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Who is the Hero?
Cash McCoy, Age: 27, Occupation: Navy SEAL
~ Cash is the typical alpha SEAL, but I didn’t really feel like I knew much about him beyond that.
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Who is the Heroine?
Jennifer Scott, Age: 26, Occupation: none
~ Jen considered herself the family fuck-up. Her mom was a nurse, her dad a retired admiral and her brother a Navy SEAL. And Jenny?? Well, she couldn’t figure what she wanted to do with her life. Add to that, she got involved with a guy who ended up stalking her. So yup, she knew she was the family failure.
Plot overview:
~ Jen’s last boyfriend doesn’t want to let her go, even when she’s made it extremely clear she wants nothing more to do with him. When he turns a bit stalker-ish, Jen‘s protective older brother enlists Cash (his fellow Navy SEAL) to stand guard. Of course the brother is adamant about “hands off his little sister”.
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“One more thing I forgot to mention. Keep your hands off my sister.”
Cash frowned. “I wasn’t planning on—”
“I’m serious. You touch her, and I’ll drown you. Your building’s got a pool in the back, so I won’t have to go far.”
“You’ll drown me? That’s the most creative death you can come up with?”
“I’m in the navy. I do my best work in the water. And don’t think I’m kidding, McCoy. Touch my little sister and you’re a dead man. She’s off-limits.”
But of course no matter how much Cash tries to resist, the little temptress Jen is someone he can’t say no to.
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The following are my thoughts about this book:
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* * I usually like Elle Kennedy books, but some of the female secondary characters just felt like their only purpose was to be used for the guys pleasure.
Right or wrong, my first impression of a couple of the girls was a lack self respect and the men were just manwhores. Maybe if I would’ve read previous books and understood that this is the tone of the series I might’ve felt a different way. But just jumping into this book first and then learning it’s really all about sex and threesomes, my first impression was negative.
* * Cash has a descriptive threesome scene before he actually sleeps with Jen and it annoyed me. It was two days after he “almost” slept with her. So he had already met, been somewhat intimate with her and then he had this threesome. It won’t bother some people, but I don’t like my hero to have sex with other women after he’s met the heroine.
* * apparently Everyone in this series needs to have threesomes. The book started out with Savannah, Matt and Aidan. Next was Vanessa, Dylan, Cash. Then Annabelle mentioned her threeesomes with Ryan, it was mentioned how Carson used to have threesomes with Garrett. Then Cash, Jen and Dylan rounded out the threesomes for this book. Honestly, it became redundant rather than exciting and enticing.
* * there’s a lot of sex in this story and I thought it overpowered the plot. I’m not one to shy away from sex, but it seemed like every chapter someone was getting lucky or their pants were tenting / panties were wet because they were so turned on.
* * I needed character depth. It was very one dimensional
* * there was a secondary plot with one of the couples from the previous book having marital problems. About as much time was spent on the stalker story as the other couple’s marriage issue. However, no great depth on that plot either and it was apparently resolved with communication 😏
* * I didn’t know hitting someone over the head with a frying pan classified as taking self-defense. Let’s start with this comment…..
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“The self-defense training my family shoved down my throat paid off, and I got out of the situation with nothing but a black eye when it could’ve been a lot worse.”
The situation - Jen was being attacked and the guy was kind of kicking her ass. She ends up being pushed into the stove and then this…..
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“She flung out her arm in search of something to grab onto. As Brendan pushed her against the stove, cursing and spitting out angry accusations, Jen fought to escape his grasp. When her hand collided with the metal handle of the cast-iron pan on the counter, triumph and relief exploded like fireworks in her gut. She gripped the handle, then swung the pan at Brendan’s head.”
So, I think of self-defense as knowing how to defend yourself when you’re being attacked. Like kneeing someone in the balls, or punching someone in the face, or knowing how to get out of a hold. I believe any person with common sense is going to know how to grab a cast-iron skillet from the stove and use it as a weapon. The fact that she used that example to say “my self-defense classes really paid off”, was idiotic.
**Overview:**
- Content Warning: if you don’t like ménage stories, stay away
- Setting: San Diego
- Do you need to read previous books in series?: I suppose you don’t have to read previous books, but just be aware all of the secondary characters are from other books.
- POV: Dual POV
- Tropes: military SEAL’s little sister
- Hero likeable? I liked Cash but there was nothing extraordinary about him
- heroine likeable? Jen grew on me. Her lack of ambition because she was afraid of failure was a disappointing characteristic for her to have.
- h virgin? No
- First time they kiss: 6%
- First time they sleep together: 37%
- Safe sex? Yes. Condoms were used
- First time they say I Love You 90%
- steamy? Yes. i would classify this as erotica
- Chemistry? yes, they had good chemistry
- OW/OM drama?Yes. Jen’s ex is a stalker psycho
- H/h cheat? No
- Time apart? No
- Did I skip pages? Sorry to say I skipped some of the bedroom scenes. I was looking for more substance than how many orgasms someone had
- Big secrets? No
- Did I cry? No
- Did I laugh? No
- Did I swoon🥰? I liked Cash, but I didn’t do any swooning
- Cliffhanger? No
- HEA? HFN
- Epilogue? No
- Recommend? I wasn’t that impressed.
Quotes:
“You know, I just had a thought,” he drawled.
“Is that a new occurrence for you? Is your brain tingling?”
“She hadn’t missed the tent situation under his pants earlier. An entire Boy Scout troop could’ve camped under there.”
“Coming up with excuses not to go after what you want won’t achieve a damn thing.”
“It’s okay to be scared.”
“Maybe. But it’s not okay to not try.”