A rare mix of horror, science, and mythology, Rabbit Rue launches a new trilogy by Shaun M. Thomas. His Phase Cycle promises to unwind time, the universe, and the gods themselves before the evocative conclusion. And yet, it starts so simply...
Tammond Dale, a peaceful burg of succor and madness cowers at the whim of Rabbit Rue, who sups upon the souls of the undone. Malicious Rue, spinner of dreams that rend and tempt oblivion to swirl through madness and despair, rules unopposed and unknown, biding 'till his shackles fall to cinders. This town has failed to shrug the churn and plods among the damned, clinging to tattered shreds of former, clichéd lives.
When providence blows Kyle and his family to the harrowed gulch and into the arms of Adriana, the girl Rue so jealously guards, he too becomes snared within warped visions of insanity and horror. Confused and fatigued by Rue's cruel assault, he unearths clues that lead to Old Town, a hollow bastion of Tammond Dale's uneasy past. But to resist is exhausting, and he withers, and Rue is aided by relentless minions in wisps of swirling shadow. His life, humanity, and realty all hinge on understanding he lacks. His only hope exists beyond time, and the glimmer of escape from chaos it can offer...
Shaun was born in 1977 in Olympia, WA with a major congenital heart defect. Until his corrective surgery in 1984, he could partake in very little physical activity due to lack of oxygen. This set the stage for him to become an avid reader.
After a short obsession with Forgotten Realms, Stephen King, and Melanie Rawn, he started writing a trilogy in 1994 that was unfortunately shelved due to the academic demands of the I.B. Program, later continuing with those of a double major in Mathematics and Computer Science at Cornell College. It's possible he'll revise the old notes and storyline and complete the series, but his new Phase Cycle currently demands most of his attention. The first book in this series, Rabbit Rue, first appeared on Shaun's publishing site, and was later published by Smashwords for offline reading as an eBook.
Shaun currently lives in the Chicago area with his wife Jennifer, who plans to start Ph.D. work in elementary music education in 2011.
Self publishing has done for books what compact discs did for albums, providing access to a greater quantity of material at the expense of judicious editing. While Rabbit Rue is the spark of an interesting story it lacks the basic standards of a professionally published work.
The plethora of syntax, tense and spelling issues in the first 30 pages alone is an inexcusable distraction. The writer's adverb laden prose style and a reliance on italics for emphasis instead of well-crafted words is like an album that constantly skips, there is no chance for the reader to get involved with the story or characters as the flaws demand chronic attention.
I won this through First Reads, here on Goodreads. This could have been a wonderful book. It should have been a wonderful book. It would have been if someone had read over it once or twice. Some of it was a joy to read, but quite a lot of it was absolutely terrible. The sheer amount of typos, spelling errors, misused words, and the overuse of italics almost makes it not worth reading. It could have been a convoluted escapade of lovely grotesqueries. Yes, parts of it were, but most of it fell short. I would definitely read the next in the series, if it's better edited.
The writing struggles with straight narrative. More philosophical sections describing dreams and psyche have a more mesmerizing quality that promises deep insight, but demands several passes to reach full comprehension.
The net effect is that vividness of dreams compared to the normal world is reflected in the quality of the writing describing each, perhaps amounting to a kind of artistic statement.
Confession: I'm one of those people who is really, really bothered by misspellings, typos, and grammatical errors. As a result, this book was a nightmare for me in ways that had nothing to do with its horror-esque genre. I couldn't get past the first couple of dozen pages, unfortunately -- and I *hate* to leave books unfinished.
I was really looking forward to reading this book as it was the first one that I won off of Goodreads. I was disappointed with this book. It was very wordy with description. I think the storyline was okay just way over described and drawn out.