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When Given Good Principles: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
“When one is given good principles, one must take care never to follow them in pride and conceit.”
George Wickham was content to ride the coattails of his well-connected friends, right up until they declared him a lapdog good for little else other than his connection to Fitzwilliam Darcy. Properly humbled, and with his father’s death imminent, he returns to Derbyshire in hopes of seeing the man who raised him before it is too late.
One last conversation with his father sets George’s feet on the right path and on a journey of self-discovery. Along the way he makes new friends and pursues new interests better suited to his disposition than that of a clergyman, eventually finding himself in Meryton, clerk to Mr. Philips, a country solicitor.
Stunned to encounter his friend Darcy and others he knows in the area, Wickham sets out to correct the poor impression Darcy has made on the citizens of Meryton… one lady’s opinion, in particular.
What happens when Mr. Wickham, charming, charismatic, and affable, uses his amiable nature to influence and guide the behavior and actions of those around him, and how will his reformation affect Darcy’s and Lizzy’s courtship? And what will happen when an unexpected source seeks to thwart his efforts?
When Given Good Principles follows an alternate path of our favorite Pride and Prejudice characters. Mr. Wickham joins Darcy and Lizzy in the spotlight in this Pride and Prejudice Vagary, featuring a reformed George Wickham and an unexpected villain.
Please this story was titled Mr. Wickham Intervenes before it was published.
George Wickham was content to ride the coattails of his well-connected friends, right up until they declared him a lapdog good for little else other than his connection to Fitzwilliam Darcy. Properly humbled, and with his father’s death imminent, he returns to Derbyshire in hopes of seeing the man who raised him before it is too late.
One last conversation with his father sets George’s feet on the right path and on a journey of self-discovery. Along the way he makes new friends and pursues new interests better suited to his disposition than that of a clergyman, eventually finding himself in Meryton, clerk to Mr. Philips, a country solicitor.
Stunned to encounter his friend Darcy and others he knows in the area, Wickham sets out to correct the poor impression Darcy has made on the citizens of Meryton… one lady’s opinion, in particular.
What happens when Mr. Wickham, charming, charismatic, and affable, uses his amiable nature to influence and guide the behavior and actions of those around him, and how will his reformation affect Darcy’s and Lizzy’s courtship? And what will happen when an unexpected source seeks to thwart his efforts?
When Given Good Principles follows an alternate path of our favorite Pride and Prejudice characters. Mr. Wickham joins Darcy and Lizzy in the spotlight in this Pride and Prejudice Vagary, featuring a reformed George Wickham and an unexpected villain.
Please this story was titled Mr. Wickham Intervenes before it was published.
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Published September 22, 2023
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December 28, 2023
A Redeemed Wickham
When a young George Wickham overhears himself being discussed by ‘gentlemen’ he thought genuinely liked him, he receives a generous dose of reality. This is followed by a visit to his dying father and a vow to honour the legacy left to him. He determines to improve himself and become a better person. However, due to his profligate history, it will take some time before he is trusted by those he hurt in the past, namely, Fitzwilliam Darcy.
As with all of MJ Stratton’s previous releases, this book is very engaging and grabbed my immediate attention which held throughout the book. I most definitely loved Wickham’s character change. I’m a person who often seeks out variations with ‘no Wickham’, as he is not a favourite character—neither is Lydia. So, I liked the redemption aspect of this book very much and enjoyed their portrayals, as George coincidentally finds himself in Meryton at the same time as Darcy, who immediately becomes suspicious of his reasons for being there.
Georgiana plays a significant role in this book, being a somewhat devious, stupidly naive little girl determined to have her way, who pays a heavy price for her actions. I was glad the author stayed firm with respect to her outcome and comeuppance.
Ms. Stratton is an excellent storyteller, usually focusing on secondary characters and providing unique ‘what ifs’ for their portrayals. I can’t wait to see what she may have in store for the future. I would love to see her takes on Anne de Bourgh or Lady Catherine.
Highly recommend.
Clean content.
When a young George Wickham overhears himself being discussed by ‘gentlemen’ he thought genuinely liked him, he receives a generous dose of reality. This is followed by a visit to his dying father and a vow to honour the legacy left to him. He determines to improve himself and become a better person. However, due to his profligate history, it will take some time before he is trusted by those he hurt in the past, namely, Fitzwilliam Darcy.
As with all of MJ Stratton’s previous releases, this book is very engaging and grabbed my immediate attention which held throughout the book. I most definitely loved Wickham’s character change. I’m a person who often seeks out variations with ‘no Wickham’, as he is not a favourite character—neither is Lydia. So, I liked the redemption aspect of this book very much and enjoyed their portrayals, as George coincidentally finds himself in Meryton at the same time as Darcy, who immediately becomes suspicious of his reasons for being there.
Georgiana plays a significant role in this book, being a somewhat devious, stupidly naive little girl determined to have her way, who pays a heavy price for her actions. I was glad the author stayed firm with respect to her outcome and comeuppance.
Ms. Stratton is an excellent storyteller, usually focusing on secondary characters and providing unique ‘what ifs’ for their portrayals. I can’t wait to see what she may have in store for the future. I would love to see her takes on Anne de Bourgh or Lady Catherine.
Highly recommend.
Clean content.
September 26, 2023
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This Pride and prejudice variation gives us two main characters who are the complete opposite of canon.
George Wickham, old playmate of Fitzwilliam Darcy, becomes dissolute at Cambridge. Drawn into a coterie of young profligate aristocrats, he feels accepted. Until one day, he overhears what they really think of him.
An express arrives, urging his return home as his father is dying.
These two blows have a profound effect, leaving him much more receptive to his father’s final advice.
So George commits to his studies, eventually becoming a law clerk.
Whilst working in a solicitor’s office in Ramsgate, he comes across the young heiress, Georgiana Darcy. When he realises that a fortune hunter is plotting an elopement with Georgiana, he foils the plot with her brother’s assistance.
Unfortunately, this Georgiana is very far from Jane Austen’s innocent, gullible young lady. She may be only fifteen, but words like devious, manipulative and vengeful come to mind.
The presence of a benign, George Wickham in Meryton (Mr Philips’ new clerk) influences both events and behaviour of all the usual characters.
Fitzwilliam Darcy is notorious in Meryton for his haughty and prideful behaviour.
When George’s friendship with Darcy, is restored, he makes it his business to smooth the ruffled feathers of the neighbourhood.
Can he help Darcy to undo his errors with Elizabeth Bennet or will all his efforts be sabotaged by an unexpected adversary?
This is both an unusual and enjoyable variation.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
This Pride and prejudice variation gives us two main characters who are the complete opposite of canon.
George Wickham, old playmate of Fitzwilliam Darcy, becomes dissolute at Cambridge. Drawn into a coterie of young profligate aristocrats, he feels accepted. Until one day, he overhears what they really think of him.
An express arrives, urging his return home as his father is dying.
These two blows have a profound effect, leaving him much more receptive to his father’s final advice.
So George commits to his studies, eventually becoming a law clerk.
Whilst working in a solicitor’s office in Ramsgate, he comes across the young heiress, Georgiana Darcy. When he realises that a fortune hunter is plotting an elopement with Georgiana, he foils the plot with her brother’s assistance.
Unfortunately, this Georgiana is very far from Jane Austen’s innocent, gullible young lady. She may be only fifteen, but words like devious, manipulative and vengeful come to mind.
The presence of a benign, George Wickham in Meryton (Mr Philips’ new clerk) influences both events and behaviour of all the usual characters.
Fitzwilliam Darcy is notorious in Meryton for his haughty and prideful behaviour.
When George’s friendship with Darcy, is restored, he makes it his business to smooth the ruffled feathers of the neighbourhood.
Can he help Darcy to undo his errors with Elizabeth Bennet or will all his efforts be sabotaged by an unexpected adversary?
This is both an unusual and enjoyable variation.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 22, 2023
An unrecognizable Wickham...
This author has a gift of taking secondary characters, filling out their backstory and making them earnestly human, and even likeable.
Her latest challenge is Wickham, and in my opinion is one of the most difficult to humanise. However, with the poignant scene between Wickham and his dying father, Wickham takes a turn on his path towards a future very far from canon.
When he acquires a post as clerk for Philips in Meryton, he seems to become a mastermind, assisting Bennet sisters to find their turn in the path. However, things get complicated - courtesy of Miss Darcy - and not everyone makes the right choices to find their happy ending.
A charming, clever reimagining of this normally vilified character. And another great offering in MJ Stratten's Redemption series.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This author has a gift of taking secondary characters, filling out their backstory and making them earnestly human, and even likeable.
Her latest challenge is Wickham, and in my opinion is one of the most difficult to humanise. However, with the poignant scene between Wickham and his dying father, Wickham takes a turn on his path towards a future very far from canon.
When he acquires a post as clerk for Philips in Meryton, he seems to become a mastermind, assisting Bennet sisters to find their turn in the path. However, things get complicated - courtesy of Miss Darcy - and not everyone makes the right choices to find their happy ending.
A charming, clever reimagining of this normally vilified character. And another great offering in MJ Stratten's Redemption series.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
August 17, 2024
Those in the know will feel their pulses quicken, their eyeballs bulge out, and their mind freeze when they read the blurb on this curious P&P variation. What if George Wickham learned the error of his ways as a young man, follows the wishes of his father and godfather, Mr. Darcy, and ends up saving others from themselves and the interference of some bad characters?
I thought it was a fun and fascinating variation with George Wickham as the central figure being a light for good and guiding others from making big mistakes particularly his old friend, Fitzwilliam Darcy.
Wickham's goodness comes from the school of hard knocks when he learns the truth of what the high-born "friends" at Cambridge truly think of him and how disappointed his father, on his deathbed, expresses final words of wisdom hoping George will change. He does change and sets out to prove he is ready to appreciate old Mr. Darcy's gift and settle in to work as a law clerk to work his way up. Young Darcy mistrusts the quick change even when George Wickham does him a great service shortly after and then later.
Darcy and Lizzy are still full of all that pride and prejudice and the Bennets are social disasters, but George is there to steer their way. An infatuated Lydia keeps him on his toes as does a startling vicious and cunning antagonist who no one, even the reader suspects at first is working against him.
This was a long novella in length, but again, I was impressed with how much plot and character development the author could sink into her story. And, the clever use of Austen's classic dialogue and situations pieced into a whole new story.
I thought it was a fun and fascinating variation with George Wickham as the central figure being a light for good and guiding others from making big mistakes particularly his old friend, Fitzwilliam Darcy.
Wickham's goodness comes from the school of hard knocks when he learns the truth of what the high-born "friends" at Cambridge truly think of him and how disappointed his father, on his deathbed, expresses final words of wisdom hoping George will change. He does change and sets out to prove he is ready to appreciate old Mr. Darcy's gift and settle in to work as a law clerk to work his way up. Young Darcy mistrusts the quick change even when George Wickham does him a great service shortly after and then later.
Darcy and Lizzy are still full of all that pride and prejudice and the Bennets are social disasters, but George is there to steer their way. An infatuated Lydia keeps him on his toes as does a startling vicious and cunning antagonist who no one, even the reader suspects at first is working against him.
This was a long novella in length, but again, I was impressed with how much plot and character development the author could sink into her story. And, the clever use of Austen's classic dialogue and situations pieced into a whole new story.
October 1, 2023
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
October 10, 2024
Time for George Wickham to shine
I really enjoyed the premise of this one, an excellent idea which was competently executed. However to be honest I~ didn't love it - 3.75* rounded up to 4*.
Throughout this book the author very carefully tweaks the characters and their behaviours to assign well known characteristics to different individuals. This was very well done and I enjoyed spotting the changes.
The idea that Wickham saw the errors in his ways before it is too late was a very good one and I enjoyed seeing the impact of this change in the life he led. I was not quite so keen on the manner in which he involved himself in the lives of others was portrayed. Frankly he became a bit too much of a "goody two shoes" for me.
The book also explored another well known secondary character and how they responded to the good principles thy were given. This was also interesting and I believe the resolution for this character was era compliant even if it may not be kind enough for all readers. I applaud the author for this decision.
All in all this was an enjoyable read which will be appreciated by fans for the genre.
I really enjoyed the premise of this one, an excellent idea which was competently executed. However to be honest I~ didn't love it - 3.75* rounded up to 4*.
Throughout this book the author very carefully tweaks the characters and their behaviours to assign well known characteristics to different individuals. This was very well done and I enjoyed spotting the changes.
The idea that Wickham saw the errors in his ways before it is too late was a very good one and I enjoyed seeing the impact of this change in the life he led. I was not quite so keen on the manner in which he involved himself in the lives of others was portrayed. Frankly he became a bit too much of a "goody two shoes" for me.
The book also explored another well known secondary character and how they responded to the good principles thy were given. This was also interesting and I believe the resolution for this character was era compliant even if it may not be kind enough for all readers. I applaud the author for this decision.
All in all this was an enjoyable read which will be appreciated by fans for the genre.
September 27, 2023
interfere: to take part in the affairs of others; meddle
intervene: to come between disputing people, groups
“You knew of my intent and have deliberately interfered,” Darcy said.
“I prefer the word intervene,” Wickham replied.
In spite of Fitzwilliam Darcy’s disapproval, George Wickham intervenes again and again throughout this story.
A double crisis occurs in Wickham’s life. First, he learns the truth about schoolmates he had thought were his friends. Second, he learns his father is gravely ill and not expected to survive.
The elder Wickham has a long-delayed talk with his son. George Wickham sees his errors and grows up.
Wickham is determined to be a good friend to Darcy, even though Darcy does not believe Wickham is truly reformed.
Both men learn that actions must be changed before amends can be accepted. Wickham is involved behind the scenes in the entire Pride and Prejudice story. His influence, uh, intervention, is seen throughout.
intervene: to come between disputing people, groups
“You knew of my intent and have deliberately interfered,” Darcy said.
“I prefer the word intervene,” Wickham replied.
In spite of Fitzwilliam Darcy’s disapproval, George Wickham intervenes again and again throughout this story.
A double crisis occurs in Wickham’s life. First, he learns the truth about schoolmates he had thought were his friends. Second, he learns his father is gravely ill and not expected to survive.
The elder Wickham has a long-delayed talk with his son. George Wickham sees his errors and grows up.
Wickham is determined to be a good friend to Darcy, even though Darcy does not believe Wickham is truly reformed.
Both men learn that actions must be changed before amends can be accepted. Wickham is involved behind the scenes in the entire Pride and Prejudice story. His influence, uh, intervention, is seen throughout.
October 21, 2023
My Rating: 4.5* rounded up to 5*
“When one is given good principles, as you have, one must take care never to follow them in pride and conceit.” (quote from the book)
I have become a huge fan of Ms. Stratton’s variations. She takes on secondary characters of ‘Pride & Prejudice’ and breathes new life into them. She provides them with more of a backstory and alternate possibilities.
In this tale, which starts in 1804, she has taken Mr. Wickham and provided a ‘what if he is shown that he is only being used by his so-called friends and then learns his father is dying all at the same time’. Would this be enough to alter his path? Will he heed the wisdom his father offers him?
As this is novella length, and I don’t want to give too much away. Wickham decides to heed the words of his dying father and sets a course that would do him proud. Finding that giving sermons is not his forte, he decides to study the law with the money he receives by signing over the living the elder Mr. Darcy had written into his will. He still must regain the trust of his best friend, Fitzwilliam Darcy.
“But there is wisdom, however, i seeking out greater understanding to add to what you have previously learned." (quote from the book)
This story follows canon to a point. The changes were believable and cleverly done. It was enjoyable to see a reformed Wickham with more sense and an observant attitude. How he influences the course of certain characters was entertaining. The antagonist was a surprise, and though it was unfortunate how things played out, the comeuppance was realistic for the era. There were times, however, where I felt Wickham was more of a ‘fairy godfather’ to certain individuals making them see ‘the light’. I also wished it was longer as I was enjoying the story so much!
Again, I highly recommend this novella and all Ms. Stratton’s books!
September 23, 2023
Very Enjoyable
As a rule George Wickham is a character we all know and hate. This was an unusual and wonderful tale that changed his life. I really enjoyed it.
As a rule George Wickham is a character we all know and hate. This was an unusual and wonderful tale that changed his life. I really enjoyed it.
October 19, 2023
While staying with friends George Wickham learns that his father is gravely ill. He hastens back to Derbyshire and in a last conversation with his father the latter convinces his son to follow the right path in the future and not to spend his time with scoundrels as he had before.
Some years later Wickham has learned an honourable profession and is now a solicitor, he has just arrived in Maryton to start working for Mr. Philips. He is astonished to encounter Darcy there and makes the acquaintance of the Bennet sisters. Soon Wickham discovers that Darcy is not well liked in the area because he treats people haughtily and arrogantly. Wickham decides to act in Darcy's favor and right the wrongs but especially one of the Bennet sisters, Elizabeth, has a real distaste for Darcy and is not easily convinced. But then the lady overhears that Darcy had tried to separate her sister Jane and her suitor Mr Bingley she is angry beyond words. Will Wickham, who had just discovered that Darcy is in love with Elizabeth, be able to help his friend in that case? Is there a chance for Darcy to make amends and convince the lady of his love for her?
The story of the author MJ Stratton is very well written and definitely a very good read.
It is a story about a nice Wickham, something I've never read before. And I really liked that nice Wickham very much. He was amiable and tried to help everyone. With his help he archives changes, some in his acquaintances and some in events. This means the beginning of Darcy's and Elisabeth's relationship is much smoother than in Jane Austen's original story. The life of some other Bennet sisters also changes to the better due to his interference.
Unfortunately Wickham is not the only one to intervene. But the other person does not have noble motives and puts obstacles in the way of ODC. But in the end this person is discovered and receives what he/she deserves. I don't feel any pity for this person, only for the others who had to deal with the consequences of the intervention of this person. But fortunately all is resolved at the end.
The only thing I was not so content about was that sometimes I had the feeling that Wickham is something like "the almighty Wickham". He is needed for every decision, he is the one who gives advice, even Darcy needs him to make decisions (Ok I can understand that even Darcy is something a bit weak and needs the help and advice of a friend and I was glad for him that he has his childhood friend back). Sometimes this "almighty Wickham" was a bit too much for my taste. That is the reason I give the book 4,5 stars, round up to five. But I nevertheless enjoyed the read very much.
If you like to know what the story of pride and prejudice could have been if Wickham would have been a nice guy you should definitely read this book.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Some years later Wickham has learned an honourable profession and is now a solicitor, he has just arrived in Maryton to start working for Mr. Philips. He is astonished to encounter Darcy there and makes the acquaintance of the Bennet sisters. Soon Wickham discovers that Darcy is not well liked in the area because he treats people haughtily and arrogantly. Wickham decides to act in Darcy's favor and right the wrongs but especially one of the Bennet sisters, Elizabeth, has a real distaste for Darcy and is not easily convinced. But then the lady overhears that Darcy had tried to separate her sister Jane and her suitor Mr Bingley she is angry beyond words. Will Wickham, who had just discovered that Darcy is in love with Elizabeth, be able to help his friend in that case? Is there a chance for Darcy to make amends and convince the lady of his love for her?
The story of the author MJ Stratton is very well written and definitely a very good read.
It is a story about a nice Wickham, something I've never read before. And I really liked that nice Wickham very much. He was amiable and tried to help everyone. With his help he archives changes, some in his acquaintances and some in events. This means the beginning of Darcy's and Elisabeth's relationship is much smoother than in Jane Austen's original story. The life of some other Bennet sisters also changes to the better due to his interference.
Unfortunately Wickham is not the only one to intervene. But the other person does not have noble motives and puts obstacles in the way of ODC. But in the end this person is discovered and receives what he/she deserves. I don't feel any pity for this person, only for the others who had to deal with the consequences of the intervention of this person. But fortunately all is resolved at the end.
The only thing I was not so content about was that sometimes I had the feeling that Wickham is something like "the almighty Wickham". He is needed for every decision, he is the one who gives advice, even Darcy needs him to make decisions (Ok I can understand that even Darcy is something a bit weak and needs the help and advice of a friend and I was glad for him that he has his childhood friend back). Sometimes this "almighty Wickham" was a bit too much for my taste. That is the reason I give the book 4,5 stars, round up to five. But I nevertheless enjoyed the read very much.
If you like to know what the story of pride and prejudice could have been if Wickham would have been a nice guy you should definitely read this book.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 22, 2023
A Pride and Prejudice variation which begins in 1804. Nineteen year old George Wickham overhears what his 'friends' really think of him, that coupled with the death of his father's changes him. But will it last. Will Darcy believe that he has changed. How will his behaviour affect the people around him.
A well-written and extremely entertaining variation, with its surprising likeable main character.
I received a free copy of this book from the author via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
A well-written and extremely entertaining variation, with its surprising likeable main character.
I received a free copy of this book from the author via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
November 2, 2024
Loved, loved, loved this book.
Reread: loved
Reread: loved
December 28, 2023
Avid Reader
I enjoyed the way Wickham's father sat him down and explained the difference between his life and Darcy's. It also helped that he overhead his so called friends discussing him as the hanger on who entertained them. It was a hard lesson to learn. Then he met Collins and convinced him to bathe and not be such a blabber mouth. While in Ramsgate, Wickham encountered Georgina and her suitor and warned Darcy. This Georgina was a viper! Once she entered the picture, she was ready for revenge. After she hurt people and got what she wanted, she paid the price for it. The remaining characters got their HEA, including Wickham.
I enjoyed the way Wickham's father sat him down and explained the difference between his life and Darcy's. It also helped that he overhead his so called friends discussing him as the hanger on who entertained them. It was a hard lesson to learn. Then he met Collins and convinced him to bathe and not be such a blabber mouth. While in Ramsgate, Wickham encountered Georgina and her suitor and warned Darcy. This Georgina was a viper! Once she entered the picture, she was ready for revenge. After she hurt people and got what she wanted, she paid the price for it. The remaining characters got their HEA, including Wickham.
September 22, 2023
3.5 stars rounded up. A sweet, short tale.
October 24, 2023
consequences!!
I enjoyed the story so much. I loved how people actually had a consequences for their behavior. My biggest pet peeve in fiction is when no matter how bad the behavior is, everyone manages to forgive each other at the end. That did not happen in this story, there were real life consequences for bad behavior.
I enjoyed the story so much. I loved how people actually had a consequences for their behavior. My biggest pet peeve in fiction is when no matter how bad the behavior is, everyone manages to forgive each other at the end. That did not happen in this story, there were real life consequences for bad behavior.
May 29, 2024
Great story in need of an editor
This is a fun, fast paced story that would have been an enthusiastic 5 stars if not for the typos, word misuses, and confusion around plurals of family names. In case the author reads reviews, a brief primer:
Mr. Gardiner, Mr. Gardiner's hat, the Gardiners, the Gardiners' carriage
Mr. Phillips, Mr. Phillips's coat, the Phillipses, the Phillipses' house
This is a fun, fast paced story that would have been an enthusiastic 5 stars if not for the typos, word misuses, and confusion around plurals of family names. In case the author reads reviews, a brief primer:
Mr. Gardiner, Mr. Gardiner's hat, the Gardiners, the Gardiners' carriage
Mr. Phillips, Mr. Phillips's coat, the Phillipses, the Phillipses' house
May 23, 2025
Who is this Wickham??
Low angst, ODC and a completely different Wickham.
Wickham being so noble, sensible and a bit of a matchmaker is pretty strange but it works.
4.5 stars
Low angst, ODC and a completely different Wickham.
Wickham being so noble, sensible and a bit of a matchmaker is pretty strange but it works.
4.5 stars
September 30, 2023
Normally a story about George Wickham would not be the first one I would pick up to read, but I'm glad I did! It is so good to see George Wickham put his quick understanding of others and his silver tongue to good use! During his time at Cambridge, George has a pivotal moment when two things happen. One is that he learns that the Viscount he had thought was becoming his friend only wanted him as a connection to Darcy. The second, more major revelation came from his father, on his deathbed, when he speaks plainly to George about his disappointment in his previous poor behavior. He squelches George's jealousy of Fitzwilliam Darcy by explaining the weight of responsibility that is already on Darcy, even while the elder Mr. Darcy is still alive. He reminds George that few people see the man behind the estate and the money. George decides to be a good friend of Darcy, though Darcy is of course skeptical at first. It takes a while for Darcy to believe that George is truly reformed.
The book description mentions an unexpected villain, and yes, it is quite a surprise, although there are many hints early on that made me quite suspicious. The villain gets what they deserve.
The descriptions are good and the characters are interesting; things are changed just enough from canon that, with the exception of the new, improved Wickham (and the villain), it is believable. It was fun to see things from Wickham's point of view. His opinions of some people match Darcy's, but his silver tongue allows him to be tactful. Then when his attempts to "help" some people seem to work and then backfire, his confusion thoughts are fun to read.
I highly recommend this book!.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving this review, which is my own true and independent opinion.
The book description mentions an unexpected villain, and yes, it is quite a surprise, although there are many hints early on that made me quite suspicious. The villain gets what they deserve.
The descriptions are good and the characters are interesting; things are changed just enough from canon that, with the exception of the new, improved Wickham (and the villain), it is believable. It was fun to see things from Wickham's point of view. His opinions of some people match Darcy's, but his silver tongue allows him to be tactful. Then when his attempts to "help" some people seem to work and then backfire, his confusion thoughts are fun to read.
I highly recommend this book!.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving this review, which is my own true and independent opinion.
March 2, 2025
I thought I wrote down some notes after reading this so I could review a little later but I'm traveling and don't appear to have them so here goes from memory.
The most interesting aspect of this story was early on as naughty Wickham goes home to talk with his father and learns good lessons from what he says. Basically he points out the difficulties Darcy will have with all he inherits and Wickham will always have the freedom to marry where he will, work in what field he chooses and so forth. Wickham will inherit freedom while Darcy will inherit expectations. It is what Wickham needs to make changes in his life and become a good person. Eventually a reformed Wickham and an unaware Darcy meet again. A lot of good things happen for Darcy because of Wickham. Instead of hoping to feed off of Darcy and make his life miserable, Wickham wants to repay Darcy for paying off his debts when he was young and foolish and to help others (including Elizabeth) to understand Darcy better. He is a good influence where ever he turns his mind.
As unusual as Wickham is in this story, there is also an unusual villain. I don't really like when this person is used as a villain but without Wickham as the bad guy someone has to do it. It made part of the ending quite sad and I was sorry for it. It also made for a miserable life for the villain. Darcy and Elizabeth get their HEA though so that is good. Others also have a happy ending. Epilogue was good to let us know what happens with all the sisters, parents and Wickham.
Overall I enjoyed this book and was fascinated by the changes a good Wickham makes in the story. A good lesson for all of us to learn. Our own choices can influence others for good. Or not, if they reject those influences and look for bad instead.
The most interesting aspect of this story was early on as naughty Wickham goes home to talk with his father and learns good lessons from what he says. Basically he points out the difficulties Darcy will have with all he inherits and Wickham will always have the freedom to marry where he will, work in what field he chooses and so forth. Wickham will inherit freedom while Darcy will inherit expectations. It is what Wickham needs to make changes in his life and become a good person. Eventually a reformed Wickham and an unaware Darcy meet again. A lot of good things happen for Darcy because of Wickham. Instead of hoping to feed off of Darcy and make his life miserable, Wickham wants to repay Darcy for paying off his debts when he was young and foolish and to help others (including Elizabeth) to understand Darcy better. He is a good influence where ever he turns his mind.
As unusual as Wickham is in this story, there is also an unusual villain. I don't really like when this person is used as a villain but without Wickham as the bad guy someone has to do it. It made part of the ending quite sad and I was sorry for it. It also made for a miserable life for the villain. Darcy and Elizabeth get their HEA though so that is good. Others also have a happy ending. Epilogue was good to let us know what happens with all the sisters, parents and Wickham.
Overall I enjoyed this book and was fascinated by the changes a good Wickham makes in the story. A good lesson for all of us to learn. Our own choices can influence others for good. Or not, if they reject those influences and look for bad instead.
October 2, 2023
This author has a thing for taking minor negative characters from Pride and Prejudice and giving them a redemption arc. This story starring George Wickham is my favourite so far. It is solidly plotted and edited tighter than some of the author's previous books, and overall an entertaining read.
The book works best if you are familiar with the canonical P&P plot and avoid spoilers about this book because it's quite fun to see how things would unfold if Wickham is a good guy. He was on his way to being a wastrel at the university but then he overheard his dissolute friends expressing their true opinions about him and had a talk with his dying father. So he applied himself to his studies more diligently and eventually got a job as a law clerk for Mr. Phillips in Meryton. He is still observant and able to influence people but he wants to use his powers for the good so he gives several people some good advice or difficult feedback. The number of elopements is constant, and there still might be somebody out there misleading people. But if it's not George Wickham, then who?
I was entertained by this clever story, and I usually think Wickham looks the handsomest in prisoner uniforms.
Steam level: Safe for work.
I got a booksprout copy and this is a voluntary review.
The book works best if you are familiar with the canonical P&P plot and avoid spoilers about this book because it's quite fun to see how things would unfold if Wickham is a good guy. He was on his way to being a wastrel at the university but then he overheard his dissolute friends expressing their true opinions about him and had a talk with his dying father. So he applied himself to his studies more diligently and eventually got a job as a law clerk for Mr. Phillips in Meryton. He is still observant and able to influence people but he wants to use his powers for the good so he gives several people some good advice or difficult feedback. The number of elopements is constant, and there still might be somebody out there misleading people. But if it's not George Wickham, then who?
I was entertained by this clever story, and I usually think Wickham looks the handsomest in prisoner uniforms.
Steam level: Safe for work.
I got a booksprout copy and this is a voluntary review.
October 10, 2024
In this variation, Wickham is portrayed as a wise man, giving advice to everyone who will listen. After some initial wild living at Cambridge, he learns that his titled friends are not really friends at all. On his deathbed, his father gives Wickham sage counsel, which causes a reevaluation of his path in life.
After studying for a law degree, he's hired as Mr. Phillip's law clerk in Meryton. This happens after Bingley and Darcy have arrived at Netherfield. This is the reformed Wickham's story. Elizabeth and Darcy are only secondary characters until later in the novel. Almost every person he comes in contact with is deficient in some way with their thinking and perspective, and wise old Wickham is there to set them straight.
Darcy is no swoony hero here, and Elizabeth has a temper and isn't the sharpest tack. Along with nearly all the other residents of Longbourn, Netherfield and Meryton, they are in need of Wickham's insight. He works his magic until an unlikely villain tries to undo it all.
Some errors and a lot of telling, not showing, but it was pretty good. 4 stars
After studying for a law degree, he's hired as Mr. Phillip's law clerk in Meryton. This happens after Bingley and Darcy have arrived at Netherfield. This is the reformed Wickham's story. Elizabeth and Darcy are only secondary characters until later in the novel. Almost every person he comes in contact with is deficient in some way with their thinking and perspective, and wise old Wickham is there to set them straight.
Darcy is no swoony hero here, and Elizabeth has a temper and isn't the sharpest tack. Along with nearly all the other residents of Longbourn, Netherfield and Meryton, they are in need of Wickham's insight. He works his magic until an unlikely villain tries to undo it all.
Some errors and a lot of telling, not showing, but it was pretty good. 4 stars
October 8, 2024
Premise: George Wickham gets an early wakeup call in a one-two punch of overhearing his university friends saying what they really think of him and his father dying, charging him to do better with the good principles given him.
What I liked: Well, I've read plenty of stories where Wickham is far worse than in canon, but I don't think I've ever read an actual good!Wickham story. He studies law and eventually takes a position with Mr Phillips in Meryton, easily stepping into that JAff staple role, the outsider who sees all and sets people straight. Lots of fun with flipping canon events on their head, like Wickham is the one who alerts Darcy of Georgiana's intent to elope with a cad.
Characterization: Good!Wickham. Bad!Georgiana.
Spice level: Allusions.
Any non-canon parings: Nope.
Issues: I'm not entirely sure I buy Darcy's long-term reaction to Georgiana's actions.
What I liked: Well, I've read plenty of stories where Wickham is far worse than in canon, but I don't think I've ever read an actual good!Wickham story. He studies law and eventually takes a position with Mr Phillips in Meryton, easily stepping into that JAff staple role, the outsider who sees all and sets people straight. Lots of fun with flipping canon events on their head, like Wickham is the one who alerts Darcy of Georgiana's intent to elope with a cad.
Characterization: Good!Wickham. Bad!Georgiana.
Spice level: Allusions.
Any non-canon parings: Nope.
Issues: I'm not entirely sure I buy Darcy's long-term reaction to Georgiana's actions.
September 25, 2023
I haven't read too many JAFF books where Wickham isn't a horrible human being, but I have to say that I do enjoy getting away from his character always being the disgusting villain. This story gets away from that and turns Wickham into a decent, responsible guy with an impressive reputation. Instead of seducing Georgiana Darcy in Ramsgate, he saves her from an elopement with a fortune hunter and works hard to change Darcy's poor opinion of him and regain his friendship. He's kind and helpful to all he meets and "intervenes" when necessary.
Speaking of Georgiana...what a nasty piece of work she was and so well written! The argument with her brother in the music room at Pemberley was written so brilliantly one could easily believe the girl was a sociopath. Loved it!.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Speaking of Georgiana...what a nasty piece of work she was and so well written! The argument with her brother in the music room at Pemberley was written so brilliantly one could easily believe the girl was a sociopath. Loved it!.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 25, 2023
“When given good principles” was certainly an eye-opener about the redemption of George Wickham. Wickham for once was a good guy, even if he started out the villain we all love to hate. But what a what a great man he turned into with the wise words of his father.
One villain I thought nobody could redeem has now been redeemed by two separate authors, and both have done it excellently!
The story focuses on Darcy, Wickham, Elizabeth and Georgiana. I did not like Georgiana Darcy, since she acted like a manipulative child to all the other people around her.
The drama was excellent, the story was good and was at a great pace and I loved the romance between Darcy and Elizabeth.
The book was also an eye-opener about the idea of being given good principles and how they are used during the lives of Darcy, Wickham, Georgiana and the Bennet’s.
One villain I thought nobody could redeem has now been redeemed by two separate authors, and both have done it excellently!
The story focuses on Darcy, Wickham, Elizabeth and Georgiana. I did not like Georgiana Darcy, since she acted like a manipulative child to all the other people around her.
The drama was excellent, the story was good and was at a great pace and I loved the romance between Darcy and Elizabeth.
The book was also an eye-opener about the idea of being given good principles and how they are used during the lives of Darcy, Wickham, Georgiana and the Bennet’s.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 23, 2023
This is another great story from this author. The lead character is Mr. Wickham and there's a new villain in the story. Mr GW seem to be almost like a busy bee in this story, who helped guide and improve the characters. A lot of the original events from the story were present but some were twisted differently. There was still an elopement. Most had a HEA. However, there is a great sadness at the end ( about missing contrition and forgiveness). Nevertheless, this is a wonderful story you do not want to miss reading. I highly recommend this story.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
April 3, 2024
A good Wickham
What if Wickham received a wake up call before he left university? That is the premise of the book. The events at Ramsgate are drastically changed and he takes an honorable roll in Meryton. Like his normal self he can make friends easily - and is able to keep the friendships. He has a good influence on most of the Bennet family and trues to be a friend to Darcy. The surprise villain was only somewhat of a surprise but it was well done. Parts of the book were shifted around and recognizable conversations happened between different characters. Overall it was a very nice change that I thoroughly enjoyed.
What if Wickham received a wake up call before he left university? That is the premise of the book. The events at Ramsgate are drastically changed and he takes an honorable roll in Meryton. Like his normal self he can make friends easily - and is able to keep the friendships. He has a good influence on most of the Bennet family and trues to be a friend to Darcy. The surprise villain was only somewhat of a surprise but it was well done. Parts of the book were shifted around and recognizable conversations happened between different characters. Overall it was a very nice change that I thoroughly enjoyed.
November 21, 2023
What a story!
This is one of the most interesting and imaginative P&P variations I have read, and I have read quite a few. The comeuppance of Wickham and the death of his father paints a believable picture of how Wickham turns his life around. I also appreciate the fact that Darcy does not completely trust Wickham, but gives him the benefit of the doubt to prove himself.
The author is skilled at keeping a lot of the original characteristics of our beloved Lizzy and Darcy, changing just enough for this tale to be completely enjoyable. Well worth the read!
This is one of the most interesting and imaginative P&P variations I have read, and I have read quite a few. The comeuppance of Wickham and the death of his father paints a believable picture of how Wickham turns his life around. I also appreciate the fact that Darcy does not completely trust Wickham, but gives him the benefit of the doubt to prove himself.
The author is skilled at keeping a lot of the original characteristics of our beloved Lizzy and Darcy, changing just enough for this tale to be completely enjoyable. Well worth the read!
November 12, 2024
Wild Occurrences
Be prepared for the opposite of all other stories! It is a fun story to read! I could not point it down! Wickham is a good human, Lydia is Lydia until she meets a man she must have and changes all her hoyden ways! Kitty is not happy with Lydia being good. Mary throws away her fordyce sermons, Elizabeth has poor judge of character and Bingley has a mind of his own which means he will not abandon Jane. Darcy is his usual haughty self and must learn from Wickman! Georgia is terrible!!!! Enjoy!
Be prepared for the opposite of all other stories! It is a fun story to read! I could not point it down! Wickham is a good human, Lydia is Lydia until she meets a man she must have and changes all her hoyden ways! Kitty is not happy with Lydia being good. Mary throws away her fordyce sermons, Elizabeth has poor judge of character and Bingley has a mind of his own which means he will not abandon Jane. Darcy is his usual haughty self and must learn from Wickman! Georgia is terrible!!!! Enjoy!
October 1, 2023
This Pride and Prejudice variation with George Wickham's POV is amazing! This is the first Pride and Prejudice variation I've read that features a nice George Wickham and he's very likable. I loved how George Wickham intervenes to surreptitiously help those around him. When Given Good Principles held my attention from start to end and I was turning the pages non-stop to find out what happens next! Highly recommend!
December 5, 2024
On the right path
Does Wickham have to have his finger in every pie? How would he have any idea what 15y old women are like? I don't come away with a feeling of knowing the characters. And there are many mistakes needing correction, especially the time mentions of sub chapters. I like the idea that Wickham could change the path he is on but not that he is responsible for everyone else's improvements.
Does Wickham have to have his finger in every pie? How would he have any idea what 15y old women are like? I don't come away with a feeling of knowing the characters. And there are many mistakes needing correction, especially the time mentions of sub chapters. I like the idea that Wickham could change the path he is on but not that he is responsible for everyone else's improvements.
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