naivety is what ultimately led to her downfall. Betrayal after betrayal Dahlia doesn't know who to turn to.
Being Betrayed, Manipulated, Blackmailed by the ones you love and trust is a hard pill that Dahlia has to learn to swallow but to be abandoned and left on your own to face the monster of your past is Dahlia's worse nightmare come true.
This was a very good debut book for a new series. This isn't your typical happy fairy tale Fantasy. This story does have some dark elements entwined within it's pages.
What To Expect:
🥊Enemies To Lovers
💔 Lovers to Enemies
🌍 World Building
✨ Magic
🏰 Royal Family
🤔 Kingdom Politics
🐉 Shifter's
🧙 Witches
👫 Fated Mates
🌶️ Spice
Dahlia has been on the run from a monster of her past that she unfortunately share a connection with. Being born of darkness (shadow gods) and light (human) Dahlia has spent that last decade hiding her magic, living in a kingdom where magic users are sentenced to death.
The world building in this story was descriptive and imaginative. You have elements of Magic, Witches, Demons, Shifters and Fae. A slow burn Romantasy with an Enemies to Lovers vibe.
I wanted to root for the FMC but I couldn't connect with her because she was a bit annoying at times. Dahlia was so stubborn and cocky thinking she knew everything and didn't know anything. She was powerful beyond means but didn't have control of her power; because no matter how hard she tried, the darkness within was determine to make itself known.
Dahlia was way to naíve and trusting. She was pining over Prince Aiden who she fiercely defended even though he never gave her a reason too; she has been living a lie for over a decade leaving people none the wiser except for Ryken who is the King's Royal Assassin. Ryken uncovers Dahlia's secret because he's hiding a secret of his own. He's a Fae working in enemy lands but he sticks close to Dahlia whether she wants him too or not.
Dahlia was the epitome of a liar and a sneak. Not only had she been living a lie but she was forever telling half truths and because she was so desperate for friends she truly believed everyone had her back and her naivety is what ultimately led to her downfall. Betrayal after betrayal Dahlia doesn't know who to turn to.
Being Betrayed, Manipulated, Blackmailed by the ones you love and trust is a hard pill that Dahlia has to learn to swallow but to be abandoned and left on your own to face the monster of your past is Dahlia's worse nightmare come true.
January 17, 2024
After starting the second book, I need to give this five stars. This book is well thought out and I never knew where it was going. It kept me entertained and I never wanted to put it down!
January 5, 2024
Terribly Written
It had potential, and I should’ve listened to the review I read on this book. The other reviewer had been correct, a beta reader or two might have helped. This was riddled with plot holes.
I wish plot holes had been the only problem, but they were not. It was painful to finish the book, so much so I skimmed often. The characters actions and the time frame within which their actions took place was unrealistic, giving this book a childish feel. The characters also lacked any emotional depth, further cementing the childish feeling.
Dahlia claims she loves George like a brother… yet we never get an explanation or suitable back history for that, especially considering she kissed him. You don’t kiss a “brother”. And the reasoning behind kissing her supposed brother? To make someone jealous. How disappointingly childish.
Ryker, a big bad assassin. So big, bad, and skilled, that no one has ever seen his face. Until he accidentally lets his hood slip in front of Dahlia. If he’s so skilled, and so intimidating… how did a simple snapping of fingers cause him to make such a large mistake?
I could list many issues within this book. I wouldn’t waste any money on it.
It had potential, and I should’ve listened to the review I read on this book. The other reviewer had been correct, a beta reader or two might have helped. This was riddled with plot holes.
I wish plot holes had been the only problem, but they were not. It was painful to finish the book, so much so I skimmed often. The characters actions and the time frame within which their actions took place was unrealistic, giving this book a childish feel. The characters also lacked any emotional depth, further cementing the childish feeling.
Dahlia claims she loves George like a brother… yet we never get an explanation or suitable back history for that, especially considering she kissed him. You don’t kiss a “brother”. And the reasoning behind kissing her supposed brother? To make someone jealous. How disappointingly childish.
Ryker, a big bad assassin. So big, bad, and skilled, that no one has ever seen his face. Until he accidentally lets his hood slip in front of Dahlia. If he’s so skilled, and so intimidating… how did a simple snapping of fingers cause him to make such a large mistake?
I could list many issues within this book. I wouldn’t waste any money on it.
June 29, 2024
I was given an ARC of A Tale If Treachery and
Wow, I really enjoyed this book.
Fae and witches….what more could you ask for. This book is dark and full of morally grey men, found family, fated mates, lovers to enemies and enemies to lovers.
Dahlia (Duana) is half mortal half shade. She grows up with her friend Malachi who is also half shade. He decimates their camp and leaves Dahlia to wait for him when a stranger appears and takes her away to another Kingdom and takes her under his wing. Malachi is quite possessive of her and doesn’t want her to with anyone else, including friends.
I loved watching Dahlia’s adventures and shenanigans. She’s great at getting herself into trouble. I had a feeling that her and Ryken were mates and was really hoping they would work out their issues. It was hard to watch him walk away into Faerie without her. And Aiden, he was not my favorite! They way he treated Dahlia was appalling; but, that’s what makes up his morally grey character.
I’m on the edge of my seat waiting to see where the story goes with the return of Malachi.
Can’t wait for the next book!!
Wow, I really enjoyed this book.
Fae and witches….what more could you ask for. This book is dark and full of morally grey men, found family, fated mates, lovers to enemies and enemies to lovers.
Dahlia (Duana) is half mortal half shade. She grows up with her friend Malachi who is also half shade. He decimates their camp and leaves Dahlia to wait for him when a stranger appears and takes her away to another Kingdom and takes her under his wing. Malachi is quite possessive of her and doesn’t want her to with anyone else, including friends.
I loved watching Dahlia’s adventures and shenanigans. She’s great at getting herself into trouble. I had a feeling that her and Ryken were mates and was really hoping they would work out their issues. It was hard to watch him walk away into Faerie without her. And Aiden, he was not my favorite! They way he treated Dahlia was appalling; but, that’s what makes up his morally grey character.
I’m on the edge of my seat waiting to see where the story goes with the return of Malachi.
Can’t wait for the next book!!
July 29, 2024
I haven't finished the book yet, but I'm finding it increasingly difficult to stay focused on the story. The writing feels too immature almost and the way the plot is going feels drawn out and rushed at the same time. It just isn't keeping my interest and I'm fighting to push through it.
The main character, Dahlia, feels very one dimensional. She comes across as whiney and a typical damsel in distress in some scenarios. People tend to walk all over her.
Aiden, I'm getting whiplash from his personality changes because they're sudden and come without warning or anything leading up to the change in him.... it just... happens.
The book just isn't my cup of tea, though I really wanted to like it. The characters feel very one dimensional without much personality and the story itself lacks substance. I may push through and give an updated review. But for now, this is a DNF
The main character, Dahlia, feels very one dimensional. She comes across as whiney and a typical damsel in distress in some scenarios. People tend to walk all over her.
Aiden, I'm getting whiplash from his personality changes because they're sudden and come without warning or anything leading up to the change in him.... it just... happens.
The book just isn't my cup of tea, though I really wanted to like it. The characters feel very one dimensional without much personality and the story itself lacks substance. I may push through and give an updated review. But for now, this is a DNF
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 11, 2024
Reading this book I had to put it down and come back to it several times as the writing style was different and took some getting use to. Wasn’t sure where the story was going because it was a bit all over the place but the over all arch was intriguing enough for me to continue. This is a dark romance and pretty much everyone is flawed, especially the males. Mellie means it when she says dark. Our MMC is a super dick and pretty much is unapologetically so. Our MFC is pretty naive and daft but I’m rooting for her to get herself together and grow from this. Hopefully? I am lucky enough to start book 2 right away after this one so we shall see!
August 13, 2024
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. The premise/plot of this book was great and unique. However, as another reviewer said, I felt like the author did a lot of telling, rather than showing us traits of characters. I didn't find myself invested or emotionally attached to any of the characters, and I didn't feel any chemistry between the characters. I had a difficult time finishing this due to the writing style, but wanted to power through because of the plot. Unfortunately, I won't be continuing the series.
March 30, 2024
✩ ✩
𝖳𝗁𝖾 𝗐𝗋𝗂𝗍𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗂𝗌𝗇’𝗍 𝗉𝖾𝗋𝖿𝖾𝖼𝗍 𝖻𝗎𝗍 𝗂𝗍 𝗐𝖺𝗌 𝖾𝗇𝗍𝖾𝗋𝗍𝖺𝗂𝗇𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝖾𝗇𝗈𝗎𝗀𝗁 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗍 𝖨 𝖼𝗈𝗎𝗅𝖽 𝗅𝗈𝗈𝗄 𝗉𝖺𝗌𝗍 𝗂𝗍. 𝖬𝗒 𝗈𝗇𝗅𝗒 𝗈𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗋 𝖼𝗈𝗆𝗉𝗅𝖺𝗂𝗇𝗍 𝗐𝖺𝗌 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗌𝗉𝗂𝖼𝖾, 𝗐𝗁𝗂𝖼𝗁 𝗐𝖺𝗌 𝗃𝗎𝗌𝗍 𝗇𝗈𝗍 𝗂𝗍. 𝖮𝗇𝖾 𝗌𝖼𝖾𝗇𝖾 𝗐𝖺𝗌 𝗂𝗇𝖼𝗋𝖾𝖽𝗂𝖻𝗅𝗒 𝖼𝗋𝗂𝗇𝗀𝗒 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝖺𝗇𝗈𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗋 𝗐𝖺𝗌 𝗋𝗎𝗌𝗁𝖾𝖽 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗃𝗎𝗌𝗍 𝖿𝖾𝗅𝗍 𝘰𝘧𝘧. 𝖳𝗁𝖾 𝖻𝗈𝗈𝗄 𝗂𝗍𝗌𝖾𝗅𝖿 𝗐𝖺𝗌 𝗉𝗋𝖾𝗍𝗍𝗒 𝗉𝗋𝖾𝖽𝗂𝖼𝗍𝖺𝖻𝗅𝖾, 𝖻𝗎𝗍 𝗂𝗍’𝗌 𝗌𝗎𝖼𝗁 𝖺 𝗊𝗎𝗂𝖼𝗄 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝖾𝖺𝗌𝗒 𝗋𝖾𝖺𝖽 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗍 𝖨 𝖽𝗂𝖽𝗇’𝗍 𝗋𝖾𝖺𝗅𝗅𝗒 𝗆𝗂𝗇𝖽.
𝖳𝗁𝖾 𝗐𝗋𝗂𝗍𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝗂𝗌𝗇’𝗍 𝗉𝖾𝗋𝖿𝖾𝖼𝗍 𝖻𝗎𝗍 𝗂𝗍 𝗐𝖺𝗌 𝖾𝗇𝗍𝖾𝗋𝗍𝖺𝗂𝗇𝗂𝗇𝗀 𝖾𝗇𝗈𝗎𝗀𝗁 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗍 𝖨 𝖼𝗈𝗎𝗅𝖽 𝗅𝗈𝗈𝗄 𝗉𝖺𝗌𝗍 𝗂𝗍. 𝖬𝗒 𝗈𝗇𝗅𝗒 𝗈𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗋 𝖼𝗈𝗆𝗉𝗅𝖺𝗂𝗇𝗍 𝗐𝖺𝗌 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗌𝗉𝗂𝖼𝖾, 𝗐𝗁𝗂𝖼𝗁 𝗐𝖺𝗌 𝗃𝗎𝗌𝗍 𝗇𝗈𝗍 𝗂𝗍. 𝖮𝗇𝖾 𝗌𝖼𝖾𝗇𝖾 𝗐𝖺𝗌 𝗂𝗇𝖼𝗋𝖾𝖽𝗂𝖻𝗅𝗒 𝖼𝗋𝗂𝗇𝗀𝗒 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝖺𝗇𝗈𝗍𝗁𝖾𝗋 𝗐𝖺𝗌 𝗋𝗎𝗌𝗁𝖾𝖽 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝗃𝗎𝗌𝗍 𝖿𝖾𝗅𝗍 𝘰𝘧𝘧. 𝖳𝗁𝖾 𝖻𝗈𝗈𝗄 𝗂𝗍𝗌𝖾𝗅𝖿 𝗐𝖺𝗌 𝗉𝗋𝖾𝗍𝗍𝗒 𝗉𝗋𝖾𝖽𝗂𝖼𝗍𝖺𝖻𝗅𝖾, 𝖻𝗎𝗍 𝗂𝗍’𝗌 𝗌𝗎𝖼𝗁 𝖺 𝗊𝗎𝗂𝖼𝗄 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝖾𝖺𝗌𝗒 𝗋𝖾𝖺𝖽 𝗍𝗁𝖺𝗍 𝖨 𝖽𝗂𝖽𝗇’𝗍 𝗋𝖾𝖺𝗅𝗅𝗒 𝗆𝗂𝗇𝖽.
September 26, 2023
This would have gotten more stars if the tension between the love interests wasn’t created by the worlds stupidest fights
November 27, 2023
I wish I could expunge this book from my brain and take back the time that I lost while reading it
November 4, 2024
Well that was the most disappointing female protagonist I have read in a hot minute.
First of all, content spoilers…
Alright now that we have established that (whatever her name was, Dahilia, Dauna who knows), was useless, let’s get into why this was so disappointing. The premise of this protagonist sounded great. Shade mixed with Fae and some cool powers, that could potentially develop that level battlefields. Yes let’s go powerful protagonists.
And then she does absolutely nothing with any of it.
Love interests in this book is where the book started to fall off for me, beside the fact that absolutely nothing happens in this book.
Having a weirdly powerful 13 year old obsessed with her was odd but I thought it’s potential could be interesting.
Having the “golden knight” Prince love interest that’s actually a prick, was cliche, but I thought I could get past it.
To emphasize why I think sometimes these tropes can be good is because of one of my favorite books who does a similar thing and rocks it.
One of my favorite books has a similar vibe whereby the fae prince is a prick, and the protagonist is oblivious and in love for a hot minute anyway. But that relationship was explained, how they met, how their relationship developed. And most importantly the protagonist, Fallon, had a personality and misplaced love and insecurities that were relatable.
This is where this protagonist started to disappoint me. Dahlia lady, has absolutely nothing interesting or relatable about her. I couldn’t tell you what she looked like nevermind what interested her, beyond sneaking out for the sake of it.
Also let’s talk about the supposed male lead. Ryker, I think ? He also doesn’t have much of personality beyond the fact that he’s supposedly an assassin. As well as Fae royalty.
This trope works when the 60+ year old Fae acts his age. How is it that this man acted with the maturity of a 13 year old?
Throwing tantrums, hurting his “mate” because she kicked him out of the room with absolutely no understanding. Also honestly he should’ve just rejected her. She doesn’t apologize or take accountability or have any redeeming qualities. Their relationship literally made no sense. I get that the author said the characters were going to be selfish and make mistakes, but to have no relatability, to have no personality beyond sneaking out and flirting with litreally everyone is wild as a protagonist. What am I rooting for, who am I rooting for?
This book felt like someone dreamed up the most Wattpad book and then slapped “dark romance” on the cover, and said okay now publish it.
When I say that I could not give this character one character trait beyond constantly sneaking out to doing nothing but annoying people and being a whole pick me. I couldn’t even love the romance between any of the male leads and this female protagonist, it fell so flat because the intimate moments between Dahlia and Ryker meant nothing. She did the same thing with Aiden (the Prince) and then randomly decided she loved Ryker? Then switches back to choosing Aiden. If there is going to be a love triangle turned sour at least do it right. The attempt at angst was just annoying.
First of all, content spoilers…
Alright now that we have established that (whatever her name was, Dahilia, Dauna who knows), was useless, let’s get into why this was so disappointing. The premise of this protagonist sounded great. Shade mixed with Fae and some cool powers, that could potentially develop that level battlefields. Yes let’s go powerful protagonists.
And then she does absolutely nothing with any of it.
Love interests in this book is where the book started to fall off for me, beside the fact that absolutely nothing happens in this book.
Having a weirdly powerful 13 year old obsessed with her was odd but I thought it’s potential could be interesting.
Having the “golden knight” Prince love interest that’s actually a prick, was cliche, but I thought I could get past it.
To emphasize why I think sometimes these tropes can be good is because of one of my favorite books who does a similar thing and rocks it.
One of my favorite books has a similar vibe whereby the fae prince is a prick, and the protagonist is oblivious and in love for a hot minute anyway. But that relationship was explained, how they met, how their relationship developed. And most importantly the protagonist, Fallon, had a personality and misplaced love and insecurities that were relatable.
This is where this protagonist started to disappoint me. Dahlia lady, has absolutely nothing interesting or relatable about her. I couldn’t tell you what she looked like nevermind what interested her, beyond sneaking out for the sake of it.
Also let’s talk about the supposed male lead. Ryker, I think ? He also doesn’t have much of personality beyond the fact that he’s supposedly an assassin. As well as Fae royalty.
This trope works when the 60+ year old Fae acts his age. How is it that this man acted with the maturity of a 13 year old?
Throwing tantrums, hurting his “mate” because she kicked him out of the room with absolutely no understanding. Also honestly he should’ve just rejected her. She doesn’t apologize or take accountability or have any redeeming qualities. Their relationship literally made no sense. I get that the author said the characters were going to be selfish and make mistakes, but to have no relatability, to have no personality beyond sneaking out and flirting with litreally everyone is wild as a protagonist. What am I rooting for, who am I rooting for?
This book felt like someone dreamed up the most Wattpad book and then slapped “dark romance” on the cover, and said okay now publish it.
When I say that I could not give this character one character trait beyond constantly sneaking out to doing nothing but annoying people and being a whole pick me. I couldn’t even love the romance between any of the male leads and this female protagonist, it fell so flat because the intimate moments between Dahlia and Ryker meant nothing. She did the same thing with Aiden (the Prince) and then randomly decided she loved Ryker? Then switches back to choosing Aiden. If there is going to be a love triangle turned sour at least do it right. The attempt at angst was just annoying.
May 21, 2023
Shadows, shade gods, a rift that opens to otherworlds, magic, and creatures with extraordinary abilities, everything in this fantasy story caught my attention.
Duana's only family is Malachi, who provides her with a lot of protection. They are half human and half shade and will gain magic when they are older. Only Malachi has it, but Duana is highly sensitive to upcoming events.
Cambriel's soldiers invade their camp. Screams of desperation are heard. Malachi drags Duana along. He leaves her in a temple, promising to return soon.
Alone in that place and without a home, Duana wants to run away, but she can't when she meets Redmond, her saviour, who takes her to a new kingdom, instead, a new home and hope. Thus, everything changes in her life. Now, she has friends, a mentor, and an apprenticeship, not to mention a new name, Dahlia.
Ten years ago, Dahlia's magic had finally shown. She didn't know how to tame it or control it. Redmond couldn't help her, but he was focused on different fields. Somehow, Dahila's magic led to Eulalia, who became her magical tutor.
Apart from that, Prince Aiden holds a special place in Dahlia's heart. A beautiful dagger with precious stones, a gift from him, comforts her heart. It wasn't until that moment that the strange feeling of Ryken, the king's guard, towards her came into sight.
Eventually, he admits to knowing her secret and blackmails her in return. Dahlia feared the worst, even though she didn't want to lose anything that had kept her. She won't be welcome in Cambriel if that is revealed. Worried or scared? She wonders how to handle this situation.
My anticipation for the continuation of this book is high. As I read, characters like Dahlia and Ryken sparked my curiosity. Some parts reminded me of The Lord of the Rings.
It's worth a shot.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Duana's only family is Malachi, who provides her with a lot of protection. They are half human and half shade and will gain magic when they are older. Only Malachi has it, but Duana is highly sensitive to upcoming events.
Cambriel's soldiers invade their camp. Screams of desperation are heard. Malachi drags Duana along. He leaves her in a temple, promising to return soon.
Alone in that place and without a home, Duana wants to run away, but she can't when she meets Redmond, her saviour, who takes her to a new kingdom, instead, a new home and hope. Thus, everything changes in her life. Now, she has friends, a mentor, and an apprenticeship, not to mention a new name, Dahlia.
Ten years ago, Dahlia's magic had finally shown. She didn't know how to tame it or control it. Redmond couldn't help her, but he was focused on different fields. Somehow, Dahila's magic led to Eulalia, who became her magical tutor.
Apart from that, Prince Aiden holds a special place in Dahlia's heart. A beautiful dagger with precious stones, a gift from him, comforts her heart. It wasn't until that moment that the strange feeling of Ryken, the king's guard, towards her came into sight.
Eventually, he admits to knowing her secret and blackmails her in return. Dahlia feared the worst, even though she didn't want to lose anything that had kept her. She won't be welcome in Cambriel if that is revealed. Worried or scared? She wonders how to handle this situation.
My anticipation for the continuation of this book is high. As I read, characters like Dahlia and Ryken sparked my curiosity. Some parts reminded me of The Lord of the Rings.
It's worth a shot.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 1, 2023
4.5 stars ⭐
I don't really understand the harsh criticism in some of these reviews. I rarely write reviews myself, but I think this book deserves it.
Look, it absolutely has its issues. I wasn't feeling it in the beginning -- the first few chapters were all tell and no show, literally just telling us all this background in a few paragraphs rather than feeding us bits and pieces at a time. The writing significantly improves after a few chapters, though. And I didn't catch any spelling or grammatical typos often found in new, self published books.
After the rough start, I absolutely flew through the rest of the book and couldn't put it down. Seriously stayed up until 2am with it. So I also don't agree with comments calling it boring. Definitely did not bore me. I thought it ticked all the right boxes: romance, fantasy, a magic system, tragedy, fate, character growth.
A lot of the poor reviews I'm seeing are in regards to the FMC's character. Personally, I like flawed characters and think it's more realistic than reading the POV of someone who always makes the right decisions, is always honest, is always selfless, etc. Humans aren't like that. Readers love when male leads are morally grey, but God forbid a woman isn't perfect.
So I like flawed characters and I like a little bit of tragedy, which the author provides. Ends on a cliffhanger, and I can't wait to read the sequel next month. I really want to learn more about Malachi.
All in all, not a bad start from this author. Give it a chance.
SOMEWHAT SPOILERY:
I LOVE the concept of fated mates that kind of hate each other. Most books with the fated mates trope allow the characters to immediately fall for each other and get together relatively easily. But this is way more interesting ;)
I don't really understand the harsh criticism in some of these reviews. I rarely write reviews myself, but I think this book deserves it.
Look, it absolutely has its issues. I wasn't feeling it in the beginning -- the first few chapters were all tell and no show, literally just telling us all this background in a few paragraphs rather than feeding us bits and pieces at a time. The writing significantly improves after a few chapters, though. And I didn't catch any spelling or grammatical typos often found in new, self published books.
After the rough start, I absolutely flew through the rest of the book and couldn't put it down. Seriously stayed up until 2am with it. So I also don't agree with comments calling it boring. Definitely did not bore me. I thought it ticked all the right boxes: romance, fantasy, a magic system, tragedy, fate, character growth.
A lot of the poor reviews I'm seeing are in regards to the FMC's character. Personally, I like flawed characters and think it's more realistic than reading the POV of someone who always makes the right decisions, is always honest, is always selfless, etc. Humans aren't like that. Readers love when male leads are morally grey, but God forbid a woman isn't perfect.
So I like flawed characters and I like a little bit of tragedy, which the author provides. Ends on a cliffhanger, and I can't wait to read the sequel next month. I really want to learn more about Malachi.
All in all, not a bad start from this author. Give it a chance.
SOMEWHAT SPOILERY:
I LOVE the concept of fated mates that kind of hate each other. Most books with the fated mates trope allow the characters to immediately fall for each other and get together relatively easily. But this is way more interesting ;)
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October 28, 2024Not sure how to rate this book.
I gave the book a 2nd chance after dnf'ing a few months ago.
It has the ingredients for a good story. I do feel quite lost with all the plot holes but I'm thinking maybe it was intentional and answers will be answered in the next book?
The Fmc was irritating. She acted entitled the entire book and was shocked when she was scolded for talking to the king/prince as if she called the shots 🙄.
NGL I almost dnfed again.. but then pure jerk mode came out in the mmc's and that's what gave me hope for the next book.
Do I feel bad for the fmc.. no. She is manipulative. She lies and withholds things and throws a fit when the PRINCE doesn't tell her his plans and thinks she can over rule him. (KING/PRINCE vs an orphan friend..)Umm like why is she entitled to this knowledge? Because she slept with him and they were friends at one point?
Idk but at this moment I'm team mmcs. I wish we had their point of views. . Breaks my heart we can't see into their minds.
Will give book 2 a shot. Maybe it was the audio book that gave me the ick with the fmc. Will try book 2 without audio.
I gave the book a 2nd chance after dnf'ing a few months ago.
It has the ingredients for a good story. I do feel quite lost with all the plot holes but I'm thinking maybe it was intentional and answers will be answered in the next book?
The Fmc was irritating. She acted entitled the entire book and was shocked when she was scolded for talking to the king/prince as if she called the shots 🙄.
NGL I almost dnfed again.. but then pure jerk mode came out in the mmc's and that's what gave me hope for the next book.
Do I feel bad for the fmc.. no. She is manipulative. She lies and withholds things and throws a fit when the PRINCE doesn't tell her his plans and thinks she can over rule him. (KING/PRINCE vs an orphan friend..)Umm like why is she entitled to this knowledge? Because she slept with him and they were friends at one point?
Idk but at this moment I'm team mmcs. I wish we had their point of views. . Breaks my heart we can't see into their minds.
Will give book 2 a shot. Maybe it was the audio book that gave me the ick with the fmc. Will try book 2 without audio.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 21, 2023
Genre: Romantasy
This dark fantasy contains themes of betrayal, lies, and deceit. It's the first book in the series and ends on a cliffhanger.
A Tale of Treachery takes place in the kingdom of Cambriel, following Dahlia ten years after she escapes from the monsters of her past. For the past ten years that she’s been living there, she's been forced to hide the existence of her magic, something that could get her killed, from the public.
The book has good pacing and a plot that makes you want to keep reading. It also includes well-written characters and wonderful character development. The world-building was good, but there are some subjects that I'm hoping will be elaborated on in the second book. Overall, I really enjoyed the story I can't wait to read the next book when it comes out!
Read this if you like:
Dark Romance/Fantasy
Enemies to Lovers
Lovers to Enemies
Multiple love interests
Morally Grey Characters
Forbidden Romance
Fated Mates
Fae, Witches, and Other Magical Creatures
Spice.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This dark fantasy contains themes of betrayal, lies, and deceit. It's the first book in the series and ends on a cliffhanger.
A Tale of Treachery takes place in the kingdom of Cambriel, following Dahlia ten years after she escapes from the monsters of her past. For the past ten years that she’s been living there, she's been forced to hide the existence of her magic, something that could get her killed, from the public.
The book has good pacing and a plot that makes you want to keep reading. It also includes well-written characters and wonderful character development. The world-building was good, but there are some subjects that I'm hoping will be elaborated on in the second book. Overall, I really enjoyed the story I can't wait to read the next book when it comes out!
Read this if you like:
Dark Romance/Fantasy
Enemies to Lovers
Lovers to Enemies
Multiple love interests
Morally Grey Characters
Forbidden Romance
Fated Mates
Fae, Witches, and Other Magical Creatures
Spice.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 25, 2025
Goddamn it, this was not very good. So many plot holes. Things happened that straight up didn't make sense? Other reviews break down the plot holes well, so I won't go into it. Sometimes, stories that have a lot of plot holes and aren't the best written can still be enjoyed by just kind of ignoring it and turning off parts of your brain. But when the FMC Dumb-ia consistently acts in a way that makes no sense, doesn't learn any lessons, and somehow consistently chooses the most mind numbing stupid path that clearly will not work out if you even thought on it for a half second, you can't enjoy it. I think her powers may have been seeing the outcomes to potential actions, because she uses it to pick the worst nonsensical one. Forget flawed characters, morally grey characters, she's just straight up bad, borderline maliciously incompetent. You know a book is bad when you leave it thinking, damn, I wish the book ended with her just dying.
June 8, 2025
I was drawn to A Tale of Treachery by its intriguing premise, about a girl who is half Shade navigating the dangerous, whimsical world of Faerie.
Unfortunately, the execution didn’t quite live up to the concept. All the characters - whether mortal, Fae, or fearsome villain - sounded oddly the same, like a group of snarky, entitled teens. Ryken, who’s supposed to be a terrifying Fae, loses all credibility with that tone. The dialogue just didn’t match the stakes or the supposed maturity or even different personalities of the characters. The characters were frustrating, in how much disregard ALL of them had on how their actions may potentially impact the world around them.
It’s also a minefield of overused tropes, with the fated mates angle being particularly frustrating. Instead of emotional depth or a genuine connection, it felt more like instant lust and zero development. Honestly, it left me unsure whether I want to continue with the series. With so many books out there, I’m not convinced this one earns a spot on my TBR stack.
Unfortunately, the execution didn’t quite live up to the concept. All the characters - whether mortal, Fae, or fearsome villain - sounded oddly the same, like a group of snarky, entitled teens. Ryken, who’s supposed to be a terrifying Fae, loses all credibility with that tone. The dialogue just didn’t match the stakes or the supposed maturity or even different personalities of the characters. The characters were frustrating, in how much disregard ALL of them had on how their actions may potentially impact the world around them.
It’s also a minefield of overused tropes, with the fated mates angle being particularly frustrating. Instead of emotional depth or a genuine connection, it felt more like instant lust and zero development. Honestly, it left me unsure whether I want to continue with the series. With so many books out there, I’m not convinced this one earns a spot on my TBR stack.
December 24, 2023
A really good book of a series centering around magic, fae, witches, evil and mates.
Dahlia is a part shade being raised in a kingdom that has outlawed and persecutes those with Magic. She’s frightened of her past catching up with her and worries about the safety of those she cares about. Drawn to the kingdom assassin she finds herself helping him find his missing magic, until she discovers it may be the only thing holding back the evil she’s been running from. Those she thinks she can count on keep letting her down until she finds herself alone and at the mercy of what she’s been running from.
The world building is awesome in this book and the characters are well written. I would recommend this to anyone who loves the magical world of fantasy, independent female main characters and a romance that continually implodes while simultaneously simmering.
Dahlia is a part shade being raised in a kingdom that has outlawed and persecutes those with Magic. She’s frightened of her past catching up with her and worries about the safety of those she cares about. Drawn to the kingdom assassin she finds herself helping him find his missing magic, until she discovers it may be the only thing holding back the evil she’s been running from. Those she thinks she can count on keep letting her down until she finds herself alone and at the mercy of what she’s been running from.
The world building is awesome in this book and the characters are well written. I would recommend this to anyone who loves the magical world of fantasy, independent female main characters and a romance that continually implodes while simultaneously simmering.
February 26, 2025
Dark, broody, and just the right amount of unhinged.
I devoured this series in a weekend because, sometimes, you just need a morally gray-filled escape with a dark vibe. And the Darkest Dynasty Series? Understood the assignment.
The FMC? Not my all-time fave, but she held her own—especially with the side characters propping her up. She’s not carrying the story alone—but hey, teamwork makes the dream work.
The MMCs? We’ve got two flavors of morally gray, and yes, there’s a brooding, filthy-mouthed man who would burn the world for her. And yes, I ate that up like it was my last meal.
The spice? Just right. There are questionable scenes that had me cringing from the intent that had me side-eyeing my Kindle. You’ll know it when you get there. Just know when to breathe through it.
Plot-wise? Solid Romantasy fare. Twists? Sure. Gasp-worthy? Not really. But entertaining? Absolutely.
And the ending? Just a satisfying wrap-up to a dark and delicious ride.
I devoured this series in a weekend because, sometimes, you just need a morally gray-filled escape with a dark vibe. And the Darkest Dynasty Series? Understood the assignment.
The FMC? Not my all-time fave, but she held her own—especially with the side characters propping her up. She’s not carrying the story alone—but hey, teamwork makes the dream work.
The MMCs? We’ve got two flavors of morally gray, and yes, there’s a brooding, filthy-mouthed man who would burn the world for her. And yes, I ate that up like it was my last meal.
The spice? Just right. There are questionable scenes that had me cringing from the intent that had me side-eyeing my Kindle. You’ll know it when you get there. Just know when to breathe through it.
Plot-wise? Solid Romantasy fare. Twists? Sure. Gasp-worthy? Not really. But entertaining? Absolutely.
And the ending? Just a satisfying wrap-up to a dark and delicious ride.
May 8, 2023
This is a good story. It is not formulaic. There are multiple male interests. Dahlia flits between them realistically, like a young woman with such tempting choices would. She even convinces herself that she loves each of them, at some point in their relations. She is repeatedly hurt by everyone she cares about, while struggling to keep her magic hidden, and make a happy life for herself and her loved ones. Dahlia becomes a heroine the reader cannot help but sympathize with. She suffers at the hands of those she loves most, even if she sometimes contributes to the conflict herself. The book ends on a cliffhanger, and I am curious to see where the next book takes us. *I received an ARC from the author, and I am giving an honest review*
August 31, 2024
Good Read
Dahlia, Ryken and Aiden are in quite the lovers triangle. I was very invested in Dahlia’s story and what was going to happen next. I loved that she fought for herself and tried to stand up for what she believed and her friends, rather than just giving in. Even though there were predictable portions of the story, I was still invested enough not to care. I’m curious what will happen in book 2. The spice level is mild, but maybe it will get spicier?? The only reason I gave the story four stars was because the world building in the beginning of the story was a bit confusing. I could’ve used a bit more explanation. Overall - I recommend to anyone who loves a story about lovers triangles & a FMC who struggles with an overwhelming power.
Dahlia, Ryken and Aiden are in quite the lovers triangle. I was very invested in Dahlia’s story and what was going to happen next. I loved that she fought for herself and tried to stand up for what she believed and her friends, rather than just giving in. Even though there were predictable portions of the story, I was still invested enough not to care. I’m curious what will happen in book 2. The spice level is mild, but maybe it will get spicier?? The only reason I gave the story four stars was because the world building in the beginning of the story was a bit confusing. I could’ve used a bit more explanation. Overall - I recommend to anyone who loves a story about lovers triangles & a FMC who struggles with an overwhelming power.
June 2, 2023
Bring on the Fae! And the witches, demons, shapeshifters and all the brilliance of a fantasy world steeped in magic. Maybe it's because it is cold outside that I'm so into Fantasy books at the moment - but this one was a winner.
Enemies-to-lovers-to-enemies this is slow burn, SPICY tale of treachery and royalty.
We've got tormented characters who are in jeopardy from the opening pages, we've got secrets coming at us in every chapter and we've got the battle between dark and light forces. WHAT'S NOT TO LOVE PEOPLE?
Epic and Keeper shelf.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Enemies-to-lovers-to-enemies this is slow burn, SPICY tale of treachery and royalty.
We've got tormented characters who are in jeopardy from the opening pages, we've got secrets coming at us in every chapter and we've got the battle between dark and light forces. WHAT'S NOT TO LOVE PEOPLE?
Epic and Keeper shelf.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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