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Omg this book. This might just be one of the worst books I've ever read. Why two stars? Merely because it had to have something that made me read it all the way through despite several ridiculous offenses that would otherwise warrant a big fat DNF.
-Terrible inconsistent writing that clearly did not get much editing? CHECK
-Less than 2d/cardboard characters? CHECK
-Incorrect use of an unreliable narrator? CHECK
-Totally ridiculous behavior of the characters? CHECK
-False clues and red herrings that weren't actually anything but straight up LIES told in the story so that when the "twists" happen, you'd have no way to see them coming? OH YEAH
-Forced romantic interests from childhood that were baseless, supposed best friendships we're told a bout but literally never shown, characters fighting for that god awful lack-of-plot device reason of simply not communicating, a whodunit that was not even worth anyone's time? CHECK ALL THAT APPLIES
I can't even put my finger on the most egregious offenses of this book so I'm just gonna word vomit it all out as the thoughts occur. Okay, one, Mitch was concerned about fighting legally against the wrongdoers 17 years later because of the statute of limitations. He claims the only thing lawfully these people committed was covering up dead girl's identity. Um, no. How about aiding and abetting? How about desecration of a corpse? How about destruction of evidence, altering a crime scene? But here's the kicker, when Mitch starts ruffling feathers about it, suddenly the JUDGE isn't concerned about said statute and is worried about the truth coming out so he decides to commit murder in broad f'ing daylight by walking down the damn street with a gun thinking he'll get away with it. The whole thing is framed up as it's the judge's word against whomever the enemy is at the time and so he can get away with anything. Yet suddenly he has to kill to keep the thing he can get away with from being talked about. Because present at his direct hands murder is easier to get away with. Yeah. Okay. And I'm just getting started.
The writing in this. Just. I can't even...here, page 225:
Abby set the shotgun aside, and rose urgently to her feet.
"How could you?" she asked, helplessly. "Why did you?"
Hating herself, she started to cry in noisy, gulping sobs.
Mitch crossed the space between them in under a second, and reached for her.
Just before he kissed her, after he had wiped her tears with his hands, and stroked her wild, flyaway hair, and whispered, "I'm sorry, I'm so sorry, you'll never know how sorry I am," a million times, Abby said, just as urgently, "Wait!"
What? Even? Did I just read...I gave up rereading that last massacre of a sentence/paragraph trying to figure out the order of operations here. This was then followed by stage directions-style sex. He did this. She removed this. He touched there. His hands were there. Afterward, she kicks him out claiming that people are coming over to help with the clean up from the tornado. Except, then she goes hunting around for her missing bird all the rest of the day. So either that was an excuse to get him out, never properly explained, even though he wasn't trying to hang around, or this was another missed mistake.
The chapters flip flop between 2004 and 1987 but there were several chapters that flip flopped and didn't specify that the time had flipped from the previous chapter. The scene where Rex finds Abby after her accident was either a random head hop or a missed transition spot. One minute Rex is looking down at her bloodied head and pulling her out of her truck and the next she's staring up at him and thinking about the sky or something like that. We arrive to the accident in his head and leave the scene in hers.
Let's see, there's the Abby tantrums. She's with her sister the mayor planting and repairing pots in the downtown area since she owns the local greenhouse, they have a minor disagreement and Abby throws a two year old tantrum complete with running away, throwing things, and running around screaming. Oh and this is prefaced with the odd statement that onlookers would wonder what could make such a pretty girl so sad on such a nice day? You're pretty and the sun is out, your feelings are invalid.
All of the dialog goes in this format: "The sun is bright today isn't it, Bob? Don't you see, Bob, how bright the sun is? Are you listening? Bob, I'm talking to you. Bob. Bob. Bob I can't say a single sentence without repeating your name. Your name is Bob in case you forgot. Or maybe, Bob, I say it so much so I don't forget. Or, Bob, do you think it's because I think the readers can't keep my cardboard characters with their canned answers apart without, y'know Bob, mention their names constantly in dialog. Bob."
Everything to do with Rex. On page 217, Rex has found out the soon-t0-be dead girl Sarah is in love with Mitch. So not only does he not go see her for three weeks but then when he does, he says she's gone and he never sees her again until they find her body in the snow. But then at the end when he decides to tell Abby everything, he actually had been seeing her and knew she was pregnant before she died. Also, when the guys find her body, she's got blood between her legs and Rex's dad proclaims she was raped. Rex later reveals to Abby he could tell she had just given birth because he knows what cows look like after giving birth and he knows a postpartum female animal or otherwise when he sees one. What? She dies hours after giving birth, she wouldn't magic back to pre-pregnancy size it would have been obvious to everyone who saw her! Nobody would have even said rape seeing her engorged belly and bloody thighs. If anything, after birthing several calves one of the boys who found might've tried to make sure she had actually already delivered. Later on issues with Rex. He tests the DNA of the kid and dead girl's hair to a few other people mostly using sweaty things from HS because y'know, people hoard that kind of thing. Anyway he tells Abby the results put Mitch as the kid's father. Later on it's Mitch's dad that's actually the father. Okay, I know this was written in 2004 and maybe there wasn't a lot of easily accessible info on DNA testing on the internet but there was still many other resources. Unlike crime TV would have shown back in those days, DNA tests don't just say match or no match and match means it's a parent. It would've shown a 25% match which meant grandparent or sibling. And this is the sheriff. Then, as all the nonsense starts happening rapid fire, Rex is driving with Abby and pulls up to his house when his mom has to inform them that Abby's dad was shot. But scenes later and Rex has a cell phone he's using to make constant calls. You're telling me nobody calls the SHERIFF when there's been a murder in a town that's gone 17 years since the last murder? Then IT GETS WORSE, Rex decides that even though his deputies are clearly not conducting the crime scene investigation properly, that instead of doing his job, he's gonna go have a chat with the family and friends involved in dead girl's situation where everything is all laid out. Because a chat is more important than an active murder investigation that happened MINUTES AGO.
Then there was the random Jeff running off with the gun just to make drama that was not needed nor really relevant. The giant red herring that was too obvious that was Patrick's entire character. There is so much wrong. The worst part? This is the author's 18th novel according to the interview in the back on my copy. And no, surprise surprise, she's never experienced a tornado.
The doctor literally washes his hands of the situation after delivering the baby and is like whatever, I'll leave her here then it's the judge's word against hers, can't get her proper care because then she might talk despite the judge's word being law to these people and it would be ignored as a girl from a bad family trying to exploit for money even if she did talk. Literally no one would have questioned it if the Newquists took her to the hospital to deliver the baby and then adopted him. They would've looked like heroes, she would've taken the money and run like she planned to do, the end. Nope, wouldn't have a book then so might as well roll with this thin nonsense.
There's so much wrong I can't list everything. A tornado that's moving at 15 mph that makes Rex get out of his car to go hide in a ditch. 15 mph. Just drive away from it yo. If you're out in the open you hide in a ditch. You're more likely to survive strapped in your seat than you are cowering out in the open, y'know, assuming it's not a granny tornado that you could putter away from. And the people weren't taking it seriously because they heard the siren despite that a confirmed tornado was spotted on the ground and heading their way? Yeah no not how it works. Ignoring a siren, sure, confirmed and on the way? No. Grrr.
Read this if and ONLY IF reading nonsensical garbage is your favorite past time. I can't even fathom what genre I'd shove this in besides dumpster fire.