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Naughty Bits #2
The Training Session
Madison may have ditched her well-ordered Boston life to run Naughty Bits, her sister’s North Carolina lingerie shop, but she didn’t expect to throw herself into such chaos—or to become intimate with the sexiest man she’s ever had the pleasure of meeting. After spending a night observing a submissive’s training session, Madison is ready for Logan to teach her how to feed her own deep fantasies—and get rid of all her lingering fears…
Madison’s aching desire to submit is unlike anything Logan’s ever experienced before, and he’s determined to be the man to make her relinquish control. Still, Logan’s unsure if Madison is ready to take that first step to becoming his—until she shows up at his door ready to be commanded. Luckily for them both, Logan’s got more than a few surprises up his sleeve that he knows she’ll enjoy…
Madison’s aching desire to submit is unlike anything Logan’s ever experienced before, and he’s determined to be the man to make her relinquish control. Still, Logan’s unsure if Madison is ready to take that first step to becoming his—until she shows up at his door ready to be commanded. Luckily for them both, Logan’s got more than a few surprises up his sleeve that he knows she’ll enjoy…
119 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 20, 2014
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Joey W. Hill
116 books3,533 followers"BDSM Romance for the Heart & Soul"
A submissive herself, Hill brings authenticity to her intensely emotional BDSM love stories. With over fifty titles and seven series, her contemporary and paranormal romances feature everything from billionaires, bikers, SEALs, firefighters, cops and housemaids, to vampires, mermaids, witches and angels.
"Joey translates the world of BDSM with such intense power and exquisite beauty. LOVE is the most powerful element entwined through the Dominance and submission.” –Goodreads, Pink Lady
Joey is the recipient of the RT Book Reviews Career Achievement Award for Erotic Romance, and she loves to hear from her readers!
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A submissive herself, Hill brings authenticity to her intensely emotional BDSM love stories. With over fifty titles and seven series, her contemporary and paranormal romances feature everything from billionaires, bikers, SEALs, firefighters, cops and housemaids, to vampires, mermaids, witches and angels.
"Joey translates the world of BDSM with such intense power and exquisite beauty. LOVE is the most powerful element entwined through the Dominance and submission.” –Goodreads, Pink Lady
Joey is the recipient of the RT Book Reviews Career Achievement Award for Erotic Romance, and she loves to hear from her readers!
If you're on Bookbub, she'd love for you to follow her:
https://www.bookbub.com/authors/joey-...
You can also find her here:
Website: storywitch.com
Facebook: @JoeyWHillAuthor
MeWe: mewe.com/i/joeywhill
Twitter: @JoeyWHill
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June 3, 2014
My fifth five-star rating of the year goes to Logan! Review posted June 3, 2014
His jaw relaxed, those fathomless eyes flickering. "All right then," he murmured. "What would you wear for me? For yourself, to make yourself feel beautiful, seductive, capable of bringing even a Master to his knees? Bringing this Master to his knees."
I'll make this short because I think the pictures and quotes speak louder than words. And yes, I'm going to gush a lot (pun intended).
I absolutely enjoyed Naughty Bits Part I: The Lingerie Shop but the sequel…just…wow! Holy Hotness Batman! I need to check my body for burns. This second part of Naughty Bits was naughty as all get out, completely and utterly sensual and hot as balls without Logan and Madison going to fourth base. Un-friggin-believably good and exquisitely erotic! The constant sexual tension and palpable chemistry between Logan and Madison kept me on my toes and left me breathless. I kid you not when I say that Gorgeous Logan almost set my Kindle on fire.
What an A-mazing reading experience within 119 seductive pages. Truth be told, I feel a little bit weak in the knees. Even though there were a lot of sexy and steamy moments, the emotions and interaction didn't fall short at all. Logan is so incredibly gorgeous, smart, all kinds of intuitive and domineering with an all-encompassing presence all wrapped up in a perceptive gentleness that simply. Blew. Me. Away. Holy moly...I friggin' love that man! I know I'm rambling but I can't stop drooling and swooning over that man. Hell, he can do me six ways from Sunday. Anytime. Naughty Bits Part II is yet another wonderful example why I usually love Joey's writing so much (with a few rare exceptions *cough*). I practically clung to Logan's body and I soaked up every word that came out of his delectable mouth and followed his demanding yet gentle hands whenever he touched Madison's skin. The writing is excellent, even poetically beautiful at times and kept me glued to the pages from start to finish. Gawd, I want more. Gimme, gimme, gimme NOW. Did I mention that waiting sucks?
It's all right to be angry and to grieve
To finally strip yourself of your sorrows
I've got you, you needn't worry
We'll find that still place together, make it all better
Where you can let go and give yourself to me
I promise to take care of you, to keep you safe in my arms
For good
Drowning in a sensual haze of Logan's Awesomesauce just made my day. Fact is, he made me feel like a million dollars and all those feelz he gave me…I'm gonna keep him very close to my heart. BTW, Tyler is not jealous at all. Two great Doms at close quarters…I'm sure that's going to be incredibly interesting, to say the least.
Recommended read.
P.S. I'm a tiny bit worried that Part IV will kinda spoil a lot for me I just don't know yet.
His jaw relaxed, those fathomless eyes flickering. "All right then," he murmured. "What would you wear for me? For yourself, to make yourself feel beautiful, seductive, capable of bringing even a Master to his knees? Bringing this Master to his knees."
I'll make this short because I think the pictures and quotes speak louder than words. And yes, I'm going to gush a lot (pun intended).
I absolutely enjoyed Naughty Bits Part I: The Lingerie Shop but the sequel…just…wow! Holy Hotness Batman! I need to check my body for burns. This second part of Naughty Bits was naughty as all get out, completely and utterly sensual and hot as balls without Logan and Madison going to fourth base. Un-friggin-believably good and exquisitely erotic! The constant sexual tension and palpable chemistry between Logan and Madison kept me on my toes and left me breathless. I kid you not when I say that Gorgeous Logan almost set my Kindle on fire.
What an A-mazing reading experience within 119 seductive pages. Truth be told, I feel a little bit weak in the knees. Even though there were a lot of sexy and steamy moments, the emotions and interaction didn't fall short at all. Logan is so incredibly gorgeous, smart, all kinds of intuitive and domineering with an all-encompassing presence all wrapped up in a perceptive gentleness that simply. Blew. Me. Away. Holy moly...I friggin' love that man! I know I'm rambling but I can't stop drooling and swooning over that man. Hell, he can do me six ways from Sunday. Anytime. Naughty Bits Part II is yet another wonderful example why I usually love Joey's writing so much (with a few rare exceptions *cough*). I practically clung to Logan's body and I soaked up every word that came out of his delectable mouth and followed his demanding yet gentle hands whenever he touched Madison's skin. The writing is excellent, even poetically beautiful at times and kept me glued to the pages from start to finish. Gawd, I want more. Gimme, gimme, gimme NOW. Did I mention that waiting sucks?
It's all right to be angry and to grieve
To finally strip yourself of your sorrows
I've got you, you needn't worry
We'll find that still place together, make it all better
Where you can let go and give yourself to me
I promise to take care of you, to keep you safe in my arms
For good
Drowning in a sensual haze of Logan's Awesomesauce just made my day. Fact is, he made me feel like a million dollars and all those feelz he gave me…I'm gonna keep him very close to my heart. BTW, Tyler is not jealous at all. Two great Doms at close quarters…I'm sure that's going to be incredibly interesting, to say the least.
Recommended read.
P.S. I'm a tiny bit worried that Part IV will kinda spoil a lot for me I just don't know yet.
October 24, 2014
Madison uprooted her life in order to run Naughty Bits, her late sister's lingerie/adult toy shop. In order for it to succeed she needs to get in touch with her inner sexual self so she's comfortable in her role. Part two has Madison up close and personal with a submissive's training session where she becomes more entwined than she’d anticipated. The question is... will she find a way to overcome her inner fears and allow her self discovery to evolve?
The Training Session is about so much more than it's simple title. It's about fantasies and desires, realising what they are and having the opportunity to act on them. It's about regret and letting go of it, trusting yourself and others to understand your needs and desires. It's a story about sharing and one that I found emotional in places, especially the references to her sister Alice…. It's subtle but oh so very powerful.
Beautiful words.
Logan is DIVINE
Logan is sexy and powerful and completely intuitive of Madison's desires. He gives the story an intense quality that makes it completely compelling to read. He's a true dominant and demonstrates incredible knowledge, expertise, understanding and awareness of a submissive. He envelops our heroine's senses in a beautiful way giving her confidence in herself and her desires. Logan is sexually powerful.
The desires shown by all the characters are stunning and OH. MY. GOODNESS. This story is SO HOT, sexy and sensual in a taboo kinkTASTIC way. The lingerie shop sells fantasy to it's customers and that's reflected so beautifully in this story....
The Naughty Bits series is Joey W. Hill magic. I adore it and highly recommend the story to all those who have an open mind, an open heart and love some KINK in their reading.
Reading order and review thoughts for the series:
Naughty Bits Part 1: The Lingerie Shop
Naughty Bits Part 2: The Training Session
Naughty Bits Part 3: Bound to Please
Naughty Bits Part 4: The Highest Bid
Complimentary copy received from the publishers, via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
June 4, 2014
4.5 "sign me up for classes" Stars
Let me just say that this book was awesome. It picks up right where part 1 stops. Madison decides that she is going to the training session. Logan is training Troy, for his Mistress, and asked Madison to come help him. It was very erotic and beautiful. Joey Hill's words are so eloquent and mesmerizing that you get completely immersed in what you are reading. There is also a gentleness to her words but they are yet very sensual. She is truly a magnificent writer.
She'd been evading that direct look because the answer to the question was in his brown eyes. Eyes that had embers in their depths, capable of immolating her and her fragile, false reality with their flame. She swayed.
I will say that this installment opens Madison up. She is starting to embrace her true self. It's a struggle but with Logan at her side, she is learning to trust or trying at least. As Madison and Logan become closer they share some intense and moving scenes.
While this book was written beautifully, it was also written off the top sexy. All I can say is "movie night" will never be the same for me.
Patiently waiting for Part III- Thank you Joey.....
Courtesy copy received from the publisher, Penguin Group, via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
Let me just say that this book was awesome. It picks up right where part 1 stops. Madison decides that she is going to the training session. Logan is training Troy, for his Mistress, and asked Madison to come help him. It was very erotic and beautiful. Joey Hill's words are so eloquent and mesmerizing that you get completely immersed in what you are reading. There is also a gentleness to her words but they are yet very sensual. She is truly a magnificent writer.
She'd been evading that direct look because the answer to the question was in his brown eyes. Eyes that had embers in their depths, capable of immolating her and her fragile, false reality with their flame. She swayed.
I will say that this installment opens Madison up. She is starting to embrace her true self. It's a struggle but with Logan at her side, she is learning to trust or trying at least. As Madison and Logan become closer they share some intense and moving scenes.
While this book was written beautifully, it was also written off the top sexy. All I can say is "movie night" will never be the same for me.
Patiently waiting for Part III- Thank you Joey.....
Courtesy copy received from the publisher, Penguin Group, via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
October 19, 2025
In this second volume, Madison is finally starting to come into her own. After assisting Logan in training the submissive Troy (yes, that scene was as hot as it sounds ), she’s more aware of her submissive side and way more tuned into the explosive chemistry between her and that irresistible Dom next door.
„Sadist.”
“Part of the job description, more or less.”Logan winked. “The same way most subs have more or less of a masochist in them.”
“Are you more . . . or less?”
“Depends on what the submissive needs. Whatever you need, Madison, I’ll make it happen.“
I’ll be real: Madison annoyed me in book one. But here? She’s growing on me! She’s opening up about her fantasies, embracing her desires and slowly letting go of all that sexual repression. She’s still cautious (can’t blame her after past heartbreaks), but Logan’s tenderness and patience are clearly wearing down her walls. And watching her confidence bloom as she runs Naughty Bits? So satisfying.
„I’m not going to tell you what I want from a submissive, Madison. All you need to know is that I’m doing exactly what I want to do to you. Your only concern is what I order you to do. You have no other expectations, nothing you need to anticipate. Only the here and now and what I tell you. Understand?“
Now let’s talk about Logan, because WHEW. He’s still the mysterious, charismatic Dom we fell for. We know he’s ex-military, a trainer, a custom BDSM furniture maker (how cool is that?!) and was Alice’s friend… but I want more. That said, what we do get is pure gold. The way he guides Madison, respectfully, intentionally, shows what a true Dominant he is. He doesn’t just command, he teaches.
And that training session with Troy? Holy. Hell. It wasn’t just spicy,
it was a masterclass in trust, power exchange and sensual awakening.
She laughed. “Why are straight men so funny about that? When you care for Troy, you don’t seem to have the slightest problem touching him.”
“It’s like being a doctor, caring for a patient. I’m pretty sure my doctor has no fantasies when he’s asking me to cough. If he does, I’m switching health care providers.“
What I loved most was how Madison begins to understand that submission isn’t about losing control, it’s about choosing to give it. And with the right Dom? It’s empowering AF.
⭐️4,5
trops/kinks/safety
🖤slow burn
🖤shop neighbors
🖤MMC exmilitary
🖤FMC self discovery journey
🖤sex/lingerie shop
🖤custom bdsm furniture maker
🖤bdsm trainer
🖤mention of guilt
🖤death of sister mentioned
🖤self loathing
🖤possesive/ protective MMC
🖤D/s
🖤master
🖤MFM setting but only training no sex
🖤role play
🖤teasing
🖤edging
🖤blowjob
🖤fingering
🖤cunnilingus
🖤rope/ chain suspension
🖤anal teasing
🖤blindfolds
🖤electro stimulation
🖤nipple play
🖤sexual Fantasy
„Sadist.”
“Part of the job description, more or less.”Logan winked. “The same way most subs have more or less of a masochist in them.”
“Are you more . . . or less?”
“Depends on what the submissive needs. Whatever you need, Madison, I’ll make it happen.“
I’ll be real: Madison annoyed me in book one. But here? She’s growing on me! She’s opening up about her fantasies, embracing her desires and slowly letting go of all that sexual repression. She’s still cautious (can’t blame her after past heartbreaks), but Logan’s tenderness and patience are clearly wearing down her walls. And watching her confidence bloom as she runs Naughty Bits? So satisfying.
„I’m not going to tell you what I want from a submissive, Madison. All you need to know is that I’m doing exactly what I want to do to you. Your only concern is what I order you to do. You have no other expectations, nothing you need to anticipate. Only the here and now and what I tell you. Understand?“
Now let’s talk about Logan, because WHEW. He’s still the mysterious, charismatic Dom we fell for. We know he’s ex-military, a trainer, a custom BDSM furniture maker (how cool is that?!) and was Alice’s friend… but I want more. That said, what we do get is pure gold. The way he guides Madison, respectfully, intentionally, shows what a true Dominant he is. He doesn’t just command, he teaches.
And that training session with Troy? Holy. Hell. It wasn’t just spicy,
it was a masterclass in trust, power exchange and sensual awakening.
She laughed. “Why are straight men so funny about that? When you care for Troy, you don’t seem to have the slightest problem touching him.”
“It’s like being a doctor, caring for a patient. I’m pretty sure my doctor has no fantasies when he’s asking me to cough. If he does, I’m switching health care providers.“
What I loved most was how Madison begins to understand that submission isn’t about losing control, it’s about choosing to give it. And with the right Dom? It’s empowering AF.
⭐️4,5
trops/kinks/safety
🖤slow burn
🖤shop neighbors
🖤MMC exmilitary
🖤FMC self discovery journey
🖤sex/lingerie shop
🖤custom bdsm furniture maker
🖤bdsm trainer
🖤mention of guilt
🖤death of sister mentioned
🖤self loathing
🖤possesive/ protective MMC
🖤D/s
🖤master
🖤MFM setting but only training no sex
🖤role play
🖤teasing
🖤edging
🖤blowjob
🖤fingering
🖤cunnilingus
🖤rope/ chain suspension
🖤anal teasing
🖤blindfolds
🖤electro stimulation
🖤nipple play
🖤sexual Fantasy
November 23, 2017
Oh my.... where's the fan??
A very hot installment on this series (or is it one fragmented novel?).
Madison faces some of her fears, grows as a character, and delivers some scorching hot scenes.
This is some classy, intense, all-out erotica... it should be mandatory reading for writing class, I think ;)
If this is your sub-genre of choice, give it a go!
You might want to start with The Lingerie Shop and build steam over the rest of the quartet -- Good luck!!
A very hot installment on this series (or is it one fragmented novel?).
Madison faces some of her fears, grows as a character, and delivers some scorching hot scenes.
This is some classy, intense, all-out erotica... it should be mandatory reading for writing class, I think ;)
If this is your sub-genre of choice, give it a go!
You might want to start with The Lingerie Shop and build steam over the rest of the quartet -- Good luck!!
November 17, 2014
So if you read my review of the first instalment to this series you'll already know that I'm not a huge fan of the serialised novel format. It's something that we're seeing more and more frequently and I'll say right now that it isn't a trend I'm happy with. I much prefer to be able to read the whole story in one go and that way I'm more likely to enjoy the experience. So I decided to wait until all 4 parts of the Naughty Bits series were available and give it another chance. After rereading The Lingerie Shop I was able to dive straight into The Training Session and I have to say I enjoyed it much more because of that. I think I'm going to keep my reviews for each of the remaining segments fairly short so that I can dive back into the important business of reading the next part of the story!
I mentioned in my previous review that I found Madison really hard to relate to because she was so incredibly naive and sexually repressed. I had hope that she would grow and become easier to connect with as the series continued and I'm happy to say I liked her much more in The Training Session. She's starting to really come out of her shell, she isn't so embarrassed to admit that she is a woman with sexual desires and she is settling into her role as the new owner of the Naughty Bits lingerie shop. She is also more willing to give into the desire that she feels for her sister's best friend Logan and I'm happy to see how much her confidence is growing.
Logan was the main reason I wanted to carry on reading this story and he didn't disappoint me here, he is sexy as hell and I'm definitely looking forward to spending more time with him. Logan has been helping to train male submissive Troy for his mistress and when he offers Madison the chance to help him with a training session she finds it impossible to resist. Holy hell, that is one hot session and Logan really opens Madison's eyes to what it is really like to submit to a Master. Troy isn't the only one in training and Madison certainly learns a lot over the course of this story. She also starts to understand that although the Dom is the one who is in control it's actually the submissive who is completely in control and she is finally able to admit to herself that having submissive tendencies isn't a bad thing, especially not when you're with the right Dom. I think I fell more than a little in love with Logan in this instalment of the series and I can't wait to dive into Bound to Please to see more of the fantastic chemistry between him and Madison.
I mentioned in my previous review that I found Madison really hard to relate to because she was so incredibly naive and sexually repressed. I had hope that she would grow and become easier to connect with as the series continued and I'm happy to say I liked her much more in The Training Session. She's starting to really come out of her shell, she isn't so embarrassed to admit that she is a woman with sexual desires and she is settling into her role as the new owner of the Naughty Bits lingerie shop. She is also more willing to give into the desire that she feels for her sister's best friend Logan and I'm happy to see how much her confidence is growing.
Logan was the main reason I wanted to carry on reading this story and he didn't disappoint me here, he is sexy as hell and I'm definitely looking forward to spending more time with him. Logan has been helping to train male submissive Troy for his mistress and when he offers Madison the chance to help him with a training session she finds it impossible to resist. Holy hell, that is one hot session and Logan really opens Madison's eyes to what it is really like to submit to a Master. Troy isn't the only one in training and Madison certainly learns a lot over the course of this story. She also starts to understand that although the Dom is the one who is in control it's actually the submissive who is completely in control and she is finally able to admit to herself that having submissive tendencies isn't a bad thing, especially not when you're with the right Dom. I think I fell more than a little in love with Logan in this instalment of the series and I can't wait to dive into Bound to Please to see more of the fantastic chemistry between him and Madison.
May 26, 2015
Well, did it just get really hot in here or what... And sweet... And emotional... In that order. Part II left me wishing I had magic powers so I could cast a spell to make Logan real to have for myself.
Now, I could use this whole review space to say for the hundredth time how much I love reading Joey W. Hill's stories, and talk about all the warm, fuzzy feelings I get while reading them, but right now I'm short on time. Plus, unless I'm mistaken, I've done that in all of my reviews of Ms. Hill's books. This time, suffice it to say what I said I wish to do with Logan's character is a common occurrence with the heroes I find in this author's works.
At the end of Part I Madison reached a wise and inevitable decision to take up Logan on his offer to join him during a session with Troy, a submissive he's training, and right at the beginning of Part II I got to enjoy reading it. And enjoy it I did. Logan, the amazing Dom, Troy, the incredible sub, and Madison, the eager observer. It got very hot, very fast in that room, especially when Madison joined in the fun.
The session served its purpose of helping Madison become more suited to run an erotica shop, and guide her customers in the right direction. That became clear with the visit of an interesting trio. Now, that trio is special, not just because I'm jealous of Sam for being involved with both a Dom and a sub, but because they will be the stars of the new Naughty Wishes serial coming next year. That little visit they made to the Naughty Bits store was enough to make me want to have their story, and I couldn't be happier Ms. Hill felt the same. I'm also wondering about Troy and his Mistress. I haven't found them in published books, so fingers crossed they get their own book. But I digress...
Over the course of over twenty works, it's become abundantly clear this author's gift in making ordinary activities highly erotic. Take this novella, for example. A simple night watching a movie became an intense D/s session. Madison is slowly but surely embracing her submissive side in the care of Logan's mastery. To my chagrin, he's still an enigma. What exactly Alice (Madison's late sister) told him about Madison is still pretty much unknown, as is his history and present. Not his fault, mind you. Madison wants to keep the fantasy for a little while longer. I do hope she gets over that soon, because I want to know more. Madison is also prepared for more--a session involving pain. Oh, I can't wait!
April 17, 2014
I always feel like a bit of a voyeur when reading something written by Joey W. Hill. Her writing makes me feel like I am in the moment with the characters and some of those moments can be intense indeed. In this installment of Naughty Bits Part II: The Training Session Madison is continuing to grieve for her sister and has taken her decision to explore her sensuality and submission with Logan to the next level. Trust is still an issue for her but Logan is helping her overcome that in a most delightful way. I can hardly wait for the next installment.
June 14, 2017
Wonderful!
This was a wonderful story! I can't wait to start the next one. I wish it would have been all one book. 😀
This was a wonderful story! I can't wait to start the next one. I wish it would have been all one book. 😀
May 22, 2014
4 Erotically Poetic Stars !!!
eARC for Honest Review via Penguin
There is such a poetic beauty to Joey W. Hill's writing. This novella is part two out of four in this series.
For Madison she is diving into a world she knows she belongs in , but is terrified to what it all means. To help Madison with her deepest desires Logan coaxes her into one of his training sessions to bring her out of her shell.
With the help of Troy and Logan, Madison's tough exterior starts to crumble. With Logan he wants so much more than just being a master but Madison is scared to believe this is a possibility with all her past shit decisions when it comes to the male species. Logan is determined and patient to show Madison all that is entailed with being a submissive and more.
Logan with his strength, dominance and masculine beauty helps Madison but for her she doesn't trust herself, so how can she trust anyone else? We will find out how Madison and Logan explore each other and all other possibilities in the next two installments of this series. Can't flippin' wait.
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May 20, 2014
A copy of this book was provided by the publisher for an honest review at SeductiveMusings.blogspot.com.
Wow. After I finished reading Part 1, I knew when Logan and Madison’s first real scene together was going to be amazing, but THE TRAINING SESSION blew me away. I think it helped Madison to have Troy there as a buffer while she got used to seeing Logan in his true element as a confident and unforgiving Dominant. The first quarter of Part 2 is this training session where Troy learns how to control his reaction to what he receives from both Logan and Madison, although by the end it wasn’t clear where Troy’s training stopped and Madison’s started. When the scene is over, Madison realizes she can’t go back to the person she was before. Not just in terms of her sexual nature, but in the way she approaches life as a whole.
As Madison lets go of all her old rules and expectations, she begins to relax more within herself, starting to feel more liberated even as she grows closer to Logan. This freedom to embrace her true nature without fear immediately improves her interactions with customers who come into the Naughty Bits shop. Not only does her new approach result in better sales, but more importantly, she can now sell customers what they really need, even when they don’t know what that is when they first walk in. Madison’s new open attitude also gives her the courage to walk right into Logan’s hardware store next door to request a second date. Logan assures her there will be no sex, but by the end of their first evening alone, there will be no question about what is yet to come. For the only rule Madison has now is what her sister said in her last letter: Trust Logan.
Every expectation I had for this next installment was more than fulfilled, as I loved seeing Madison finally take the necessary steps to liberate herself from all the bad memories and inhibitions that had held her back her whole life. Not only does she learn to stop fearing what she feels, but in the process, she learns to be the person that her shop customers need to guide them toward their own emotional and sexual liberation. Each scene between Madison and Logan showed exactly how he is slowly leading her to trust both herself and him to always take care of her completely. As for me, I will continue to trust Joey W. Hill that each future installment of NAUGHTY BITS will be just as compelling as the previous ones.
Ratings:
Overall: 5 stars
Sensuality level: 4.5 (multiple BDSM scenes with 2 and 3 people, including oral sex and anal play)
Wow. After I finished reading Part 1, I knew when Logan and Madison’s first real scene together was going to be amazing, but THE TRAINING SESSION blew me away. I think it helped Madison to have Troy there as a buffer while she got used to seeing Logan in his true element as a confident and unforgiving Dominant. The first quarter of Part 2 is this training session where Troy learns how to control his reaction to what he receives from both Logan and Madison, although by the end it wasn’t clear where Troy’s training stopped and Madison’s started. When the scene is over, Madison realizes she can’t go back to the person she was before. Not just in terms of her sexual nature, but in the way she approaches life as a whole.
As Madison lets go of all her old rules and expectations, she begins to relax more within herself, starting to feel more liberated even as she grows closer to Logan. This freedom to embrace her true nature without fear immediately improves her interactions with customers who come into the Naughty Bits shop. Not only does her new approach result in better sales, but more importantly, she can now sell customers what they really need, even when they don’t know what that is when they first walk in. Madison’s new open attitude also gives her the courage to walk right into Logan’s hardware store next door to request a second date. Logan assures her there will be no sex, but by the end of their first evening alone, there will be no question about what is yet to come. For the only rule Madison has now is what her sister said in her last letter: Trust Logan.
Every expectation I had for this next installment was more than fulfilled, as I loved seeing Madison finally take the necessary steps to liberate herself from all the bad memories and inhibitions that had held her back her whole life. Not only does she learn to stop fearing what she feels, but in the process, she learns to be the person that her shop customers need to guide them toward their own emotional and sexual liberation. Each scene between Madison and Logan showed exactly how he is slowly leading her to trust both herself and him to always take care of her completely. As for me, I will continue to trust Joey W. Hill that each future installment of NAUGHTY BITS will be just as compelling as the previous ones.
Ratings:
Overall: 5 stars
Sensuality level: 4.5 (multiple BDSM scenes with 2 and 3 people, including oral sex and anal play)
September 21, 2014
***This book was provided by Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.***
I really enjoyed this installment of Naughty Bits.
The way the story is evolving is very intriguing. With Logan’s guidance, Madison is able to begin embracing her kinky sensual side. The benefit of this is that she is also able to finally identify with her customers and their needs, which helps her feel as though she is more successful in carrying on her sister’s legacy.
Madison is still nervous about revealing her desires, but Logan has a way of putting her at ease and encouraging trust. He radiates masculinity, but he also has a sensitive side to him that is impossible to resist. Logan is a fount of knowledge for Madison when it comes to running her new business effectively and how her sister has spent the last two years. They’ve had a connection from the get-go, and it only seems to get stronger with each meeting.
He was looking at her as if she were an ocean sunset. Okay, maybe that was a womanly interpretation. He was looking at her as if she were naked and holding a beer. As well as a universal remote to an eighty-inch flat screen, programmed only with sports channels.
Troy is an interesting character. I can’t wait to read more from this series, and I’m hoping we get to meet some of the significant people in his life.
This installment was incredibly sexy, bringing Logan and Madison closer emotionally as well as physically. It’s clear that Logan is big on intimacy, and I like the way he slowly working his way into Madison’s life. He pays attention, knowing when to push and when to back off. He is so possessive of her, but almost in a passive way. He doesn’t have to do anything to show it; it’s something he simply radiates!
If he wanted her right here, up against the wall, she’d let him do it. He was too overwhelming to resist, and her defenses were already shattered.
As with the first one, this one left me panting for more. I will definitely be checking out Bound to Please!
I really enjoyed this installment of Naughty Bits.
The way the story is evolving is very intriguing. With Logan’s guidance, Madison is able to begin embracing her kinky sensual side. The benefit of this is that she is also able to finally identify with her customers and their needs, which helps her feel as though she is more successful in carrying on her sister’s legacy.
Madison is still nervous about revealing her desires, but Logan has a way of putting her at ease and encouraging trust. He radiates masculinity, but he also has a sensitive side to him that is impossible to resist. Logan is a fount of knowledge for Madison when it comes to running her new business effectively and how her sister has spent the last two years. They’ve had a connection from the get-go, and it only seems to get stronger with each meeting.
He was looking at her as if she were an ocean sunset. Okay, maybe that was a womanly interpretation. He was looking at her as if she were naked and holding a beer. As well as a universal remote to an eighty-inch flat screen, programmed only with sports channels.
Troy is an interesting character. I can’t wait to read more from this series, and I’m hoping we get to meet some of the significant people in his life.
This installment was incredibly sexy, bringing Logan and Madison closer emotionally as well as physically. It’s clear that Logan is big on intimacy, and I like the way he slowly working his way into Madison’s life. He pays attention, knowing when to push and when to back off. He is so possessive of her, but almost in a passive way. He doesn’t have to do anything to show it; it’s something he simply radiates!
If he wanted her right here, up against the wall, she’d let him do it. He was too overwhelming to resist, and her defenses were already shattered.
As with the first one, this one left me panting for more. I will definitely be checking out Bound to Please!
December 31, 2015
This is a direct continuation from the earlier book. I like that there's a short intro where you get a snippet of what happened in the previous book and then you just start off with the new "episode".
After the session where she "assisted" Logan in training Troy, Madison is now more aware of her submissive traits and definitely more aware of the irresistible attraction between her and the charismatic Dom. She's still very much wary of letting go of herself fully and living out her fantasies but the experience had helped her improve the way she runs Naughty Bits. In this book Logan is helping her explore her submissive side and acknowledge it fully.
It would have been great if we could get Logan's POV in the story as he is still seen as the charismatic, mysterious and intimidating Dom in the story. There's very little information on what Madison (and we as the readers) know about him other than he was in the army, he's a Dom and a trainer, he's Alice's good friend, he makes custom-made BDSM furniture as a lucrative side business and he runs a hardware store next to Naughty Bits.
Here Madison finally opens up about her secret fantasies and embraces her submissive side fully. She is still very cautious about her feelings with Logan (after so many failed relationships she is still very afraid of being hurt and disappointed naturally) but his tenderness towards her is starting to make her feel more for him.
So we wait for the next book to see what else Logan has in store for Madison in order for her to finally (or maybe still not yet??) find herself and acknowledge their bond to each other.
After the session where she "assisted" Logan in training Troy, Madison is now more aware of her submissive traits and definitely more aware of the irresistible attraction between her and the charismatic Dom. She's still very much wary of letting go of herself fully and living out her fantasies but the experience had helped her improve the way she runs Naughty Bits. In this book Logan is helping her explore her submissive side and acknowledge it fully.
It would have been great if we could get Logan's POV in the story as he is still seen as the charismatic, mysterious and intimidating Dom in the story. There's very little information on what Madison (and we as the readers) know about him other than he was in the army, he's a Dom and a trainer, he's Alice's good friend, he makes custom-made BDSM furniture as a lucrative side business and he runs a hardware store next to Naughty Bits.
Here Madison finally opens up about her secret fantasies and embraces her submissive side fully. She is still very cautious about her feelings with Logan (after so many failed relationships she is still very afraid of being hurt and disappointed naturally) but his tenderness towards her is starting to make her feel more for him.
So we wait for the next book to see what else Logan has in store for Madison in order for her to finally (or maybe still not yet??) find herself and acknowledge their bond to each other.
May 20, 2014
Paige‘s review posted on Guilty Pleasures Book Reviews
4 STARS
Review copy provided for an honest review
This second book picks up where we left Madison; A training session Troy with Master Logan.
Madison is timid at first but is starting to come into her own. She is finally ready to explore her submissive side. I loved reading the changes in Madison. Especially her playfulness.
Logan is biding his time with Madison by being cautious and gentle. He’s helping her overcome her internal struggles and her perceived shortcomings. He has learned to connect with Madison not only physically level but mentally too.
The author has done a great job with character development. I’m excited to continue reading about the growing relationship between Logan and Madison.
4 STARS
Review copy provided for an honest review
This second book picks up where we left Madison; A training session Troy with Master Logan.
Madison is timid at first but is starting to come into her own. She is finally ready to explore her submissive side. I loved reading the changes in Madison. Especially her playfulness.
Logan is biding his time with Madison by being cautious and gentle. He’s helping her overcome her internal struggles and her perceived shortcomings. He has learned to connect with Madison not only physically level but mentally too.
The author has done a great job with character development. I’m excited to continue reading about the growing relationship between Logan and Madison.
May 21, 2014
Not enough words to explain the next novella by Joey W. Hill. Naughty Bits Part II: The Training Session is AMAZING. It fulfills the desire of ones beginning, into becoming a submissive. The training is exciting, seductive, overwhelming, and leaves you completed. This novella also leaves you wanting MORE! A perfect ending, for the next novella.
January 17, 2019
A continuation in the Naughty Bits series, and it still isn't a complete story. This one only includes rising action, and it takes place directly after the events in the previous book. Not my cup of tea, despite some good parts.
February 23, 2019
“The training session” starts off almost Immediately where the lingerie shop ends and given these novels aren’t told in chapters rather just a chunk of story focused on one element makes it a fast and easy read.
This series is beginning to remind me a little of a overdrawn out franchise to be completely honest, while it’s a good story, holds attention and might even feed a dirty one track mind the first few novels are good then slowly begin to lose allure but it’s good enough to want to get to the end.
This series is beginning to remind me a little of a overdrawn out franchise to be completely honest, while it’s a good story, holds attention and might even feed a dirty one track mind the first few novels are good then slowly begin to lose allure but it’s good enough to want to get to the end.
June 11, 2017
Logan; purely Dominant, all male, virile, sexy as hell. Madison; skittish, cynical, guilt-ridden, fabulous fantasy life. They are brought together by her sister's death. The training scene with Troy and movie date are the ultimate in sensual erotica. Scenes so vividly depicted, you experience them with the characters. Logan is ever so slowly breaking down her defenses which allows her to truly embrace her submission.
May 22, 2018
Step 2 so to speak in Madison's journey to trusting and learning from Logan. Her training is so very hot. Joey has a gift at making a reader feel everything that's happening. Definitely a wet panty alert.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 2, 2018
Thank you!
December 13, 2022
Wuuuut dam. Sexy hot fire. Well written
November 30, 2018
Part 2
We get to see the relationships develop with Madison, Logan and Troy. And her stepping a little more comfortably into Naughty Bits store owner and her own desires....
We get to see the relationships develop with Madison, Logan and Troy. And her stepping a little more comfortably into Naughty Bits store owner and her own desires....
May 20, 2014
Overall Rating: 4 Rockin’ ★★★★
Madison has inherited her sister’s erotica shop and the DOM next door. Logan and Madison have an instant attraction to one another but she is hesitant to explore BDSM world which she has denied herself. When Logan asks her to observe a submissive training session Madison agrees to watch him while he is training Troy a male submissive. Madison is not prepared for the way Logan pulls her into the session.
Everything that Logan asks her to do is not a request it is given as an order. All through the session, Madison becomes more and more aroused and more submissive to Logan’s directions. Logan made sure during the session that Troy knew she was his and his only.
Logan wants Madison and he is pulling out all the stops to have her as HIS. Madison agrees to a date that includes dinner, movies and not sex. Logan sends her an outfit to wear for their date.
Will Madison rethink her no sex clause or give in to the need she feels for Logan and his domination? Is Logan training her to be his submissive?
Hero –Logan: 4 stars
Heroine –Madison: 4 stars
Steam: 4.5 stars
Plot: 3.5 stars
Cliffhanger: yes
Would I recommend this book: Yes! This book takes you into the training of a sub by a Master. It gets really steamy HAWT with lots of rope tying and domination.
Would I read other books by this author: Yes! The author understands the BDSM scene. I look forward to part 3 of Logan and Madison’s story.
***Received an ARC of this book from the Publisher in exchange for an honest review***
Naughty Bits Part II: The Training Session
Joey W. Hill
Madison has inherited her sister’s erotica shop and the DOM next door. Logan and Madison have an instant attraction to one another but she is hesitant to explore BDSM world which she has denied herself. When Logan asks her to observe a submissive training session Madison agrees to watch him while he is training Troy a male submissive. Madison is not prepared for the way Logan pulls her into the session.
“You can leave at any time, Madison, but I’m hoping you’ll stay with us throughout the entire session. We’ll start with something simple. Troy, go to the shackles. Madison, put them on his wrists.” Just like that. No chitchat, no time for her to get more nervous the she already was.
Everything that Logan asks her to do is not a request it is given as an order. All through the session, Madison becomes more and more aroused and more submissive to Logan’s directions. Logan made sure during the session that Troy knew she was his and his only.
I didn’t put any limits on you behavior. Only his. He’s the one being trained to restrain himself at his Mistress’s behest.” The easy shift to a calm tone, the squeeze of his hand, told her this was all part of it. The anger wasn’t true anger, only a response calculated to have an impact on Troy. Even so, the way Logan had looked at her as he spoke to Troy, it was as if he meant every word. She’s mine.
Logan wants Madison and he is pulling out all the stops to have her as HIS. Madison agrees to a date that includes dinner, movies and not sex. Logan sends her an outfit to wear for their date.
Pulling back the tissue paper, she saw he’d ordered a replacement for the Catholic schoolgirl uniform Sam had bought, only this one was in her size. Or at least as much as size was relevant for two scraps of cloth; a white shirt that tied between the breasts and a plaid skirt the width of a curtain topper.
Will Madison rethink her no sex clause or give in to the need she feels for Logan and his domination? Is Logan training her to be his submissive?
Could she trust him enough to take her to such an extreme step?
Hero –Logan: 4 stars
Heroine –Madison: 4 stars
Steam: 4.5 stars
Plot: 3.5 stars
Cliffhanger: yes
Would I recommend this book: Yes! This book takes you into the training of a sub by a Master. It gets really steamy HAWT with lots of rope tying and domination.
Would I read other books by this author: Yes! The author understands the BDSM scene. I look forward to part 3 of Logan and Madison’s story.
***Received an ARC of this book from the Publisher in exchange for an honest review***
Naughty Bits Part II: The Training Session
Joey W. Hill
May 20, 2014
ARC Review of NAUGHTY BITS: Part II, TRAINING SESSION, by Joey W. Hill
Review by Jaycee for Books ‘N Cozy Spots Book Reviews. http://talon-ps.com
Also purchased on Amazon.com
So, there is this quote early in Part II, and it is the essence of any of Joey Hill’s stories, even though in this case, it is a reflection of Logan slowly but firmly dipping the toes of a not wholly unaware Madison into a place of trust, under the guise of having her “assist” with a sub training session:
“Logan nodded. ‘It’s nice, isn’t it? Touching something this beautiful without having to play games, to excuse yourself or apologize? You see a rose and you touch it, smell it. You don’t explain yourself to the rose, figure out the right approach. You don’t stop touching it because you think you’ve overstayed your welcome or you’re wondering how the rose is feeling about it all. You could tear the petals off if you wanted to do so, but instead you find yourself cherishing it all the more because of your power over it.’ ”
Part II is an ode to starting to get out of your own way. It’s about Madison giving herself permission to feel, so her feelings can’t paralyze her or be a crutch. It’s about trusting that there just may be a person she can believe will accept that, warranted or not, all her “bits” are real. To her, at least. That they deserve acknowledgement, not dismissal. But more importantly, that she deserves to feel everything, and to be everything that she feels.
And she couldn’t be in better hands than Logan’s. Though I sense a full-court press is due in Part III…
August 13, 2016
The Training Session is the second installment in Joey W. Hill's Naughty Bits serial. Madison Fine is still grieving her sister Alice's death, and the guilt she carries for not spending more time with her the last two years of her life. It haunts her daily. She decides to take Logan up on an offer to observe a dominant/submissive training session with his employee, Troy. Logan is training him as a submissive for Troy's Mistress. Madison was reluctant at first, but surprised to find herself a willing participant rather than just an observer. She is conflicted by the feelings that the session brings forth in her for Logan, "The Master." She has always known that she has desires of submission and suspects that they may have been responsible for derailing her previous relationships - but can she really trust someone enough to submit herself totally to them? Her sister told her to totally trust Logan. Is this what Alice meant in the note she left? Alice had known about Madison's underlying desires, and had tried to help her explore them. That is what had caused the rift between the sisters.
Joey W. Hill is a skilled writer of erotic romance. She definitely pulls you into the story and makes you feel that you are there - actually observing what is going on in the story. Each installment moves the story to the next level of the developing relationship between Logan and Madison. I love the banter between the two. Madison manages to hold her own with the serious dominant. I think Logan may have met "his match" - in more ways than one. I am definitely looking forward to the next installment in this series.
*ARC provided by NetGalley and the publisher.
Joey W. Hill is a skilled writer of erotic romance. She definitely pulls you into the story and makes you feel that you are there - actually observing what is going on in the story. Each installment moves the story to the next level of the developing relationship between Logan and Madison. I love the banter between the two. Madison manages to hold her own with the serious dominant. I think Logan may have met "his match" - in more ways than one. I am definitely looking forward to the next installment in this series.
*ARC provided by NetGalley and the publisher.
May 26, 2014
Naughty Bits Part II: The Training Session 4.5 Stars
This is a part 2 of a new Novella series by the wonderfully talented Joey W Hill being released monthly. I have to be honest, if I see her name, then it is an automatic purchase. I was not disappointed. After her sister Alice passes away, leaving Madison her Lingerie shop Naughty Bits, Madison's life changes. In book 1 we found out that not only has she been left Naughty Bits, but Madison found a letter from her sister Alice, telling her that she is leaving Madison to Logan who is the owner of the hardware shop next door. Logan is a Master who trains submissives' and he is currently training Troy for his Domme. In this book, Logan invites Madison to assist in his training of Troy. Whilst attending the training session, it becomes obvious to all, just how badly Madison wants to submit too. In fact Logan uses Madison's body to train Troy and in turn train Madison. Madison is slowly learning to trust her feelings where Logan is concerned and his support has encouraged her to take Naughty Bits and make it her own, helping others to full fill their fantasies. Whilst Logan is fulfilling some of Madison's. I adore Logan and Madison, not to mention Troy and thoroughly enjoyed the BDSM sessions. I am honestly on the edge of my seat, waiting to see where Ms.Hill takes us next and I cannot wait to see how this story progresses. Well done Joey W Hill another excellent read......
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This is a part 2 of a new Novella series by the wonderfully talented Joey W Hill being released monthly. I have to be honest, if I see her name, then it is an automatic purchase. I was not disappointed. After her sister Alice passes away, leaving Madison her Lingerie shop Naughty Bits, Madison's life changes. In book 1 we found out that not only has she been left Naughty Bits, but Madison found a letter from her sister Alice, telling her that she is leaving Madison to Logan who is the owner of the hardware shop next door. Logan is a Master who trains submissives' and he is currently training Troy for his Domme. In this book, Logan invites Madison to assist in his training of Troy. Whilst attending the training session, it becomes obvious to all, just how badly Madison wants to submit too. In fact Logan uses Madison's body to train Troy and in turn train Madison. Madison is slowly learning to trust her feelings where Logan is concerned and his support has encouraged her to take Naughty Bits and make it her own, helping others to full fill their fantasies. Whilst Logan is fulfilling some of Madison's. I adore Logan and Madison, not to mention Troy and thoroughly enjoyed the BDSM sessions. I am honestly on the edge of my seat, waiting to see where Ms.Hill takes us next and I cannot wait to see how this story progresses. Well done Joey W Hill another excellent read......
Reviewed on behalf of
Jezabell Girl & Friends
Email: jezabellgirlandfriends@gmail.com
Web: http://jezabellgirlandfriends.com
FB: http://facebook.com/jezabellgirlandfr...
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May 20, 2014
A serialisation by one of the foremost writers in erotic fiction and not to be missed. This is the second instalment in The Naughty Bits series and things are definitely hotting up! Whilst quite short by nature it's not just a quick easily forgotten read and this novella will suck you in and make you hungry for more.
As it's not the longest book I won't ruin it with lots if spoilers but I will state that this book sees Madison learning to trust in her dominating neighbour Logan and surprisingly it's reciprocated. She's a complex woman with numerous issues and yet he sees right through to the heart of her and it's an amazing journey the heroine is taking. Whilst this is a sexy read it's so emotional as Madison's walls are slowly breaking down. Yes it has sex and bondage in it but it's character driven as the author exposes both their weaknesses and their strengths. Sexy but not gratuitous and I'd definitely read more.
Whilst not a huge fan of serialisations I'm increasingly reading them but it's not my preferred way to read a book but often readers can get a longer tale this way. I feel if prices are reasonable then this is a great way to dip into a new author and just wallow in their imagination for a while and this author has a very good imagination! Strong main characters, interesting peripheral cast and humour. I can see why so many readers recommend this author and now I'm one of them!
As it's not the longest book I won't ruin it with lots if spoilers but I will state that this book sees Madison learning to trust in her dominating neighbour Logan and surprisingly it's reciprocated. She's a complex woman with numerous issues and yet he sees right through to the heart of her and it's an amazing journey the heroine is taking. Whilst this is a sexy read it's so emotional as Madison's walls are slowly breaking down. Yes it has sex and bondage in it but it's character driven as the author exposes both their weaknesses and their strengths. Sexy but not gratuitous and I'd definitely read more.
Whilst not a huge fan of serialisations I'm increasingly reading them but it's not my preferred way to read a book but often readers can get a longer tale this way. I feel if prices are reasonable then this is a great way to dip into a new author and just wallow in their imagination for a while and this author has a very good imagination! Strong main characters, interesting peripheral cast and humour. I can see why so many readers recommend this author and now I'm one of them!
May 16, 2014
Originally reviewed for Tea and Book.
For the most part, I like Joey Hill. She has a sensual style that could send just about anyone unto a swoon. Erotica at its best.
That being said, I found this book to be missing something. Not because it lacks Ms Hill' s usual style but because it's disjointed. I didn't read Part I and that may have been a part if the problem. There will be a total of four parts. I wasn't paying attention and it seems this is more of a serial then a series and therein lay the rub. There was no beginning and no end. Just a glimpse into a relationship.
Madison has left her old life to run her sister's lingerie store. She is a bit reserved and having a hard time coming to terms with her sensuality. She has agreed to help the Dom next door with a training session. The deeper she goes with Logan the more her inner sub cones out. Finally releasing her sexuality.
Logan is an experienced Dom and finds himself attracted to the sexy little shop owner next door. He watches her submissive side blossom but has to deal with her past. A woman who no linger trusts her instincts when it comes to men. How can Logan convince her that she should be his?
A promising story but like I said in the beginning it's too disjointed for me. I want the whole story all at once.
Shauni
This review is based on the ARC of Naughty Bits (Part II), provided by netgalley and scheduled to be released on May 20, 2014
For the most part, I like Joey Hill. She has a sensual style that could send just about anyone unto a swoon. Erotica at its best.
That being said, I found this book to be missing something. Not because it lacks Ms Hill' s usual style but because it's disjointed. I didn't read Part I and that may have been a part if the problem. There will be a total of four parts. I wasn't paying attention and it seems this is more of a serial then a series and therein lay the rub. There was no beginning and no end. Just a glimpse into a relationship.
Madison has left her old life to run her sister's lingerie store. She is a bit reserved and having a hard time coming to terms with her sensuality. She has agreed to help the Dom next door with a training session. The deeper she goes with Logan the more her inner sub cones out. Finally releasing her sexuality.
Logan is an experienced Dom and finds himself attracted to the sexy little shop owner next door. He watches her submissive side blossom but has to deal with her past. A woman who no linger trusts her instincts when it comes to men. How can Logan convince her that she should be his?
A promising story but like I said in the beginning it's too disjointed for me. I want the whole story all at once.
Shauni
This review is based on the ARC of Naughty Bits (Part II), provided by netgalley and scheduled to be released on May 20, 2014
July 26, 2016
**ARC courtesy of publisher via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review**
As a huge fan of Joey Hill, I was thrilled to try an new series by this talented author. This series is much lighter than her Nature of Desire series, and is a great gateway to BDSM and Joey Hill as an author. Hill's books are always really well written and she brings her characters to life, so that the reader is witnessing the story. This remains true with the Naughty Bits series, about Madison who has inherited a lingerie/sex store from her late sister. The store is next door to the local hardware store owned by Logan, who is a Dom and is helping Madison discover the submissive in her. The character of Troy who works at the hardware store is sweet and caring with Madison, and a male submissive being trained by Logan for his mistress. This training give Madison some great insight inter her own desires and needs. Although this is a quick read, it lingered in my mind not only with what will happen to these characters in the next series, but also revisiting some of the scenes in my mind. Ms. Hill has the ability to create strong images in my mind with her phenomenal talent and well scripted books. I like this series as it is a different dynamic then her previous series, and gives us another perspective of not only Joey Hill, but of the BDSM world.
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