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Introductions (1185 new)
Feb 03, 2024 03:29PM

37092 Heather wrote: "Hello! I just joined Goodreads and this group this week! I am newly published.
Speaking with the Heart
Transforming Your Relationship and Communication with Compassion and Connection.

I'd LOVE t..."

Welcome to the group.
Questions and Help (230 new)
Apr 23, 2023 05:42PM

37092 Jana wrote: "But what would they talk about? How should I describe the setting?"

Inner monologuing is generally for describing inner feelings and thoughts, setting doesn't usually come into it. If you want her to be commenting on the surroundings or scenery, maybe you might be better served if you turned it into a dialogue scene between her and another hunter.
Questions and Help (230 new)
Apr 23, 2023 09:05AM

37092 Jana wrote: "I am having a bit of writer's block. I am trying to have an inner monologue with my main character on a hunting quest with her party; out to find some wolves. What would she think about? what would..."

Inner monologues are good for expressing emotions. Is she excited, afraid, or unhappy?
Questions and Help (230 new)
Mar 28, 2023 06:20AM

37092 Jana wrote: "I am not sure where I should post this or ask for helps so, if you know where I should post this instead it would be appreciated.

I am currently dealing with writers block and can not seem to figu..."


Maybe the issue is the conversation itself. If they just met, then perhaps you need to start with an awkward scene full of stares, pauses and silence, and fumbling small talk. You can interrupt this with the waitress/barmaid taking their order, and then slide into a more natural conversation. Maybe two of them like the same food or type of ale. Maybe someone orders something unusual and gets teased about it.
Introductions (1185 new)
Nov 02, 2022 05:20AM

37092 Sileas wrote: "Hi everyone
I'm Sileas Hills, I'm an newbie writer, and I write fantasy and romance fiction novels, I'm hoping to publish one soon. I am also an avid reader, love anything from romance to historica..."


Welcome to the group.
Introductions (1185 new)
Aug 12, 2022 01:13PM

37092 Pradeep wrote: "Hi I am Pradeep, a physician turned author based in Bristol, UK and I have just published my first novel, 'Karlo:Untold Story of a Physician ' available on Kindle a fiction that grapples with menta..."

Welcome to the group.
Introductions (1185 new)
May 30, 2022 11:22AM

37092 Rebecca wrote: "Hi my name is Rebecca. I am reader and writer.

I am writing fantasy. I am glad to be here and look forward to interacting with some of you."


Welcome, Rebecca.
Introductions (1185 new)
Aug 28, 2021 07:29AM

37092 Naila wrote: "Hi everyone, I'm Naila, I like reading and LOVE writing. I've been working on a series for the last couple of years and I hope to publish the first book later this year. I like adventure, fantasy m..."

Welcome to the group.
Introductions (1185 new)
May 28, 2021 04:59PM

37092 Thurman wrote: "Hello. I am an author. I was born in Texas, raised in California, served four years in the U.S. Air Force received Christ as my Savior, called to the ministry, studied in Canada and the U.S. Minist..."

Welcome to the group.
Introductions (1185 new)
Apr 15, 2021 08:21AM

37092 Bertalan wrote: "Dear Group Members,

My new release,
Believe, Live, Run.
is available at Amazon.

In a nutshell, my story is about how I've become from a “village peasant” into an engineer, and what extreme diffic..."


Please don't promote books in the introductions thread. They are plenty of places within the group for book promotion. This space is for you to introduce yourself to the group.
Introductions (1185 new)
Mar 01, 2021 07:29PM

37092 Ann wrote: "Hi, my name is Ann Crystal. I am a self-published writer and artist. I also enjoy reading. My favorites (to read/write) are topics based on the Ghostly and Magical.

I don't log on often as I'd lik..."


Welcome to the group, Ann.
Introductions (1185 new)
Feb 15, 2021 01:06PM

37092 Sevannah wrote: "Hi everyone. My name's Sev. I'm a reader and an author (lover of romance and happily ever after). I am always open to chat :)"

Welcome to the group.
Feb 11, 2021 12:42PM

37092 Elie wrote: "If you are into poetry, photography and illustrative sketches, then this book is the right pick for you.

My poems are based on personal life experiences dating between 2016-2018.

The book is avai..."


Please post book promotion in the designated folders as outlined in the above post and NOT here.
Introductions (1185 new)
Dec 01, 2020 07:01AM

37092 Tomas wrote: "Hi, my name is Tomas Black, I am the author of The Omega Sanction and its prequel Drumbeat. I'm an avid reader as well as a writer and enjoy all types of genre. I'm currently working on my second n..."

Welcome to the group.
37092

An immortal witch of Camelot. A looming magical crisis. A destiny she’s willing to reject.

All Nimue wants is a peaceful life, but her past won’t leave her alone. And when her friend Iseult brings news that her old rival Morgawse has been abducted, an impending catastrophe lands on her doorstep. And worse, the wizard responsible is Nimue’s ex, Nostradamus.

Dragged into another adventure, Nimue confronts her former flame as he wages a desperate quest, only to be thrust deeper into an escalating crisis. As Nimue struggles to unravel what is happening, she discovers dark secrets that threaten the heart of magical energy. Now it’s her fate to rescue magic for every witch and wizard, including her friends. Trouble is, she wants no part of being magic’s saviour.

Will Nimue step up as a champion? Or will she let the magical world die?

Past Legends: The Camelot Immortals Book One, is a contemporary Arthurian fantasy inspired by the tales we all know and love. If you like strong snarky heroines, wizards and witches, and copious amounts of alcohol, then you’ll love the adventures of Nimue and her friends.

Warning: This book contains offensive language.

Past Legends: An Arthurian Fantasy
37092 Past Legends An Arthurian Fantasy by A.F. Stewart
An immortal witch of Camelot. A looming magical crisis. A destiny she’s willing to reject.


All Nimue wants is a peaceful life, but her past won’t leave her alone. And when her friend Iseult brings news that her old rival Morgawse has been abducted, an impending catastrophe lands on her doorstep. And worse, the wizard responsible is Nimue’s ex, Nostradamus.

Dragged into another adventure, Nimue confronts her former flame as he wages a desperate quest, only to be thrust deeper into an escalating crisis. As Nimue struggles to unravel what is happening, she discovers dark secrets that threaten the heart of magical energy. Now it’s her fate to rescue magic for every witch and wizard, including her friends. Trouble is, she wants no part of being magic’s saviour.

Will Nimue step up as a champion? Or will she let the magical world die?

Past Legends: The Camelot Immortals Book One, is a contemporary Arthurian fantasy inspired by the tales we all know and love. If you like strong snarky heroines, wizards and witches, and copious amounts of alcohol, then you’ll love the adventures of Nimue and her friends.

Warning: This book contains offensive language.

Past Legends: An Arthurian Fantasy
Introductions (1185 new)
Nov 10, 2020 08:43AM

37092 Victoria wrote: "Hi, I am Victoria Liiv. I absolutely love reading, mostly fantasy, YA and romance. I also write fantasy and recently published a book, although it still feels like I am exaggerating if I say I am a..."

Welcome to the group.
Introductions (1185 new)
Nov 02, 2020 12:20PM

37092 Jane wrote: "Hi everyone, thank you for accepting me into your group.
I am a published author and a reader too.
I live in West Sussex, England with my husband and our youngest son.
I love to write, though read..."


Welcome to the group, Jane.
Introductions (1185 new)
Oct 07, 2020 08:12PM

37092 Ⓚⓔⓝ wrote: "Ok so would you mind if I shared mine?"

That's fine.
Introductions (1185 new)
Oct 07, 2020 04:24PM

37092 Ⓚⓔⓝ wrote: "Ok thank you, I'm not an author though I am writing a book. I'm trying to find some places where I can share, but thankyou!"

You are welcome to share here. We having the Reading Nook, where writers of all ages are welcome to post stories or excerpts for reading or critique. And if you have any questions, feel free to ask them in the Writer's Corner.
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