Her Brother's Best Friend

Flowering #0.5

by Sarah Daltry

For four years, Lily has had a crush on her brother's best friend, Derek. He never notices her, though, so their relationship is only in her mind - and in her bed when she is alone at night. When he walks in one night as she is getting off thinking of him, neither of them can deny their attraction any longer. 2000 word short erotic story intended for adults.

Full length novel, "Forget Me Not," follows Derek and Lily after this story.

Genres: Erotica, Novella, Romance, New Adult, Young Adult, Erotic Romance

8 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 27, 2013

Reviews

[Kaleigh · Rating 5 out of 5]

HOT, SEXY...GIVE ME MORE!

I loved this short erotic story! I truly enjoyed the fact that these Lily was in love with Derek since 8th Grade and fantasizes about him...only to find out that he feels the same way about her! This story is sexy and leaves you wanting more! The sex scene was perfect, tantalizing...and wanting some of Derek!

I really love that this opened everyone's eyes to the past of Lily and Derek, there are so many times that when I am reading I want to know about the moment leading up to something and this short erotic does just that!

If you have not read this ~ Go and read it NOW! You will not be disappointed and make sure you pick up a copy of Forget Me Not because Her Brother's Best Friend will lead you right into FMN!

Did I say I LOVED IT! Awesome job Sarah!

[Lelyana's Reviews · Rating 4 out of 5]

OMG! I liked it a lot!!!!

Can't wait to read Lily of The Valley.

sarah did a great job entertaining me!!!!

[Kim Person · Rating 4 out of 5]

Sexy short story ~ goes to show wanting something and not saying anything about it isn't always the best policy :)

[Kris · Rating 4 out of 5]

This short novella is the prequel for 'Forget Me Not' and shows us the very beginning of Lily and Derek's relationship.

Lily has lusted after and loved
Derek (her brothers best friend) for years and years, but feels as though she is invisible to him. On her 18th birthday Derek walks into her bedroom and catches Lily masturbating over him.

What results is a night of intense, hot pleasure and Derek confessing that he has been waiting for Lily for four years.

I'm looking forward to seeing where Lily and Derek's relationship goes from here.

This was a very hot and steamy, quick read!

[Kirsten · Rating 4 out of 5]

OMG!! I won this novella in a contest and just read it. Whew!! This story is HAWT!!! And sweet at the same time. I wish it had been longer, and that's my only complaint. You knew where you were going thanks to the blurb, and man, did you get there!! Talk about jumping right in with both feet and getting to the sex. Waiting for four years for someone, and that first love, first time is such a special thing that you never forget.

[Lela · Rating 5 out of 5]

I read this prior to reading "Forget Me Not" and it was a very good short and sexy story about Lily losing her virginity to her brother's best friend Derek on her 18th birthday. She had always loved him and had a crush on him and he felt the same way too, but didn't tell her or show her until she was legal...I mean he was only a year older than her, so I don't see what the big deal was, but it was still a hot and sexy short story.

[Irene · Rating 5 out of 5]

Her Brothers Best Friend is a quick short novella but it was still hot.

Lily had the hots for her brothers best friend Derek since she was a kid. On her 18th birthday she gets the best present EVER!!! Shoot I wouldn't have minded having my crush for my 18th birthday.
Even though it was short it was still good.

[Anny hernandez · Rating 4 out of 5]

this is just a short story that will tell you how lyli and dereck become to be together it will tell you about her first time with dereck its a really short story but hot and steamy at the same time it was good the full story you could read it on the book FOR GET ME NOT its a really good book

[Sue bowdley · Rating 5 out of 5]

great short x

[Teresasloveofbooks · Rating 4 out of 5]

Sarah brings HOT to a new level dear lord my kindle caught on fire (: can't wait to read more of her books!!!!!!

[Jaime Fiction Fangirls · Rating 4 out of 5]

Short but HOT!!

[Katherine · Rating 5 out of 5]

Well, damn. Just 8 pages long but a worthy read.

[Shay · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was a very quick read but let me tell you. Very sexy. Hot hot hot!
I always love stories about wanting the brother or sisters best friend.
Can't wait to read forget me not!

[Vamp Poet · Rating 4 out of 5]

So hot. Hot. Hot!!!

[Sandra Love · Rating 5 out of 5]

Love this author. This was so good!! :-)

[Sara · Rating 3 out of 5]

Hmph. It was steamy for being so short. But not believable for being a virgin.

[Amber · Rating 4 out of 5]

Short and not so sweet, but in a good way is how I would explain this story. I felt this one was too short I wanted more details, I wanted it to go on for a while longer, I wanted MORE!!! I love Derek's character, I do have to warn that you should probably read Forget Me Not before reading this one. I'm glad I did or I might not of liked it as much, I dont think I would have seen the meaning of it with out reading the others.

Lily has been in love with her brother's best friend for as long as she can remember. On her 18th birthday her wish of finally being able to feel him in more ways then one finally comes true. Derek sees Lily is not as young as he once remembered.

[Sandy S]

Her Brother's Best Friend is the prequel short story (24 virtual pages) to Sarah Daltry's Flowering series.

The storyline is basically sex and masturbation. Lily just turned 18 and has been fantasizing about her brother's best friend Derek since she was 14 years old. On her 18th birthday, Derek and her brother come home to help her celebrate and Derek will find himself in Lily's bedroom watching her masturbate. What ensues is every young man's fantasy with a porn-like scenario. Due to the length of the prequel, there is limited story -just enough to let the readers know that Lily and Derek have wanted each other for years and Lily is a girl who goes for what she wants.

[Ajs Book Reviews · Rating 5 out of 5]

We were gifted a copy for an honest review.

Her Brother's Best Friend is a very short novella and the prequel to Forget Me Not. It shows us how Lily and Derek's relationship started.

Lily is in love with her brothers best friend and has been since she was younger. On her 18th birthday Derek walks in on Lily getting herself off thinking of him. One thing leads to another and Lily finally gets what she has always wanted.

Let me just say this is the first book I've ever read by the author and she did not disappoint. The scene was well written and very erotic.

5 Stars

~Ashley

[Drew Constance · Rating 3 out of 5]

★★★.5

Quick thoughts: Quick, hot and a little romantic.

Her Brother’s Best friend was a nice quick read with a little taste of romantic back-story and a hot sex scene between two consensual adults. I really liked that they had known each other most of their life, and my only issue with the story was that there wasn’t more of it. I do love a good erotica with a little slice of plot and a taste for action.

[Amanda · Rating 2 out of 5]

I have read some of the other shorts by this author, and this one is by far the best one out of the rest I have read. I still didn't care for it...it just wasn't my sup of tea.
18 year old Lily has always loved her brothers best friend Derek, and for her 18th birthday her brother and Derek come home to celebrate with her and the family, and Derek has a special gift he wants to give Lily...

[Anna · Rating 1 out of 5]

Nope, I didn`t appreciate such a tease of a "story". It`s good to go straight to the point sometimes but this just didn`t feel right. I`m still going to read the proper book though, maybe this was just an unfortunate decision to give readers a try of what`s to come.

[Amy · Rating 3 out of 5]

Quick glimpse into Lily and Derek's first sexual encounter. Lily is a dirty girl and Derek loved every second of it.

[Lilsue Torrez-hutcherson · Rating 3 out of 5]

A quick read to pass a few moments away, but not long enough for me. I had to wonder, was this girl really this open during her very first time? Hummm???? Not bad for a quick fix

[Jesse · Rating 4 out of 5]

Hummmm, graphic, unrealistic....but makes me think I will give the next book a chance...

[Debbie · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved this even with how short it is. But Derek is one hot piece of ass.

[Rhian Jones · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5 stars

[Rita · Rating 3 out of 5]

This short prelude gets down and dirty and straight the point. Raw.

[Calista Smith · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was a good start to an awesome book series. :)

[Dar Duwa · Rating 5 out of 5]

Hot steamy short read ;)