The grand finale in James Clemens's final volume of his The Banned and the Banished series took a bit too long to finale itself, in my opinion. The final battle, which initially takes place on two continents and involves the entire cast of primary and secondary characters, lasts 80 pages. That's a lot of lot of shouting and cursing and rallying and fighting and killing and dying and not-dying and dying again. The whole sequence was exhausting to read.
When Clemens finally got to the ending, though, it was a pretty good one. And, at last, the two framing devices for the series made sense. I appreciated the frame-within-the-frame (concerning the "true" author of the books), but the "guardians of the Commonwealth" frame was kind of a dud, I thought. It didn't particularly add to the mystique of the series; in fact, it seemed to work against it. Even the final reveal on the last page of the book was not quite enough to warrant the Commonwealth framing device.
Speaking of things that didn't work, Harlequin Quail was another dud. He was introduced as a sort of roguish mystery dude, but Clemens either didn't use him enough to make him matter, or couldn't really figure out how to successfully inject a late-story, "is he an ally or a foe in disguise"-type character. Either way, Harlequin fell flat as a pancake for me. And he's on the cover of this volume!
What else didn't work? Well, Clemens finally delivered on the creepy thing he'd been hinting at for several volumes: Elena, our 15-year-old protagonist, lost her virginity to Er'ril, a 500-year-old formerly immortal man. But it's OK, because after all Elena had been through she's now wise beyond her years, and also because Er'ril had stopped maturing waaaay back when he became immortal as a young man. (#sarcasm) Sorry, Clemens: I don't think using your main character's traumas to rationalize an impossibly old man having sex with a minor makes statutory rape OK. Even if statutory rape isn't a thing in this olde timey fantasy world you've created. Also, yuck.
But hey, we all knew this was coming about 800 pages ago, so I just gritted my teeth and skimmed paragraphs until it was over.
Putting all the things that didn't work aside, however, Wit'ch Star wrapped up this saga well enough for me. I've been thinking about whether I'd ever re-read this series, and I think the answer is no. The first and fourth books were really awesome. But the others didn't quite blow my socks off. It's a solid series, well told, and with some really good characters. But in the end it's the kind of story I'm happy to have experienced a single time.