This is a whole series review for book 1 and book 2. Ratings are not per-book since this series is really just one very long running singular book.
For fucks sake. Alright, look. I like Daryl Banner books, generally speaking. He's one of the few male authors in the genre, and I feel his writing reflects some of those underlying differences from a lot of other authors (primarily women) in MM romance. Banner is definitely capable of creating an intricate plot. This series has that, certainly, but it also comes with some fucking problems. Big problems, at least to me.
Before I get into this, a quick note: this is NOT like most of Banner's books. This is a gritty and sometimes uneasy story. There's violence and gore, strong feelings of hopelessness. So, do not go into this series thinking this is going to be like a paranormal Football Sundae or something. It's not, at all.
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✅️ The Good
An intricate plot. There's a lot of pieces at play, and it's clear that Banner spent a good amount of effort on creating this story. Don't get me wrong, it's not Game of Thrones or The Expanse levels of deep, but it's not your average MM formulaic storyline. Some parts are easily predictable, but I think that was mostly intentional foreshadowing.
Unique take on the paranormal. Obviously, this series is about vampires. But, it involves other paranormal aspects too. While those aspects on a whole aren't shockingly new for the paranormal genre, how they are weaved together in this story is more interesting than most.
Vampire/human pairing. Who doesn't like a little blood sucking "I could drain you dry if I wanted, but I'll never hurt you" man/man romance? Am I right? 😉
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👎 The Not Good
Lacking emotional depth. Like I said, this series has some heavy stuff in it. For example (minor spoiler that you find out in literally chapter one), Kyle killed his parents when he first turned into a vampire. His emotions from that are handled in the book in a variety of ways, underpinning a lot of stuff to some degree. But the issue is that... it just doesn't seem very real? Like, it seems as if Kyle should have been expressing a lot more than he did. It's clear that he did feel things like remorse and all that, but the books didn't really make me feel the weight of his emotions. I guess you could say it was a bit too much "tell" rather than "show" (or "feel" in this case).
The same thing happened when one of Kyle's friends was killed. Sure, there was a moment of shock and outrage from Kyle... but it didn't resonate. It was just like something that happened, a caricature of what we should really be feeling as readers of that event.
This series failed to provide a deep emotional resonance relative to its subject matter. In Banner's lighter books, that's alright. But here, it's a big missing piece, I think. It makes the story a bit bland when it should be vibrant.
Too many characters and plot lines. This story is romance, no doubt, but it's wider than that. It's somewhat of a fantasy adventure (mixed with horror). There are a lot of different characters and moving pieces. That makes the romance feel secondary sometimes, especially given what I just said about shallow emotional depth. I got bored with some of the non-romance aspects, but I probably wouldn't have if it were trimmed down a bit, and/or the romance was made to shine bright in the fewer moments we were given for it. But again, it felt bland.
Dull sex. This issue surprised me a bit, coming from Daryl Banner. Perhaps I'm spoiled on vampire/human pairings by series like Alice Winters' Vampire Related Crimes (VRC), but I just didn't feel that enticed by Kyle and Elias' sexual relationship. With vampires, obviously there's the blood aspect. In VRC, a lot of the blood play is very well described. For example, in that series, when Marcus bites Finn, he always makes sure Finn doesn't feel much pain from it. And we get the feeling that Marcus actually drinking/feeding from him is a big deal, a huge intimate moment between them. You feel as if you are right there in the scene. But with this series, all of that feels really dull, once again, a caricature.
Obviously some of the vampire abilities and such are different between those two series, but that's not my point. From a sexual and chemistry standpoint, Kyle and Elias didn't seem all that different from two normal human guys simply because the books didn't make us feel much relevance of the blood sucking intimacy. Why bother making Kyle a vampire if you're not going to cash in on that fairly unique intimacy potential?
(I guess I'm really just coming back to the same point: a decent amount of shit in this series felt dull.)
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❌️❌️❌️ The "What the actual fuck? Fuck you, book."
Surprise poly. Yep, you heard it here first, folks. All that good MM that builds up in book 1? That becomes MMM in book 2. Kyle and Elias become Kyle, Elias, and (other person). It's not just one time, and not just for sex. They are emotionally engaged with each other, despite Kyle and Elias feeling like they have a partial spotlight sometimes. It doesn't work, not that late in the game. It's fucking weird.
To be clear, poly itself is not weird. I don't read a whole lot of it, but sometimes. Here's my issue, though: I expect to be fucking told when a romance is going to be poly. Front and center, so I know what I'm getting into. Authors can hide it inside a content warning, that's fine. I get some people want to discover the book without knowing in advance. But I do want to know in advance. Sometimes I'm not in the mood to read about three or more guys loving each other. In fact, I read this series when I was definitely not in the mood for poly. If the author was upfront about it, then I wouldn't have started this series right now.
I'm so put off by it that I'm not sure if I'll read further in the series when Banner releases more. I'm so pissed that I spent my time with like 500-600 pages of content only to discover that it wasn't just gonna be Kyle and Elias. Fuck you, book. Fuck. You.
I usually give 1 star ratings for this kind of surprise bullshit, but Banner did create a decent story and world so I didn't want to be overly harsh. Still, this pisses me off to no end.
Cliffhangers. Seriously, fucking authors and cliffhangers. I don't know about most people, but I tend to read to relax, to escape. To lower my overall anxiety of life. So, you know what I hate? When a fucking book increases my anxiety because it ends on a fucking cliffhanger and the next book isn't available. Both of these books end on a very significant cliffhanger (though the cliffhanger in book #1 you can see from a mile away)
To Banner's credit, he does give a somewhat HFN, although it's fairly tainted in book #2. So, here we are, forced to wait for another however many months or years.
I will not knock stars off for this in particular just because Daryl Banner (to my knowledge) has never abandoned his readers on any series. I just hope it stays that way. And I'd prefer to just not to have cliffhangers in the first place.
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Overall, I'm very disappointed with this series. The surprise poly ruined my enjoyment, and the lack of depth in various places made it boring. I'm not going to DNR Banner over it (I do most authors that introduce stuff like that) because he's a good author with other good books, but I'll be far more wary of his non-fluffy books from now on. I don't know if I'll bother reading book #3 or not. I guess it depends where it goes, so I'll have to skim it if I decide to give it any attention at all.
Regardless, I don't recommend reading this series until all the books are published. The cliffhangers will annoy you. And, if you hate surprise poly relationships that spontaneously sprout later in the series for not much reason, skip this series entirely. Otherwise, if these issues don't seem important to you, then maybe this series is worth your time.