ARC review
Sofia is a doctor who is having a rough time of life. Her ex is an asshole, shes a workaholic, and her family is pushing her to date. One night her clinic's alarm goes off and she finds a bleeding man and his brother (Maxim) inside. Soon she learns that they are Bratva and her life is turned upside down.
There were too many uses of the 'what have I gotten into?' internal dialogue, from both characters. Her because she was suddenly involved with a professional unaliver, and him because he didn't know what had come over him and that Sofia was bringing out a side of him 'he never knew existed'.
Loved that Sofia was a plus size woman, but I really hate the 'my ex hurt my confidence and now I don't feel worthy' trope.
Some of the spice and kink was really hot, but everything sex wise happened way too fast. It was a lot of build up and only a little bit of action. The same thing happened in a few other places too. If you're gonna write a torture scene, make it detailed and brutal, not like you're writing a list of body parts being removed.
Their immediate attraction was cute, but Maxim claiming her upon gazing at her was a little much, in my opinion. But their relationship evolution was pretty sweet.
I don't usually like one POV over the other, but I really enjoyed Maxims POV more than Sofias.
There were some plot holes, even small things that had me really confused or took me out of the scene. Like, he put something in her butt, but it was never explained what, just that it was there. Then in a torture scene there was a metal box, with scratching sounds, that made a mercenary piss himself? I understand in books you have to let the reader have a bit of imagination, but flat out vaguery is obnoxious.
Minor notes:
One use of 'beast' instead of breast, same with the singular use when it should have been plural.
Some really weird grammar and language mistakes throughout. Same with situational errors, like hand and body positioning.
Overall, not the greatest. The book ended with a cliffhanger which was super intense and sad, but the rest was kind of flat.