When I first started reading this book, it was extremely fractured. The dialogue and action were broken up. Like this. And I felt disoriented. And sort of fractured myself. There was no flow. The sentence fragments and incomplete thoughts just made me feel lost. Like "What am I reading?". It doesn't flow the way a novel should.
Disclaimer: The above paragraph was written that way on purpose, to sort of give a sense of what I felt when I opened this novel and started reading it.
Thankfully, the rest of the novel flowed more smoothly, although there were still a couple or three spots where I ran into the fragmentation again. It started out as a rather fun type of read, but none of the characters ever fully developed for me. Kathy reads like a selfish neurotic, especially at the fractured beginning of the book. Anne did flesh out more fully, but as I read, I never felt 'pulled in'. The most interesting character in the book for me isn't even alive (Anne's dead father). Even as I got to the last few pages, I never felt that "Oh, my goodness! I wonder how it ends!" feeling.
Here is a synopsis (without spoilers - I hate spoilers).
Kathy Spence is married to Elliott Spence, who teaches law at the university. Both of them were friends of Anne's father, James, who died some months earlier. Anne is working as a court reporter and going to law school at night. Elliott Spence happens to be one of her professors.
Kathy and Elliott went to college with Ross and Alice. Ross used to be Kathy's boyfriend, and they even spoke of marriage. Elliott was a good friend of Ross's in college. Once Kathy met Elliott, she threw Ross over for him. Ross has been harboring a grudge over this ever since. Alice feels unrequited love for Ross and has since their college days.
Ross shows up in the town that Kathy and Elliott now live in. He pays Kathy a visit, and that same night, goes out for drinks with Elliott. He leaves the restaurant, and shortly afterward, Elliott is run down and killed as he leaves.
Shirley, Anne's boss, and also a close friend of Kathy's, asks Anne to see if she can find anything that will help clear her friend of suspicion. Anne's father also wants her to help (with his assistance, of course, even though he's a ghost now). So Anne works her way around town, digging up clues that the police missed and getting herself into troublesome spots as she does so.
I read some other reviews prior to actually having a chance to open and read this book myself. As a consequence, I found myself totally looking forward to it. After I read it, I went to Amazon and read all of the reviews there. This appears to be a book that's either totally loved by the reader or not liked very well at all.
Unfortunately, I probably fall into the latter category. For me, this is a mystery without a mystery. I would classify it as "truly light summer beach reading".
The Amazon reviews are a pretty equal mix. so I would suggest that if you like light reading, you'll probably like this book. If you read "Piercing the Veil", the first book in the series, and liked that one, you will also probably like this book.