Sacchrine 'Love Inspired' story that just held NO surprises. The only reason I picked it up was because I *LOVE* correspondence literature, and this is a letter-writing book.
Lexie is THE most boring character ever written into a novel. She's a grad student who loves horses and skis, sure, but it's completely incongruous to her personality. She's a drag - a 'bookworm' except that she has no passion for it... or horses, or skiing, or anything else. The way Lexie acts toward Pierce from moment one is... forced by the author.
Pierce is a daredevil Special Forces guy who is gung-ho and no fear, of course. But it's completely incongruous to HIS actions, which include sitting around on his butt with a boring girl with a broken leg, pontificating about the horrors of war and the desperate need to keep our nation secure. He's afraid of horses, wanders museums, is all about long games of chess, writes long e-mails...
The author needs to figure out what she wants her characters to be, for pity's sakes.
NEITHER of these characters made ANY sense. And of course the don't want a relationship the WHOLE time that they do, so it just gets reeeeeally long and tedious, after a while. Worse, they spend all of their time talking over themselves. He'll talk about his family, and instead of her saying something about what he's said, or asking questions, she's all "Yeah, well MY family..." And this happens constantly, the whole book through.
But it wasn't just that. The author wrote dumb. She writes "in a year from now"... which would either be "in a year" or "a year from now, but not both. She has his family raising cattle and over a dozen horses on ten acres. Now, I've owned ten acres. There's not ROOM for a dozen horses and cattle on a plot that big, let alone what you'd need to grow to feed 'em, hello. She introduces a possible exciting plot idea - a cougar - but never develops it, so the blah book remains a blah book.
Worse, it's crap christianity, too. She's got his brother in Heaven, even though scripture says only Messiah has ascended, as the firstfruits, and nobody else is there, yet. Spirituality is vague references to church and some dinner prayers and a few "help me, Lords". Just... really disappointing.