Just because someone can write – and Bill Cheng can write – doesn’t mean they have a story to tell.
Here, in this debut novel, Cheng speaks through the voices of a handful of African-Americans as the Mississippi floods in 1927. If I’m reading the linear notes and the author’s ‘Acknowledgements’ correctly, Bill Cheng is an Asian-American who lives in New York, studied writing in school, and has a very nice collection of Blues music. He lists 18 Blues musicians by name and then “all the late great bluesmen” and says “this book is for you.” So, choosing this story to tell, I’m guessing, is a kind of homage. I’m not suggesting he’s not allowed to do that. Just that it’s ballsy, maybe risky. Are the ‘voices’ convincing? I’d say ‘almost’.
There wasn’t much to do during the day except be hungry and be sad. We hadn’t saved much – just some clothes, Nan Peoria’s Bible, and my Sally doll, which Uncle Reb threw into the water and ruined on account of his having a temper. What food we had, we couldn’t mete out more than a week. So I read Nan Peoria’s Bible and I pretended it was Bible times and we was on what they call an ark, and every bird I seen I pretended they was doves till Uncle Reb sighted one up and felled her. And so I didn’t play Bible after that.
There’s promise there.
This novel is plot-driven, but the plot loses its thread half-way through. The book is broken up into a Prologue, six Parts, and an Epilogue. The ‘Parts’ are told in the first-person narrative of different characters, in different times, switching from 1927 to 1941 and back again because . . . well, maybe that makes it more artistic.
Having read the end ‘Acknowledgements’ first, and thus aware of the author’s expressed debt to the Blues, I read the book listening for the music. And there was music, Blues music, in the one-page Prologue and the three-page Epilogue. But I heard no alternating bass in the story itself. Even one character who was a Blues pianist didn’t sound musical. And Cheng’s description of the music he played didn’t really ring true.
I don’t know what it means exactly, but there are so many modern novels written now where the characters become unmoored, and they walk and walk and walk. Zoli, Edgar Sawtelle . . . and, of course, Blood Meridian. Cheng doesn’t acknowledge Cormac McCarthy, but he clearly was influenced by him. But I’ve read Cormac McCarthy. Cormac McCarthy is a great writer. AND SENATOR, YOU ARE NO……..
(Sorry. I got carried away).
Why does everyone want to be Cormac McCarthy? Hell, even Cormac McCarthy wants to be Cormac McCarthy. (The Road). I remember an early book by McCarthy where he wrote that a knife winked. Boy, I liked that. But then I noticed that McCarthy reused that anthropomorphism over and over. All his blades winked. Reading Southern Cross The Dog, I felt Cheng was trying to write like McCarthy, if only subconsciously. Maybe I was just being ungenerous and overly critical. But then there it was:
He panned the flashlight across the ground, the light sluicing along the short blades of shrub grass. It caught on some small piece of wire in the distance. It winked at him. (emphasis added).
Cheng invented his own anthropomorphism, which I really liked. Bees buzz drunkenly. Perfect picture. I really liked that. So did Cheng, who made all his bees and flies drunk throughout the book.
And while Cheng can write very well, he can also make a reader wince.
Sex:
She worked loose his trousers, slid down her pants, and guided him into her. The ground canted and heeled. She could feel him gripping her hips, his body rocking against her. She flexed against him. He was inside, pressing into her. He felt himself expanding inside her, and then at once, it was over. She climbed off and lay beside him, the both of them breathless and raw.
A killing:
Robert grabbed a fistful of hair. He forced it back and dragged a line across the neck. There was spray against the walls, a wet sick noise in his throat.
See what I’m saying? Cheng wants to be McCarthy. But no one kills like McCarthy. And, canted and heeled? Really?
Also, as long as I’m not reading magic realism, and I’m pretty sure this was not magic realism, I like the story to be credible. So I was troubled when yet another character got his throat sliced and then we read this:
Frankie had reached her hand inside his neck and pinched off the gushing artery. She had saved his life and for this he hated her. A gushing artery. In a man’s neck. Here, just let me pinch that off.
It is one thing to love Blues music. But not everyone can sing the Blues.