Planet Lolita is an interesting novel about a teen girl named Xixi Kwok. Her family is on the beach in Hong Kong when a group of girls get smuggled ashore for use in the sex trade. She connects with one of the girls, and the smugglers get concerned that they've been identified. Xixi posts photos she snapped of the girl on Facebook because she wants to find out how she is doing. The photos go viral, and that includes, mysteriously, one she took but didn't post.
Charles Foran does a decent job in the first part, narrated by Xixi. He even finds turns some of her slangy speech into poetry. But a lot of the writing reminded me this was a middle age white guy trying to sound like an Asian teenage girl.
A lot happens that gets in the way of the main plot. Xixi's parents break up. She gets her first period and epilepsy. There's also something creepy about her dad, but that's never spelled out. Also, a SARS epidemic hits Hong Kong. We also get a lot about her relationship with her sister in Toronto and with a woman who works for her family. The book is in three parts.
The first part tries to say a lot about how teens live online and parents don’t understand the online world, which is partly true. The best thing about this novel is that a lot of it takes place online, just like real life. The writer makes this really obvious, though, not just with the plot about the viral post, but with Xixi's sister saying to her parents, "Check out our platforms. Learn where we're at, who we're hanging with and planning to meet. Learn how we move from place to place and space to space, silent and quick and beyond detection by your analogue radars. If you don’t know my Facebook, you don't know me. It's where us digital kids live." That doesn't sound real for a first-year college student. It sounds like an old guy giving a warning. Then I realized the novel is meant to be set in the near future, and it sounded even more fake. Parents like these would be online enough to realize or be told sooner that their daughter has created an online phenomenon. She's posting this stuff on her own Facebook. And its viral.
The second part is a collection of online posts and tweets and stuff. I guess it's supposed to show us what the online world looks like. It sounds pretty real, but the whole section is really confusing and a lot of stuff happens where we don't get to see how the characters feel.
The last part is told by an old white guy who works with girls. It gives us a conclusion for the story, but most of the plots aren't really resolved. The original premise influences Xixi's life, but it never goes anywhere as a story, and it was the most interesting thing about the book. Planet Lolita has the start of a really good book with some ideas about how Asian girls and young girls get fetishised, and then it lost its way.