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Inzared, Queen of the Elephant Riders
Bertha Maude Anderson has no inkling of how famous she will become. She lives in the Appalachian Mountains of North Carolina in the year 1843.
Her world changes forever when she is enticed to join The Romanoff Brothers Circus and her name is changed to Inzared, Queen of the Elephant Riders. Inzared discovers her true calling while learning to live with the nomadic Gypsies.
From the hatred shown by some of the performers to the love she finds along the way, Inzared finds herself immersed in the rich folklore and customs of the misunderstood people who call the circus their home.
Her one constant is Cecil, the elephant, and together they form a bond that no one can break as Inzared finds herself lured into the world of the Gypsies while clinging to her own roots and trying to break free of the chains that keep her from her destiny.
Her world changes forever when she is enticed to join The Romanoff Brothers Circus and her name is changed to Inzared, Queen of the Elephant Riders. Inzared discovers her true calling while learning to live with the nomadic Gypsies.
From the hatred shown by some of the performers to the love she finds along the way, Inzared finds herself immersed in the rich folklore and customs of the misunderstood people who call the circus their home.
Her one constant is Cecil, the elephant, and together they form a bond that no one can break as Inzared finds herself lured into the world of the Gypsies while clinging to her own roots and trying to break free of the chains that keep her from her destiny.
328 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 26, 2012
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L. Leander
4 books13 followersL.Leander was raised in Lower Michigan, graduating from Hillman Community School. She worked in the Office Management field for many years, later attending Hot Springs Beauty Academy in Hot Springs, Arkansas, where she opened a beauty salon and taught cosmetology.
Ms. Leander began writing at the age of ten, when she wrote a short story for her English Class entitled "Three Mice On The Moon." The project received top honors in the class and her English teacher encouraged her to keep writing. She did just that, penning short stories and poems in her spare time.
Ms. Leander later began writing songs in her teens and singing them with her father. She has published and won awards for her songwriting and is a sought-after performer on the singer/songwriter circuit.
INZARED, Queen of the Elephant Riders is her first book, and is number one in a series about a Gypsy wagon circus in pre-Civil War America. The second in the series is due to be published in the fall. Two non-fiction books are also in the works and the author plans to publish them in 2013.
Ms. Leander currently lives between Wisconsin and Mazatlan, Mexico. She says, "The tropical beauty and weather of Mazatlan inspires me to write every day. I belong to a group of writers there who offer encouragement and critique. The cornfields, cows and lush green grass of Wisconsin keep me ever-mindful of my midwestern roots. My biggest hope is that people will enjoy reading my work as much as I enjoy writing it!"
Ms. Leander began writing at the age of ten, when she wrote a short story for her English Class entitled "Three Mice On The Moon." The project received top honors in the class and her English teacher encouraged her to keep writing. She did just that, penning short stories and poems in her spare time.
Ms. Leander later began writing songs in her teens and singing them with her father. She has published and won awards for her songwriting and is a sought-after performer on the singer/songwriter circuit.
INZARED, Queen of the Elephant Riders is her first book, and is number one in a series about a Gypsy wagon circus in pre-Civil War America. The second in the series is due to be published in the fall. Two non-fiction books are also in the works and the author plans to publish them in 2013.
Ms. Leander currently lives between Wisconsin and Mazatlan, Mexico. She says, "The tropical beauty and weather of Mazatlan inspires me to write every day. I belong to a group of writers there who offer encouragement and critique. The cornfields, cows and lush green grass of Wisconsin keep me ever-mindful of my midwestern roots. My biggest hope is that people will enjoy reading my work as much as I enjoy writing it!"
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January 16, 2013
Circus, circus, we love the circus~
This is the tale of a young girl of sixteen, one who has taken it into her head that there's more to life than what her family has brought her up to become. It's a tale of growing up, of love and loss, of Gaji and Gypsy, of fitting in and being left out, of life and change, of applause and tears.
The book is voiced by the headstrong Bertha, whose cordial (and perceptive) view of life gives zest to this coming-of-age story. With her simple language and seemingly provincial accent, this girl whisks you along with her as she dreams of changing her basket of eggs for a nomadic life with a bunch of leotard-wearing talents.
Oh, have I mentioned that this story is set in 1843, with a backdrop of sequined outfits, cotton candy and circus people?
Behind Bertha's words, there is more than just scenery of what goes on in the Big Top. There's also a hint of friendship and betrayal, a dash of love and joy, and a sprinkling of suspicions and trust. While the book seems to be a simple circus story, you will find good friends, mistrusted family members, mother-like fortune-tellers, strong partners, ferocious animals and a whole bunch of personalities, each unique in their own way. Oh, and let us not forget the main star of them all: the mighty, humble, loving elephant (taken care of by the dashing boss handler, of course).
With Inzared, you'll inhale the fresh grass while you tread tirely towards the next town. With Inzared, you'll see the blue sky as you attempt to do hand-stands on a bareback horse. With Inzared, you'll, at breakfast, mingle with people who mesmerize you with their amazing tricks with lions, tigers and bears. With Inzared, you'll dance to the merry tunes of the age-old traditions that still govern the ceremonies of the Gypsy.
With Inzared, you'll behold so much joy, wondering if you'll ever experience sadness.
Get ready to up your vocabulary in circus speak, because you may come across a number of casually spoken trouper words. (I can't quite get over "dukie box"!) This story is also quite realistic in its own sense, though it does echo a kind of supernatural vibe here and there. (But hey, what's a circus without its mystery and unfathomable tradition, yes?) I loved the depth into Gypsy lore - it's really quite mesmerizing and exotic to the modern eye.
While the story is cohesive enough, it is not too deep. You can read through this, have a bite or two to think about, but in the end, probably consider it light-hearted young adult fiction. Quite tastefully written, with words carefully chosen. A sequel is also wanting!
Grab your best blouse, wear your blue silk scarf, and get ready for the inviting smell of popcorn (maybe with a pink lemonade?). Now, who's up for a good show at the circus?
This is the tale of a young girl of sixteen, one who has taken it into her head that there's more to life than what her family has brought her up to become. It's a tale of growing up, of love and loss, of Gaji and Gypsy, of fitting in and being left out, of life and change, of applause and tears.
The book is voiced by the headstrong Bertha, whose cordial (and perceptive) view of life gives zest to this coming-of-age story. With her simple language and seemingly provincial accent, this girl whisks you along with her as she dreams of changing her basket of eggs for a nomadic life with a bunch of leotard-wearing talents.
Oh, have I mentioned that this story is set in 1843, with a backdrop of sequined outfits, cotton candy and circus people?
Behind Bertha's words, there is more than just scenery of what goes on in the Big Top. There's also a hint of friendship and betrayal, a dash of love and joy, and a sprinkling of suspicions and trust. While the book seems to be a simple circus story, you will find good friends, mistrusted family members, mother-like fortune-tellers, strong partners, ferocious animals and a whole bunch of personalities, each unique in their own way. Oh, and let us not forget the main star of them all: the mighty, humble, loving elephant (taken care of by the dashing boss handler, of course).
With Inzared, you'll inhale the fresh grass while you tread tirely towards the next town. With Inzared, you'll see the blue sky as you attempt to do hand-stands on a bareback horse. With Inzared, you'll, at breakfast, mingle with people who mesmerize you with their amazing tricks with lions, tigers and bears. With Inzared, you'll dance to the merry tunes of the age-old traditions that still govern the ceremonies of the Gypsy.
With Inzared, you'll behold so much joy, wondering if you'll ever experience sadness.
Get ready to up your vocabulary in circus speak, because you may come across a number of casually spoken trouper words. (I can't quite get over "dukie box"!) This story is also quite realistic in its own sense, though it does echo a kind of supernatural vibe here and there. (But hey, what's a circus without its mystery and unfathomable tradition, yes?) I loved the depth into Gypsy lore - it's really quite mesmerizing and exotic to the modern eye.
While the story is cohesive enough, it is not too deep. You can read through this, have a bite or two to think about, but in the end, probably consider it light-hearted young adult fiction. Quite tastefully written, with words carefully chosen. A sequel is also wanting!
Grab your best blouse, wear your blue silk scarf, and get ready for the inviting smell of popcorn (maybe with a pink lemonade?). Now, who's up for a good show at the circus?
January 8, 2013
This... I don't know. The story idea itself was good: teenage girl in the 19th century is unfulfilled in her hillbilly life, so on a whim and a plea from a pretty gypsy elephant handler, she runs away with the circus. The writing needed heavy editing, as time wasn't tracked consistently and many circumstances for the side characters were repeated as if just revealed. It seemed that important plot points would be brought up randomly, then completely forgotten by the main characters until a new occurrence happened, where they would put it off again. The final 15% of the book passed in many months, and then YEARS, whereas the first 85% went through days, at most weeks at a time.
It wasn't terrible, I just think I'm disappointed in its missed potential more than anything. I don't think I'm going to be reading the sequels. There's nothing in this story that I'm leaving behind that I'd want to revisit.
One final thought: when two people are bludgeoned to death by angry townsfolk, that is not constituted as a "freak accident". Just wanted to throw that out there.
It wasn't terrible, I just think I'm disappointed in its missed potential more than anything. I don't think I'm going to be reading the sequels. There's nothing in this story that I'm leaving behind that I'd want to revisit.
One final thought: when two people are bludgeoned to death by angry townsfolk, that is not constituted as a "freak accident". Just wanted to throw that out there.
August 22, 2013
Overall Rating: 5 out of 5 Stars
Summary:
Living in the mountains of North Carolina around 1843, Bertha Maude Anderson is always getting into trouble for dreaming bigger than what her plain name would warrant. “Fancy is as fancy does,” as her mother says, Bertha longs for adventure, travel, the kiss of a handsome stranger, and to be free of her daily responsibilities. In short, she’s a dreamer in search of adventure, and the chance to go out and take it.
That chance for adventure comes in the form of Cecil the elephant, one of the star attractions of the Romanoff Brothers’ Circus, a group of traveling gypsies that are passing through Bertha’s small mountain town. In an instant, Bertha is mesmerized by the gentle giant, and the mutual attraction with his trainer Paytre can’t be denied. So, with the help of Paytre, Cecil, and other colorful characters, Bertha impulsively runs away with the circus and becomes Inzared, Queen of the Elephant Riders. This is the story of her adventures, her loves, and her life as she struggles to bridge the world that she knows with the one of her dreams.
Overall Impressions:
Anyone who knows me knows that I absolutely adore playing the devil’s advocate. I question, search, criticize, analyze and scrutinize anything I come in contact with, searching for something that can be improved. This is also true in the books I review. While I am honest, I am also extremely exacting in what I expect to see. It’s a rare case where I simply do not find anything to criticize.
This is one of those rare cases.
Inzared-Queen of the Elephant Riders by Linda Leander is one of those books that comes along every once in a while. It has the unique ability to pull the reader not only into the story, but into the world of Cecil the elephant, Bertha, and Paytre. It entices the reader to not only enjoy the world of a traveling circus, and of mountain life, but to live it alongside the characters as well. The scenes are vivid and lively. Linda Leander has the rare ability to allow her characters’ voices to shine brighter than her own. When you hear Bertha and later Inzared telling the story, you hear her, not the author speaking through her.
Is this book for everyone? Perhaps not- it does deal with some sensitive subject matters, and if you’re not a fan of the classic “take me away” type of saga, this book might be your cup of tea. However, I can’t think of a solid reason why this book shouldn’t be added to your collection today.
Rating system:
0 Stars – Great for kindling or wasting space on your hard drive
1 Star – Perfect gift for that person you can’t stand
2 Stars – Put it on your to Borrow list
3 Stars – Buy it if you get the chance- worth a weekend read.
4 Stars – This is definitely something to add to your library
5 Stars – Impulse Buy Approved.
Summary:
Living in the mountains of North Carolina around 1843, Bertha Maude Anderson is always getting into trouble for dreaming bigger than what her plain name would warrant. “Fancy is as fancy does,” as her mother says, Bertha longs for adventure, travel, the kiss of a handsome stranger, and to be free of her daily responsibilities. In short, she’s a dreamer in search of adventure, and the chance to go out and take it.
That chance for adventure comes in the form of Cecil the elephant, one of the star attractions of the Romanoff Brothers’ Circus, a group of traveling gypsies that are passing through Bertha’s small mountain town. In an instant, Bertha is mesmerized by the gentle giant, and the mutual attraction with his trainer Paytre can’t be denied. So, with the help of Paytre, Cecil, and other colorful characters, Bertha impulsively runs away with the circus and becomes Inzared, Queen of the Elephant Riders. This is the story of her adventures, her loves, and her life as she struggles to bridge the world that she knows with the one of her dreams.
Overall Impressions:
Anyone who knows me knows that I absolutely adore playing the devil’s advocate. I question, search, criticize, analyze and scrutinize anything I come in contact with, searching for something that can be improved. This is also true in the books I review. While I am honest, I am also extremely exacting in what I expect to see. It’s a rare case where I simply do not find anything to criticize.
This is one of those rare cases.
Inzared-Queen of the Elephant Riders by Linda Leander is one of those books that comes along every once in a while. It has the unique ability to pull the reader not only into the story, but into the world of Cecil the elephant, Bertha, and Paytre. It entices the reader to not only enjoy the world of a traveling circus, and of mountain life, but to live it alongside the characters as well. The scenes are vivid and lively. Linda Leander has the rare ability to allow her characters’ voices to shine brighter than her own. When you hear Bertha and later Inzared telling the story, you hear her, not the author speaking through her.
Is this book for everyone? Perhaps not- it does deal with some sensitive subject matters, and if you’re not a fan of the classic “take me away” type of saga, this book might be your cup of tea. However, I can’t think of a solid reason why this book shouldn’t be added to your collection today.
Rating system:
0 Stars – Great for kindling or wasting space on your hard drive
1 Star – Perfect gift for that person you can’t stand
2 Stars – Put it on your to Borrow list
3 Stars – Buy it if you get the chance- worth a weekend read.
4 Stars – This is definitely something to add to your library
5 Stars – Impulse Buy Approved.
May 31, 2015
I really wanted to like this book more than I did. I had vowed to read more self-published or indie published books this year and Inzared, Queen of the Elephant Riders caught my eye when I went browsing through my rather out-of-control e-book collection. I made a quick visit to the author's website to confirm my suspicion that this was self-published through Amazon and came away satisfied that this was the case.
Setting aside some of the traditionally published books in my TBR, I started reading Inzared's story. I must admit the first-person narration was initially very charming. Inzared is not well schooled and she tells her story in a rather rough dialect. There were many incomplete sentences, but they were understandable in their consistency. For example, instead of saying "I saw a horse", Inzared would simply say "Saw a horse." This speech habit was, as I said, rather charming in its novelty. Unfortunately, as the chapters passed, I began to notice inconsistencies that would throw me out of the story. Inzared's grammar would get suddenly better and then worse.
I really did try to ignore my inner grammar police. Truly. I ignored misplaced commas with rather impressive diligence, if I say so myself.
Instead of getting out the proverbial red pen, I tried to focus on the story. I wanted to connect with Inzared and Paytre, and for the most part I did. I found their relationship believable. They met, they fell in love, and things happened because of it. Outside of their relationship, Inzared made friends with humans and animals alike. She became a part of the circus in more ways than one. Of course, without conflict, there is no story, so Inzared's adventures included disgruntled and sinister people who were determined to take what was hers.
Overall, I liked the story, but I did not love it and, for that reason, I probably will not be reading about Inzared again. (I think I remember that there is at least one more book about Inzared.)
Setting aside some of the traditionally published books in my TBR, I started reading Inzared's story. I must admit the first-person narration was initially very charming. Inzared is not well schooled and she tells her story in a rather rough dialect. There were many incomplete sentences, but they were understandable in their consistency. For example, instead of saying "I saw a horse", Inzared would simply say "Saw a horse." This speech habit was, as I said, rather charming in its novelty. Unfortunately, as the chapters passed, I began to notice inconsistencies that would throw me out of the story. Inzared's grammar would get suddenly better and then worse.
I really did try to ignore my inner grammar police. Truly. I ignored misplaced commas with rather impressive diligence, if I say so myself.
Instead of getting out the proverbial red pen, I tried to focus on the story. I wanted to connect with Inzared and Paytre, and for the most part I did. I found their relationship believable. They met, they fell in love, and things happened because of it. Outside of their relationship, Inzared made friends with humans and animals alike. She became a part of the circus in more ways than one. Of course, without conflict, there is no story, so Inzared's adventures included disgruntled and sinister people who were determined to take what was hers.
Overall, I liked the story, but I did not love it and, for that reason, I probably will not be reading about Inzared again. (I think I remember that there is at least one more book about Inzared.)
January 10, 2013
You know those books you used to read long, long ago, when you were a little child and every page was a revelation? That’s exactly how I felt while reading INZARED.
I rarely enjoy reading novels set anywhere other than the contemporary world. I like having a good idea of where I am and enjoy the comforts of knowing what to expect. Inzared took me far out of my comfort zone, but the story was like nothing I’ve read before.
Set in the 1840s, and on the background of a Gypsy travelling circus, Inzared is the first book in a series depicting the hard yet fulfilling life of on-the-road performers. The queen of the show is Bertha, a 16 year-old girl who leaves the comfort of a family home in the mountains of North Carolina to follow her heart, set on the elephant trainer, Paytre, and sample the excitement of life as a performer.
What made this book, for me, was the lulling voice of Inzared, who narrates in the lulling tones of a ‘true hillbilly’. The whole book sounds so authentic, the speech and its musicality, the dialogue, the descriptions – they all add up to one amazing experience. The characters are real, the emotions human and you can’t help but admire the inner strength, discipline and professionalism these Gypsies, despised by so many, exhibit every single day.
This isn’t a modern story, but it’s a good story, and it’s well written. If you like animals, performing, circus life and that particular era, you’ll love this novel. It would be an easy read for children, too, though the not fully happy-ever-after might require a warm hug from the comforting arms of a parent. Inzared receives five shiny gold stars from me. A most delightful read.
I rarely enjoy reading novels set anywhere other than the contemporary world. I like having a good idea of where I am and enjoy the comforts of knowing what to expect. Inzared took me far out of my comfort zone, but the story was like nothing I’ve read before.
Set in the 1840s, and on the background of a Gypsy travelling circus, Inzared is the first book in a series depicting the hard yet fulfilling life of on-the-road performers. The queen of the show is Bertha, a 16 year-old girl who leaves the comfort of a family home in the mountains of North Carolina to follow her heart, set on the elephant trainer, Paytre, and sample the excitement of life as a performer.
What made this book, for me, was the lulling voice of Inzared, who narrates in the lulling tones of a ‘true hillbilly’. The whole book sounds so authentic, the speech and its musicality, the dialogue, the descriptions – they all add up to one amazing experience. The characters are real, the emotions human and you can’t help but admire the inner strength, discipline and professionalism these Gypsies, despised by so many, exhibit every single day.
This isn’t a modern story, but it’s a good story, and it’s well written. If you like animals, performing, circus life and that particular era, you’ll love this novel. It would be an easy read for children, too, though the not fully happy-ever-after might require a warm hug from the comforting arms of a parent. Inzared receives five shiny gold stars from me. A most delightful read.
September 19, 2012
I have always had an interest in circus stories and even better when one gets to look behind the scenes, or Big Top, as it were. This is an adventure story with a mystery thrown in. I will admit that for a long time I figured I knew who was to blame, but I was partially wrong up until the end. Although I think part of the story was left out.
It was a love story, not just for the people but for the animals.
I could see a sequel about love found a second time.
At first the immature language put me off, but I understand what the author was going for.
I read the Kindle edition which included several glaring typos, but have learned to expect that in Kindle editions. I do believe there were a few continuance errors as well, but still the story was interesting enough to keep me moving.
It was a love story, not just for the people but for the animals.
I could see a sequel about love found a second time.
At first the immature language put me off, but I understand what the author was going for.
I read the Kindle edition which included several glaring typos, but have learned to expect that in Kindle editions. I do believe there were a few continuance errors as well, but still the story was interesting enough to keep me moving.
January 18, 2021
It was ok
I like books written about the traveling circuses in the 1800s. The story line was interesting, however some editing details would have made it more enjoyable.
On almost every page there was a word missing in the beginning of the sentence. For example it would say '"Had a twinge of guilt" instead of "I had a twinge of guilt".
The final chapter seemed like it was from a different story as it jumped in time 3 years. I found that very confusing.
I got the kindle edition for free. I am somewhat interested in the sequel, but just put it on my wish list for now.
I like books written about the traveling circuses in the 1800s. The story line was interesting, however some editing details would have made it more enjoyable.
On almost every page there was a word missing in the beginning of the sentence. For example it would say '"Had a twinge of guilt" instead of "I had a twinge of guilt".
The final chapter seemed like it was from a different story as it jumped in time 3 years. I found that very confusing.
I got the kindle edition for free. I am somewhat interested in the sequel, but just put it on my wish list for now.
May 4, 2018
This was an interesting story. The writing style reflected the voice of the main character, which I liked. There were a few details that should have been caught and fixed by editing (not just typos but story details), but they didn't affect the overall story. The resolution of a conflict came very fast at the end, without much explanation, but it was still a good story. I look forward to reading the 2nd book, because this one ended too fast, without some resolution.
April 20, 2021
Fascinating intro to Gypsy Circus life
The main character runs away to join the circus-like I dreamt of doing in my tween years. All central characters develop as the book progresses. Enjoyed it and read it in an evening. Recommend.
The main character runs away to join the circus-like I dreamt of doing in my tween years. All central characters develop as the book progresses. Enjoyed it and read it in an evening. Recommend.
March 20, 2017
An easy read as I Lear out my kindle. There were many grammar errors with omitted words but the story was easy to follow.
September 24, 2012
Frustrated and longing to live a different life - one that doesn't involving tending a farm and marrying a farm boy - Bertha Anderson's hillbilly life changes when the circus comes to town.
Not expecting to ever see it, she is surprised when her Ma agrees to go and along with her father and older brother Ezra, they enter a colorful world. There their senses are assaulted with the exciting smells, sights and sounds - popcorn, animals and side show curiosities. There Bertha meets Cecil. A beautiful, wrinkled elephant. Also an attraction, but just to her, is Cecil's handsome trainer Paytre (pronounced Peter).
In a moment of recklessness, Bertha makes the decision to leave the farm behind and join the Romanoff Brothers Circus. From that brave moment onward, her life becomes the adventure and excitement that she yearned for. Noticing the affinity and genuine affection between Cecil and Bertha, the owners ask Paytre to train her to perform acrobatic maneuvers atop Cecil. Bertha, always hating her name, is renamed as Inzared, Queen of the Elephant Riders - the star attraction.
Hard work and commitment ensues as well as the growing love for Paytre. A love that she's unsure of. At 17 what does she know of love? Together, with Cecil, they become a huge hit but life in the circus isn't all about performances. Inzared must learn and accept the gypsy lifestyle, plus she was not born into the 'family' so is initially ostracized by many - they don't trust outsiders. Will Inzared be able to gain approval from the gypsy clan? Would her family forgive her for abandoning them, who exactly is sabotaging the circus and will the sense of foreboding that she can't shake come true?
This turn of the century story is a colorful tale of almost everyone's dream - running away with the circus. Leander's main characters are lively, charming and amiable. Inzared/Bertha has a beguiling innocence yet is so driven. Her compassion for Cecil is endearing as is her budding love for Paytre. The circus/Roma family met along the way are almost stereotypical - the midget, the bearded lady, the tough but fair owners - yet its typicality is what makes it a charming and absorbing read.
A lengthy novel, for the most part I really enjoyed this story. I was engaged from the beginning and immediately liked Inzared and Paytre, even Cecil. The details of circus life as well as that of the Roma people are expressive and creates a vibrant atmosphere. The mystery of sabotage, the deep and passionate love that unfolds throughout is enticing but I feel that it has been a little lost by its overall length. A couple of subplots are started then ignored and the ending left me a little wanting. I didn't understand that this is a 'Part 1' at the time of reading, so now that I know, I can forgive the abrupt ending.
Despite the moments of repetition and Inzared's hillbilly voice sounding at times more educated that one would expect her to be, the story is good and the author has created a world in which to escape to. A recommended read for those who like the circus and romance.
I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author to review. The opinions expressed are own and I am not expected to give a positive critique.
Not expecting to ever see it, she is surprised when her Ma agrees to go and along with her father and older brother Ezra, they enter a colorful world. There their senses are assaulted with the exciting smells, sights and sounds - popcorn, animals and side show curiosities. There Bertha meets Cecil. A beautiful, wrinkled elephant. Also an attraction, but just to her, is Cecil's handsome trainer Paytre (pronounced Peter).
In a moment of recklessness, Bertha makes the decision to leave the farm behind and join the Romanoff Brothers Circus. From that brave moment onward, her life becomes the adventure and excitement that she yearned for. Noticing the affinity and genuine affection between Cecil and Bertha, the owners ask Paytre to train her to perform acrobatic maneuvers atop Cecil. Bertha, always hating her name, is renamed as Inzared, Queen of the Elephant Riders - the star attraction.
Hard work and commitment ensues as well as the growing love for Paytre. A love that she's unsure of. At 17 what does she know of love? Together, with Cecil, they become a huge hit but life in the circus isn't all about performances. Inzared must learn and accept the gypsy lifestyle, plus she was not born into the 'family' so is initially ostracized by many - they don't trust outsiders. Will Inzared be able to gain approval from the gypsy clan? Would her family forgive her for abandoning them, who exactly is sabotaging the circus and will the sense of foreboding that she can't shake come true?
This turn of the century story is a colorful tale of almost everyone's dream - running away with the circus. Leander's main characters are lively, charming and amiable. Inzared/Bertha has a beguiling innocence yet is so driven. Her compassion for Cecil is endearing as is her budding love for Paytre. The circus/Roma family met along the way are almost stereotypical - the midget, the bearded lady, the tough but fair owners - yet its typicality is what makes it a charming and absorbing read.
A lengthy novel, for the most part I really enjoyed this story. I was engaged from the beginning and immediately liked Inzared and Paytre, even Cecil. The details of circus life as well as that of the Roma people are expressive and creates a vibrant atmosphere. The mystery of sabotage, the deep and passionate love that unfolds throughout is enticing but I feel that it has been a little lost by its overall length. A couple of subplots are started then ignored and the ending left me a little wanting. I didn't understand that this is a 'Part 1' at the time of reading, so now that I know, I can forgive the abrupt ending.
Despite the moments of repetition and Inzared's hillbilly voice sounding at times more educated that one would expect her to be, the story is good and the author has created a world in which to escape to. A recommended read for those who like the circus and romance.
I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author to review. The opinions expressed are own and I am not expected to give a positive critique.
December 29, 2012
At some point in time, we all have an urge to run away and "join the circus". Whether or not it's an actual circus is beside the point. We want to get away from where we are and explore a different type of life.
Bertha Maude Anderson does just that. A self-described "hillbilly" eking out a hard life in the hills of 1843 North Carolina, she dreams of seeing the world rather than being stuck in her present situation. Being a young teenager with few choices in her life, she is desperate to escape constant chores and the same existence her parents have had.
When the circus, with the exotic animals, an elephant named Cecil, and the dark-eyed Paytre ("Peter") comes to town, she is literally swept up into their lifestyle. Without a thought aforehand, she drops everything and joins the circus, becoming "Inzared, Queen of the Elephant Riders".
Being Gagi (non-gypsy) in a gypsy circus world is not an easy life at first, but eventually she is accepted by most of the troupe. Especially Paytre. Their relationship becomes the most important aspect of her existence. He helps her expand her abilities to ride and do tricks on Cecil, the elephant who seems to love her deeply.
Yet not all is roses and sunshine in their world. Someone is sabotaging the circus, and it takes a tragedy to find the culprits and solve the mystery. As a result, no one's lives will be the same.
Once I got going on this book, I found myself unable to stop. L. Leander's descriptions weave like a mist through the mind and hold the reader's attention. One description, among so many, stands out as a terrific example: "The fire took on a life of its own as it danced and crackled. Red and yellow flames leapt high into the sky. Basking in its glow were those who made music, the fiddle and guitar joining and parting like two hands clapping in perfect rhythm." Sheer verbal music.
The details of gypsy and circus life were simply fantastic. The author seems to have gypsy blood herself, or she did some painstaking research. The characters were all very believable and well-developed, and the storyline was tightly written. The sympathetic ones were people a reader could really like, and the baddies were definitely written in that fashion.
Another example of L. Leander's suspenseful, well-written style was a chapter in which the circus is performing. The way she wrote the scene, especially coming after sabotage was discovered, made me hold my breath and peek at the next couple of lines, sure that something terrible was going to happen. When it didn't, I felt myself finally relaxing, it was that real.
L. Leander's book is well worth the time to read it, and I hope she writes more. I want to hear more about the exploits of "Inzared, Queen of the Elephant Riders".
Bertha Maude Anderson does just that. A self-described "hillbilly" eking out a hard life in the hills of 1843 North Carolina, she dreams of seeing the world rather than being stuck in her present situation. Being a young teenager with few choices in her life, she is desperate to escape constant chores and the same existence her parents have had.
When the circus, with the exotic animals, an elephant named Cecil, and the dark-eyed Paytre ("Peter") comes to town, she is literally swept up into their lifestyle. Without a thought aforehand, she drops everything and joins the circus, becoming "Inzared, Queen of the Elephant Riders".
Being Gagi (non-gypsy) in a gypsy circus world is not an easy life at first, but eventually she is accepted by most of the troupe. Especially Paytre. Their relationship becomes the most important aspect of her existence. He helps her expand her abilities to ride and do tricks on Cecil, the elephant who seems to love her deeply.
Yet not all is roses and sunshine in their world. Someone is sabotaging the circus, and it takes a tragedy to find the culprits and solve the mystery. As a result, no one's lives will be the same.
Once I got going on this book, I found myself unable to stop. L. Leander's descriptions weave like a mist through the mind and hold the reader's attention. One description, among so many, stands out as a terrific example: "The fire took on a life of its own as it danced and crackled. Red and yellow flames leapt high into the sky. Basking in its glow were those who made music, the fiddle and guitar joining and parting like two hands clapping in perfect rhythm." Sheer verbal music.
The details of gypsy and circus life were simply fantastic. The author seems to have gypsy blood herself, or she did some painstaking research. The characters were all very believable and well-developed, and the storyline was tightly written. The sympathetic ones were people a reader could really like, and the baddies were definitely written in that fashion.
Another example of L. Leander's suspenseful, well-written style was a chapter in which the circus is performing. The way she wrote the scene, especially coming after sabotage was discovered, made me hold my breath and peek at the next couple of lines, sure that something terrible was going to happen. When it didn't, I felt myself finally relaxing, it was that real.
L. Leander's book is well worth the time to read it, and I hope she writes more. I want to hear more about the exploits of "Inzared, Queen of the Elephant Riders".
November 30, 2012
As I love animals and am fascinated by circus life, reading “Inzared: Queen of the Elephant Riders” was a very special treat for me. When Bertha meets Paytre and his Elephant, Cecil, it is love at first sight for both the boy and the elephant. Roped in to act as stand in for the indisposed elephant rider, Bertha - now renamed Inzared - feels that she could make the circus her life. She is a hillbilly, not afraid of hard work and tough enough to fit in with the Gypsies. There is a traitor in their midst however. Equipment is damaged, perfectly trained and trustworthy animals act up and people are getting hurt. Despite all this, Vadoma, the fortune teller and psychic, feels that Inzared has more to offer than doing tricks on the back of an elephant.
This book gave me a very good idea of what circus life in the nineteenth century must have been like. Apart from the sabotage that seems to be going on in this circus, they must still cope with the dangers and mishaps that can happen during performances or on the long road between towns. Fording rivers with heavily laden wagons and panicking horses, crossing rugged mountains and tending their own sick animals and people, are just some of the hardships described in this story.
The comfortable pace of the story gave me time to acquaint myself thoroughly with the numerous colorful characters. Incidents of sabotage and other mishaps are cleverly spaced throughout the story so that I never knew when and where disaster would strike next. This suspenseful atmosphere is masterfully balanced by the romantic relationship between the main characters. Extremely interesting Gypsy beliefs, customs and ceremonies are described throughout the book. As this is a very realistic story, I must warn that you would probably need a box of kleenex on your journey with the Romanoff Brothers Circus.
The first person narration in which “Inzared: Queen of the Elephant Riders” is written is completely unique and reflects just how a farm girl in 1843 might have thought. I highly recommend this book to readers of all ages and hope that we'll soon see more equally brilliant books from this gifted author. (Ellen Fritz)
This book gave me a very good idea of what circus life in the nineteenth century must have been like. Apart from the sabotage that seems to be going on in this circus, they must still cope with the dangers and mishaps that can happen during performances or on the long road between towns. Fording rivers with heavily laden wagons and panicking horses, crossing rugged mountains and tending their own sick animals and people, are just some of the hardships described in this story.
The comfortable pace of the story gave me time to acquaint myself thoroughly with the numerous colorful characters. Incidents of sabotage and other mishaps are cleverly spaced throughout the story so that I never knew when and where disaster would strike next. This suspenseful atmosphere is masterfully balanced by the romantic relationship between the main characters. Extremely interesting Gypsy beliefs, customs and ceremonies are described throughout the book. As this is a very realistic story, I must warn that you would probably need a box of kleenex on your journey with the Romanoff Brothers Circus.
The first person narration in which “Inzared: Queen of the Elephant Riders” is written is completely unique and reflects just how a farm girl in 1843 might have thought. I highly recommend this book to readers of all ages and hope that we'll soon see more equally brilliant books from this gifted author. (Ellen Fritz)
September 23, 2012
INZARED,
QUEEN OF THE ELEPHANT RIDERS
Written by L.Leander
Reviewed by R. Murry
We all wanted to run away to join the circus at one time or another – to follow our dream. It is a difficult decision that few, who are not happy with their present situation, take. Ms. Leander’s character makes that choice that affects those around her and her farming family forever.
She leaves her mountain hard working family, without telling a soul, and joins the Romanoff gypsy family circus for the mesmerizing adventure of being a headliner – an elephant rider. The author contrasts the two lives of the young lady, soon to be woman, throughout this novel. Both are hardworking endeavors.
However, Bertha, now INZARED, proclaimed by the gypsy ring leader, finds out what many of us never have - work is not work, when you love what you’re doing. Inzared trains and performs as only a gypsy could, to the applause of her new family and the audiences she and her elephant’s act hypnotizes. She is a natural on top of a pachyderm.
There is a love story here to the point of pleasant boredom, but it works all in all. Paytre, owner of the elephant Cecil, falls in love with Inzared; they marry; have a child; and buy the red wagon they always wanted. Ms. Leander does a much better job at romance than I do. She details the love affair with cute prose, including the Cecil – Inzared love affair.
Lurking in the background is a spoiler, who disrupts the function of the circus. This is brought to a conclusion in the last act with an event that literally brings down the Big Top.
This is a read for Romance and Circus’ lovers. And we all like to laugh and cry. Ms. Linda Leander does the deed.
QUEEN OF THE ELEPHANT RIDERS
Written by L.Leander
Reviewed by R. Murry
We all wanted to run away to join the circus at one time or another – to follow our dream. It is a difficult decision that few, who are not happy with their present situation, take. Ms. Leander’s character makes that choice that affects those around her and her farming family forever.
She leaves her mountain hard working family, without telling a soul, and joins the Romanoff gypsy family circus for the mesmerizing adventure of being a headliner – an elephant rider. The author contrasts the two lives of the young lady, soon to be woman, throughout this novel. Both are hardworking endeavors.
However, Bertha, now INZARED, proclaimed by the gypsy ring leader, finds out what many of us never have - work is not work, when you love what you’re doing. Inzared trains and performs as only a gypsy could, to the applause of her new family and the audiences she and her elephant’s act hypnotizes. She is a natural on top of a pachyderm.
There is a love story here to the point of pleasant boredom, but it works all in all. Paytre, owner of the elephant Cecil, falls in love with Inzared; they marry; have a child; and buy the red wagon they always wanted. Ms. Leander does a much better job at romance than I do. She details the love affair with cute prose, including the Cecil – Inzared love affair.
Lurking in the background is a spoiler, who disrupts the function of the circus. This is brought to a conclusion in the last act with an event that literally brings down the Big Top.
This is a read for Romance and Circus’ lovers. And we all like to laugh and cry. Ms. Linda Leander does the deed.
October 1, 2012
Inzared, Queen of the Elephant Riders is a wonderful debut release from L. Leander. The story follows Bertha Maude Anderson, a girl who grew up in the Appalachian Mountains of North Carolina in the 1800s. She is unsure of her place in the world, feeling she wants more than her small town home in Appalachia. When a gypsy circus comes through her town, she falls in love with the lifestyle the gypsy troupe leads--as well as being intrigued by a young man named Paytre and his elephant, Cecil--and finds herself convinced to leave her home and family behind to join The Romanoff Brothers Circus as Inzared, Queen of the Elephant Riders. The story is told from Inzared's point of view as she assimilates into they gypsy culture, finds love, uncovers a mystery that threatens the circus and the well-being of its performers and animals, and settles into her namesake as Queen of the Elephant Riders.
L.Leander has done an excellent job of accurately capturing the time period and the gypsy culture and you are truly pulled into the world of a travelling gypsy circus in the 1800s. The characters are very likable and realistic with dialogue that feels natural and fits the characters well. You really get to know the characters and connect with them. The story has a little bit of everything you could want in a book: romance, mystery, suspense, adventure, tragedy, and comedy. This is truly a book that can be enjoyed by just about anyone, no matter your typical genre preference.
This is L.Leander's debut novel, but from the quality of the writing, you would never guess it. Inzared is wonderfully written, plotted, and edited. Once I had started it, it was a challenge just to put it down. If this is only the beginning of what she has to offer, I can't wait to see what's next!
L.Leander has done an excellent job of accurately capturing the time period and the gypsy culture and you are truly pulled into the world of a travelling gypsy circus in the 1800s. The characters are very likable and realistic with dialogue that feels natural and fits the characters well. You really get to know the characters and connect with them. The story has a little bit of everything you could want in a book: romance, mystery, suspense, adventure, tragedy, and comedy. This is truly a book that can be enjoyed by just about anyone, no matter your typical genre preference.
This is L.Leander's debut novel, but from the quality of the writing, you would never guess it. Inzared is wonderfully written, plotted, and edited. Once I had started it, it was a challenge just to put it down. If this is only the beginning of what she has to offer, I can't wait to see what's next!
August 28, 2012
It seemed to me that the first half was much stronger than the last -- some bits got dropped and weren't tied up in the ending -- i.e. Lileth who was so in love with Peter. She just seemed to disappear about 60-70%.
There were a few inconsistencies that bother those of us who are detail oriented -- In one place they are looking for Star fish and sand dollars. Two pages later it's Sea Horses and Sand Dollars -- certainly not vital but disconcerting -- as were a couple of references, unimportant to the story but they didn't work -- early in the book, this uneducated mountain girl whose only exposure to the rest of the world involves taking eggs to town on Saturday to see them at the store and learned to read from her mother in a bare-bones cabin says her father works "Tirelessly" Later in the story that use of that word wouldn't have been noticed but during that first build up of situation and character, real hard or too hard would have been more fitting to the girl and the times and place.
In a later section when the circus comes to town, stern, quiet, conservative father is as excited as the children to go to the circus -- why? What triggered that unlikely response in that man?
And at the circus, Bertha sees an animal which she identifies because she has seen it's picture in a book. Now, no school, no library, the general store sold eggs and flour and feed and calico -- her home is a cabin with one room, divided for sleeping by curtains -- Where did the book of wild animals come from?
I mention this small distractions hoping that when the author revises she can have a heads up on things we've found that really damage her very strong story.
Well done.
There were a few inconsistencies that bother those of us who are detail oriented -- In one place they are looking for Star fish and sand dollars. Two pages later it's Sea Horses and Sand Dollars -- certainly not vital but disconcerting -- as were a couple of references, unimportant to the story but they didn't work -- early in the book, this uneducated mountain girl whose only exposure to the rest of the world involves taking eggs to town on Saturday to see them at the store and learned to read from her mother in a bare-bones cabin says her father works "Tirelessly" Later in the story that use of that word wouldn't have been noticed but during that first build up of situation and character, real hard or too hard would have been more fitting to the girl and the times and place.
In a later section when the circus comes to town, stern, quiet, conservative father is as excited as the children to go to the circus -- why? What triggered that unlikely response in that man?
And at the circus, Bertha sees an animal which she identifies because she has seen it's picture in a book. Now, no school, no library, the general store sold eggs and flour and feed and calico -- her home is a cabin with one room, divided for sleeping by curtains -- Where did the book of wild animals come from?
I mention this small distractions hoping that when the author revises she can have a heads up on things we've found that really damage her very strong story.
Well done.
January 20, 2013
Bertha is a 17-year-old farm girl from the Appalachians. Her life consists of working on the family farm and preparing to marry a local farm boy and start a family. When a Gypsy circus visits her home town, Bertha finds herself getting whisked into the wonders of this foreign culture. Her uneventful life swiftly turns into an awesome adventure.
I really enjoy the time period of this story and the setting. L. Leander does a wonderful job creating a story set in 1843 in the desolate mountains of North Carolina. I enjoy the descriptions of the farm life as well as the colorful environment surrounding the nomadic gypsies.
After running away with the The Romanoff Brothers Circus, Bertha transforms into INZARED, Queen of the Elephant Riders. She bonds with the Cecil, the circus’ elephant, and his trainer, Paytre. Inzared has to prove herself to be worthy of traveling with the family of gypsies, since it is taboo for Gaji and Gypsy to mix.
Unexplainable things begin to happen to the circus animals, and the performers realize there is someone trying to sabotage the Gypsies. The book is overflowing with mystery, adventure, and passion. Inzared faces hardships, discovers truths, and becomes an unstoppable woman.
I really enjoy the time period of this story and the setting. L. Leander does a wonderful job creating a story set in 1843 in the desolate mountains of North Carolina. I enjoy the descriptions of the farm life as well as the colorful environment surrounding the nomadic gypsies.
After running away with the The Romanoff Brothers Circus, Bertha transforms into INZARED, Queen of the Elephant Riders. She bonds with the Cecil, the circus’ elephant, and his trainer, Paytre. Inzared has to prove herself to be worthy of traveling with the family of gypsies, since it is taboo for Gaji and Gypsy to mix.
Unexplainable things begin to happen to the circus animals, and the performers realize there is someone trying to sabotage the Gypsies. The book is overflowing with mystery, adventure, and passion. Inzared faces hardships, discovers truths, and becomes an unstoppable woman.
October 23, 2012
Inzared Is a Heartwarming Tale of Innocence and Love
L. Leander writes with grace in this beautiful story about a young girl finding herself by joining a circus during the mid 1800’s.
Unlike many narratives that warm our hearts with new romance, this one takes on much more.
The love between our protagonist and the circus elephant, Cecil.
Leander captures the relationship between Inzared and the circus star, Cecil in a way that animal lovers will identify with. The communication between the two certainly strikes a chord with the way my dog looks at me!
Leander fancifully represents the essence of the times, the gypsy life, and all the hardships they endured. The young love Inzared shares with Cecil’s owner brings back memories of my yesteryear.
Things cannot be all be hunky dory, however. Leander adds an element of mystery when things begin to go wrong in this close community, adding a who-done-it component to the storyline.
I loved reading her elegant words, and am confident this will be a popular series. Good going, L. Leander. Bring the next installment to us readers soon, please.
L. Leander writes with grace in this beautiful story about a young girl finding herself by joining a circus during the mid 1800’s.
Unlike many narratives that warm our hearts with new romance, this one takes on much more.
The love between our protagonist and the circus elephant, Cecil.
Leander captures the relationship between Inzared and the circus star, Cecil in a way that animal lovers will identify with. The communication between the two certainly strikes a chord with the way my dog looks at me!
Leander fancifully represents the essence of the times, the gypsy life, and all the hardships they endured. The young love Inzared shares with Cecil’s owner brings back memories of my yesteryear.
Things cannot be all be hunky dory, however. Leander adds an element of mystery when things begin to go wrong in this close community, adding a who-done-it component to the storyline.
I loved reading her elegant words, and am confident this will be a popular series. Good going, L. Leander. Bring the next installment to us readers soon, please.
September 11, 2012
I got this book for free one day and it turned out to be an amazing gift. I was hesitant about reading it at first because a few years ago I tried reading "Water for Elephants" and didn't like it. Maybe I didn't read enough. I started this book and almost quit a couple of times, it took me until about 40% of the book to really get into it. Once I got over the hump, this story took off like crazy. I couldn't put it down. It is the story of Bertha who ran away from home as a teenager and joined the circus. It's about entering a world she knew nothing about and becomming a star. It is about unconditional love (for an elephant) and yet feeling like you never fit it. Ms. Leander does an amazing job writing such vivid descriptions about everything, you can see it perfectly in your head. I really got caught up in this book and enjoyed it very much. Even if it isn't your usual genre (it wasn't mine), I highly recommend giving it a chance because it is such a good, good story.
January 30, 2013
Inzared-Queen of the Elephant Riders by L. Leander is a story almost every child who has been under the Big Top has dreamed of- running away to join the circus.
A young girl from the mountains has bigger dreams than living the hard, desperate life of a farmer’s wife. She wants to see the world.
While attending her first circus she meets Paytre, a young handsome gypsy man who invites her to run away and ride an elephant in the Romanoff Brothers Circus. She leaves that night and never looks back.
L. Leander’s story took me to the sights, sounds and aromas of life in a traveling circus. Bertha- Inzared- quickly learns to love the animals, the people and especially Paytre. Cecil, the elephant, bonds with Inzared and a lasting love comes to the beautiful elephant rider.
I found the circus life filled with intrigue, joy and danger. A beautifully written tale by the author.
This is a story you don’t want to miss! From the perfect cover to the last sentence I was held spellbound.
A young girl from the mountains has bigger dreams than living the hard, desperate life of a farmer’s wife. She wants to see the world.
While attending her first circus she meets Paytre, a young handsome gypsy man who invites her to run away and ride an elephant in the Romanoff Brothers Circus. She leaves that night and never looks back.
L. Leander’s story took me to the sights, sounds and aromas of life in a traveling circus. Bertha- Inzared- quickly learns to love the animals, the people and especially Paytre. Cecil, the elephant, bonds with Inzared and a lasting love comes to the beautiful elephant rider.
I found the circus life filled with intrigue, joy and danger. A beautifully written tale by the author.
This is a story you don’t want to miss! From the perfect cover to the last sentence I was held spellbound.
May 13, 2013
I am not usually a fan of historical fiction, but I LOVE the circus.
This is the story of Bertha, a hillbilly teen with a wild imagination and not much work ethic. She falls in love with Cecil, the circus elephant, and his trainer, Paytre. She decides to run off with them and join the Gypsy circus. She finds a home, a family, and new name, Inzared.
The love between Inzared, Paytre and Cecil is wonderful. They have a connection that few can make. I enjoyed reading about their relationship and its growth. I cried when tragedy struck them.
Leander is a great story teller. The story moved along at a nice pace. The imagery made me see and smell and feel the circus along with Inzared and Paytre.
The story is written in first person and her illiteracy at the beginning is a little annoying. As she grows as a person her dialogue matures.
I would recommend this book to anyone with a vivid imagination.
This is the story of Bertha, a hillbilly teen with a wild imagination and not much work ethic. She falls in love with Cecil, the circus elephant, and his trainer, Paytre. She decides to run off with them and join the Gypsy circus. She finds a home, a family, and new name, Inzared.
The love between Inzared, Paytre and Cecil is wonderful. They have a connection that few can make. I enjoyed reading about their relationship and its growth. I cried when tragedy struck them.
Leander is a great story teller. The story moved along at a nice pace. The imagery made me see and smell and feel the circus along with Inzared and Paytre.
The story is written in first person and her illiteracy at the beginning is a little annoying. As she grows as a person her dialogue matures.
I would recommend this book to anyone with a vivid imagination.
November 21, 2012
The first half of the book was fun and fresh and felt like another Jacky Faber-type story. The first half of the book gets 4 or 5 stars. But then....
Just a bit over halfway through... the book becomes disjointed. Even if it hadn't been for the terrible ending, I wouldn't have liked this book because it felt like the author couldn't pay enough attention to it to make it move smoothly anymore. The villain was obvious from the beginning, which is fine with me, but all of the red herrings were forgotten and there was no explanation for them. Now that I see that this says "book 1" I'm thinking all will be explained later, but I wish she'd finished this story in this book and then moved on to a new story in the next book.
But really, it's the ending that ruined everything.
Not recommended.
Just a bit over halfway through... the book becomes disjointed. Even if it hadn't been for the terrible ending, I wouldn't have liked this book because it felt like the author couldn't pay enough attention to it to make it move smoothly anymore. The villain was obvious from the beginning, which is fine with me, but all of the red herrings were forgotten and there was no explanation for them. Now that I see that this says "book 1" I'm thinking all will be explained later, but I wish she'd finished this story in this book and then moved on to a new story in the next book.
But really, it's the ending that ruined everything.
Not recommended.
September 28, 2012
Inzared, Queen of the Elephant Riders is a charming story of a girl who does what many of us have dreamed of doing; she runs away with the circus. The story is told through the eyes of the main character, Bertha. L. Leander does an excellent job of developing the colorful gypsy characters. She paints a vivid picture of what life under the big top was like for circus performers in the 1840s. The romance between Bertha and Paytre, the elephant trainer, is sweet and romantic. There were some repetitive sections through the middle of the story that slowed down its flow. In addition, Bertha’s speech varied between an uneducated girl from the mountains, and an educated city girl. Also, the ending was wrapped up too quickly. Overall, this is an entertaining look at a different way of life.
May 28, 2013
What a beautiful surprise! As a Gypsy I'm one of the "Gypsy Police" of the written word and recently wrote a review about a book that probably set the Roma cause back years. This book is completely balanced, depicting Romani/Gypsy people like all people: some are good, some are not so good, some are evil. Lots of good description about the customs and there was one in particular I had never known. Having a circus grandfather (whom I only met a few times) gave me a glimpse into his probable life. Many of the main characters are wonderful and flawed like most of us, yet gentle--including Cecil the elephant--and I believe this book is suitable for all ages. Best of all, when I got to the last page in my kindle, I saw that there is a sequel and I promptly bought it and immediately started reading. It flawlessly begins where this one left off and will be just as much fun to read.
December 4, 2012
Overall I really liked this book- how can you not love a story about the circus!? It was sort of predictable with all of the really obvious foreshadowing, but it moved at a good pace and the other characters kept it interesting; and even though I knew what was coming it was still really sad! The ending did feel a little rushed but not enough to make me not like the book. The author tries to create a language for Inzared by randomly writing in sentence fragments and it's more disruptive than character building. I'll definitely read the next in the series but I'm curious to see how it keeps up over time. I got a free Kindle version and there were some typos and grammatical errors but, hey, it was free!
January 4, 2013
INZARED, Queen of the Elephant Riders (Kindle Edition)
This is a cute story of a girl who finds life as a hillbilly stifling and wants to see the world. Bertha goes to the circus with her family and is fascinated by the elephant Cecil. The next day she runs away with the circus. The characters are well developed and the historical info seems accurate. I was just a little confused as to why her family did not look for her when she ran away. I loved the emphasis on superstition and prejudice (both by the townsfolk and the Gypsies). The story was flowing nicely and I was caught up in it until the end. I agree that it seemed rushed to be finished. I am glad there will be another book! I would love to learn what happens next.
This is a cute story of a girl who finds life as a hillbilly stifling and wants to see the world. Bertha goes to the circus with her family and is fascinated by the elephant Cecil. The next day she runs away with the circus. The characters are well developed and the historical info seems accurate. I was just a little confused as to why her family did not look for her when she ran away. I loved the emphasis on superstition and prejudice (both by the townsfolk and the Gypsies). The story was flowing nicely and I was caught up in it until the end. I agree that it seemed rushed to be finished. I am glad there will be another book! I would love to learn what happens next.
February 8, 2016
This was a nice read with an innocence that I feel is suitable for a YA audience. It was warming in places, and in others very sad. I know very little about the language and customs of the Romany circus travellers in the US, back in the 1840s, so it was good to learn something new – acknowledging that I was reading a work of fiction. The concept of running away from home and joining a circus troupe took me back to childhood memories of books written about Circuses in the 1950s and 1960s. The life Inzared carved out for herself was one that would not have been lightly undertaken, since the acceptance in a different cultural society would have been a daunting prospect. It will be interesting to find out how Inzared, Queen of the Elephants matures in a subsequent novel.
May 22, 2014
This did not hold my attention AT ALL. For the most part I was extremely distracted by the poor editing. Nobody else has complained in their reviews, so I'm assuming it must have been a flaw on the version I downloaded on my Kindle. For example on almost every single page there are words missing at the beginning of a sentence. Instead of saying "I had a twinge of guilt...." - It says "Had a twinge of guilt...." or instead of saying "I realized it was easier.....:" It reads "Realized it was easier.....". Maybe it's suppose to be showing that she is a country bumpkin but it just wasn't consistent enough. All the other sentences were fine
I usually try not to judge a book by its editing and rarely does it bother me, but this one drove me insane !
I usually try not to judge a book by its editing and rarely does it bother me, but this one drove me insane !
November 24, 2012
I enjoyed this book immensely! The author developed each character in such a way that I couldn't help falling in love with each one. Well, except for the one girl that was so mean to Inzared - I totally disliked her (probably because I had a few of those types of people in my life!).
Elephants are my most favorite animals so naturally, I loved reading about this one. Inzared was fortunate to get to know her elephant as she trained to ride on his back and do tricks etc. The only thing I didn't like about the story is that Inzared's husband died after a freak accident. It left me sad and empty.
Elephants are my most favorite animals so naturally, I loved reading about this one. Inzared was fortunate to get to know her elephant as she trained to ride on his back and do tricks etc. The only thing I didn't like about the story is that Inzared's husband died after a freak accident. It left me sad and empty.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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