Why do so many rational types sneer at astrology and its practitioners? There’s no easy answer. Astrology, in its many guises, tends to elude definition. But this book, which could have been so good, isn’t a bad example. Like A History of Western Astrology Vol 1: The Ancient World, the second volume – The Medieval and Modern Worlds – is almost a book all serious astrology students should read.
An engaging and erudite speaker as well as author, Nicholas Campion is prolific, more or less single-handedly filling a gap in the market with a series of cultural histories on astrology and related topics. But the publisher in this case is ‘Bloomsbury Academic’, and educated readers are used to high standards of accuracy. Campion clearly excels at both a general perspective and synthesis, which is great if others can take care of details, and ultimate responsibility rests with the publisher. Yet Bloomsbury, which no doubt dedicates part of their budget for fiction to editing, apparently failed to assign a proof reader, let alone a copyeditor, to this text.
Its grammar problems seem symptomatic of Campion’s thought rate exceeding his typing speed. Some sentences simply don’t make sense. He omits words or whole phrases or inserts redundant ones; writes ‘concerted’ where he means ‘converted’, ‘1553–34’ when I’d guess he means ‘–54’, ‘singly’ when he means ‘single’ (and what’s a ‘vivid dealcation’?), often transposes letters, misspells numerous names (e.g., ‘Ptolemey’, ‘Tolkein’) and errs on dates (e.g., Swedenborg’s and Robert Cross Smith’s birth years; the year that CG Jung is known to have begun astrological studies). And I’ve barely scratched the surface: the text’s hundreds of glaring (or even just fairly evident) errors cast doubt on the accuracy of countless supposed facts.
Of course, to fact-check a work of this scope within the kind of window typically allotted such a project may not be practical. And yet, if other researchers use this as a source, known history starts to look somewhat fuzzier than it ought to. Does this sloppiness negate the value of the book? No. Campion is at his best when asking pertinent questions and speculating on gaps in the records. But it’s as if his publisher doesn’t respect his readers. And why would they need to? How many have offered Bloomsbury feedback?