In this 3rd. volume, I feel there is too many unnecessary explanations, too much zero thoughts (thinking that does not advance the plot arcs of the story). For example, when the author describes the skills and levels "Strength Boost (Low), Strength Boost (Medium), Strength Boost (High),
Vitality Boost (Low), Vitality Boost (Medium), Vitality Boost (High), Magic
Boost (Low), Magic Boost (Medium), Magic Boost (High), Spirit Boost (Low),
Spirit Boost (Medium), Spirit Boost (High)," is unnecessary. Strength boost (High) obviously require the low and medium levels. It is unnecessary to be so verbose with explanations and descriptions that are unneeded.
If the main character, Fate (Corpse) knows that Eris and Northern are trying to assassinate Lady Roxy then he should have already gotten rid of them. Not solving obvious problems and evil actions right away just make far worse problems down the road.
I feel there are to many back and forth needless dialogues between the Greed sword and Fate.
I feel the author is miserly/scrimpy since the beginning of the light novel in that, the main character, Fate (Corpse) defeats and kills thousands of enemies, but rarely recovers the money he could get from their deaths. Same happened with the Goblins, Orcs, Sand Worms, crystals in the cave, etc. If the main character would actually save up and grow his wealth, he would not be in such a vulnerable position all of the time. Myne saves every single gold coin for her village and people while Fate keeps on spending more money than he remembers to collect. Lady Roxy could have hired Fate since the first night they met. But the author "allowed" and envisioned 5 years of long suffering to Fate.
Fate should have attacked the Death Parade (large monster stampede) since the beginning. But waits at the wall of the city, until it's too late. Extreme situations, impossible odds are not equivalent to an extreme drama. The opposite is more likely to be true: The more impossible a situation, the less credible and nonsensical it becomes.