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The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman
Caralynne Hayman is angry and bitter over the abuse and death of her eleven-year-old daughter at the hands of a radical religious cult—The Children of Righteous Cain. So when her husband, a founding member of the cult, suffers a massive heart attack, Caralynne allows her husband to die.
Caralynne’s secret seems safe until Dayne MacFarland returns, determined to learn the truth about the cult. His investigation and his rekindled love for Caralynne lead the pair toward a confrontation with the group’s elders.
Can Dayne’s love for Caralynne bridge the gulf of anger and bitterness that divides the community? Or will Caralynne’s deadly secrets prove too high a price for her redemption?
Caralynne’s secret seems safe until Dayne MacFarland returns, determined to learn the truth about the cult. His investigation and his rekindled love for Caralynne lead the pair toward a confrontation with the group’s elders.
Can Dayne’s love for Caralynne bridge the gulf of anger and bitterness that divides the community? Or will Caralynne’s deadly secrets prove too high a price for her redemption?
322 pages, Paperback
First published October 21, 2013
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March 10, 2025
Much of this story was good and held my attention. However the execution of it was bothersome. The plot around this cult was very good, but the dialog was stilted and unbelievable.
Also, Cara amazingly escaped too many dangerous events making her story less enjoyable for me. Unrealistic.
What bothered me right from the start ***some spoilers*** was that she basically allowed her husband to die by not handing him the medicine bottle intended to help his heart when he was having an attack at that moment. She went in, saw him struggling, saw the pills and walked out. She went to her garden and worked out there until she was sure he might be dead. The only remorse was that she had to do something about him before her daughters came home from school. It was basically murder but no remorse. Granted, the guy was a miserable excuse for a husband, but everyone in that cult compound could have called the authorities to get out of their situations. They all had phones, and the next town over wasn't all that far. If she needed to be rid of him all she had to do was leave.
The scenario of the prophet/elder sending Dayne to seminary to become the next preacher for the cult was unbelievable. You don't send someone to a Christian seminary if you want them to maintain their cultish beliefs. Plus, then when Dayne came back, no one seemed to suspect he might not have held true to their bizarre cult behaviors and disgusting customs. Not until the very end did they seem to catch on, even though he preached The Word, which was contrary to their ways. Too ridiculous.
Great plot, but there needs to be situational and dialog changes to make it a really good book.
This one I can't recommend.
Also, Cara amazingly escaped too many dangerous events making her story less enjoyable for me. Unrealistic.
What bothered me right from the start ***some spoilers*** was that she basically allowed her husband to die by not handing him the medicine bottle intended to help his heart when he was having an attack at that moment. She went in, saw him struggling, saw the pills and walked out. She went to her garden and worked out there until she was sure he might be dead. The only remorse was that she had to do something about him before her daughters came home from school. It was basically murder but no remorse. Granted, the guy was a miserable excuse for a husband, but everyone in that cult compound could have called the authorities to get out of their situations. They all had phones, and the next town over wasn't all that far. If she needed to be rid of him all she had to do was leave.
The scenario of the prophet/elder sending Dayne to seminary to become the next preacher for the cult was unbelievable. You don't send someone to a Christian seminary if you want them to maintain their cultish beliefs. Plus, then when Dayne came back, no one seemed to suspect he might not have held true to their bizarre cult behaviors and disgusting customs. Not until the very end did they seem to catch on, even though he preached The Word, which was contrary to their ways. Too ridiculous.
Great plot, but there needs to be situational and dialog changes to make it a really good book.
This one I can't recommend.
November 28, 2013
This book starts well. It gripped me, drew me right and caught my attention with suspense and then tapered off a little towards the end. It’s a challenging and rewarding read with strong and interesting characters.
The reader is dropped directly into the centre of a Religious Cult and all of the ugliness that comes with that scenario. Your thinking will be challenged on a level of – how much of what you believe is truth and how much is just fabricated by humans?
Towards the end I found some very loose plot moments which slowed down my reading and slightly interfered with how much I was enjoying the book. It was very hard for me to turn off my internal editor.
4 1/2 stars.
The reader is dropped directly into the centre of a Religious Cult and all of the ugliness that comes with that scenario. Your thinking will be challenged on a level of – how much of what you believe is truth and how much is just fabricated by humans?
Towards the end I found some very loose plot moments which slowed down my reading and slightly interfered with how much I was enjoying the book. It was very hard for me to turn off my internal editor.
4 1/2 stars.
January 12, 2014
To the outside world, they look like an innocent group minding their own business, but the Righteous Children of Cain is a religious cult with some terrible practices. Its leader, the corrupt and controlling Elder Simmons, is not used to resistance from anyone, especially when it comes to making all the marriage decisions of the community, and organising horrific 'breaking in' rituals for preteen girls.
Recently widowed Caralynne Hayman is a loving and incensed mother whose eldest daughter was accidentally killed during one such ritual. She will guard the younger two girls with her life. The elders are going to foist a new husband on her, her cruel and cunning brother-in-law, one of the only men they believe may successfully break her spirit.
Meanwhile, her childhood friend, Dayne McFarland, has returned as the new town preacher. Simmons expects him to be malleable, but Dayne has done plenty of thinking for himself, questioning the way he was brought up. And he doesn't like what he sees.
Caralynne's young daughters, Leila and Lacy, made the story very meaningful for me. They are innocent and beautiful, taking their neighbours' lifestyles at face value, little knowing what lies in store for them unless something radical is done. Nobody is as vulnerable as those who don't realise they even need saving.
I might have appreciated a bit more about the brainwashing methods used on young boys, to cause so many of them to grow into the unsavoury specimens we see within the pages of this book. There is plenty of female perspective, when the experiences of Cara's friends are added to hers, but not as much of the male perspective, unless you count Dayne's flashbacks to his past, and he's hardly a typical example.
We see sweet young toddler boys, belonging to some of Cara's friends, and then we see the rough Martin brothers, who seem to be in their late teens or early twenties and are already dangerous. How are the boys aged from 5 to 15 treated, to make them such blind followers of Simmons and his elders?
It's a page turning story all the way through, and also a wake-up call that such bizarre groups do exist, living close to the rest of civilisation, but many aren't aware of how desperately the victims need help. It's also a great testimony of what may happen when strong characters like Cara and Dayne are prepared to question the status quo and take action, as hopeless as it may seem.
Thanks to the author, for providing me with a copy in return for an honest review.
Recently widowed Caralynne Hayman is a loving and incensed mother whose eldest daughter was accidentally killed during one such ritual. She will guard the younger two girls with her life. The elders are going to foist a new husband on her, her cruel and cunning brother-in-law, one of the only men they believe may successfully break her spirit.
Meanwhile, her childhood friend, Dayne McFarland, has returned as the new town preacher. Simmons expects him to be malleable, but Dayne has done plenty of thinking for himself, questioning the way he was brought up. And he doesn't like what he sees.
Caralynne's young daughters, Leila and Lacy, made the story very meaningful for me. They are innocent and beautiful, taking their neighbours' lifestyles at face value, little knowing what lies in store for them unless something radical is done. Nobody is as vulnerable as those who don't realise they even need saving.
I might have appreciated a bit more about the brainwashing methods used on young boys, to cause so many of them to grow into the unsavoury specimens we see within the pages of this book. There is plenty of female perspective, when the experiences of Cara's friends are added to hers, but not as much of the male perspective, unless you count Dayne's flashbacks to his past, and he's hardly a typical example.
We see sweet young toddler boys, belonging to some of Cara's friends, and then we see the rough Martin brothers, who seem to be in their late teens or early twenties and are already dangerous. How are the boys aged from 5 to 15 treated, to make them such blind followers of Simmons and his elders?
It's a page turning story all the way through, and also a wake-up call that such bizarre groups do exist, living close to the rest of civilisation, but many aren't aware of how desperately the victims need help. It's also a great testimony of what may happen when strong characters like Cara and Dayne are prepared to question the status quo and take action, as hopeless as it may seem.
Thanks to the author, for providing me with a copy in return for an honest review.
May 25, 2016
This book was recommended to me by a Christian fiction author whose name escapes me. I purchased it for .99 for my Kindle a month or more ago. I finally got around to reading it.
This was a very powerful book. Caralynne Hayman lives within an abusive and controlling religious sect. Even when her daughter is killed, she can't get away. But one day, she decides to take matters into her own hands. People are going to pay.
The book was very hard to read; so much pain and heartache within these women's lives. Told in such a way as to hold the reader's attention thoroughly, it beckons the reader back when necessary life chores call. I wanted to read constantly, yet afraid at what would come next. There were many times a loud gasp escaped my mouth at the turn of events in this tale.
Caralynne has given up on God. What has He done for her except watch her suffer time and time again until she is certain there is no feeling left inside her except for her two remaining daughters. An old friend, Dayne MacFarland, returns home, now an ordained minister. What new torture might this be? Is there any help for her desperate situation?
This is an excellent novel. The kind that makes you reluctant to pick up another book to read after closes its pages on the final word. I highly recommend it.
This was a very powerful book. Caralynne Hayman lives within an abusive and controlling religious sect. Even when her daughter is killed, she can't get away. But one day, she decides to take matters into her own hands. People are going to pay.
The book was very hard to read; so much pain and heartache within these women's lives. Told in such a way as to hold the reader's attention thoroughly, it beckons the reader back when necessary life chores call. I wanted to read constantly, yet afraid at what would come next. There were many times a loud gasp escaped my mouth at the turn of events in this tale.
Caralynne has given up on God. What has He done for her except watch her suffer time and time again until she is certain there is no feeling left inside her except for her two remaining daughters. An old friend, Dayne MacFarland, returns home, now an ordained minister. What new torture might this be? Is there any help for her desperate situation?
This is an excellent novel. The kind that makes you reluctant to pick up another book to read after closes its pages on the final word. I highly recommend it.
February 3, 2015
I actually won an autographed version of this book. It's a good thing I did because it is not one I would have ever chosen for myself. Yes, I know you should never judge a book by it's cover but I would have done just that. On the cover, there is a quote from JM Lewis, "Brown's technique in building suspense reads like a young Dean Koontz." I am not a fan of Dean Koontz so that would have turned me away from even sampling this one. In all honesty, it took me a while to really get into the book. The story was a little slow building and I was quite confused with where the story was going on how the past would tie into the future. I understood there was an abusive husband but it wasn't until about halfway through that it started to click with me. By then, I was hooked and could not stop turning the pages to discover what happened to Caralynne and her girls. I do recommend this to anyone who enjoys suspense.
January 14, 2014
his book was so unlike anything I had read before and I feel like I shall never encounter again. The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman touched me straight to my soul. I am not even completely sure how to explain it other than to say that if you are looking for a book that can grab your heart and your soul and twist them around until you have been made a believer in the unknown then this is the book for you. There is such a strong connection in this story of faith and what it means. Unfortunately for Caralynne faith had lost all meaning and she was left not knowing who or what to trust. The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman takes place in what some would call a cult. Their so called leader has a past that scared the living daylights out of me. I tried several times to wrap my mind around why someone would chose to live this way but the harder I tried the less I understood. As the reader you will walk the path through the day and the life of Cara and tackle some of some the most extreme horrors that are part of her everyday life. Cara is not alone on this journey as she has two beautiful young daughters and group of friends who want to help but are afraid for their very lives to go against Elder Simmons his so holier than though himself. The garbage he spews from his lips gave me the heebie jeebies he truly made my skin crawl make no mistake he is not a good man at all. AS I continued in to this book I kept asking why, why would anyone choose this way of life I truly could not make sense of it. I found myself asking where were these peoples common sense, where was their free will. They had left in the hands of a man who made stuff up as he went along. He twisted their beliefs to fit his carnal needs and they went along never questioning why because to ask why would have gotten them punished in ways that made my head spin out of control. By the end of this book I had a renewed faith and desire to choke the life out of Elder Simmons a man who I hopes is sent to his own form of hell. I have never encountered a book such as The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman but I'm glad that this book crossed my path and gave me the chance to believe that there is some good still out there if you are looking for it and that faith is an interpretation based on your own beliefs. I highly recommend this book to you all as it may just bring you to a new found look at your own faith and beliefs.
February 3, 2014
Manipulative, vile, twisted... all good descriptions of the mindset of those who lead a cult. This book is a gritty - not for the faint of heart - look inside. Adult subject matter prevails, and although it is all "off screen," much of it involves sex with underage girls. This is presented as the abominable act it is, but still not for the younger reader. There are also scenes depicting graphic violence against women.
So why read it?
This isn't past history. These groups exists now. Today. In the United States and around the world. Eye-opening and disturbing, stories like this need to be told. This is fiction, but it's fiction taken off the newspaper pages.
Caralynne Hayman was married to a man she didn't love, a man she didn't want, a man who abused her horribly... at the age of 15. Years later, she finds herself in a fight for her life and the lives of her two surviving daughters. Can a man of God, a man raised in the same cult but educated outside, bring hope back into her life? Will the community's eyes be opened? Will the atrocities stop? Or will Caralynne have to take matters into her own hands. Again.
So why read it?
This isn't past history. These groups exists now. Today. In the United States and around the world. Eye-opening and disturbing, stories like this need to be told. This is fiction, but it's fiction taken off the newspaper pages.
Caralynne Hayman was married to a man she didn't love, a man she didn't want, a man who abused her horribly... at the age of 15. Years later, she finds herself in a fight for her life and the lives of her two surviving daughters. Can a man of God, a man raised in the same cult but educated outside, bring hope back into her life? Will the community's eyes be opened? Will the atrocities stop? Or will Caralynne have to take matters into her own hands. Again.
November 7, 2013
What an incredible story. Carole Brown's writing grabs your attention and won't let it go. I was up until after four this morning finishing this book. I was so engrossed that I couldn't put it down.
The story itself is about two very difficult subjects, cults and abuse. The author takes it's reader inside of the life of Caralynne Hayman and her family. It's heartbreaking to learn what the women and children were subjected to in the Children of Righteous Cain. Even though this novel is fiction, it could be accurate for the teachings of people caught up inside of some cults.
I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys suspense as this novel is filled with it. I enjoyed this story immensely.
The only downside I can think of from reading this novel is that I couldn't read fast enough to find out what was happening next.
The story itself is about two very difficult subjects, cults and abuse. The author takes it's reader inside of the life of Caralynne Hayman and her family. It's heartbreaking to learn what the women and children were subjected to in the Children of Righteous Cain. Even though this novel is fiction, it could be accurate for the teachings of people caught up inside of some cults.
I recommend this book to anyone who enjoys suspense as this novel is filled with it. I enjoyed this story immensely.
The only downside I can think of from reading this novel is that I couldn't read fast enough to find out what was happening next.
September 23, 2014
Favorite Excerpt:
"What would you have done if you'd had the chance to choose something else?"
"Are you serious? I've never taken the time to think about could-be's and would-be's. As I said, there's not much since in wishing for what will never happen."
"But if you could have...?"
"I don't know. I'd mountain climb. Probably fly. Own my own private plane. Do rescue work."
"What else?" His interest spurred her on. How long had it been since she'd had someone to share nonsense with?
"I'd learn to parachute and hang glide for fun and anything else to get me off the ground and into the air."
"You crazy girl. mind if I join you?"
Richard had called her crazy too. Cara rested her head against the back of the seat. His hand stirred beside her.
"I am crazy, aren't I?"
He slipped his arm around her and tugged lightly until she gave in and rested her head on his shoulder.
"You know it's not too late to experience your dreams."
"What do you mean?" Elder Simmons would never allow me to do that."
A pause. Dayne stroked her hand with one finger. "Do it anyway."
"I had a hard enough time accepting Donald's beating. I couldn't take them from the elders.Don't encourage me, Dayne. Please. You don't know—" With a sob, she straightened, and flung open the door.
Dayne ran from his side of the car and grabbed her shoulders. "Cara. Cara, don't cry. I'm doing my best to work on the elders. Trust me." He cupped her chin, tilted it, and stared into her eyes.
She gave a nod. "I do."
Mostly.
With a thumb he wiped away the tears from her cheeks. I wish—"
For me?
"What do you wish?" Cara held her breath.
My Review:
Caralynne Hayman was raised in the religious group The Children of Righteous Cane. After her parents passed away she was taken in by Dayne MacFarland's parents and raised as their own child. Living among these people is simply a way of life but Caralynne started to question their rules and beliefs a long time ago. She was forced to marry a man she didn't love at the age of fifteen, her oldest daughter, Lori, was killed at the hands of her brother-in-law during her "breaking in" at the age of 11, not to mention the abuse the women receive at the hand's of their husbands. After the death of her husband, Donald, Caralynne knows she will never marry another man they choose for her. Her plan? Execute revenge on the men in the group that she deems worthy and figure out a way to escape with her two daughters. When she becomes the target of Elder Simmons' anger and he continues to lower the age of the "Breaking in" period for the young girls in the group, Caralynne knows she has to save her youngest daughters from the same fate as her beloved Lori. Will she have time to execute her plan for revenge or must she flee for her life and forget her plan and all of the hatred she feels for these men?
Dayne MacFarland has always loved Caralynne and regrets not being there for her when she needed him. He was sent away to seminary school for training so he could return to The Children of Righteous Cane and be their minister. But Dayne learns the way of his people are misguided, something he has always felt in his heart. When Dayne returns to the group he has an agenda. He intends to change the way they rule their people using Scripture to refute their past rules and decisions. He doesn't count on falling even deeper in love with Caralynne. Dayne knows he has to protect her. With Elder Simmons out to hurt her, or even worse, Dayne takes up the fight and makes getting Caralynne and her daughters to safety his top priority. Can he help bring order to these people in the process? Can he win the heart of the only woman he has ever loved?
When I was asked by Miss Carole to review this book I agreed but I was a little skeptical. I wasn't sure if I would like the overall story or not BUT I am so glad I agreed because The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman is a book I couldn't put down. From the first page I was drawn in and from there I just wanted to see what would happen next. Caralynne was a real fighter. She loved her daughters with the fierceness of a mother cub and you could feel her grief over her daughter Lori's death. The way she wanted to protect her friends from the abuse of their husbands had me cheering for her loyalty. No matter what she went through she didn't let it break her. She came back fighting with a new determination. I loved Caralynne's spunk and strength.
Enters Dayne MacFarland... Minister, loyal friend. He has a burning desire to "fix" their religious group and I had not doubt he would. He had the same determination as Caralynne but it was toned down a little and the way he protected her children as if they were his own just melted my heart. I could feel his deep love for Caralynne and I was rooting him on the whole way. His loyalty to their people, despite the head Elder's disgusting rules, was something to be admired.
This was a story that was both beautiful and way too true. It opened my eyes to a practice that really goes on in this world. A practice that the world sometimes turns a blind eye to. It was so realistic and fast-paced that you won't be able to put it down. The characters are spot on and you can't help but feel the emotions they go through. It's hard to believe this is a debut novel because it's so well written. I'm so glad I read this book and I'll be looking for more from Carole Brown in the future. Highly recommended!
**A free ARC of this book was provided by the author for my honest review**
"What would you have done if you'd had the chance to choose something else?"
"Are you serious? I've never taken the time to think about could-be's and would-be's. As I said, there's not much since in wishing for what will never happen."
"But if you could have...?"
"I don't know. I'd mountain climb. Probably fly. Own my own private plane. Do rescue work."
"What else?" His interest spurred her on. How long had it been since she'd had someone to share nonsense with?
"I'd learn to parachute and hang glide for fun and anything else to get me off the ground and into the air."
"You crazy girl. mind if I join you?"
Richard had called her crazy too. Cara rested her head against the back of the seat. His hand stirred beside her.
"I am crazy, aren't I?"
He slipped his arm around her and tugged lightly until she gave in and rested her head on his shoulder.
"You know it's not too late to experience your dreams."
"What do you mean?" Elder Simmons would never allow me to do that."
A pause. Dayne stroked her hand with one finger. "Do it anyway."
"I had a hard enough time accepting Donald's beating. I couldn't take them from the elders.Don't encourage me, Dayne. Please. You don't know—" With a sob, she straightened, and flung open the door.
Dayne ran from his side of the car and grabbed her shoulders. "Cara. Cara, don't cry. I'm doing my best to work on the elders. Trust me." He cupped her chin, tilted it, and stared into her eyes.
She gave a nod. "I do."
Mostly.
With a thumb he wiped away the tears from her cheeks. I wish—"
For me?
"What do you wish?" Cara held her breath.
My Review:
Caralynne Hayman was raised in the religious group The Children of Righteous Cane. After her parents passed away she was taken in by Dayne MacFarland's parents and raised as their own child. Living among these people is simply a way of life but Caralynne started to question their rules and beliefs a long time ago. She was forced to marry a man she didn't love at the age of fifteen, her oldest daughter, Lori, was killed at the hands of her brother-in-law during her "breaking in" at the age of 11, not to mention the abuse the women receive at the hand's of their husbands. After the death of her husband, Donald, Caralynne knows she will never marry another man they choose for her. Her plan? Execute revenge on the men in the group that she deems worthy and figure out a way to escape with her two daughters. When she becomes the target of Elder Simmons' anger and he continues to lower the age of the "Breaking in" period for the young girls in the group, Caralynne knows she has to save her youngest daughters from the same fate as her beloved Lori. Will she have time to execute her plan for revenge or must she flee for her life and forget her plan and all of the hatred she feels for these men?
Dayne MacFarland has always loved Caralynne and regrets not being there for her when she needed him. He was sent away to seminary school for training so he could return to The Children of Righteous Cane and be their minister. But Dayne learns the way of his people are misguided, something he has always felt in his heart. When Dayne returns to the group he has an agenda. He intends to change the way they rule their people using Scripture to refute their past rules and decisions. He doesn't count on falling even deeper in love with Caralynne. Dayne knows he has to protect her. With Elder Simmons out to hurt her, or even worse, Dayne takes up the fight and makes getting Caralynne and her daughters to safety his top priority. Can he help bring order to these people in the process? Can he win the heart of the only woman he has ever loved?
When I was asked by Miss Carole to review this book I agreed but I was a little skeptical. I wasn't sure if I would like the overall story or not BUT I am so glad I agreed because The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman is a book I couldn't put down. From the first page I was drawn in and from there I just wanted to see what would happen next. Caralynne was a real fighter. She loved her daughters with the fierceness of a mother cub and you could feel her grief over her daughter Lori's death. The way she wanted to protect her friends from the abuse of their husbands had me cheering for her loyalty. No matter what she went through she didn't let it break her. She came back fighting with a new determination. I loved Caralynne's spunk and strength.
Enters Dayne MacFarland... Minister, loyal friend. He has a burning desire to "fix" their religious group and I had not doubt he would. He had the same determination as Caralynne but it was toned down a little and the way he protected her children as if they were his own just melted my heart. I could feel his deep love for Caralynne and I was rooting him on the whole way. His loyalty to their people, despite the head Elder's disgusting rules, was something to be admired.
This was a story that was both beautiful and way too true. It opened my eyes to a practice that really goes on in this world. A practice that the world sometimes turns a blind eye to. It was so realistic and fast-paced that you won't be able to put it down. The characters are spot on and you can't help but feel the emotions they go through. It's hard to believe this is a debut novel because it's so well written. I'm so glad I read this book and I'll be looking for more from Carole Brown in the future. Highly recommended!
**A free ARC of this book was provided by the author for my honest review**
August 28, 2019
Well, that’s two books in a row dealing with topics not often found in fictional stories.
Cults are taboo, accursed, the ultimate in anti-society. But once you are in one, you’re trapped. And when you’re in one, you’re brainwashed and don’t even know it.
Ms. Brown launches the reader smack into the midst of a Caralynne’s torment, and the death of her abusive husband. My mind screamed at her to take her daughters and run, far away from the community that held her captive—but I knew she couldn’t. I knew she was trapped. The more I read the more appalled I became; and yet, this is what cults do, trap their followers with false truth—and threats.
I understood Caralynne’s drive to seek revenge for her daughter’s death, especially once I learned more of what caused her death. I urged her to forgive, though, the only true freedom.
Dayne had a different battle to fight—Truth against the lies of the enemy. The Word of God against the word of the cult leader.
As is spiritual battle, what looked to be overwhelming odds and a lost cause, God’s Word always wins. Always. Not without cost, not without sacrifice, but God’s Word cannot be defeated.
Ms. Brown writes a taut story, gripping and chilling, that held my attention to the end.
ROBIN’S FEATHERS
FOUR FEATHERS!
I purchased this book, and offer my review of my own free will. The opinions expressed in my review are my own honest thoughts and reaction to this book.
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Cults are taboo, accursed, the ultimate in anti-society. But once you are in one, you’re trapped. And when you’re in one, you’re brainwashed and don’t even know it.
Ms. Brown launches the reader smack into the midst of a Caralynne’s torment, and the death of her abusive husband. My mind screamed at her to take her daughters and run, far away from the community that held her captive—but I knew she couldn’t. I knew she was trapped. The more I read the more appalled I became; and yet, this is what cults do, trap their followers with false truth—and threats.
I understood Caralynne’s drive to seek revenge for her daughter’s death, especially once I learned more of what caused her death. I urged her to forgive, though, the only true freedom.
Dayne had a different battle to fight—Truth against the lies of the enemy. The Word of God against the word of the cult leader.
As is spiritual battle, what looked to be overwhelming odds and a lost cause, God’s Word always wins. Always. Not without cost, not without sacrifice, but God’s Word cannot be defeated.
Ms. Brown writes a taut story, gripping and chilling, that held my attention to the end.
ROBIN’S FEATHERS
FOUR FEATHERS!
I purchased this book, and offer my review of my own free will. The opinions expressed in my review are my own honest thoughts and reaction to this book.
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March 31, 2014
A child's repressed anguish remains buried deep in her subconscious mind. As an abused adult, hatred surfaces for the self-righteous men in her religious cult. The beliefs taught are based on lies, not biblical principles. Women are trained to be wholly submissive, oftentimes being "broken in" for their wifely duties at a very early age, as young as thirteen. When her abusive husband dies from a heart attack, Caralynne Hayman is finally free of his vile and odious treatment, but the nightmares of her eleven-year-old daughter's abuse and death at the hands of a deranged, demonic cult leader only intensify her fears for her two younger daughters.
The elders hire a former member of the community as their new preacher. Hopeful that Dayne MacFarland will continue to promote the rituals and sinister activities that the head elder has augmented, Elder Simmons finds Dayne's sermons on love and hope in Christ not what he coveted. The elder's plans are thwarted by Dayne's fresh approach and aspirations to teach the cult members about salvation and redemption. His attraction toward Caralynne intensifies the elder's anger and designs to rebuke and discipline her for defiance and rebellion.
In this debut novel, Carole Brown has written a powerfully convincing account of cult activities that exist in our society. She has created characters that are diverse, authentic and credible. The creation of an assemblage of ominous, dark and depraved individuals who know no propriety is powerful. Heinous, inhumane and diabolical activities and corruption throughout this novel evoke intense and powerful emotions. This novel is written with intensity, integrity and candor, a page-turner of epic proportions where redemption is the ultimate objective. I highly recommend this book for those interested in the revelation of cult activities. This book is not for the fainthearted.
Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for my honest review. All opinions expressed are my own, and no monetary compensation was received for this review.
The elders hire a former member of the community as their new preacher. Hopeful that Dayne MacFarland will continue to promote the rituals and sinister activities that the head elder has augmented, Elder Simmons finds Dayne's sermons on love and hope in Christ not what he coveted. The elder's plans are thwarted by Dayne's fresh approach and aspirations to teach the cult members about salvation and redemption. His attraction toward Caralynne intensifies the elder's anger and designs to rebuke and discipline her for defiance and rebellion.
In this debut novel, Carole Brown has written a powerfully convincing account of cult activities that exist in our society. She has created characters that are diverse, authentic and credible. The creation of an assemblage of ominous, dark and depraved individuals who know no propriety is powerful. Heinous, inhumane and diabolical activities and corruption throughout this novel evoke intense and powerful emotions. This novel is written with intensity, integrity and candor, a page-turner of epic proportions where redemption is the ultimate objective. I highly recommend this book for those interested in the revelation of cult activities. This book is not for the fainthearted.
Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for my honest review. All opinions expressed are my own, and no monetary compensation was received for this review.
August 26, 2019
This book was told in such a way I wanted to research more about the cult The Children of Righteous Caine. The story begins in such a way that leaves a question mark in the mind of the reader .. spurring me on to keep reading so I can find out the answer. However, the book itself is so good, I didn’t need the question at the beginning to keep turning the pages.
I loved the character development, the setting, the multiple characters and how they changed throughout the book. My only question is what happened to Elder Simmons’ wife at the end? Maybe I missed it but I have a question mark of what choices she made after … (I won’t give away any spoilers).
I don’t believe I’ve read any other books by Carole Brown, but this won’t be my last. I really enjoyed it. The back cover intrigued me to want to read and it was a book I’m glad I picked up. While I don’t need a sequel to this town, I do look forward to reading more from this author in the future.
I received a copy of this book from Celebrate Lit but was not under any obligation to write a review. All opinions are strictly mine.
I loved the character development, the setting, the multiple characters and how they changed throughout the book. My only question is what happened to Elder Simmons’ wife at the end? Maybe I missed it but I have a question mark of what choices she made after … (I won’t give away any spoilers).
I don’t believe I’ve read any other books by Carole Brown, but this won’t be my last. I really enjoyed it. The back cover intrigued me to want to read and it was a book I’m glad I picked up. While I don’t need a sequel to this town, I do look forward to reading more from this author in the future.
I received a copy of this book from Celebrate Lit but was not under any obligation to write a review. All opinions are strictly mine.
November 25, 2013
This was an uncomfortable book to read. The fact that such sects do indeed exist in our society today is what makes it difficult to read. The Sons of Righteous Cain is a religious community that tries to stay separate from the rest of the world. But as we see in the story, that goal is the only way the lecherous leader and his cronies can continue to operate. They keep tight-fisted control of the community with fear, lies and intimidation. But after the ways of the community result in the death of her first daughter, Caralynne Hayman vows revenge, endangering not only herself but her two younger daughters as well. Dayne McFarland, her friend and foster brother from childhood, gains her trust and attempts to change the attitudes of the men of the community. But he meets with limited success and earns the wrath of the wicked Elder Simmons and his vile henchmen.
Ms. Brown weaves several themes into her story, including forgiveness vs. revenge, the power of love to overcome hatred and evil, and the importance of thinking for oneself rather than allowing someone else to dictate God's directions for one's life. This story points out the necessity of reading God's word and becoming familiar enough with it to know when it's being twisted for evil purposes.
As difficult as the book was to read, I had a hard time putting it down. The action kept me wondering how Caralynne would get out of each scrape, and whether her own vendetta would bring harm to her two young daughters before she finished. When a book makes me want to sit and ready all afternoon to the exclusion of everything else, it earns five stars. And that's what Ms. Brown's book did. I look forward to more from this author.
Ms. Brown weaves several themes into her story, including forgiveness vs. revenge, the power of love to overcome hatred and evil, and the importance of thinking for oneself rather than allowing someone else to dictate God's directions for one's life. This story points out the necessity of reading God's word and becoming familiar enough with it to know when it's being twisted for evil purposes.
As difficult as the book was to read, I had a hard time putting it down. The action kept me wondering how Caralynne would get out of each scrape, and whether her own vendetta would bring harm to her two young daughters before she finished. When a book makes me want to sit and ready all afternoon to the exclusion of everything else, it earns five stars. And that's what Ms. Brown's book did. I look forward to more from this author.
January 21, 2014
When it comes to books, there are very few times I cry, but there were several moments in this one that I came close. With that said, I'll confess that I did shed a few tears as I finished it. The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman is a book that drew me in to the story from the very first chapter, and I had to keep on going to find out what was going to happen next. From what I understand, this is Carole Brown's debut book. What I can say is, I was extremely impressed, and this book stayed with me for several days after I had finished it.
The main character, Caralynne, is part of a religious cult called The Children of Righteous Cain that keeps to itself. The women aren't treated well at all, and are often abused – whether mentally, physically, or spiritually. Given the background as described in the first few chapters, it becomes quite understandable why she reacts the way she does over the course of the story. I will state that Elder Simmons is a character that I found easy to dislike because of how controlling and power-mad he was. On the other hand, I liked Dayne, the new minister of the group, simply because he saw what was happening for what it was.
Overall, this is a book that, despite the difficult subject, I think Carole handled well and created a story that I thought was well-written and held my attention from beginning to end.
The main character, Caralynne, is part of a religious cult called The Children of Righteous Cain that keeps to itself. The women aren't treated well at all, and are often abused – whether mentally, physically, or spiritually. Given the background as described in the first few chapters, it becomes quite understandable why she reacts the way she does over the course of the story. I will state that Elder Simmons is a character that I found easy to dislike because of how controlling and power-mad he was. On the other hand, I liked Dayne, the new minister of the group, simply because he saw what was happening for what it was.
Overall, this is a book that, despite the difficult subject, I think Carole handled well and created a story that I thought was well-written and held my attention from beginning to end.
May 11, 2014
If you are like me, a big part of the reason for reading a novel is to get to know some new folks. The best at the craft of character development of the last 50 years might have been Stephan King. Carole Brown may not be quite to King's level in general, but has great gifting in her ability to make 4D characters. We even get some understanding of their spirit/soul.
The plot is very original, and I was never ahead of Brown as she spun out the complex mystery. On the other hand, she never confuses the reader, either. The surprise twists and turns were clearly explained and possible, even though they were hard to figure out in advance.
Like so many such tales, there were times when I thought, c'mon?? But in reflecting back, there weren't any aspects that were more troubling than similar stories. My most frequent thought was that someone should have been able to use their cell phone, but while set in modern times, the place and culture may not have allowed for many cell phones.
How do I ultimately judge a mystery. By whether or not I lose an hour or so sleep because I can't wait until tomorrow to finish the book. On that score, the book deserves the 5 stars I gave it.
The plot is very original, and I was never ahead of Brown as she spun out the complex mystery. On the other hand, she never confuses the reader, either. The surprise twists and turns were clearly explained and possible, even though they were hard to figure out in advance.
Like so many such tales, there were times when I thought, c'mon?? But in reflecting back, there weren't any aspects that were more troubling than similar stories. My most frequent thought was that someone should have been able to use their cell phone, but while set in modern times, the place and culture may not have allowed for many cell phones.
How do I ultimately judge a mystery. By whether or not I lose an hour or so sleep because I can't wait until tomorrow to finish the book. On that score, the book deserves the 5 stars I gave it.
October 2, 2019
"The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman" by Carole Brown was a hard book to read as it deals with spousal abuse and sexual abuse of both women and children. There is nothing wrong with the writing, just the subject is an emotional one! But it was a good book. I felt it described cult living and I hope none of my family and friends are ever put in a situation like Caralynne.
This book had me turning the pages to see what was going to happen. I was intrigued with the whole story.
This story is about what evil can do but also about what love and hope and belief in the Lord Jesus can do.
There was a couple of times I wanted to quit reading this book because of the subject matter but I am so glad I read it to the end, it was a great ending and even though I didn't see it ending the way it did, it was a fitting ending!
I recommend this book but just be prepared to have your tissues handy because it does pull at your heartstrings!
I am getting "The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman" by Carole Brown five stars.
I was given a complimentary copy by the author and Celebrate Lit. These opinions are my own.
This book had me turning the pages to see what was going to happen. I was intrigued with the whole story.
This story is about what evil can do but also about what love and hope and belief in the Lord Jesus can do.
There was a couple of times I wanted to quit reading this book because of the subject matter but I am so glad I read it to the end, it was a great ending and even though I didn't see it ending the way it did, it was a fitting ending!
I recommend this book but just be prepared to have your tissues handy because it does pull at your heartstrings!
I am getting "The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman" by Carole Brown five stars.
I was given a complimentary copy by the author and Celebrate Lit. These opinions are my own.
November 25, 2013
The wonderful story of the Redemption of Caralynne Hayman begins in tragedy when a small child witnesses the murder of her mother at the hands of a man with a history of abuse, Elder Simmons. Caralynne's story begins in a cult named The Children of Righteous Cain. Women are forced into marriage in their little teen years and then abused by their husbands to be subservient and obedient. Children are raised with strict rules of obedience laid out by Elder Simons, the top elder of the cult. Caralynne, however, is determined to avenge her daughter's death at the hands of her brother-in-law, and to escape her abusive husband as soon as she makes the elder's pay. In walks Dayne, returned from the seminary where he'd found true faith. Dayne discovers his feelings for Caralynne! a childhood friend! had not diminished. This book is a great read, hard to put down, and one that draws emotional responses as you read the story.
February 8, 2015
When I first saw this book on Goodreads it sparked my interest, so happy I won a signed copy. Caralynne Hayman is a courageous women thrown into an unimaginable situation. Brought up In a religious cult that treated women as property. Married to a man who beat her. A cult that trained young girls to be submissive wives. After her 11yr old daughter dies at the hands of these men and her husband while "breaking her in", Caralynne wants revenge and to get her younger daughters safely out of the cult. As her husband is squirming on the floor having a heart attack she grabs his medicine, then a thought comes to her. If she doesn't give it to him he will die. She thinks about how he could have prevented Lori's death. She drops the medicine bottle and leaves the room.
This book was very riveting. It's a book about courage and making changes. Will Caralynne finally find a way to be safe, happy, and find true love? As the title says, it is a story of redemption.
This book was very riveting. It's a book about courage and making changes. Will Caralynne finally find a way to be safe, happy, and find true love? As the title says, it is a story of redemption.
August 20, 2019
What a heartbreaking and troubling story. I found it extremely interesting and wondered what would happen next. What path was Cara on? Whatever happened to the man in the first chapter? Did he tie into the the present?
I can only imagine what it would be like to be trapped in a situation like this and trying to reconcile what you you have grown up with and who God really is, how to decipher the truth.
I couldn’t wait to see how Dayne would step up and speak truth into this community and how everyone would react, would they be glad to walk in this new freedom or would they deny it?
Very engaging read, I enjoyed it.
A copy of this book was given to me through the Celebrate Lit Team. All opinions are my own.
I can only imagine what it would be like to be trapped in a situation like this and trying to reconcile what you you have grown up with and who God really is, how to decipher the truth.
I couldn’t wait to see how Dayne would step up and speak truth into this community and how everyone would react, would they be glad to walk in this new freedom or would they deny it?
Very engaging read, I enjoyed it.
A copy of this book was given to me through the Celebrate Lit Team. All opinions are my own.
February 8, 2014
Back in 2008, I remember the news about a cult in Texas where children were forced into early marriage. Carole Brown has written a story very similar only from a point of view within the cult. It is definitely suspenseful as Caralynne tries to extract revenge for the death of her young daughter, killed while she was being "broken in" for marriage.
The romance thread in the story involves the minister, Dayne, who returns to the cult after attending seminary and seeks to change things from within.
The situation is food for thought from many different angles. Is revenge ever right? Where is God in the tough times? Can good triumph over evil?
Brown does a great job of developing her characters and storyline and treating the subject matter with respect rather than sensationalism. It's a worthwhile read.
The romance thread in the story involves the minister, Dayne, who returns to the cult after attending seminary and seeks to change things from within.
The situation is food for thought from many different angles. Is revenge ever right? Where is God in the tough times? Can good triumph over evil?
Brown does a great job of developing her characters and storyline and treating the subject matter with respect rather than sensationalism. It's a worthwhile read.
March 8, 2014
The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman is a compelling read. It is an emotional one. My emotions ran from shock to sympathy to fear to hope and much more. As I read the novel, I began to wonder how many people actually live in cults such as the one in this book, where women and girls are not valued as individuals.
There are numerous interesting and well-developed characters throughout the novel. Caralynne was easy for me to sympathize with, but not easy to like. At more than more point I feared for her sanity, but I realize that her thoughts and actions are her only means of survival and coping with her circumstances. It is sad to discover that the fears with which the women live are very real.
It was encouraging to find the pockets of hope that the author tucked in throughout the book. These kept me going with hope of my own for Caralynne as I finished reading her story.
There are numerous interesting and well-developed characters throughout the novel. Caralynne was easy for me to sympathize with, but not easy to like. At more than more point I feared for her sanity, but I realize that her thoughts and actions are her only means of survival and coping with her circumstances. It is sad to discover that the fears with which the women live are very real.
It was encouraging to find the pockets of hope that the author tucked in throughout the book. These kept me going with hope of my own for Caralynne as I finished reading her story.
January 15, 2015
Books and stories about occult and the powerful, mesmerizing allure of its leaders always find a sweet reading spot within me. The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman is no exception. As I read this story, I am swallowed by its fast pace and deep storytelling; and it is my pleasure to host an interview with this talented author.
How far would YOU go to avenge a daughter’s cruel death? Cara is considered rebellious and inappropriate to befriend. Dayne is the apple of Elder Simmons’ eye—until he takes a stand against their teachings. Can his prayers and love reach Cara and show her the way to redemption? Will Cara realize God’s love and forgiveness before she goes too far?
The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman is a novel of hope shining through the darkness with strong elements of suspense and romance.
How far would YOU go to avenge a daughter’s cruel death? Cara is considered rebellious and inappropriate to befriend. Dayne is the apple of Elder Simmons’ eye—until he takes a stand against their teachings. Can his prayers and love reach Cara and show her the way to redemption? Will Cara realize God’s love and forgiveness before she goes too far?
The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman is a novel of hope shining through the darkness with strong elements of suspense and romance.
November 5, 2013
Gripping. A nightmarish, utterly gruesome, but triumphant tale. I turned the pages in search of justice, and found deliverance.
Carole Brown weaves a story of abuse, agony, and pain. Of which, for Caralynne Hayman, an end seems nowhere in sight. Pulling no punches, literally, we glimpse life from the perspective of the beaten and down-trodden. Then get to ponder the consequences and our conscience. After all, what would we do?
A bit repetitive at times, a brief lull in the plot rather distracted instead of relieved the tension of the story. But soon, the action was underway again, the momentary lapse forgotten.
Well done, Ms. Brown, well done. For the story…five stars. Overall? Four are shining bright.
Carole Brown weaves a story of abuse, agony, and pain. Of which, for Caralynne Hayman, an end seems nowhere in sight. Pulling no punches, literally, we glimpse life from the perspective of the beaten and down-trodden. Then get to ponder the consequences and our conscience. After all, what would we do?
A bit repetitive at times, a brief lull in the plot rather distracted instead of relieved the tension of the story. But soon, the action was underway again, the momentary lapse forgotten.
Well done, Ms. Brown, well done. For the story…five stars. Overall? Four are shining bright.
February 25, 2014
The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman by Carole Brown is a suspenseful and emotional read. My only caution is that this book deals with cults and abuse, and so readers should keep in mind that it’s not a lighthearted read.
Caralynne lives in a cult of the Children of Righteous Cain. When Caralynne’s husband dies, the elders must make decisions about her future. At the same time, Dayne MacFarland, a friend from Caralynne’s past, returns to the cult as their preacher.
I was intrigued by this book because I’d heard it was about cults and had seen the cover, but wasn’t sure how the cover fit in. Anyway, if readers can handle the subject matter, I think they'll enjoy this suspense story, as I did.
Caralynne lives in a cult of the Children of Righteous Cain. When Caralynne’s husband dies, the elders must make decisions about her future. At the same time, Dayne MacFarland, a friend from Caralynne’s past, returns to the cult as their preacher.
I was intrigued by this book because I’d heard it was about cults and had seen the cover, but wasn’t sure how the cover fit in. Anyway, if readers can handle the subject matter, I think they'll enjoy this suspense story, as I did.
November 30, 2013
I can certainly see why Carole Brown got so many endorsements and rave reviews for her debut novel. She has created an outstanding book that deals with the physical, emotional, and spiritual aspects of the dark issues of cult activity, spousal abuse and child abuse in a straight-forward yet respectful manner. Although this is a fictional story, we’ve all heard of brainwashing by cults. Chapter after chapter the suspense builds, and the reader is totally engaged throughout the entire book. You’ll find yourself cringing at times and looking around to make sure your doors are locked. Can't wait for her next book!
November 4, 2014
Caralynne Hayman doesn't think like the other women of The Children of Righteous Cain. She's independent and feisty, unlike her complacent, subservient peers and fellow cult members.
Dayne MacFarland's life changes radically when he trusts in the God of the Bible, forsaking the tenets of his childhood faith. Though he's chosen as the spiritual leader of the cult, he preaches a much different message, one Elder Simmons can't endorse—love others as God loves you.
The story is an "edge of the seat" tale from beginning to end. Just when I thought the characters' conflicts were heading toward resolution, another twist occurred. Carole Brown is a master storyteller.
Dayne MacFarland's life changes radically when he trusts in the God of the Bible, forsaking the tenets of his childhood faith. Though he's chosen as the spiritual leader of the cult, he preaches a much different message, one Elder Simmons can't endorse—love others as God loves you.
The story is an "edge of the seat" tale from beginning to end. Just when I thought the characters' conflicts were heading toward resolution, another twist occurred. Carole Brown is a master storyteller.
November 15, 2013
In writing The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman, Carole Brown tackles a dark, difficult subject and does a tremendous job! With a well-developed plot and characters, you are quickly drawn into this thought provoking story. The dramatic events keep you turning the pages and wondering what will happen next. It is a reminder that evil does exist and may be closer than we think. However, even amidst the suffering, pain and anguish there is also hope, forgiveness and redemption.
The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman is a well-written novel and I look forward to reading more from Carole Brown!
The Redemption of Caralynne Hayman is a well-written novel and I look forward to reading more from Carole Brown!
March 22, 2014
What a realistic, emotional read that grips you and just won't let you go! The portrayal of a cult that uses religion as a means of keeping their women in line and as an excuse for abuse is as real as it is horrifying. Caralynne's feeling of protectiveness for her daughters is something that can be felt by any parent. The lengths that the elders will go to to get her back into line while she manages to thwart them makes for a story that you just can't put down. I was given a copy of this book for my honest review.
August 15, 2014
**I was given a copy of this book by the author in return for an honest review.**
This was a tough book to get through at times....not because of the way it is written, but because of the subject matter. The incidents of abuse, and the other incidents of violence, were very powerful, to the point of being sickening. It was like being there in person, watching from a distance, unable to do anything about what was happening. Thankfully, the true love of God is witnessed throughout the story, as opposed to the false teachings of the cult leader.
This was a tough book to get through at times....not because of the way it is written, but because of the subject matter. The incidents of abuse, and the other incidents of violence, were very powerful, to the point of being sickening. It was like being there in person, watching from a distance, unable to do anything about what was happening. Thankfully, the true love of God is witnessed throughout the story, as opposed to the false teachings of the cult leader.
November 4, 2014
This is the first novel I have read by this author but it won't be my last; It is a compelling story that exposes life in a cult, and how God's Word can be twisted to allow such abuse of women and children and control of others. I read it in one setting because after I started it I couldn't put it down. The characters are unforgettable and the story takes you on a roller coaster ride of emotions. It is also a powerful picture of how God's love can shine through even the darkest of circumstances. I highly recommend it. I definitely will be reading other books by this author.
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