I was not overly impressed with the first book in this series, though I did warm up to it a little towards the end. I think the difficulty I have with Dalglish's work is that it's hard to get close to the characters. I felt the same thing reading A Dance of Cloaks (my first experience with his work). His narration has the feeling of an impassive observer, so it's hard to understand the characters motivations, much less connect with them. The events in the first book seemed random and disjointed, though in retrospect they make sense, at the time my feeling was more like "what the heck?". If I thought about it more I could probably pin it down better than that, but I just don't have that much time.
That said, I really got into the series after kind of struggling through the first book. I think by then I'd had enough time with the characters to understand them a little better, and it made the story feel smoother and more momentous. Also, the conflicts were more clearly defined as the series rolled on. I hate it when people rehash the whole plot in a review, especially a fantasy novel, which are often very similar. To me it's the feel of the book and the quality of the story telling that's more important, and why would I want to know what's gonna happen, isn't that the point of reading it? Anyway, suffice to say this story has a fairly typical evil magical forces threaten to take over the world and only a few exceptional heroes stand in it's way type of plot. But it is none the less a good (not overly gloomy) read, with distinct and fairly unique characters. Not to mention a great value for the price Dalglish charges, Huzzah for self-publishing!