Has much promise as a series with a different take on the almost worn out vampire plot. I was drawn into the story and had trouble putting it down. However, there were a couple problems... Other than the gramatical errors and editing that needed to be done which I hope will be corrected before the final release (writers - contact me if you want to know what they were), there were other issues. I must confess that the bulk of paranormal I read is written by women, so I may have different expectations. What I found missing in the story was clearer discriptions of the characters appearance, other than the vampires. Not romance novel type (ie: "flowing hair like gold", bulging thighs like tree trunks", blah, blah, blah...), but just general so the reader can get a mental picture. Also, I found some confusion between first and third person when people were thinking. There was a also a place where I think the person that was speaking was referred to by the wrong name, as it was inconsistent with the character and dialogue. Overall, I found the story enjoying, although too short...read it in one sitting! Hoping the authors are going to "bulk" it up, as this genre is jam-packed and I would imagine that a book would really need to stand out. (For example, The Passage by Justin Cronin - although more zombie-ish, also had an apocalyptic, survivor, "us against them" narrative.)