Is there is anything worse to read than the work of a pompous academic?
Absolutely....the work of two pompous academics.
In "From Reliable Sources" by Howell and Prevenier, we get a double-barreled dose of the ramblings of two authors who confuse and dissuade rather than educate and edify.
These authors are more focused on demonstrating their knowledge of a broad swath of topics than they are on teaching by making focused, concrete points on historiography and historical method. As a result, they get lost in their words, and the reader is left wondering, "Huh? What the hell did they just say?"
Good writing is disciplined, focused, and well constructed.
This book is undisciplined, poorly organized, rambling, unfocused, verbose, repetitive, circuitous, and unclear.
Examples:
---Sentences run on and cover too much ground for the reader to comprehend without numerous re-readings.
---Terms introduced without being defined.
---Works referenced and cited without context and without being introduced.
---Topic sentences: Are well-accepted as a stratagem for guiding a reader. Howell and Prevenier apparently never mastered that skill in their English Composition 101 course. Their paragraphs begin and end arbitrarily and rarely is the point of the paragraph clear.
---The text is laden with typographical errors that confuse and distract.
This book is in sore need of an editor. It's 150 pages long. Properly edited, it would reduce to about 90.