This is the second book in a series, which I didn't realize, and there are definite ongoing threads both forward and back. I'm not sure I would say this book tells a complete story. I definitely wouldn't say it stands alone and if you read the other books, read in order. I felt unsatisfied at the end of the story with too much left open.
This is the 6th book I've read by this author and it was a shock. First of all, based on the title (without seeing the series notation), I expected a comedy, maybe a Christmas comedy. I didn't find anything funny. In fact, it was mostly depressing. It ends on Christmas Day and there are references to Christmas and some seasonal activities, but it easily could have been built around other seasons.
I also didn't find much in the way of touching moments which is what I read Christmas stories looking forward to. Any attempts at touching moments, and I assume that's what they were, fell flat for me.
It didn't help that I found the four main characters anywhere from disappointing to get-me-away-from-her (Kendall). There appears to be attempts at character development, especially for Lelani, but I'm pretty sure you have to read the whole series to see it fully happen. That's not gonna happen for me.
Lelani has potential but is still a little too close to being the victim both in circumstances and personality. It there was just one book, focusing just on her, I think I would be interested.
Megan would also have potential if she would just take charge of herself. Megan actually makes the fewest bad choices, but that's not saying a lot. Anna could be OK too, but I wonder if she's going to become a victim in book 3. Kendall - see next paragraph.
This is a Christian book, but it's unlike almost any Christian romance I have ever read, and I've read a few dozen. This book has main characters like Kendall making choices that aren't just bad, they're horrible, with a dose of self-destructive. Lelani has begun trying to live like a Christian, but she makes at least one really bad choice supporting Kendall in a way no one, especially a Christian, ever should. At one point she thinks to herself: she could see the sensibility in Kendall's plan<.b>. My thought at that point was - in what universe?
I often comment about how preachy a Christian book is. In this case, there are things that sound preachy, but I question what the message is. Characters pray for guidance. Sometimes it results in good decisions and sometimes not. I guess that happens to all of us. But again, what's the message?
Lelani
closed the door and tried to remember exactly what Megan had just told her. Believe in God. Trust God. Pray to him. Really, it did sound simple. Okay, almost too simple. Yet, Lelani couldn't deny that she desperately needed help.
By itself, there is nothing wrong with this advice or these feelings, but there is more to the Gospel. God is not solely a heavenly therapist handing out good guidance any time we ask for it, and without other commitments by us. There is more to being a Christian, and if a Christian author is including messages in her writing, and most authors are, then "Believe in God, Trust God, Pay to him" leaves out way too much. Certainly, this author's implied message probably includes that all of us make mistakes, sins, and we desperately need to depend on God for our lives to be right, but there is still more in the Gospel and that all centers around Jesus, and I don't see that in this story. The circumstances of the story are begging for that necessary element.
Despite the fact that there are many loose ends at the conclusion of this book, a lot of important things happen abruptly just before the end. These things needed more development, especially since I'm pretty sure they will be relevant in the next book.
Mature themes: one character has casual sex with a married man which isn't really described. Another character has already had a baby resulting from extramarital sex with a married man. There are some other serious circumstances in her life. One character abuses alcohol and has indicators of clinical depression and seriously self-destructive behavior. Another character (very) briefly questions whether she wants to keep living. (Note: I don't mention this things by way of judgment, but rather to indicate that there are some deep serious issues in this story. If this book is read by a young person still under parental authority, then two way discussion is warranted between parent and child.)