I started reading this book, made it halfway, and ended up with the flu. I was out of commission for several days, but was able to finish once my brain had recovered from the flu. (Oh, yes, my brain. It took me a couple of days to feel up to reading much of anything after I was physically doing better.) Why am I telling you this? Well, because I am afraid it’ll affect my review in that the first half and second half of the book are somewhat disjointed in my head. It’s not the book’s fault, but the flu‘s fault! Fortunately, I did make some short notes, so hopefully that’ll make the difference in this review.
In short, there’s good, there’s bad, and there’s ugly. I think I’ll work backward – from ugly to good. Ending on a positive note is always good, right? The ugly: this was horribly, horribly edited. For some reason, quotes were the worst. More specifically, quotation marks often were MIA. There were other things wrong, but the quotes were the most frustrating and the most distracting. I found myself going back over several passages because I couldn’t tell at first (sometimes not even at second) if someone was talking still or not. These kinds of errors are just inexcusable in a finished product.
The bad is more story issues, not so much on the grammar. I felt like there were just too many dream sequences in this book. While it can be an effective tool, I thought the dream sequence was overused here. Another complaint is that I would have liked to have seen more of David. Not the David in Suze’s memory or dreams, but David as a character. David now. If he and Suze are working on a project together, shouldn’t there be more interaction? I thought he was just too absent from the narrative. Also, some things I felt were rushed. There were scenes in which Suze went to lunch with a friend, but rather than us getting to be there with them, we get a quick summary of what happened. It was pretty common for scenes that could have been good to be summarized and left behind all too quickly. I think the book would have been much more interesting. And finally, there was way too much repetition.
And now for the good. Despite the issues I had with the narrative, I did enjoy Suze’s story. I could feel for her – especially with her issues with her husband taking off for six months in Australia. She handled it much more gracefully than I would have – at least when she’s actually talking to her husband. But, leaving her and the three kids seems to overstate the issue – her oldest is in college. Her other two are teenagers. While, yes, it’s still hard (especially with working full time, too) at least he didn’t do it while they were in diapers. Trust me, it could have been worse. But, still, I did enjoy the book. I didn’t find too many “fall-down laughing” moments, but it did make me smile and chuckle a bit here and there. Plus, there were some really good quotes throughout the book.