Oh thank goodness I'm finally, mercifully done with this book. This book that is so, so full of fluff and the endless drone of day to day blah and multiple detailed shopping trips, repetitive inner dialogue that makes you want to take the character by the shoulders and shake some sense into them! Also, really? Do you honestly have to describe in minute detail every outfit this girl changes into? And why do we need to know that she changed her clothes and changed her hair and blah blah blah when she's going out for something minuscule? This is more fluff, and more filler, and makes the book draaaaaag and lag on unnecessarily. I had to force myself to finish this one, if only because I wanted to know first, what ends up happening to Grace and Cole, and second, if Raphael ends up turning her into a Fallen.
Also, the heavy, HEAVY religion in this book bothered me a little. Not because it was heavily religious, but because there is one blurb in the synopsis stating that Lyla can only rely on God, then goes on to tell readers that this man shows up and the book is a fantastical love story, which it is not. It is a fantastical story about staying with God, which is a-ok. But I do feel like readers should have a little more warning about a book being heavily laden with all consuming religion, and less tricked into believing it is a romance/love story type. Was there a love story here? Yes. Was it well developed? No. Lyla falls head-over-heals in love with Raphael for reasons I simply do not see because the author spends more time telling us about the clothes Layla is wearing and her giddiness about loving him than she does actually developing the romance between these two and making readers fall in love with him as well. It would help, as well, if he wasn't always pushing Lyla away, if he was actually at least remotely tempted by her, or loving with her more-so than fleeting moments. And when I say fleeting I mean like, 1 paragraph. Make.Me.Believe.It.
That said, I did like the story. I had to trudge through the religious aspect being shoved at me because by the time it got preachy I was already hooked on the plot, which was a pretty good one, and wanted to know what happened. (I was raised Lutheran, so I'm not unfamiliar with the Christian religion, nor does religion bother me. So I hope no one thinks I'm bashing it.) Lyla, for the most part, was a likable character. I felt that she was a lot stronger than the author allowed her to be though. A girl who has been through what she has in 17 short years and is still holding herself AND two siblings together and is as street wise as she is, certainly is stronger than she was made out to be. I also felt that she wasn't as leary as she needed to be though and I wasn't convinced that really knew what was going on for most of the book in terms of her siblings and all of the options.
Raphael was a great character, but he was written as more of an under-developed secondary background character than main character. We never really got to know him or were given a chance to fall in love with him. He being the second part of the love story going on here, we should have known more about him. All I learned was that he's old, loyal, gorgeous, dark and brooding and fiercely protective of the people he loves. Boom, that's it. I know nothing else about Raphael and if I learned it, I forgot it because he had such little character development.
I don't know, i could keep going but, eh. Background characters held more potential than they were given, friends that plainly cannot see everything going on irritate the heck out of me because they are only there for the sake of filling space f they aren't going to have any kind of plot effect, and sooooo much filler ruined this book for me. I am giving it a solid 3 stars, because I think if it had been split up into two books, or given to someone unbiased to read that could have had a serious conversation about 100+ pages of filler and cutting out the mundane, it could have been good. It has a strong plot and is a god variance in the modern paranormal genre.