2 Soot Sprite Stars ⭐️
Spicy Level: 0.5🌶️/5
I struggled with this book for multiple reasons, WHICH I FEEL IS TERRIBLE OF ME, because I feel some sort of camaraderie with the author being from the same country!
𝙎𝙮𝙣𝙤𝙥𝙨𝙞𝙨:
Rose Marie Jones is stuck in a job she hates while working toward her MBA. Her one reprieve? Weekly game nights with her workplace bestie Shaun, his fiancée i>(and also her bestie) Neema, and a handful of their friends. The only downside is that her nemesis William (aka Shaun’s brother and roommate) is always there too, making it his mission to beat, one-up, and annoy Rose at every opportunity. But when Rose decides to enter a board game creation contest with a game she’s been secretly developing, the only person with the skills to help her win is... William. And the more time she spends with him, the more she starts to realise that maybe he’s not the nemesis she’s always believed him to be.
𝙏𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙜𝙝𝙩𝙨 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙁𝙚𝙚𝙡𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙨:
So why did I struggle? Firstly, the lack of chemistry in the "main" couple... Their characters felt weak, and it honestly felt like Rose had more chemistry with Shaun than with William, which made the intended romance feel forced. Then it felt like William was very superficial or surface level, and that the only reason he was her "nemesis" was because he had a typical schoolboy crush and believed that being mean to a girl and "pulling her pigtails" is how you show her you like her.
Then the relationship with her ex dragged super long in the story and made the plot feel incredibly slow because they took forever to break up before there could be any traction in her relationship with William.
Then I have a little gripe with how surface-level and almost insulting the depiction of geek culture was. It felt like the author had a checklist of “nerdy” things rather than an authentic understanding of all the fandoms it tried to incorporate. Instead of a thoughtful, immersive portrayal, the book leaned on outdated stereotypes and shallow references, almost like taking a bunch of nerdy "spaghetti" and throwing it to the wall hoping some of the aspects would stick.
An example of this is the characters were supposedly hardcore geeks, attending Comic-Con in full cosplay, yet their go-to board games were Monopoly, Cluedo, and 30 Seconds. Games that, while fun for the whole family, are NOT what dedicated board game lovers and RPG players reach for. People who design epic board games are NOT casually pulling out Monopoly every week. It felt like the book was written by someone who had only ever seen geek culture through a pop-culture lens rather than lived it.
Then there was the FMC’s cosplay to her year-end function she ORGANISED. If she was truly a passionate cosplayer, there would have been talk about the intricate costume planning, the materials, the design, and the dedication that goes into crafting an outfit months in advance. Now I understand Rose had a lot going on in her life at this time, but TRUST ME WHEN I SAY a person who loves to dress up and has a cupboard full of costumes (totally speaking from experience here) is not "last minute" a Catwoman "Casual Cosplay" from their wardrobe. It was the equivalent of saying someone is a “huge reader” but only mentioning that they’ve read Harry Potter.
It felt like she was throwing in a Lord of the Rings reference here, mentioning a popular superhero there, and boom, she had geek representation! But I feel that real fandoms have layers, passion, and niche interests that go way beyond what was presented, and it made me frustrated since I AM one of those people who is basically ROSE. I have over 30 award-winning board games and have won cosplay competitions, went to Comic-Con dressed in multiple cosplays, and have spent over 3000 hours in an online MMORPG. I am a big nerd and she made me feel silly how she portrayed us.
Also, I didn't like that the book couldn't really decide if it wanted to be a clean romance or wanted to be a more open-door romance, and that hesitancy held back the writing. I think it would have been better to fully embrace a clean romance style rather than straddling the line awkwardly if she wasn't as comfortable writing smut.
AND LASTLY... One of the reasons I often dislike the "best friend's brother trope" is because it reeks of hypocrisy. William is Shaun's brother, roommate, bestman and friend and you seriously have to hold someone in high regard to MAKE THEM YOUR BEST MAN... yet somehow he’s not good enough for his best friend? That same best friend who introduced Shaun to her best friend, trusted him and did nothing but support and CHEER FOR THEIR RELATIONSHIP! But the moment there’s even a hint of something between Rose and William, Shaun pulls out the line "it’ll get awkward if things go wrong." It’s selfish and unfair, especially when Shaun did the exact same thing to Rose by starting to date her Best Friend... WOULD IT NOT HAVE BEEN AWAKARD FOR HER IF THEY BROKE UP? If anything, Shaun should be thrilled Shaun and Rose are getting together because it means two of the most important people in his life could become family. That should be the dream, not a problem!
𝙏𝙧𝙤𝙥𝙚𝙨 and 𝙈𝙞𝙘𝙧𝙤 𝙏𝙧𝙤𝙥𝙚𝙨:
▶ Best Friends Brother
▶ Banter
▶ Enemies to Lovers
▶ Nicknames
▶ Slow Burn
▶ Cages her with his Arms
▶ Always been you
▶ "More"
Overall I think this book had amazing potential but with a little refinement and clearer direction (like picking only one fandom to be obsessed about as an example) would have made this miles better!
Thank you to Netgalley and Hachette Audio for the Gifted Copy.
All thoughts and opinions are my own