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Speaking with the Heart
Transforming Your Relationship and Communication with Compassion and Connection.
I'd LOVE t..."
Welcome to the group.

Inner monologuing is generally for describing inner feelings and thoughts, setting doesn't usually come into it. If you want her to be commenting on the surroundings or scenery, maybe you might be better served if you turned it into a dialogue scene between her and another hunter.

Inner monologues are good for expressing emotions. Is she excited, afraid, or unhappy?

I am currently dealing with writers block and can not seem to figu..."
Maybe the issue is the conversation itself. If they just met, then perhaps you need to start with an awkward scene full of stares, pauses and silence, and fumbling small talk. You can interrupt this with the waitress/barmaid taking their order, and then slide into a more natural conversation. Maybe two of them like the same food or type of ale. Maybe someone orders something unusual and gets teased about it.

I'm Sileas Hills, I'm an newbie writer, and I write fantasy and romance fiction novels, I'm hoping to publish one soon. I am also an avid reader, love anything from romance to historica..."
Welcome to the group.

Welcome to the group.

I am writing fantasy. I am glad to be here and look forward to interacting with some of you."
Welcome, Rebecca.

Welcome to the group.

Welcome to the group.

My new release,
Believe, Live, Run.
is available at Amazon.
In a nutshell, my story is about how I've become from a “village peasant” into an engineer, and what extreme diffic..."
Please don't promote books in the introductions thread. They are plenty of places within the group for book promotion. This space is for you to introduce yourself to the group.

I don't log on often as I'd lik..."
Welcome to the group, Ann.

Welcome to the group.

My poems are based on personal life experiences dating between 2016-2018.
The book is avai..."
Please post book promotion in the designated folders as outlined in the above post and NOT here.

Welcome to the group.
Nov 22, 2020 07:11AM


An immortal witch of Camelot. A looming magical crisis. A destiny she’s willing to reject.
All Nimue wants is a peaceful life, but her past won’t leave her alone. And when her friend Iseult brings news that her old rival Morgawse has been abducted, an impending catastrophe lands on her doorstep. And worse, the wizard responsible is Nimue’s ex, Nostradamus.
Dragged into another adventure, Nimue confronts her former flame as he wages a desperate quest, only to be thrust deeper into an escalating crisis. As Nimue struggles to unravel what is happening, she discovers dark secrets that threaten the heart of magical energy. Now it’s her fate to rescue magic for every witch and wizard, including her friends. Trouble is, she wants no part of being magic’s saviour.
Will Nimue step up as a champion? Or will she let the magical world die?
Past Legends: The Camelot Immortals Book One, is a contemporary Arthurian fantasy inspired by the tales we all know and love. If you like strong snarky heroines, wizards and witches, and copious amounts of alcohol, then you’ll love the adventures of Nimue and her friends.
Warning: This book contains offensive language.
Past Legends: An Arthurian Fantasy
Nov 22, 2020 07:06AM


An immortal witch of Camelot. A looming magical crisis. A destiny she’s willing to reject.
All Nimue wants is a peaceful life, but her past won’t leave her alone. And when her friend Iseult brings news that her old rival Morgawse has been abducted, an impending catastrophe lands on her doorstep. And worse, the wizard responsible is Nimue’s ex, Nostradamus.
Dragged into another adventure, Nimue confronts her former flame as he wages a desperate quest, only to be thrust deeper into an escalating crisis. As Nimue struggles to unravel what is happening, she discovers dark secrets that threaten the heart of magical energy. Now it’s her fate to rescue magic for every witch and wizard, including her friends. Trouble is, she wants no part of being magic’s saviour.
Will Nimue step up as a champion? Or will she let the magical world die?
Past Legends: The Camelot Immortals Book One, is a contemporary Arthurian fantasy inspired by the tales we all know and love. If you like strong snarky heroines, wizards and witches, and copious amounts of alcohol, then you’ll love the adventures of Nimue and her friends.
Warning: This book contains offensive language.
Past Legends: An Arthurian Fantasy

Welcome to the group.

I am a published author and a reader too.
I live in West Sussex, England with my husband and our youngest son.
I love to write, though read..."
Welcome to the group, Jane.

You are welcome to share here. We having the Reading Nook, where writers of all ages are welcome to post stories or excerpts for reading or critique. And if you have any questions, feel free to ask them in the Writer's Corner.