This novelization of two episodes of the series is not great literature by any means. Nevertheless, for what it is, it is surprisingly well written and exciting. The cover credits Glen A. Larson and Nicholas Yermakov for writing the book. I suspect Larson's name is there because he wrote the TV episode script, or directed that writing. The novelization shows no evidence that two people wrote it, no differences in pacing or style as one reads through. I therefore suspect it is entirely Yermakov's work.
The plot sets up a wonderful dilemma. A being with powers beyond human understanding is able to work miracles in the fleet and makes vast claims of being able to benefit the remnants of the twelve worlds of Kobol. All the people have to do is agree to put Adama aside and follow him instead. Undercurrents of hidden agendas, deception, and extreme arrogance accompany his offer. Should it be accepted? The premise set-up is beautiful, and the suspense is well maintained.
The ending, though again well written, was a letdown. In writer's terms a deus ex machina resolves the plot. I suspect Yermakov was aware of this problem, but was nevertheless constrained by Larson's script to finish the story the way he did. It is not difficult to imagine better alternative endings that could have arisen from the premises. However, none of these offered the reset button the next episode of the show would require. So this ending was settled for.
This early work of Yermakov's -- he would soon after writing this novel change his name and become a more well-known writer -- is an enjoyable read for what it is and serves as a harbinger of the greater writing soon to follow from this author.