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H&W Investigations #3

Deceived by the Others

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They're here, and they're real. . .werewolves, vampires, mages, and other creatures of the night. For New York P.I. Shiarra Waynest, taking care of Others business started out as a way to stay solvent. But now business is getting very, very complicated. . .Shiarra's relationship with sexy werewolf Chaz may be somewhat unconventional. Still, after a few bumps, Shia is finally ready to get serious. That means meeting family--or in this case, bringing Chaz's entire werewolf pack along for a rollicking full-moon weekend in the Catskills. Soon after they arrive, threatening notes appear, warning Chaz to go home. Then their cabin is ransacked. Shia starts digging to find out whether it's the work of upstart teenaged werewolves or something more sinister. Yet as rumors about her vampire connections arouse the pack's hostility, Shia has to contend with other dangers. Not just from an adversary about to make his fatal intentions known, but from a threat that's even closer than she knows. . .Praise for Hunted by the Others"Jess Haines is a talent to watch!" --Lara Adrian, New York Times bestselling author"A fun, high octane ride with a take charge heroine who will leave you wanting more." --Alexandra Ivy, New York Times bestselling author"A delightful romp of a book. Jess Haines just became my autobuy!" --Angela Knight, New York Times bestselling author

351 pages, Kindle Edition

First published July 1, 2011

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I'm a USA Today and international bestselling author. I consider myself a displaced New Yorker with a penchant for the silly, the obscure, and the fantastical. These days, you can find me in the Tampa area. I'm currently working on the H&W Investigations urban fantasy series and the Blackhollow Academy young adult/new adult contemporary fantasy series. Find out more about my books, drop me a line, or join my mailing list at www.jesshaines.com!

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Author 15 books613 followers
September 1, 2011
2.5 stars


With all the hype this series has been getting, I was very excited for the chance at an early copy. And unfortunately I was incredibly disappointed in this book.
I almost DNF'd this book. I'm glad I didn't, as it wasn't awful by any means. I do think a lot of people will like this book, as the world was easy to slip into, the writing easy to follow, and the world was actually pretty cool. For me? I have a hard time enjoying a book when I hate the main character. I found Shia to be a stupid idiot who had a temper. That's all. No depth. I think we all had problems with Chaz, but I let it go, thinking he was just worried about the weekend where Shia would be amongst the whole pack. But my complaint, is he never acted like he loved Shia. He was more possesive than protective, and he was incredibly domineering. I didn’t like how he was never ever around when she needed him. So all the comments about how Chaz could protect her, don’t really work when he has failed at every chance.

Shia actually had 3 strikes right off the bat. By page 16 she had been warned by 3 separate people that something was going to happen if she went on vacation. By page 43, she’s been followed, and had a note with a knife sticking it into her cabin door. Both times shs “shrugs it off.” If this had been book 1 where she was still new to the Other world, I could have shown more understanding, but she wasn’t a newbie. She’s dating the Sunstriker pack’s alpha, she’s blood-bonded to Alec Royce, a vampire, and she’s had dealings with mages, werewolves, vampires, the White Hats (anti-Other group)…do you see where I’m going with this? It made no sense for her to be so oblivious.

Several times she put stuff off to Seth (a lower ranking packmember who made no bones about his dislike for Chaz) playing a prank, or just shrugging it off. That made me so angry! I mean, death threats? You don’t shrug that off when you’re in the middle of a werewolf pack, and you’ve been warned something big and bad will happen soon.

There was a random little side plot regarding the threatening notes that was so out of left field, and absolutely pointless, that I rolled my eyes. I won’t spoil it, but really? That’s what those notes were about? That was not in any way relevant to the story. Like at all.

And the biggie…Chaz did something naughty. Not just naughty, but a dealbreaker in my book. And apparently in Shia’s as well, as she left him. I began to respect her a bit more around there. But what made me hate Chaz even more, if possible, is that he arranged it so that Shia had no other choices but to ride home with him. So he talked to her the whole drive, “apologized,” if you can call that an apology, and once he realized she was genuinely hurt and angry, he kicked her out of his Jeep, right there, in the middle of the street, nowhere close to home.

That’s when the action basically picked up and it was non-stop til the end. I liked it, I loved watching her interactions with Royce, and with her friends. I really thought she was growing as a person. She’s grown a lot since book 1, so I was thinking that this was it, the point where she impresses me. And then she bailed. She grabbed the belt and left. (I can’t spoil the belt, but anyone who’s read the other books will know what the belt does).

I wish I could rate the book in 2 parts. I'd give it a 1 for the first 150 pages and a 3.5 for the last half. That's how different the two halves of the book are. But I think what Shia does at the end after all Royce did for her, is pretty sucky. And that cliffhanger? It's not much of a cliff hanger. We all know she'll go after the bad guys. But my complaint is that she was PI...shouldn't she be at least a little kickass?

**Thank you Kensington for the review copy

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706 reviews392 followers
November 14, 2014
Reviewed by: Rabid Reads.

When I first dived into this book, my initial thought was 'oh great, another heroine takes a vacay story.' This type of plot line seems to be a requirement in every Urban Fantasy series, and yet rarely turns out well. That is, until Jess Haines got a hold of it, and used it to transform the H&W INVESTIGATIONS universe from pretty good to fan-freaking-tastic! This was no holds barred my favourite installment yet with oodles of intrigue, betrayal, and mettle. You're probably thinking that the werewolves had something to do with my 5-star rating, what with me being obsessed with them and all, but that actually couldn't be further from the truth in this particular instance. Weird, I know, however Chaz has rubbed me the wrong way since day one, and in DECEIVED BY THE OTHERS he finally showed his cards.

This novel was more complex than the two previous ones in that there were multiple plot threads, and the overall mystery wasn't as clear cut. Chaz and Shia's relationship was at the fore, but there was also dissension within the Sunstriker ranks, and a pack of misfit weres out for revenge. The latter introduced three new supes to the paranormal smorgasbord along with equally wacky characters to match their unusual animals while the former helped put things like shifter hierarchy, and right of ascension into perspective. The second half of this story was brilliantly paced, and succeeded in really grabbing my attention, although I can't say why without giving anything away, and this particular tale is best experienced blind in order for the FEELS to have their full effect.

Waynest has come a long way since HUNTED BY THE OTHERS both as a character, and as a hunter, but in this installment she was something else! I loved how well she handled everything the pack threw at her from power struggles, to hurtful insults, to rumours. At one point she does have a massive meltdown, although in this particular instance I think that it was justified, and the scorned girlfriend in me couldn't resist egging her on. I also liked how Shia explored all of her options when confronted with a particularly troublesome problem; however her final decision surprised me even though it was ultimately super badass. Thankfully, I already have STALKING THE OTHERS on my eReader because after that ending I need to read it RIGHT NOW!

I missed Shia's entourage in this installment; Sara, Arnold, and Royce do make appearances, but their contributions were small. Alec's actions dumbfounded me, I mean he IS a vampire after all, and granted he probably does have ulterior motives, yet for the time being I'm firmly on his team. I really hope that the whole Dillon thing doesn't come to pass because even though I fully expect this series to go that route eventually, I think it's a little premature. We learn some shocking truths about Chaz—I just knew that he was too good to be true—and the riddle surrounding Waynest's mysterious cabbie is finally solved, oh and his name is Mario!

DECEIVED BY THE OTHERS was superbly written with action out the wazoo; I can't recommend it enough!
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2,506 reviews940 followers
July 7, 2012
DNF

Deceived by the Others was a DNF for me. But there are reasons why:
1. This being the third book, I was hoping that something in Shiarra would change. What I loved about the first book is the fact that Shiarra is a human who is actively taking part in a paranormal world. While I thought she held her own in the first book and she did okay in the second book, I just didn’t feel like Shiarra developed much over the course of the first two books. She’s still quite vulnerable, and while I loved this in the beginning, now I don’t.

There were countless times in the first few pages where Shiarra is warned by multiple parties that something bad is heading her way and yet she completely ignores this to go to vacation with her boyfriend! Here’s a lesson that Shia needs to learn – You’re a human. And when supernatural creatures are tell you that shit is coming your way. You listen.

2. Shia’s relationship with Chaz, her shifter boyfriend has been an ongoing thing. And while this is an urban fantasy series and not a romance one, I just want to ask Shia, WHY ARE YOU WITH HIM? Chaz is rarely around enough to make me love him. And when he is around, he does that possessive growl thing that irritates me. He allows his temper and jealously to get the best of him. It just doesn’t seem right if he’s supposed to be the leader of his pack. When all you do is growl and hang on to Shiarra, it doesn’t make me swoon over your protectiveness. It makes me want to punch you. So here’s my message to Chaz – Stop being a pouty baby. You can’t get jealous over Shiarra when she handles business with Royce. You’re not even around enough to have a say in her life.

3. Idle banter is fun. Most of the time. But when I can summarize the first few chapters of your book in one and a half sentences, then you know there’s just way too much inner dialogue that can be cut out. For me, the pacing was just all over the place. Sometimes it was engaging...most of the time lagging.

But this isn’t to say that Haines’s writing style is bad. She has spunk and I enjoyed that with Shiarra. But there is a limit. Her books are easy to read, so if you’re able to get over the fact that Shiarra can be a little ignorant at times, then go on, read this book.

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24 reviews25 followers
July 20, 2011

When I finished reading Taken By The Others (H&W Investigations #2), I couldn't wait for book 3. And then, the synopsis of this book came out. It seemed like Deceived by The Others was going to be all about building up Shia and Chaz's relationship. I'm not going to lie, I don't like Chaz. Never have. So to say I was kind of disappointed is a bit of understatement. For that reason, I kept pushing it to the bottom of my TBR list. Then, came the reviews. I found out that Chaz was going to do something UNFORGIVEABLE. That settled it. I just had to find out what it was.

Deceived by The Others had a slow start, but was still enjoyable. It showed what Chaz was like when dealing with his pack. To be honest, he never did strike me as alpha-like, so every time he showed a hint of dominance, I felt like laughing. It was like he was pretending to be tough. My views started to change about halfway through the book.

I also enjoyed Shia's growth. I'm sure that had she been the person she was on the first book (Hunted by The Others), she would have cowered when faced with an angry werewolf. I was glad to see her standing up for herself.

I have to comment on the unspeakable thing, of course. THAT was the one thing I could never have thought he'd do. I felt Shiarra pain, of course, but what really set me off, made me as angry as she was, was Chaz reaction. I'm sorry, he does THAT and says it's no big deal? The guy actually thinks he was in the right!

We don't get to see much of Royce on this book, but I loved the one scene he and Shia met face to face. It felt like, in Shia's mind, Royce was, slowly, moving out of the 'people to stay away from' category to the 'people I can rely on' category.

As for the ending... Well, you know when you're watching a movie and suddenly something happen, something that makes you sit up as the screen goes blank for a just second? That's what the ending felt like to me.

Can't wait for book 4, where Jess Haines promised A LOT more Alec Royce *wink*
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Profile Image for Shera (Book Whispers).
619 reviews302 followers
July 5, 2011
Originally posted at Book Whispers.

Genre: Urban Fanasy

After the chilling events of the last book, where Shia faced her worst fear of being blood bonded to two vampires and made into a mindless slave, Shai is determined to avoid the supernatural drama. Even after the leader of the White Hats, New York's king vampire Royce, and a stalking reporter tells her that her latest adventure will put her at risk. She's determined to go to the ski resort with Chaz—her Alpha Were boyfriend—and his pack. It's time for her to prove she's serious about her relationship with Chaz to the point that she trusts him enough to sign a Contract with him.

Even if Shia leaves the warnings—and her artillery—at home the monsters aren't ready to let her get back to anything resembling normal. Trouble makers in Chaz's pack want to take his place as Alpha and they don't believe in playing fair. That's not the only trouble. A rival pack in the area is targeting Chaz and Shia. The true danger is closer to home to Shia then she could have ever imagined. Shia is betrayed by someone I never saw coming. That someone has put up such a front of lies and deceit that at one point I actually had to put Deceived by the Others down and go on a stress jog to cool my emotions down. Then another surprise had me out running my stress away!

Though the majority of the book takes place in the wilderness at the ski resort, Haines really dishes up a great tale. Getting into the Sunstriker's pack life was really fun and I could almost forgive that all the amazing side cast was left behind in New York City. Even the lesser doses of action didn't bother me, this book is unexpected in ways that I didn't think this series could pull off.

When Shia finally makes it back to the big apple a scandalizing article in the paper blows her big secret into city wide news (if not national). After the reporter who wrote the article is found dead—killed by Others—Shia and her closest friend Sara have to disappear. Leading her to seek refuge from the one person she never thought she would go to, Royce. She's prepared to sell herself to him and submit to a blood bond with him. Haines, however, was not done pulling huge surprises out of her hat. Royce does something so amazing that I have to shake my head in shame at all the doubts I've had about him. The new side of him is something I need to explore pronto, I've already got my Team Royce shirt ready for the next book!

Shia is turning into the bad ass that Urban Fantasy fans have come to covet of their female leads. If the excerpt of the next book is anything to go by Shia is going to be one beloved bad ass babe. Deceived by the Others has some staggering plot threads here, and at this point this book/series can not be overlooked! Characters you thought you loved will become the ones you hate, and the ones you've hated will become the ones you love. Haines has truly demonstrated she's not a gimmick in the genre of UF.

Sexual content: Kissing, heavy petting, sexual humor, and a reference to rape.

Rating: 4/5- Great! Really enjoyed it.

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2,356 reviews733 followers
July 6, 2011
In the third book of Jess Haines’ H&W Investigations series, Shia is going on a road trip with her werewolf lover Chaz. Shia and Chaz have had a somewhat on and off again relationship. Shia being a human, Chaz being an “other” it was a little hurdle to get over being with a werewolf – an alpha at that. But Shia is ready to take their relationship to the next level, and has the contract in hand to prove to Chaz she wants a physical relationship. Since the full moon is coming soon, Chaz and his small Sunstrikers clan are off to a mountain resort to spend a few days while they turn furry. Shia sees this as an opportunity to not only bond more with Chaz, but to meet his entire group and get to know them better. But not everyone is happy Shia is there. After a few threatening notes and a ransacked hotel room, Shia realized she might be a target. She becomes very intent on finding the perpetrator. She puts her P.I skills to use – but finds out much more than she bargained for.

This book took a little while for me to get into. Shia and Chaz leave for the resort right off the bat, but it takes awhile once they get up there for real action to get going. The threats they face didn’t seem to be quite as scary as in the previous books. But a little more than half way into the book, some big events take place and I flew through the end very excited by what happens. Of course I can’t tell you because it’s a big spoiler!

I will also admit to being a huge Alec Royce fan. Alec is a very old vampire, one that has entered Shia’s life in a somewhat intimate manor – through a series of events in the two previous books, she ends up contracted to him. So although they have had a very rocky “friendship”, by this book, there is much more trust between them. Unfortunately, Alec doesn’t show up until the end of the book, and I definitely missed his presence. What we do get from him is pretty brief but I have high hopes for the next book. I think I said that same statement in my review of the last book! But I really do believe eventually Alec and Shia will progress to more than just their odd vampire-human thing they have going on right now.

We do get a lot from Chaz, and I’m still not a huge fan of his. To me, he doesn’t come across as really an alpha character, so it is hard for met to reconcile his position in the pack. But – we get some very interesting revelations from him in this book, and I love the direction his character is going. It is going to make a very fun book four.

Despite the slow start, and my yearning for more Alec, this book is a nice addition to this series. I definitely recommend starting from the beginning of this series, as each book builds upon the next.

Rating: B-
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1,921 reviews621 followers
June 28, 2011
Review courtesy of All Things Urban Fantasy

I talk to my books. More accurately, I talk to the characters in the books I read. I yell at them when they do stupid things and cheer for them when they do awesome things. Well I practically went hoarse reading DECEIVED BY THE OTHERS. This is one fantastically messed up book! And I mean that in the best way possible.

If you haven’t started reading the H&W Investigations series yet, you’re missing out on one of the best and brightest urban fantasy has to offer. You want werewolves? Shia is dating the Alpha of the third largest pack in New York. Prefer vampires? You will love Alec Royce, the most powerful vampire in the city with looks that kill and an agenda that only he knows. Magic more your thing? Wait until you meet The Circle, witches and mages with enchanted objects not to be believed. Navigating this world of Others is Shia, a levelheaded P.I. without a lick of magic but enough guts and street smarts to make up for it. She has ties to every paranormal group in the city—and a few anti-paranormal groups too—whether she wants to or not. Trust me, you’ll never have more fun than with these characters.

The majority of DECEIVED BY THE OTHERS takes place outside of the city on werewolf retreat which unfortunately means that most of the stellar cast from this series is absent for the first couple hundred pages. I completely understand the need for this given some of the HUGE plot developments that take place in this book, but I can’t help but miss some of the interaction between Shia, Sara, Arnold, and most of all Royce. As if anticipating backlash from fans, the last 150 pages reunites everyone and delivers some of the most memorable Shia/Royce scenes ever.

Plenty of urban fantasy authors do dark and disturbing. Jess Haines does urban fantasy that is smart and sexy with characters the span the spectrum from super scary to playfully snarky, and dangerously seductive. And the best thing about the H&W Investigations series is that I’m left with my mouth hanging open in shock by the end of each book, and I may have actually dislocated my jaw at the way DECEIVED BY THE OTHERS ended. Shia is physically and emotionally torn apart in this book. Some characters reveal their true colors in ways that stunned and incensed me while others stepped up in ways I never thought possible. It’s like I’m meeting some of these characters for the first time and I can’t wait to see what they do next in JUSTICE FOR THE OTHERS.

Sexual Content:
A scene of semi graphic sensuality. References to sex.
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944 reviews1,287 followers
October 14, 2012
Spoilers

To show her commitment to Chaz - her werewolf boyfriend, Shia decides to spend the weekend away with him and his werewolf pack. Of course, Shia's weekend doesn't go according to plan when Chaz and his pack are attacked. Naturally, Shia investigates the bad guys.

-Shia has become less and less likeable. It was annoying how idiotic she was — she ignored everything going on around her, buried her head in the sand and then acted all surprised when she found out about Chaz's infidelity. She gets played way too much by everyone around her — she's more or less powerless without Chaz, Royce, Arnold and the White Hats. I was hoping that Shia would become more in control of her life and wouldn't let anyone walk all over her but she was still very much a victim.

-Chaz was a grade A dick and a half. He actually thought it was ok for him to cheat and lie to Shia, and then on top of that he acted like he was the victim and blamed Shia for everything.
I think the only reason that Chaz was portrayed as such a bastard was to make Royce seem like the better love interest. Royce was still a slimy jerk though, all he's ever done is manipulate Shia and put her in danger. He's such a rubbish love interest, it's obvious he doesn't love her — the only reason he shows any interest in her is because she doesn't want him.

-I really don't know how Royce is even a love interest?! He threatens, uses and intimidates Shia, he also sleeps around and lusts after other women. From his actions and words, its clear that Shia's nothing special to him but because he's good looking and occasionally flirts with Shia everyone thinks he's her HEA. I just don't get it.
If they do get together, I hope it's just sex and they don't magically fall in love with each other. A romance with Royce isn't believable since 1) Shia doesn't like being involved with Others 2) Royce treats Shia like dirt 3) Royce has blackmailed, beaten and lied to Shia repeatedly and 4) Shia's family would never make accept her if she dated a vampire. It won't make any sense for them to all of sudden claim they love each other.

-Shia's parents were dicks, they disowned Shia because she was attacked and possible infected with lycanthropy. What the fuck sort of parents would blame their daughter and act ashamed of her when she gets attacked?! I'm guessing Shia will probably just forgive them because she's pretty weak like that.

This was disappointing - Shia was a dumb doormat, Chaz was a bastard, Royce was a douche and the plot was boring.
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289 reviews99 followers
February 26, 2012
Wow. It's been a while since I read the previous book in this series, so I was a bit confused with where things were. After I looked back and back into the run of things I was on board for a fast ride. The start of this novel was good. I loved the "camping with werewolves" aspect and that she got to have some face time with Chaz. As the story went on, more mysterious things popped into place and set the peak in motion.

By the middle to end of the book, I was at the edge of my seat, rotating from anger and tears for Shiarra. Man, she may have gotten the rounds in the previous books, but I think this one takes the cake.

The characters, as always, were great and entertaining. It's hard to say, but even knowing it was in pure need for Chaz, I'm not liking him right now. I'm 100% behind Shiarra. Alec wasn't a huge aspect in this story, but he had some face time and it was perfect and what Shiarra needed.

There was one scene where I truly felt what Shiarra did.
Her tears and heartbreak of his kindness made me tear up, uncontrollably.

Over all, this story was one for all you mystery and suspense buffs. Yes, it had romance, paranormal, action and gore, but I really loved the "who did it" aspect. Good guys turning bad, and vice versa. It was thrilling. I'm so very excited for the next instalment.
Pick this series up! You won't regret it.
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1,960 reviews110 followers
July 3, 2017
Idk. Review to come.

It just ended like that. Cliff hanger. I'm not getting enough romance to drive me forward. And based on the reviews I'm getting it does happen next book but not naturally. This book does not provoke much emotion for me. Shia tells us she is mad, I don't feel her anger because she tells us. Lots of telling.

I'm just not sure how to feel about this book. There is something "there" about the series that keeps me coming back, but there isn't enough to really drive me forward once I get there.

I am a bit disappointed in this book because firstly Chaz and Shia are together.



I've never really been a fan of Chaz's. He blows her off and just the way he talks to her? I'm not feeling him. I read a spoiler about this book and it totally soured my view I think. But the spoiler wasn't completely unexpected, I got this feeling in book 2 from him.



So, new relationship and all Shia thinks it's a brilliant idea to go away with Chaz to hang with the pack around the time of the full moon. She also brings a contract with her because she's thinking of signing it. Even though she has this like big issue with Others. So I really don't understand this. She's thinking about all the time they will cozy up with each other and all the snuggling...yep.

That doesn't go as planned. Chaz is off busy dealing with the pack. He is always with the pack.

Meanwhile Shia has ignored every little hint under the sun that something is going to happen, which doesn't really get explained. Legit, she's an investigator, a PI, it should be like in their blood wanting to find out what is going on and why literally every person is coming out of the woodwork. What does Shia do?



Yea. Does she call everyone back? Does she find out what the issue is? Nope she still goes on the stupid trip. So when suddenly shit starts happening does she decide to start investigating? Yep sure does...by being the biggest idiot ever.

She is TSTL
She goes off in the dark forest when there are shifters who don't like her.
She goes off in search of finding clues at the main house without knowing who is there.
She thinks she is smart.
She isn't.

This whole entire book was just meh. It just served as a big waste of time for Shia to finally see that Chaz was never for her. She doesn't really investigate, she stumbles through everything. She can't rely on herself. At first I thought it was cool to have a non-badass heroine, but in 3 books there should have been some character growth. Some way for her to have keen observation skills or at the very least notice the shit going on around her.

I see in the next book that her and Royce might get together, but I'm not sure I'm interested. She should have never given Chaz the time of day. You know who Chaz reminds me of? Richard from Anita Blake. No one likes Richard. I don't like Chaz.

Honestly there isn't really much to say about this book.
The go to the cabin there's arrows with silver being shot at their party, there is mysterious notes in Shia and Chaz's cabin, there's been someone who destroyed their room as well. But when we find out some of these mystery's answers I'm not really blown away.

I'm also not feeling the connections in some ways Shia tells her story in a very telling way, which doesn't always convey the emotional component to things. I really don't feel any positive feelings with regards to Chaz. And Shia's friends even they aren't that fleshed out for me. Royce being a love interest would be good, if the author had built up their relationship some more.

So overall I think this is where I bid this series goodbye.
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278 reviews134 followers
June 26, 2011
I love the creative endings Jess has for each book. In HUNTED BY THE OTHERS (HBTO), we had a final showdown that had me rooting (out loud, I might add) for the good guys. I turned into a bloodthirsty little bitch, too as I prayed for the villains to be murdered. In TAKEN BY THE OTHERS (TBTO), we have another kickass showdown that had me cringing away from all the gore and violence. It was actually at this point where I felt more sympathetic towards Shia. And finally, in DECEIVED BY THE OTHERS (DBTO), I was left with a feeling of intense excitement. More on that later in the review.

If anyone has read my past reviews, they might have ascertained that I have a feeling of ambivalence towards Shia; in the beginning of this series, it was her intense fear of vampires that frustrated me. For whatever reason, I was unable to feel any sort of sympathy, and thus was willing to write her off as a pain in the ass... that is, until she sucked it up and did what she had to do by the final showdown.

In TBTO, she once again went back to frustrating me because of her fear of vampires. Thankfully, that fear was not as intense, and I was willing to overlook it this time around. She also made me feel bad for her as she experienced murdering someone for the first time.

Thankfully, in DBTO, we have no intense fear of the bloodsuckers that transforms Shia into a scaredy cat. In fact, if anything, I think Shia was fairly kick ass (and this is reinforced upon reading the beginning of book 4). I could have done without all the lovey dovey pet names Chaz and Shia had for each other, and I certainly would have enjoyed a little bit more action in the beginning, but by the midway point, I was not disappointed. It seems with most UFs there is a buildup, and once a person has the patience to stick with it, they are greatly rewarded, as is the case with DBTO.

For fear of spoiling the great surprise, I will say no more about the plot. But I would like to say this: DBTO finally has me switching teams now. Eff Chaz, Royce all the way, bebe!

As for the ending, since I said earlier I would touch upon it more: it was not intense and action-packed like the prior two books. And you know what? Since this book wasn't like the others, I'm okay with that. What made me adore it almost as much as its predecessors was the sense of well... normalcy, and a slumber party. I love books that capture the essence of the latter.

I highly recommend DBTO. The author's writing skills have improved exponentially since the start of this series, and I am happy to say that the characters have grown on me, too.
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562 reviews121 followers
June 5, 2011
Shiarra Waynest had her share of Paranormal battles in the past and she’s now trying to stay out of trouble. Trying is the keyword here. She’s heading to a retreat in the woods for a vacation with her boyfriend Chaz, at the moon full, to meet his pack. She brought with her a contract that would legally bind her to him. Is she ready to take this big step? Will more trouble arise in paradise?

If I had to use only one word to describe Deceived by the Others it would be Unexpected. The entire plot line totally took me off guard and I regaled in the unknown. Aside from one particular event, I never saw coming any of the bricks falling on Shia’s head. Jess Haines succeeded at knitting a tight and surprising plot that will keep you on your toes.

Shia was a lot more levelheaded than she used to be (except at a very specific moment) so it was nice to see this growth. But with everything that’s happened in this installment, I can’t help but feel pity for her. Everything she’s going through is insane and I’m dying to know what’s gonna happen next, because even though Jess tidied-up the main plot line, two very important questions are left unanswered.

I have to say: Oh. My. Freaking. God. Chaz… What. The. Hell. You’ll know what I’m talking about when you’ve read the book *winks*

Royce is seriously growing on me. I love the guy more and more and I really hope he won’t disappoint me. I missed Arnold this time around, he is mentioned and Shia talks to him on the phone but I’m very fond of him and I hope he’ll get a bigger role in the next book. For some reason I just picture him like a World of Warcraft gnome in my head. Go figure. We also get to meet a trio of geeks and Shia didn’t understand a thing they said, whereas I knew exactly what they were talking about, which got me wondering over my sanity…

All in all, the H&W Investigations series is an amazing open Urban Fantasy world. Magi, Vampires & Werewolves alike will charm their way into your heart, be warned though, they might have dreadful intensions! Lock your doors and keep a weapon handy because in Shia’s world, you’re never really safe.
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542 reviews106 followers
June 14, 2011
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It is very hard nowadays to create something original and worthy of following through book after book, when it comes to Urban Fantasy. I mean, there are SO MANY Urban Fantasy series out there that for one to shine more than the others it doesn’t only have to be different but also offer such compelling characters and world that you won’t care that it all has been done before.

Jess Haines has been able to do it all. I mean, she hasn’t invented the UF wheel by any means, but with Deceived by the Others she has gone through a path with her characters that I wasn’t expecting at all, as an avid and sometimes jaded reader, I can definitely appreciate that.

I for one, thoroughly enjoyed both Hunted by The Others and Taken by the Others, but even though both books were quite awesome to read they had yet to cement strong feeling about this series and characters.

However, Deceived by the Others hits it out of the park for me, by not being drowned in clichés and proving that Jess Haines is not afraid of how her readers might feel and is brave enough to pursue a path with her characters that some might consider insane.

I, for one, am glad she went where she did with this book and I can only remember one author making me feel this way and it was Jeri Smith-Ready with the third in her WVMP Radio Series, Bring on The Night. For me, an author that is not afraid to take the almost unpaved path has balls and I admire her/him with all my heart.

The H&W Investigations series was already one I quite enjoyed, but with Deceived by the Others, Jess Haines has guaranteed her spot in my yearly book budget as well as in my heart.

If you are as much as an Urban Fantasy fan as I am, I absolutely recommend this series to you. If you have already read the first two book, you CANNOT miss this one, it’s brilliant.
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1,296 reviews31 followers
June 13, 2011
This is one of those series that just keeps getting better and better with each book. Haines sure knows how to keep her readers on the edge of their seat. I went through a wide range of emotions while reading this third installment: I laughed, fumed and cried. Haines succeeded in making me love Shia even more than I already did and make me truly loathe some other characters in this book.

The writing and world building are both just excellent if not even better as in the first books and I love how Haines manages to expand on her world in a natural, believable way. I also liked the focus on the werewolf pack and the understanding it gave me into how Haines' wolves interact with each other and those around them.

The story itself is very suspenseful, funny, frustrating, exciting and utterly awesome and I will tell you that when you finish it you will want to immediately read it again while you're counting the days till book 4 will be released. It's that awesome!

Any negative points?
Voodoo Bride complained that there wasn't enough of Royce's butt in this book, but as Voodoo Bride would still have complained if half the book was a description of Royce's butt I wouldn't listen to her too much if I were you.
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1,868 reviews530 followers
July 6, 2011
Deceived by the Others begins as a more laid back book. Shia and Chaz, along with his pack, go away for some R&R. Shia must decide whether she’ll be fully committed to Chaz. But then drama ensues when she and Chaz are targeted by some jealous werewolves who have it out for Chaz. The pack isn’t all that welcoming where Shia is concerned and some major shocks occur in this book that will have many readers divided. Jess does something with Chaz that will have you screaming and wanting to tear him into little pieces much like Shia wants to do when she catches him red handed in his betrayal. And, it's quite a doozy. This shocking turn in the Shia and Chaz relationship takes some major balls on Jess’s part because it’s just not done. It really ramps up the action and drama and will have you anxious for the next book. Deceived by the Others starts out pretty slow and because of it I grew concerned on whether or not I'd continue on. But then Jess does that OMGWTF move I'd have never seen coming. And because of how Shia reacts and the way things are left, it’s a great cliffhanger.

The aftermath of what Shia witnesses will anger readers but make them want to read book #4. Someone Shia trusts is a douche big time and I hope they get theirs in the end.
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1,335 reviews61 followers
June 8, 2011
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WOW I was not expecting such a roller coaster ride when I got DECEIVED BY THE OTHERS in the mail. The title completely makes sense after finishing the book though. Shiarra seems to finally be settling in with the idea of being with Chaz and becoming part of the pack in a legal sense by signing a contract. Little does she know all her thoughts will soon be flushed down the drain. I have never been crazy about Chaz but OMG how i despise him now. I was so blindsided by the events that took place, my heart was about to pound out of my chest and I can honestly say the situation and writing were so powerful I found myself pissed off and crying my eyes out at many points right there beside Shia. Jess continued to pack in the action as well you wont be able to put the book down. The book pretty much revolves around the pack and we don't get to see much of Sara, Arnold, or Royce =( but you wont be to disappointing as there is so much going on throughout the book. The book ends on another dramatic note. I really don't know why Shia decided on the events at the end but DECEIVED BY THE OTHERS was hands down the best in the series yet and I'm dying to read the next book.
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482 reviews132 followers
July 16, 2011
Be warned that spoilers of Book #1 and #2 might occur, so if you haven't read those yet, you might close your eyes and skip reading this review.

My Thoughts: Deceived by the Others is the 3rd book in Jess Haines' H&W Investigations series and after the terrific ride of Taken by the Others, I was excited to dig in and see how things would go on after the bang ending of Book #2.

Unfortunately Shia does what she does best: she avoids dealing with uncomfortable situations, so of course she hides from Royce (just a little warning for all of you Royce fans out there: Shia won't speak with Royce until about way after page 250). So sadly I didn't get in Deceived by the Others the big confrontational talk between Shia and Royce after the blood bonding and their dealing with of where they go from there, but I keep hope I'll get it in Book #4.

So to get back to Deceived by the Others: Shia is debating whether to take her relationship with Chaz to the next level and sign the contract binding herself to an Other. As an attempt to rekindle their relationship after Shia's bonding to Royce in Book #2 which took its toll on Chaz, Shia and Chaz are going for a short vacation in the mountains to spend a few days with the whole Sunstriker pack during full moon.

Before I started reading Deceived by the Others I have glimpsed plenty of outrage exclamations of fans and warnings that there will be some pretty shocking revelations, so I was on the lookout constantly for the big fallout. I have to say I wasn't that surprised because I haven't liked Chaz from the beginning. He seemed phony and superficial to me, his interactions with Shia didn't seem deep or intense, so I can't say I was stunned by what he did and his plan. I never cared for him, and I have to say I'm even a bit glad because this way Shia can finally forget about him and look on to new and greener pastures (*cough* Royce *cough*). ;-p

Though there was plenty of mystery and dubious events taking place, and even though Jess Haines managed to keep the nail-biting excitement and thrill up I somehow found the mystery plot of Deceived by the Others less formidable than in the previous two books. But then with the conclusion Jess Haines revealed that it was more of a prank, the humour of which I appreciated, but would have loved to have a more serious and bigger evil in the works too. I know, I'm greedy :-)

I think Jess Haines was very brave in undertaking to have most of Deceived by the Others without Royce appearing on the pages until about page 260, but of course the exciting character of him and especially his interaction and crack up dialogues with Shia were sorely missed. Though they clearly are the spice of this series and what makes it outstanding, Shia's humour and sarcasm on her own is still remarkable and just as funny as before:


Maybe I could crack the thing's skull before it tore out my insides. Right. And the tooth fairy would swing by to play backup for me next.


Coitus interruptus does not a happy camper make.


"You should be afraid," Gabe said his voice gone deeper, guttural with anger. [...] "You aren't one of us. Don't you know what we could do to you?"
"Try me, Fluffy. I've fought your kind before. You kids don't know who you're messing with."

Verdict: All in all Deceived by the Others was an exciting page turner peppered with the usual entertaining witty humour of Jess Haines' heroine. And if it didn't succeed Taken by the Others I might have rated it higher, but I just loved Book #2 so much that I was left a bit disappointed I had to miss out on the Shia & Royce goodness so much. But I really hope they'll get their time to shine in the next books and Jess Haines will reward us with plenty of yumminess :-)

Plot: 6/10
Characters: 8/10
Ending: 8/10
Writing: 9/10
Cover: 10/10 - finally! It was about time this series got a great cover and I love the cover of Deceived by the Others! Atmospheric yet colourful and finally Shia looks normal and not like some leather-clad hooker. yay!
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1,377 reviews24 followers
August 7, 2011
3.75/5 stars

This is the first book I've read related to this series, so as you can imagine, the characters and the story were all a new discovery for me. Events and relationships are explained and the story is easy to follow, however, I do recommend that this series be read in order.

As a character I really like Shia. She is a "normal" in the midst of "Others" -- Weres, vampires, mages, witches. Her job is to eliminate the monsters, and in the past she has been quite vocal in her anti-Other sentiments, except that she's found out they're not all evil. The tough part for her in this installment is coming to terms with who is who. Shia puts on a great show as a no nonsense kind of gal but is not overconfident of her personal abilities, and I also like that she is not the typical sarcastic or cynical narrator. Instead, I find her to be quite amusing and love those moments when she just doesn't know what to do. Shia isn't the typical "kick ass" heroine in this installment, except that somehow she always figures out how to take care of herself and doesn't take crap from anybody even when scared.

Chaz on the other hand didn't turn out to be a favorite character from the beginning, which is unfortunate because both he and Shia are the focus of this story. The two biggest problems for me where he's concerned were that I had trouble seeing Chaz both as Shia's boyfriend and as the Sunstriker's alpha. On the other hand, there's a character that is mentioned throughout the book and that makes an appearance at the end, the vampire Alec Royce, who just steals every single little scene where he appears in the book. I want to know more about him! Hopefully there will be more from this character in the next installment.

Although Deceived by the Others is a quick read, the pacing of the story itself is not a quick one. There is a lot of build-up as events unfold between Chaz, Shia, and the pack with small incidents here and there, but the real action doesn't really kick in until after the first half of the book. This worked out for me personally, as it afforded me the opportunity to learn a bit about the characters and the background story. However once the action finally picked up, so did my interest and I rushed to the end to find out the outcome. This in itself was a letdown, as there were really no answers to the two big issues that were raised throughout this installment, although there is a big reveal about Chaz, and something that happens to Shia in this book that I won't spoil for fans of the series.

Deceived by the Others was interesting enough for me that I'll go back and read those first two installments to catch up with this series, and I'll definitely read the next one to find out what happens next. For established fans of the series I would say that although this installment is not packed with action, there are enough new revelations in this book to maintain excitement, plus those issues mentioned above that are left unanswered? One of them is huge for Shia! The next book is a must read.
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1,449 reviews195 followers
June 28, 2013

Shiarra is on the cusp of taking a big step – finally signing the contract between herself and Chaz that would formalise their relationship between a Human and an Other. Before doing so, she’s taking a romantic getaway with him to a camp site to spend some quality time together

And with his pack. While not as romantic as being alone, it does give her chance to get to know the pack and see Chaz around them. And find that while many hail her as a hero, not everyone is happy with the Alpha’s human girlfriend or her connections with vampires. Then there’s some pack politics to handle as well and…

Then all hell breaks loose. The holiday’s over, Shiarra’s running into hiding, but not happy to stay there. She’s plotting vengeance.



This is a book of two halves. Actually, worse than that, this is a book of about 60%/40%.

In the first 60% of the book I was severely losing my patience with it and kind of wondering what the point was. Shiarra is going on holiday with the Sunstriker pack during the full moon to get used to them, befriend them and, perhaps, take her relationship to the next level with her boyfriend Chaz.

This involved just hanging around, eating, drinking and enjoying the views. Chaz spent a substantial amount of time away from her dealing with various issues. She had some vague interactions with the pack that didn’t really go anywhere or really establish any characters (quickly forgot most of their names). There was a Mean Girl werewolf who hated Shiarra for random reasons but Shiarra pulled out some badassery to make her back down – so that petered off. I spent a lot of time wondering what the point was. If she was furthering her relationship with Chaz, I expected that relationship to develop. If she was forming bonds with the pack, I expected her to do so and spend time with them and develop some relationships. Neither really happened.

Then there were random sidequests. Seth and his teenaged minions challenged Chaz and were slapped down easily. End of. Was it supposed to be foreshadowing of Chaz’s true nature? Because it’s kinds of what I expected any way. In fact, the whole “revelation” to Shiarra that Chaz could be both violent in the face of rebellion and that he was politically minded seemed rather convoluted. Chaz is the Alpha of the third largest werewolf pack in the area, he commands 50-60 werewolves – surely being willing to fight down revolutions and being politically minded are assumed elements of the job? So it just kind of happened and then went away

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40 reviews4 followers
January 24, 2012
Wow, that was a shocker! Now I can't wait to read the next book! I have to say that infidelity is something i have a major issue about, and reading about it really pulls up a lot of emotions.
Some criticisms... though it's believable that a PI may be tricked and kept ignorant of so many of the things that have hurt her, it seems a smart investigator would take the time to know all about the Others, not only for her own security but as part of her work. I know that she did not want to become involved with the Others at all - ever, but purely from a PI standpoint, knowing people's characteristics and capabilities would seem really important to her safety, knowing how to recognize and avoid dangerous situations and people.
There also seems to be an inconsistency with some of the characters. I know that people can seem one way, and be totally opposite of what you perceive. However, some of the flip-flopping between Chaz's character, Shia's fear/terror, and some of Sara's responses to things seem a little off. This may be because I'm used to novels and characters that are more predictable, though you usually get some type of "feeling" about a character that has you wondering how much you really know about them. Some of the signs are there, but perhaps because of the way it's written from S's point of view it's more easily disregarded and therefore comes as almost just as much of a shock to the reader as it does to her character.
Though what I've written sounds like a lot of criticism, I did enjoy the book. I cheered for S as she opened herself up to Chaz as well as when she wanted to kick his ass. She's someone who is forthright and isn't into playing the games that everyone else seems to be. I have to wonder what A is up to though. Is he really on the up and up? It was disappointing to see him involved in an intimate relationship with someone else, as he's been pursuing S all this time. Though men and women may see sex and relationships slightly different, I can't help but be disappointed in him in this. I'm too much of an idealist and would've wished that he could be more sensitive than the cheating w****-as~%[^ that Chaz was.
I've got to say that it has me impatient to find out what happens and what more about the Others and the characters personally, that S will find out next. As much as I liked the book, it's not one that I would reread often. I would be agonizing over everything until the end comes, knowing how much grief was coming.
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Author 9 books26 followers
September 2, 2011
This is the third book in Jess Haines' H&W Investigations series, and it takes Shia, and the reader, into a brand new direction. After spending the first two books in adventures that almost cost Shia her life, she finally has a chance to get away with werewolf boyfriend Chaz for some nice, quiet R&R time... and losing her life might be the least of her worries.

I've always enjoyed Shia; the ordinary girl surrounded by 'Others.' She has powerful friends (?), some totally bad-ass armor, and an enchanted belt possessed by the spirit of a vampire hunter, but she's just a regular person who frequently finds herself on the wrong side of trouble. I was wondering how a quiet getaway would deliver adventure and excitement, but there was more tension packed into this book than the previous two, and you know that's saying a lot if you read Hunted by the Others and Taken by the Others.

Things start off a little slow as all the characters are put into place, but it doesn't take long for seemingly innocent mischief to start taking place. As Shia puts her detective skills to use, she learns the mischief isn't all that innocent, leading to a revelation that changes everything. To say I was shocked about how events unfolded would be a huge understatement.

In addition to the characters we've met before, a new group known as the Nightstrikers is introduced and I'm hoping they make another appearance in the future. The group takes the were- concept into a seldom explored area and I would love to find out more about them.

Vampire fans might be a little disappointed to learn that Royce doesn't play a major role in most of the story, but he does show up a little past the halfway point and proves that he doesn't need to be a major player in the plot to be interesting. I've always considered Royce to be the perfect vampire; balancing charm and menace perfectly so that you can never be certain if he's a good guy or bad guy.

If you enjoyed the first two books in the series, then Deceived by the Others is must-read because this takes what you know and turns it upside down. New characters, an interesting plot-twist, and an ending that leaves you wanting more makes this a necessary addition to the TBR pile of anyone who loves urban fantasy.
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Author 78 books238 followers
January 4, 2012
This is the third book in the H&W Investigations urban fantasy series. After enjoying the first two, I was looking forward to reading this one.

At the end of my review for the second book, I remember saying that I couldn't 'wait to step into Chaz's world'. Well, that's exactly what Shiarra does in this book. She heads out for a weekend away with Chaz and his pack, the Sunstrikers. He wants her to meet them and see how she'll handle being around them.

It sounded like a good idea. In theory. And to be honest, things start out pretty well. She meets a lot of the werewolves, and they all seem to be quite nice and willing to get along with her. Chaz is there to lend his support and always assigns someone to keep her safe. They seem to be really clicking romantically too, and Shiarra's being contemplating signing a contract with him. To show him how much he means to her.

Then, confusing, threatening notes start appearing inside their cabin. Their things get stolen and torched. One of the female Weres suddenly turns on her. A young Were tries to use her as bait to beat Chaz. One bad thing after another starts to happen, and Shiarra is determined to help the pack figure it out. After all, she's a PI. But what she didn't expect was the biggest betrayal from Chaz himself...

I was so shocked when I read the scene with Chaz's betrayal. I wasn't expecting it, or the events that follow after she gets back to the city. And I have to say, I absolutely loved it! I love it when the story seems to be going somewhere and then takes a dark, unexpected turn. What started out as a romantic getaway so she could also get to know her boyfriend's pack and integrate into their lives, turns out to be a total nightmare. Because, not only does she now need to deal with a cheating ex, but the pack is determined to hunt her down. Oh, and one of them actually scratched her too. Which means she might end up turning into a werewolf herself.

I felt so bad for Shiarra. She loses so much in this book. :(

OMG. I love the direction this series has taken, and really can't wait until the next book!
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2,529 reviews19 followers
May 14, 2013
Gah! I don't even know where to begin with this review.

This book picks up with Shia going on a wilderness retreat with Chaz and his pack. I was sad to discover this meant we would not be seeing Alec or any of the usual characters for at least 50% of the book. I sorely missed them, but I had to admit that Chaz and the werewolves were growing on me.

Damn. The author did a really good job putting me in Shia's position. I was totally sucked in by the mystery and was looking in the completely wrong direction when everything blew up. This book did something that hasn't been done to me, probably since the great Bill/Eric/Sookie drama of the Sookie Stackhouse series -- made me FURIOUS. I mean, I had to stop and put the book down because I was so mad. I wasn't mad like Karen Marie Moning's Fever series made me, which was about the cliffhangers and the endless waiting for the next book. I was mad because I was totally in tune with Shia. She was mad and I felt every second of it. Reading those chapters was hard, but so gritty and real. I wanted to punch things. I wanted to be in her shoes, but at the same time was happy I wasn't.

The end of the book was kind of a cliffhanger, but since I'm going to obviously start the next book right away, I don't have to suffer too much. I want more Alec. I really hope that Alec and Shia become closer in this next installment. Shia deserves some happy in her life, and I am totally team Alec in that I think he can give it to her.

So why 4 stars? I guess any book that can get under my skin like this one did deserves more than my typical 3 stars for books that are okay. I just hope this doesn't become a habit with this series. There's only so much torture a girl can take.
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2,821 reviews182 followers
November 24, 2012
Books 3 and 4 of this series are pretty much just 1 story, and actually, I expect book 5 will be part of the same story arch. What I like about this story within the series is that Shiarra never has perspective. The reader is right there in the middle of it, justifying decisions that could very well be mistakes. There's no real contemplation - it all feels in-the-moment. And the characters are interesting and also surprising. The only reason this book doesn't get 4 stars from me is that the book is only part of this story. You need to read forward at least 2 more books to know how this will play out. I don't like when a single story is sliced into multiple books. That's cheating.

So this book is book 3, and Shiarra goes away for a long weekend with her werewolf boyfriend Chaz, seriously considering signing a contract that would allow them to become legally intimate and absolve him of guilt if he accidentally turned her into a were. This weekend with his pack is the test to see if she can handle his other life. Things do not go well. There are multiple attacks, and it turns out Chaz is a tremendous liar. When they get back to town, there's a real possibility that Shiarra could turn furry in a month, and then someone starts murdering other people who were turned against their will. Shiarra might be next.
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14.4k reviews543 followers
August 4, 2011
I think that I have odd tastes, because for me this book didn't really get good in this book until things went to crap for Shia.

The beginning of the book I found to be boring, it looks like things are finally good for Shia. She is so very close to taking things to the next step with Chaz, the contract is all filled out and signed by her, she just needs to work up the courage to present it to him, taking their relationship to the next level. One they didn't have before because Chaz was hiding things and lying to her. Shia was even going on the packs moon trip this month to meet them and hopefully start to insinuate herself into their way of life.

On this trip Shia does become closer to the pack and learns things that definitely change her life. The aftermath of this trip is where the story gets really interesting and I had a hard time putting it down.

Shia she is angry and rightfully so, is in shock and in flee mode to stay alive. If she can just find a safe place to get her bearings she can make a decision on what to do. I love the choice that she made, I hope that on her mission she accomplishes just was she needs to, they deserve it! Too bad I have to wait until the next book to find out how this all plays out!!
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995 reviews25 followers
February 8, 2014
In this book Shiarra starts taking her relationship with Chaz seriously, even signing a contract. She plans to give it to him to sign while they're on vacation, with the pack, over the full moon. The idea is to give Shia a chance to meet the pack in a situation that isn't the middle of a war. Unfortunately for her there are alot of secrets in the pack. And Chaz has some of the biggest. Between teenage werewolves who think they're the shit, Nerd weres out for revenge, and the revelation of a cruel secret that will destroy her trust in Chaz, the pack, and even herself, Shia's vacation turns ugly. With possible life altering results.

I have to say

Royce was also in this book, but other than letting her cry herself out, his behavior didn't impress me much either. He's still trying to control Shia.

Now Shia's off with her belt, and revenge on her mind. It'll be interesting to see where the next book goes.
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226 reviews30 followers
July 6, 2013
I hated this book. In fact, I skimmed through the entire first half where Shiarra goes camping with her boyfriend and his werewolves clan, while ignoring everybody advices and acting against all common sense.

I hated Chaz (her boyfriend). They were in love before the start of the series; therefore we didn’t see them get together. What we see is Shiarra’s remorse for not giving him a chance (as if a woman is supposed to give a chance to everyone and go out with every person who asks just to be fair…) Besides, Chaz spend his time being late, being irrationally angry and irritating and showing possessiveness. Every time Shiarra talks to Royce, Chaz quarrel with her, not caring that most time she didn’t have a choice.

The plot of the first part of the book was ridiculous and uninteresting. The second half was relatively better (some of Shiarra’s reactions were very welcome), but I didn’t appreciate the ending because I thought Shiarra’s choice stupid and because it was a cliffhanger.
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807 reviews36 followers
September 1, 2011
Wow, what a great book!! I simply can not wait till the next book comes out! Jess Haines proved that her series H&W Investigations is as good as the best and brightest urban fantasy series. I was expecting something great with this book after the previous installments but it exceeded my hopes and turned into one of the best reads of this year.
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