Set in Hawaii and Maine, Wriston Colbert's novel is a story of accident, coincidence and fate; of the damage people do to themselves and others; of wanting to be left alone and wanting to be found. The story centers on Willa Beever, an 8-year-old girl who loses a leg in a shark attack. Willa also loses her voice -- or gives it up -- and so pieces of her story are told by her sister, Susan Catherine, or Scat, and Gracie McKneely, herself disfigured in a childhood accident, who ends up living in Willa's former room in a boardinghouse in Maine.
Wriston Colbert can be a mesmerizing writer, building waves of description and pure emotion that carry the story. At times, the syntax of sentences dissolves entirely, and the prose nearly becomes stream-of-consciousness. I would have been more willing to be swept along on this tide if the book didn't have so many errors of spelling, grammar and punctuation; the lack of attention made me wonder too often which choices were deliberate, and which merely sloppy. I was drawn by Gracie's story but, after the early chapters, found Scat more elusive. The novel's attention to physical beauty or its lack borders on obsession -- this character is described as plain, that one fat, another beautiful but despairing. The women suffer, barely able to cope with the world; the men are passive and distant. Yet I found nearly all of them sympathetic.
More often lately, I reflect on a book not in terms of its technical achievement but on whether the world created by the author is one I want to spend time in, whether its voice is original and gives me a new perspective. "Shark Girls" badly deserves a professional copy editor, and there are times when the story nearly falls apart, but it is more memorable and compassionate and compelling than many of the critically acclaimed books I've read this year.
There are two passages from the book, both from the final chapters, that I'll include here because I want to remember them:
"Remembering this now I think about another ocean, the one in Gracie's dreams as she described them to me, blue as breath, luminous, bluster of the surf the sun beating down, all vibration and sensation. Is this the moment when she understands, not our Gracie of the perceivable world but the other underneath, those three layers of skin? And how do I capture *this* in a photograph, save it as proof, label it, classify it, paste it into my Log: some knowledge of the world that isn't what most of us know; a door we dare not open, a place that may not take us in."
"Is it a dream? You will ask yourself this, must ask it as it seems like your eyes are open and you're seeing yourself sitting upright and forward on a sun-warmed rock the way the hala tree bends over the cliff, leaning into the wind, the sea, oldest of stories, watchful and thorny, trusting its roots because what else is there? At the place where a strip of sand meets a surging sea, watch what suddenly appears; watch her walk to the end of the point, such grace, possession of this land, this ocean her fluid and sinewy movements. Though she isn't really walking, couldn't be walking as it appears she has just one appendage, maybe a leg, but more like a fin, shivery play of the light, a fish's fin, long and metallic, body and tail. Hair hanging golden to her waist, eyes the color of the sea, shimmering gunmetal scales, long graceful curving of a fish. Her voice (is it a voice? resonate as wind, as breath): Would you like to swim with my friends? Ten of them, their fins dark and precise, cutting the water like so many knives. And with that the fish-woman arches her splendid shape and leaps. As she pivots, her projectile straight into the ocean, see the long curve of thigh, her muscled lower calf, the arched foot. Now there are eleven and the new one rising up through the luminescent sea so light and fine it appears almost translucent in the setting sun."