I really liked the story of the book. It has some humor and a little bit of romance. However, it is desperately in need of an editor! Many misspelled words, missing words, and left out words. In the middle of the story the POV shifts to one character and is that way until the end. At one point it randomly shifts to the third person and after a few paragraphs it shifts back. It is very confusing. There are constantly repeated phrases and jumping around in the plot.