"Roy Peter Clark knows more about writing than anybody I know who is not currently dead"--these are the words of humorist Dave Barry that conclude the author bio for "Glamour of Grammar: A Guide to the Magic and Mystery of Practical English". Well, even if he does, I can't say a meaningful portion of this knowledge is shared in the book. I found it too basic and plain to be really enjoyable or useful. At least on the level I had expected it to be.
"Glamour of Grammar" is laid out in 50 small chapters, each containing pieces of advice to writers and aspiring writers in one of the following categories: "Words", "Points", "Standards", "Meaning", and "Purpose". Put briefly, the book is a combination of a grammar and usage guide with some writing advice, richly peppered with notes on word origins and the author's humorous remarks. Each chapter ends with a bulleted summary called "Keepsakes". Now, I am not sure exactly what kind of writers Mr. Clark had in mind, but these keepsakes represent some really basic and self-evident tips. I'll give you some examples. The first keepsake for the chapter on possessives says: "To form a possessive singular, add an 's: "Sadie's ring." Wow, some new information there. The first keepsake for the next chapter: "Use quotation marks before and after a direct quotation." Another: "In a story, a single exclamation point can go a long way." Yet another: "Sentences begin with a capital letter and end with a period, or full stop." And so on--you have the idea now.
I may be accused of being too harsh here, but I was also annoyed by the great number of subjective digressions that did not add to the value of the book. For example, this passage: "I also generally prefer American punctuation conventions to British ones, with one huge exception: the name we give to the little dot at the end of this sentence. We call it a period, but the Brits prefer full stop because it describes the effect on the reader. the period signals to the reader that the sentence is over, a thought completed, and another about to begin. Stop." To be honest, I find this neither useful, nor funny. Or (on forming possessive singular of nouns): "...Professor Strunk tells us to add the 's no matter the final consonant of the noun and cites as examples "Charles's friend" and "Burns's poems." This makes great sense to me because it echoes the way we would speak the word aloud. So it puzzles me that the Associated Press Stylebook, and influential work for journalists, argues that a simple apostrophe suffices after the proper nouns ending in s: as in "Agnes' book" and "Jules' seat." I don't know about you, but when I read those aloud, the missing s trips up my tongue, and on the page it bothers my eyes. I would say "Agnes's book" and "Jule's seat." But then the author drops his adamant stance and states something just too subjective to be of any use: "There are classic examples when adding an s gives you that Velcro feeling: I would not say Achilles's heel. Achilles' will do fine, thank you." Why? Why does Agnes deserve an "s" and Achilles does not? A mystery.
I could go on and on, but I will simply say that the book did not work for me. I liked neither its structure, nor tone, and I thought that it was rather fit for a high school student who wants to avoid mistakes in her essays and, as a side effect, learn some fun facts about words, than someone who is even remotely into writing and thus had already learned the basics. I am giving this book three instead of two stars just because I felt that the author was genuinely enthusiastic about various aspects of the language, especially etymology. Also, my impression of the first four parts was just a little redeemed by the last one, "Meaning". In it, to illustrate his last ten chapters/tips in this category, Mr. Clark found and provided samples of writing by various authors, which was quite handy.
Overall, I would be reluctant to recommend this book. I did not grow particularly fond of this attempted mix of a grammar handbook, a style and writing guide, selected word origin facts, and statements of related personal opinions. There are much better books in every mentioned category.