Mine

by Jan Irving

Daniel has had a crush on his conservative father's foreman, Matt, for as long as he can remember. Since leaving for college he's embarked on a series of one night stands in a bid to forget—will Matt ever make him his?

Genres: M M Romance, Contemporary, Romance, Westerns, Contemporary Romance, Short Stories

ebook

First published January 1, 2011

About the author

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romance author
Jan Irving has worked in all kinds of creative fields, from painting silk to making porcelain ceramics, to interior design, but writing was always her passion.

She feels you can’t fully understand characters until you follow their journey through a story world. Many kinds of worlds interest her, fantasy, historical, science fiction and suspense—but all have one thing in common, people finding a way to live together—in the most emotional and erotic fashion possible, of course!

Visit Jan's blog at http://jan-revealed.livejournal.com.

Reviews

[SheReadsALot · Rating 3 out of 5]

Extremely short yet hot.

Daniel has crushed on his rich father's foreman for years but never told Matt, the foreman, about his feelings, thinking he was straight. Daniel is home from college, swimming in the pool and home alone. He could not hide a certain...excited part of him when Matt comes to talk Daniel's father. Too bad Dad's not home.

But Daniel is.



Good little set up, the forbidden aspect was nice, wished it was longer. There is some minor "mine" claiming.

Sometimes, I'm in a mood for it. *shrugs*

[Jilrene · Rating 4 out of 5]

Free short (4 pages) story on Total-E-Bound. This short story is a 20 - 30 minute view of Dan and Matt finally getting together. Since they've known each other for many years, and Dan has been lusting after Matt since he learned about lust, this isn't insta love. It's just the right size for a quick bite.

[Tailtiu · Rating 3 out of 5]

I would love to read more about Daniel and Matt.

[Alina · Rating 5 out of 5]

Awesome short story! Smokind hot and just perfect for all my age-difference kinks, but I'm dying to read more about the guys!!!

[Shelley Chastagner · Rating 4 out of 5]

So super short that it feels like the beginning of a good book. Matt's been waiting for Daniel to grow up and return home. He's finally gotten what he's waited for and so has Daniel.
Adult read

[Shelby · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a little too short for me to really get into. Daniel has been in love with his dad's foreman for years but always been to nervous to do more than watch the older man. He's back now from college for a few weeks and trying to keep his watching from Matt. Of course the heat really gets turned up when Matt catches him by the pool watching from the shadows. Daniel never expected his crush to be returned.

This just all happens really fast and even the dialogue felt a little rushed for me. The concept isn't crazily original, but would have worked with a little more time. The writing was solid I just was left wanting more even in just this simple first touch slice of life scene.

[Sandra · Rating 3 out of 5]

This is a favorite trope of mine. It started slow, which is strange given that it's only 9 pages. But I couldn't get a read off Matt and Daniel was kinda all over the place. Then Matt did a total 180, I wasn't really buying it but I went along for the ride. If he was gonna go all super hot possessive then I would have liked to see it all, not just a teaser aka BJ.

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[Wendy❤Ann · Rating 3 out of 5]

Little Daniel is all grown up and has always had a crush on his father’s foreman Matt. To heck with what daddy wants – Daniel wants Matt and Matt finally makes a move on Daniel. This got my engine revved and ended altogether too soon, but it was very hot while it lasted!

[BooksBooksandmoreBooks69 · Rating 2 out of 5]

2.5 stars ... Short, sweet and sexy xx