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message 1: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) I'm not sure if this classifies as "game" material, but it seems like it'll be fun, if not an appropriate exercise to tackle writer's poet's block.

Basically, write a standard haiku that somehow relates to the previous haiku. You can be as literal or as interpretive as you want--by all means, go off on tangents, but try not to stray too far into unrecognizable randomness.

I prefer shorts and
A blanket in cold weather
To Chicago Junes



message 2: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Jessica, this is a great idea! I love writing haiku, but I’m not very good at it.

I like to wrap up
in a suave, blanket statement
when things get chilly.


message 3: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) Thanks! I'm glad you like my idea. Your haiku is wonderful--it's very clever.
Wraps all in quiet,
Knitted fingers gently warmed,
indebted silence.



message 4: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Alex, you're alive!


message 5: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments You must be having a rough semester. That happens.


message 6: by Caitlan (last edited Sep 28, 2011 11:06AM) (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *


Knitting is so fun.
Clickity clackity knit.
My knitting past-time.


message 7: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) Strip these brown fibers
From predetermined cocoons
Not unlike netting


message 8: by Jessica (last edited Sep 28, 2011 07:08PM) (new)

Jessica (eyrer) Contain our lost words
To prevent any tangling
Between Yours and Mines


message 9: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *


Brushing and brushing
My seventy feet of hair
Almost takes all day


message 10: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) I have got to do
something about this wasteful
Rapunzel leisure


message 11: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *


Help us save the world
Don't be the human you are
Wantful and wasteful


message 12: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments I am full of want
And want for nothing but you
in Barcelona.


message 13: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments What suave, smooth haiku! Guy, that’s now one of my favorites.

She haunts the soundbox
of a melon-backed guitar
now white with years’ dust.


message 14: by Guy (last edited Oct 02, 2011 08:18PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Thanks M & Al - Jessica, this is an excellent 'game'! Al what a curiously goth haiku following M's somber one.

The strand of her hair
was coiled stark red in the dawn's
new bar of white soap.


message 15: by Kimathy (new)

Kimathy Wash away the dirt
Of the previous nights game
And wait for the next.


message 16: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) Thanks, Guy! I'm glad you all are taking to it. :)

Cleanse this parted soul
Of its regretted children
Born yesterday's spoils


message 17: by Guy (last edited Oct 02, 2011 10:13PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments YW, Jessica. I've been writing haiku off and on for 30 years or so.



When I left childhood
I parted my hair sideways
to wash out regrets.


message 18: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments When all that’s left are
my regrets, I’ll give up rum
and French cigarettes.


message 19: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M, this is excellent! And rhyming too. Nice.


message 20: by Caitlan (last edited Oct 03, 2011 02:36PM) (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *


Hit me with the rum,
I'll take one more glass, waiter.
Drinking like a fool.


message 21: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Guy and Alex. Nice work, Kat and Alex!

Damn the nicotine!
Full speed ahead! Ah, I see
Mossers, Iz, and Red.


message 22: by Caitlan (last edited Oct 03, 2011 05:18PM) (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *I added more XD


Thanks M :) I like yours

Blood red seeping out
Congealing on my white skin
Beautiful contrast

The sharp, loving knife
Pierces skin so tenderly
Creating contrast

Between scars and skin
Or life and lingering death
Beautiful contrast


message 23: by M (last edited Oct 03, 2011 05:07PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments A vampire who faints
into a poufy-sleeved swoon
at the sight of blood?


message 24: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *



The big, poufy-sleeves
Accentuate my slim body
Love the Medieval


message 25: by Jessica (last edited Oct 03, 2011 05:35PM) (new)

Jessica (eyrer) Her strange silhouette
That lurks, encompasses us
When the lights turn on


message 26: by M (last edited Oct 03, 2011 05:38PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Light the tall candle
that drips pale, medieval wax
in a castle room.


message 27: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Nice, Jessica! (Sorry I replied to the wrong one. I'm slow.)


message 28: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments lol, its fine m :)


message 29: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) Those heavy scented,
dusty Yankee aisles make
me want to vomit.


message 30: by Kimathy (new)

Kimathy Yummy Hershey's bar
Gummi bears and sour worms
Imma be fat, yup.

(Explanation: I used to go to baseballs games a lot which meant I ate way to much candy!)


message 31: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *I DONT KNOW XD lol



Man walks into bar
Man hastens out of the bar
He is one smart man


message 32: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments I sat, my elbows
on the slate. The barkeep growled,
“You’re out awful late!”

I downed the shot and
mentioned a name: a doe-eyed,
tall, two-timing dame.

He filled the shot glass
and set the bottle before
me on the old bar.

She was a model,
I told him, under her long
hair an ugly scar.


message 33: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *Nice m :)


message 34: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Kat!


It was like a scene
from an old film flickering
on a silent screen.


message 35: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *You are welcome



These cold, old bones creak
Forever, incessantly
Driving me to death


message 36: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) I have not driven
so far from home until I
collided with you.


message 37: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments It was a long drive:
the ball sliced through the treetops,
bounced on the cart sheds.


message 38: by Guy (last edited Oct 08, 2011 05:01PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M here's my pale imitation to your interleaved rhyming Haiku.



I was on the ball
Is what he thought when the tree
Struck him in the face.

What? Where is this place?
His brained thoughts bounced in their fall
Towards mystery.

Who am I to be?
The tree stood as quiet as grace
One hundred feet tall.


message 39: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Your poems and stories often have a philosophical dimension. This one has an enticing element of ambiguity, which gives it a surreal cast. I especially like the lines “The tree stood as quiet as grace / One hundred feet tall.”


message 40: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M, I seem to be unable to write without some kind of philosophical element creeping in. As long as they are still entertaining to some extent. This rhyming haiku thing is a curious format - I had fun getting this to go.


message 41: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) Count the rings that cir-
-cle your your core grown old by
roots grounded, away.


message 42: by Caitlan (last edited Oct 08, 2011 09:24PM) (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *Wow, thats a lot of haiku's about trees XD



Scritch, scratch on the win-
-dow, something is trying to
invade your own mind


message 43: by Guy (last edited Oct 09, 2011 01:36PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments .


The morning talker
Forgot to remember that
unsaid words are best.


message 44: by Guy (last edited Oct 09, 2011 01:59PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments .


She had me in the chair
I didn't know that her name
Wasn't Chastity.


message 45: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments I said, “Though your name
be not Chastity, take some
off the top and sides.”


message 46: by Guy (last edited Oct 09, 2011 03:30PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M, lol - I'm still smiling :-)


She looked at my sides
And off the top of her head
said "You have big ears."


message 47: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments She dissolved to tears,
giggling about my ears,
scissors waving past.

She snipped lightning fast.
“Watch it with the thinning shears!”
I exclaimed at last.


message 48: by M (last edited Oct 09, 2011 04:33PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Salem judges asked,
“Consortest thou with demons?”
The witch was aghast.

“Would I judge a man
by his horns and his forked tail?
He shops at Neiman’s.”


message 49: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) Yet under the irk-
some scowl and flesh-speckled teeth,
he's not unpleasant.


message 50: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) Haha! Love it.

The turn of your arm
pulls the blanket off my chest,
yet I let you be.


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