College student, Natalie Vega, struggles in her quest to learn how she can have a normal life, which includes her boyfriend Ryan, and also help the world that has been experiencing the effects of global warming. While her supernatural powers are unknown and are a secret to most in the world, an evil business tycoon learns of her superhero abilities and has other plans for Natalie and his empire.
This book was excellent. We start right where we left off with Element Part 1. I was hooked right away, just like part one. Things really get interesting in this part. Wow, it was great.
I would not know what I would do if I had what happens to Natalie happen to me, lol, I sure would not mind a Ryan of my own! He is almost too good to be true, lol. I won’t spoil anything for you, don’t worry, lol.
I Will say that its written extremely well, just like the other one, and sucks you into the story. I found I liked this one a bit more than the first part, I do see this story going places, or at least I hope so!
I highly recommend this book. Anyone who likes the paranormal/sci-fi or whatever you call this, will love it. It’s got just enough of the mystery of what the heck is happening to really keep you thinking.
5 out of 5 stars for sure.
I was given a copy of this book for my honest review by the author.
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I'm so bad... I promised I'd get this post up for the author on the twelfth. I just finished the book... at nearly five a.m. Aren't I bad?
To, start, I'm not big on what I call "lah" moments. You know, the moments in movies where a couple are so sickeningly sweet, ooey gooey in love, and they're all, "I love you," and, "No, I love you more," and everyone else in the room wants to gag. Okay, maybe that's my perception, but that's pretty much how this book starts, picking up where the first book left off. Just... not my thing.
This is also the glue of the first half of the book too, so it was a little slow for me until it really got into the meat of things... because I'm a meat and potatoes kind of gal, after all. Doporto is very much a romance author first.
I love the interplay between Lise and Natalie. I can't help but smile. It's so clear that they're good friends, and it's so hard on Natalie trying to hide what's going on with her. Their interactions simultaneously put me at ease because of the easy familiarity between the two, and put me on edge because of the secret Natalie is hiding from her roommate and friend.
I frequently see Natalie as foolish and naive. At times, I question her skills as a scientist because she overlooks events she shouldn't, and doesn't question things and people she should. Frankly, if I'd been the main character, things wouldn't have gone down the way they did. Granted, I'm from New Jersey. We believe anything that isn't nailed down deserves to get stolen. We believe the worst in people and, when I first moved to North Carolina, thought there was something wrong with everybody because they were waving at us... like maybe they were serial killers or something. Me? I would have probably locked myself in my room, not let anyone see what I could do, never would have trusted anyone. So, yeah, I couldn't help feeling like she was a bit naive for trusting people when my brain was swimming with government-issued SUVs swarming in or corporate conspiracies. Yeah, I totally thought this was going to be a corporate conspiracy type of thing. In my head, there was some big bad mad scientist that had experimented on her. I had so convinced myself that's what had happened that I was a little let down when I learned the truth.
The second half of the book definitely picked up. It was a little slow reading for me at first, but once I hit the halfway point, even a headache and upset stomach didn't slow me down (and good God, did I feel like crap...). You couldn't help becoming absorbed in the characters' plight, wondering how they'd escape, everyone alive and mostly unharmed.
I was a little miffed, let down, when the big bad guy's evil plans had to do with cannabis/marajuana plants. More specifically, allowing them to adapt better to weather conditions. I felt like cannabis didn't hold quite the umph as a illegal enterprise, partly because of it's controversiality with regard to whether it should be illegal in the first place (after all, the only reason it is illegal is because of a pharmaceutical conspiracy long ago to increase sales of cough medicine, and it is the only drug -- including alcohol and cigarettes -- which hasn't had a single death attributed to it in the thousands of years of recorded history of its use), and images of stoners kept popping into my head -- things like Cheech & Chong "driving" their van with smoke billowing out the windows. Add to that, cannabis is about the most resilient plant known to man. Probably the only plants more drought tolerant live in deserts, and yet that was one of the big bad guy's complaints. Cannabis can practically grow anywhere. Now, if it had been heavy rains damaging young plants, that would make sense, or an early frost. But drought?
One of my favorite things about these books was the mystery of it, trying to figure out what's really going on. I spent most of the two books trying to figure out what was happening to her, how she came to be the way she was, what was triggering the change, and a plethora of other things. And best of all? It was generally a surprise. I mean, sometimes my imagination got away with me and I imagined something far more complex and outrageous than she did, but it was always a surprise, good or bad. I liked that, because I'm rarely truly surprised by books, movies or TV shows anymore. This one kept me guessing, and as someone who finds Sherlock Holmes "elementary," I guess that's saying something.
First of I would like to thank the author for allowing me to read her book. I recived this book in exchange for an honest review. This book started were the last one left off and finally I felt like I got some questions answered. In the book C.M. made a referance to X-Men and I truly believe that is a great referance. This book has all the "elements" that anyone could love. It is a paranormal action packed love story. Natalie is a strong determaned girl who is completely freaked out by her powers yet is willing to do whatever she can to stay with Ryan. Ryan is a loving caring selfless man that is willing to give up his world just to make sure Natalie is happy and safe! The book was super fast paced and enjoyable. I loved the way C.M. easliy conected each chapeter of the book. There were no gaps or questions of what just happened. My only downfall is that I felt the world love was used to much I get that they loved each other but was a bit to much. But that was the only part of the book that I didn't like. Well done I can't wait to read #3.
I started this book to know how Ryan would react to his little discovery, but ended up finding so much more! (Which I thought I wouldn't). There are so many things that become crystal clear on this 2nd part, like why Ryan played such an important role on the first book. Also, even though the final scenes seemed rushed, they were quite interesting.
The writing style of this author can be REALLY captivating, or REALLY dull, according to the scenes. That's why I rate it with 3. Besides that, most of the characters weren't fully introduced or properly developed. And Natalie, the main character, was less likable on this book than on the previous one. (Does this make any sense?)
I had the opportunity to Beta read this for the author.
Part 2 starts almost immediately where part 1 leaves off. Natalie and Ryan are trying to come to terms with Natalie's ability and the trigger.... We find out why and how it came about that Natalie has these abilities in the first place and we get to experience how she grows, she starts out as a scared young girl who slowly accepts that this ability can mean so much more. Doporto has written a book that you can fall right into, its easy to imagine the characters are your friends as they drag you along in their story. I know it's a cliche, but this book really is a real page turner. I dare you to try and put this book down, you wont be able to do it, I know I couldn't
The story is pretty good. but it reads like a comic book. If the author is interested in developing her craft she need to get a handle on her use of pronouns. "Me" is never used as a subject and "I" is never used as an object. Also the author needs to get control of verbs. The past tense of "sink" is " sank" not " sunk". To use "sunk" you need a helping verb with it like had, has, and have . The same goes for the words drink, and stink
Storyline was promising, but I felt a little under sold and flat at the end. Parts of the story were reexplained /repeated and it made scenes feel over worked and not from a viewpoint of clarity.
Element Part 1 was the story of Natalie and Ryan, freshmen in college. They were attracted to each other from the first time they saw each other in class and eventually got together. Natalie and Ryan were working as interns at a local company where Natalie had agreed to try out some vitamins. The vitamins started causing strange reactions that you would need to read about to understand what I'm talking about.
Element Part 2 picks up right where the first one left off, which I was happy about. Cliffhangers drive me a bit batty just because I hate waiting for the next one so to be able to finally pick back up on this story gave me a sigh of relief. Anyone that has ever read reviews by me know I hate giving away any part of the story, mainly because I hate reading reviews that do. So this is what I'll leave you with:
Do Natalie and Ryan stay together? Do the vitamins cause more strange reactions? Will Natalie tell Ryan everything, or will it tear them apart? Find out on your own when you purchase Element Part 2 from Amazon.
I was given a copy of this book, not necessarily in exchange for a review, but because I loved the first one so much that I joined CM Doporto's Street Team on Facebook. I'm happy that I did because I found myself enjoying Part 2 even more than the first one. The reviewing part comes in because it was such an enjoyable book and I love spreading the word when I find something that I love!
I received this book as an ARC from the author in exchange for an honest review and can I start by saying how glad I am that I did! I read the first book in a single night and the second the following day.
Part two was written much better in my opinion than the first ( though I enjoyed both) I loved how the author chose to expand on some of the other characters by giving them their own POV's.
I feel like the whole concept was original and a great idea. I won't lie a couple of parts bored me but only slightly.. I did not find it entirely believable that no one noticed when they were missing, or that they would be so trusting of a certain doctor right from the start. I noticed Sean was not mentioned in part two and that felt odd to me when everyone else's stories were all tying into one another. I enjoyed how Natalie and Ryan grew throughout the story and how we learned about the pills she was taking and what really happened on that flight! Plus we learned the really story about Tony or a bug chunk of it anyway, Also loved the ending or the " The End?" Part it left room for so much more and I am really looking forward to this authors future writing. It was a really fun , and a not too time consuming read , I'm really glad I had the opportunity to check it out.!
I thought this was a good young adult story. I liked this book much better than Part One. I thought that the main character was naive, but it didn't take away from the overall story. Yet again the author was overly repetitious when writing about Tony (the ex-boyfriend) saying to himself that "he really needed to talk to Natalie". I thought that the writer could have delved deeper into the emotions that he was feeling, guilt, remorseful and desperation, rather than repeating that "he really needed to talk to Natalie" over and over. I would have liked it if the author would have written more about Natalie's feelings during her change. I thought that the writer could have been more descriptive about what it was like to fly and be fire. I thought that the writer should have written about the doctor's abduction, and possible torture, and/or have Russ use the doctor's sons as leverage, instead of just briefly mentioning a hypnosis serum. I think that was a stupid idea.
I really enjoyed this book. Part 1 left me with questions (not to mention the cliffhanger!!) so I had to read Part 2 in order to see if I was right in my theories (and because of the cliffhanger!). I really enjoyed getting the POV from other characters that we didn't have in Part 1 (aside from Ryan's quick POV). I wasn't a fan of why the antagonist wanted Natalie as it kind of read like an after school program more than anything else. I also was not sold on Tony's motives. I understand a person can change but his reasons didn't seem that realistic to me. Those are the two reasons for the 4 stars. I love the author's writing and she can definitely spin a story well. I look forward to reading more from this author. This book wraps everything up in a nice bow so I'm content with the series to end there, but I enjoyed the characters so much I hope that their story continues.
I bought this following the cliff hanger at the end of the last one to satisfy my curiosity. I actually preferred this in some ways to the first one because at least we get some answers. If I'm being honest though it was all a little too corny for me. When I think of fictional heroines I think sexy, sassy women who have a genuine purpose not women who change into the four elements and act like a human watering can. It reminded me of being a child where you love guys in capes and external underwear because you think they are there to save the world. That's not my cup of tea anymore I'm afraid.
I will say this the author has a genuine interest in global warming and it is great that she's tried to interweave this serious issue into the books. I'm sure lots of people will read this and love it, it's just not my taste.
We left Natalie in a cliffhanger, realizing she can turn into all four elements (this kind of reminded me of Avatar: The Last Airbender, TV show). Now Ryan knows that she is Element and to be quite honest is a smidge freaked out, but who wouldn’t be? Now that Ryan knows the two need to keep a secret from everyone else such as Lise. While Natalie is trying to figure out what is up with her and keep secrets from her roommate. We also get to see the pesky ex again and learn more about their story together. I’m not the most avid of paranormal romance but I am happy that I picked this one up. It didn’t seem very paranormal to me even though a big chunk of the storyline has to do with the protagonist turning into the elements. It picked up right where the last one left off and the character development of secondary characters made it more enjoyable.
I love C.M. Doporto's writing! She keeps you guessing all throughout the book. I won't spoil the book for anyone, but know that this book is amazing!! If you liked Part 1, you are going to love Part 2!
Natalie and Ryan are two of my most favorite characters ever!! They are always so interesting to read about and their relationship is beautiful!! I seriously believe they are meant to be together forever! Element Part 1 was fantastic and I think Part 2 is just as amazing and maybe even better! This is a story that will have everyone entertained for hours and hours! I can't say enough good things about this book!
I highly recommend this book to anyone who loves a great storyline with amazing characters!
I know I am kind of repeating my review from part one, but I really feel the same way. The characters were great, likable, easy to relate to, and easily understood. Natalie and Ryan are still a wonderful couple and I love that they are sticking to one another through everything-including the many difficulties they face as a couple. I still feel that part one and part two should have been combined into one complete book. As part two ended, the story could be left alone or another book could follow if the author chooses. I hope she does choose to continue the story in the future because I still have some unanswered questions and hope for this couple. However, I could be content with the ending as it is as well.
Oh my gravy. I thought book 1 was incredible. Now I got a chance to read book 2 and I devoured it!!! It was well worth the wait for the author to perfect her story.
Natalie and Ryan are learning to deal with her issue of becoming "Element". Twists and turns, lies and deceit, the return of an ex, all these things Natalie and Ryan must deal with to figure out what she is and how to control her powers.
Very well written, great flow, continuance was perfect. Everything about this book drew me in from the very beginning. It is just as good as book 1. I look forward to even more adventures of Element!!!
Well I have to say that this book is equal to the previous book and my complaints are basically the same. The two stories should have been combined into one book. There were enough characters and bad guys without adding Dr V. The characters are not well developed and there is little to no continuity in their conversations and actions. The whole thing with Russ came out of left field and you have no idea how or why, same with Tony & his dad. There are too many conflicts to make the story flow. Again the ending is abrupt with no closure.
An amazing read that continues from part one. Natalie and Ryan run into issues that will blow your mind away as you are reading. It has action with romance, since it continues from book 1, both book are a must read. Both are page turner, will have you begging for more. Element is a book of wonders of romance and how love conquers all no matter what. Just love this series.
I received this book in exchange for my honest review.
I was given this book by the author for my honest review
I really enjoyed this book and the way that Natalie was the elements of the earth it put a whole different twist to the story. I liked the fact that it too for a guy to set everything in motion and the fact that no matter what she looked like he accepted her for what she was no matter what. This was a great story about no matter how much you love someone you can never love them enough and love is the real deal no matter the age.
I received an ARC of this story in exchange for an honest review.
As with Element Part 1, I enjoyed the storyline and the interactions between Natalie and Ryan. However, part 2 added a number of new characters (good) and gave them each their own point of view section. Switching characters too often got a little confusing in my head.
Love it when a book picks up where the first one left off. Just like book 1 I got right into the story and wanted to finish it in one sitting but couldnt because I had to feed the kids. Very good story.