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Electric Melty Tingles

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LGBT Contemporary

Celebrating "Coming Out Day" 2010

It's August of 1970, and the friends of 21-year-old Oliver Duncan are having a blast at his bachelor party. Except Ned Surwicki. He isn't an Ivy Leaguer. He doesn't appreciate female strippers. And although he's been Oliver's best friend since they were 14, Ned isn't much inclined to celebrate his pal's impending marriage. Ned is gay, something he's known since he kissed a boy and got the melty tingles. He's also in love with the groom-to-be. Naturally, Ned is miserable.

On the night before his wedding, Oliver realizes that he's miserable, too. Who should come to his rescue but best friend Ned, of course.

Thus begins a romance that spans forty years, requires one coming-out after another, and survives a broken engagement, a menage with War and Pees, world travel, an ill-advised marriage, scores of fuck buddies, a father who thinks his son is destined to be a clone of Liberace, parents who reject their son, and, worst of all, the failure of two misguided men to pursue their fondest dream.

The most important coming-out for Ned and Oliver is summed up in a declaration they spend too many years trying futilely to "I love you. That's never going to change."

Publisher's This book contains explicit sexual content, graphic language, and situations that some readers may find Male/male sexual practices, menage/moresome (m/m/m/m).

105 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 28, 2010

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Profile Image for Laurie .
2,012 reviews823 followers
February 22, 2011
This was a fabulous friends turned lovers m/m romance. It was sexy, sweetly sentimental and heart wrenching. I enjoyed this story so much and now have to find everything else this author has written.

My full review for JERR is now posted on the site HERE . You'll have to click my link, hit enter and click my link again, unless you've visited JERR recently. Sorry!
Profile Image for Shell.
141 reviews
January 4, 2011
It gave me the tingles!

This is my third K.Z. Snow book and each one I read is better than the last. This one starts off in 1970 at the bachelor party of Oliver Duncan. Oliver's best friend, Ned Surwicki, is there, watching some random girl shake her assets in his best friends face; the best friend he has been in love with since he was 14 years old. Now, at 20, he is no less in love with Oliver, than he was when they met as high school freshman. Oliver, on the other hand, doesn't seem to have an attraction to Ned. Well, why would Ned think so, being that it's Oliver's bachelor party and he is to wed a woman in a few days. When the night before that fateful day comes though, Oliver is less ready to take the plunge than anyone would have thought. When his cold feet and underlying concern that he may be less than straight get the better of him, he calls his best friend and arranges for the two of them to take a 5 day journey west to Seattle by train.

The train ride west transpires as you might assume, with the two young men recognizing that they're more than merely best friends to one another, but this is 1970 and homosexuality was even less accepted then than it is now. Upon the conclusion of their five day getaway, they return to their families, their hometown and their normal lives. They love one another deeply, but as so sadly happens sometimes, life simply gets in the way. One thing leads to another and it's many years before the two meet up again, this time as successful men in their thirties and the love that blossomed 15 years prior takes root again, or maybe not so much takes root, but flourishes back with a vengeance.

This story left me with a silly grin plastered to my face. It's a very what is meant to be will be type of tale and I loved it.
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Profile Image for Laura.
1,533 reviews258 followers
August 27, 2012

Electric Melty Tingles is beautiful. A dazzling work of art that spoke right to my heart with words, emotions, and descriptions that left me in awe. K.Z. Snow’s gorgeous prose tickled all of my senses! Just listen…

”Perfectly interlocked, we said nothing. The train hypnotically chattered and rocked down the tracks. Faintly, at the base of my breastbone, I felt the muffled beating of Oliver’s heart. Mine met it, and the train’s movement met both, and for a brief eternity, the entire world seemed synchronized with our togetherness.”

Ned and Oliver’s story swept right into my head and heart with power, charm, and beauty. A story that shows how beautiful love can be. How a heart can breathe easy, beat faster, and feel so complete and full in love. But these pages also reveal how love can slip away if we let it. The thought of a lost love gives me the chills. Terrifies me to the core, but it happens in life. Time, distance, miscommunication, and so much more can add up. I want to yell it from the rooftops--hold tight to your love! Don’t let it get away!

A beautiful love story sure to warm, touch, and melt your heart!

Profile Image for Ami.
6,345 reviews484 followers
September 28, 2010
4.5 stars

I have to admit, when I first learned from K.Z. about the summary and the length of the story, I'm a bit disappointed. Why? Because I thought this would be a perfect ground for a full-length novel. Love story that spans 40 years? How is that enough in a novella? I would love to read their journey of love in full-length novel like I read Jeffrey Eugenides's "Middlesex".

BUT, after I actually read the story, well, I have to admit that novella can be as fulfilling as full length novel. I look at my parents' marriage, and they have been together for 30+ years, and I'm sure that not all of those days are 'worth telling'. Sometimes, they're mundanes. But there are also monumental events that they remember the most within that 30 years, and I guess, this is what the story like in the end.

Wait, I'm rambling ... okay, let's see. About 3/4 part of the story is taken place in 1970. When 20-year-old Ned Surwicki -- who have known that he is gay since he was in seventh grade -- helps his best friend, 21-yead-old Oliver Duncan, to overcome his fear of getting married by well, getting away from it all. They catch a bus to Chicago, and then ride a Vista Dome sleeper to Seattle. The main focus of the story is what happens in that 5-days trip, as the two friends come to discover their love to one another. Then about 1/4 of the story is when they meet again in 1985 Summerfest, and a glimpse of what happens now, in the year 2010. The story is written in first person point of view, and the narrator is Ned.

One of the BEST things about K.Z's story is always the beautiful words. She writes like a poet

"The air was still fresh, although it held a promise of heat and humidity, and it buoyed smells that were rich and varied and distinctly of this city: the fecund odor of the lake, the thick pungency of bus exhaust, the dusty breath of old brick and the crusty breath of fresh bakery."

Whenever I read her stories, I feel like I'm being lullaby-ed by the words. However, more than that, this story is very thoughtful: about being true to yourself, about love and acceptance, about that electric melty tingles that you get when you're with the one you love.

There is a scene when Ned coming out to his father, that I think will ring true for some of the gay kids out there. I love K.Z. does not quickly blame the parents, instead she writes ... I understood their discomfiture. It saddened me, but I was grateful their love remained unconditional. Mom and Pop belonged to a different generation. If my generation had difficulty understanding and accepting homosexuality, theirs was even more challenged.. I think that is very thoughtful, yes?

WARNING: there is a scene of group sex, that might not settle down with some readers. Though for me, after a deep thought, think that it's part of dealing with your sexuality when you're young. I don't think it's cheating, it happens during the trip (Ned & Oliver doesn't state their status of relationship at that time), and I actually believe that experience forms deeper understanding between Ned and Oliver about their own feeling for one another

Thank you for this thoughtful, poetic story K.Z ... and thank you for writing a roadtrip. Because I love roadtrip. Any stories with roadtrip on it will usually gets bonus star from yours truly *grin*
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Profile Image for Emanuela ~plastic duck~.
805 reviews123 followers
June 5, 2011
This is a very cute and sweet short story which also had some funny moments. I think that when Ned let his irony show, the book had its best moments.

I must confess that I was mislead by the blurb, I was expecting a different and angstier story, but I was happy with the actual plot. Ned was always extremely aware of what was going on and I really appreciated the delicacy with which he initiated his best friend Oliver to same-sex experiences. Their journey to Seattle was a real journey of discovery, haunted by the uncertainty of what was to come.

I think the first - longer - part of the story, which takes place in 1970 - was more satisfying than the last, even if there was a moment in the first part that ripped me out of the story. The last part - the 1985 reunion - was weaker in comparison. Usually it's the reunion part that I prefer in this kind of story, so that's the reason why I can't give a higher rating, because I wasn't really satisfied with it. It probably depends on the fact that Oliver and Ned didn't drift apart dramatically, so the reunion was very sweet.

It's a very beautiful friend-to-lovers, coming-out, first-time story, sometimes bittersweet, with a nice touch of humor.
Profile Image for Lily.
3,913 reviews48 followers
November 11, 2010
I was intrigued the first time I heard about this story, drawn in later on by the cover and blurb and ultimately totally engaged, entertained and satisfied when I finally read the story. What's not to love about a love that spans four decades and is still going strong. As much as I was looking forward to reading it I did wonder how K.Z. would pull off their long separation and eventual reunion in a novella length but I should have known better than to worry, it worked perfectly. Oliver and Ned are great characters and their story was beautifully told by an author whose lovely prose and witty, gritty and emotional stories never disappoint. Highly recommended.
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1,479 reviews267 followers
April 1, 2011
I liked this one. It was sweet and I just loved it when Ned or Oliver would talk about the 'electric melty tingles'. It was just so cute.

While I did like it, I think I would have enjoyed it more if there had been more details on what happened during the years they were apart. Those twelve years are just glossed over in one chapter and I would have liked more details about what happened and not just the vaguest basic ones. Even though they didn't see each other during that time, I think I still would have preferred to see what they went through and seen how they kept track of each others lives through their Ned's family.

The blurb is slightly misleading. It makes the story seem more suspenseful and have more things happen in it than what really happens. Some of the things it says happen fall under the twelve years that are glossed over so we don't really get to experience the full glory of the coming out this story is supposed to represent. As it was, like I said, it just gives the basic explanation of it. :-/

This is a short story, however, so I didn't feel like it reached it's best potential and I felt like we were missing half the story but it still left me with a smile on my face at the end. So, overall, it was good. Recommended.
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2,531 reviews8 followers
July 2, 2012
I think the blurb is a little misleading as the MCs spend a hell of a long time apart with no contact but it was a nice enough read.

The first 2/3 of the book was typical friends to lovers fare then the boys were separated due to... something that wasn't ever really explained and I still am not sure I understand. 15 years pass in which there is no contact whatsoever (these are BEST FRIENDS, you know) then they meet up again. Nothing is made of the fact that, despite having revealed his sexuality in a pretty dramatic way (including a strange foursome with some strangers), MC2 went back into the closet, or that he was in contact with MC1's family yet made no effort to contact MC1 himself...

The chemistry between the MCs was smoking, though, and the sex was hot. I did enjoy the first 1/2 of the book but the super-speedy fast forward made what should have been an emotional and heart-warming reunion a let down.
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Profile Image for Tj.
2,225 reviews67 followers
September 6, 2015
For such a long time span it was a short story. The reason I didn't rate this higher is that the majority of the story really is concentrated on the beginning of the relationship. I would have loved to have it more evenly spaced. I still loved the story of first love and how it can fail when the world is against it.
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Author 134 books5,082 followers
November 19, 2010
I loved the angst and pain and the romance and the anticipation. It's a rollercoaster and those are my favorite. The kind of book where at the end you want to go again.
Profile Image for Cleon Lee.
Author 3 books26 followers
April 21, 2011
Awwwww... this is funny, sweet, sad, beautiful, and so romantic. Perfect read when you just need to read something sweet and warming. The end is a bit rushed though.
Profile Image for Ro.
3,142 reviews16 followers
August 11, 2018
I was liking this, over much sex and all, until an out of place foursome was thrown in and then suddenly the cute couple is gone.
Profile Image for Wendy❤Ann.
1,757 reviews49 followers
April 23, 2011
Perfectly titled and the perfect description for the feeling I get when reading a great m/m romance story – I loved this book!

Something about the author’s voice made everything very vivid for me. It started with the descriptions of everything and continued through the witty humor (ex: War and Pees) and on to the emotional tugs (both highs and lows). This was a fabulously original coming out story that also dealt with separation and love rekindled.

I was originally a little worried about the time period for the start of the book (1970) because even that not too distant year feels “historical” to me (LOL), but I didn’t need to worry. The story felt very contemporary. The year was important to set the stage for attitudes and actions at that time, and also contributed to some of the great humor which in turn stirred up a few memories!

I loved the relationship between Ned and Oliver and was heartbroken when their paths went in separate directions for too many years. I would have loved to see more detail (and length to the story) once they reunited, but I also loved the creative twist to the telling of their story at the end of the book.

While I have quite a few of the books by this author, this was the first one I finally read. Shame on me for waiting so long! I can’t wait to continue with more:)

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1,137 reviews87 followers
June 12, 2016
This was a departure from any other M/M romance I've read to date. This is a coming of age story about 2 young men who struggle with their sexuality, identity and self-image as they cross the threshold into adulthood in their small New England town set in 1970's America. This struck a personal chord for me as I also grew up in the seventies and can't resist the promise of nostalgia that comes with reading a book set in that groovy decade...Being that I'm alive and well and have yet to hit 50 years of age, I had to chuckle when I saw "Historical" listed among the genres on the book's GR main page. However, when I read this book, I was struck by how much has changed for the LGBT community since that time, which somehow made the "historical" tag seem more appropriate.

This story is about Ned and Oliver. The two childhood friends emerge into young adulthood only to discover that their feelings for one another have deepened and evolved into something far more than friendship...and we follow the journey of their unique relationship as they navigate the obstacles of life and love over the next forty years.

Highly recommended.
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Author 21 books104 followers
October 7, 2010
Ned and Oliver have been friends for years and Ned’s in love with Oliver, who is straight and about to get married. He calls up Ned freaking out, leaves the bride at the altar and takes off with Ned to Seattle until the storm dies down. He confesses he’s gay and Ned’s in heaven. They have 5 days of bliss and then reality sets in and it’s 15 years before they manage to reconnect. Despite moving on, neither manages to forget the other. Most of the story takes place in 1970 (is that an historical) but it ends in 2010. It was a beautiful story and while I don’t generally like separations like that, it didn’t last that long on page and I think it made sense for the time and their lives. It was an adorable ending, and yes, there is an m/m/m/m menage scene which some people may find … objectionable maybe? but I thought War and his “lickin‘ stick” were appropriate. I think everyone will enjoy this poignant, but not sad, story.
Profile Image for Tara.
941 reviews60 followers
July 18, 2011
This is a friends turned lovers type of story. I picked it because it sounded like a sweeping romance that spanned years and I really like those. But this just wasn't that. For me it was a 88 page book. The first 50ish pages were just the two men's first encounter. Then there are about 10 pages that is just the narrator's version of the passing of almost 15 years. Then there are ten pages that resolves the storyline. Then the last 8 jumped from 1985 to 2010 to just wrap it up. I just felt like it needed more to fully deliver on the blurb.
Profile Image for Allie.
77 reviews13 followers
September 10, 2011
This book was very short. I started it when I got up this morning, and I was done by 9 a.m. The story was very simple, and the intimate scenes were quite detailed.
In 1970, social pressures have made it so that Ned Surwicki has not officially come out of the closet. But it doesn't mean that he cannot moon over his best friend, Oliver, who was getting married. I loved Ned. He was honest. In 1970, things were different, people were less accepting, and Ned acknowledged that but he never tried to be anything but himself - a lesson that most people, gay or straight, should learn.
Profile Image for Eden Winters.
Author 90 books678 followers
January 14, 2011
Electric melty tingles. Oh, that's the book's name, too? What a coincidence, 'cause I got 'em reading this sweet, sweet story. I laughed, I cried, I "awwww'd", and even squueed like a fangirl on occasion. Alternately, I wanted to hunt down Oliver and Ned, give them a shake, and tell them in no uncertain terms to get their butts back together where they belonged.

A gorgeously written tale of love and romance that time and distance couldn't destroy. Highly, highly, highly recommended.
Profile Image for Wren.
Author 6 books59 followers
October 3, 2010
As usual, KZ has written an intelligent and sexy book. The setting of the first part, circa 1970, was interesting to revisit (for those of us who might have been living then). The train ride was, to me, the heart of the story - almost like Ned and Oliver lived a lifetime in those five days. But seriously (SPOILER AHEAD) 15 years apart?! Made my heart hurt. The lovely resolution made up for it though.
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Profile Image for Fangtasia.
565 reviews45 followers
May 27, 2011
One of the best friends-to-lovers, coming-out stories I've read. Loved that it spanned such a long time in the relationship but would have liked it better if the author had given us more of what happened during their long separation. Heart warming, sweet, sexy and sad at times, the story and characters wrap you up and it's impossible to put down.

This is the first book I read by this author, looking forward to reading other titles.
Profile Image for Shaz.
889 reviews133 followers
October 11, 2011
Short but sweet story. The book itself spans a lot of years, but even though it's not a lengthy novel, it doesn't fall short. Even though (as always) I would wish for more about Ned and Oliver, this story doesn't need more. We get to be a part of the start of the relationship, both starts in fact and the way it's presented is very well done. And as far as the title goes? I love the descriptions and yes, it's just so very true!
Profile Image for Sucajo.
739 reviews64 followers
November 30, 2012
This book spans a period of 40 years. Ned and Oliver have been friends all through high school but Ned has been secretly in love with his friend for a while. I liked the easy, loving relationship between the two men and there was a good amount of humour thrown into the story, too. I liked how the story came full circle when we got to the end and met their neighbour, Anthony. A very enjoyable read.
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April 27, 2011
I'm not sure how to rate this one, so I'll refrain from giving it stars for now. I really enjoyed most of the book, but I'm still in turmoil over the last portion. Since I can't decide if I'm upset with the characters (which would be unfair to the author) or if I'm dissatisfied with how the storyline played out, I'll let my thoughts and feelings settle without throwing around stars.
Profile Image for Lee.
621 reviews
December 4, 2011
This is such a cute and touching story. It's so easy to fall in love with Ned and Oliver and share in their exploration of life, love, and their circuitous relationship. My only complaint is that the book was too short. I would have liked to have more.

I give Electric Melty Tingles four stars.

Profile Image for Shannon.
2,163 reviews46 followers
July 13, 2017
How the author managed to pack such a complete story in such a short book, I'll never know. Yes, I was wishing for a little more about the years they were separated but I didn't feel cheated or anything. Such a sad but sweet story about two men in love with each other but neither working hard enough to stay together until 15 years later. Loved it!
Profile Image for Dee Wy.
1,455 reviews
October 28, 2014
I really enjoyed this story of two young men torn apart because their families had trouble dealing with their coming out. It rang true-to-life for me, having had a brother-in-law break an engagement to a lovely young lady when he finally accepted he was gay.

Lovely read with a HEA.
Profile Image for Snowtulip.
1,077 reviews
April 22, 2011
3.5
Ned and Oliver were enjoyable characters and it was great to see that span of time through their lives. I did feel like something was missing for me emotionally, but than again that is just me (could be my mood, etc). I liked the story and will check out other Snow reads.
Profile Image for Anke.
2,512 reviews97 followers
January 3, 2013
4.5 stars
Very good read, althouh overall I found it a bit unbalanced. I would have appreciated it, if their life after age 21 would have been told as detailed as up to the point of their separation. So, it felt a bit rushed.
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32 reviews3 followers
November 6, 2012
Cute book about finding your love of your life. "quintessentially queer!!!"- Logo has coined that term. As far as i know.
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