Though I had much fun reading this book, there were several items that also bothered me. First, let me say that while reading the story I immediately thought of it as a book for male readers. Don't get me wrong - this is not meant as pure criticism, but just a personal observation. There are such authors I consider mainly read by either males or females. For example, Clancy definitely is one them ;) But how does that influence my impression of the book? I have to admit, at times I got bored with all the military stuff and explanations.
The writing had a very matter-of-fact style, which made it hard for me to feel with the characters and really get involved. While I enjoyed the fast action and plot twists, I was not as emotionally engaged as I have experienced with other books. One other thing that bothered me were the dialogues, especially the statements given by Dimitri. While they did show depth and philosophical content, they were often expressed in a plain way which diminished their true value.
The first part of the plot was predictable but well-written, so it never got boring and kept me reading. The end offered some surprise and the promise for a sequel. Add more emotion to the characters and story and that will be even better.
Note to self: this book closes a gap - while I have read vampire stories from almost every genre mix so far, I had not yet read a military vampire story.
(I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review)