3 stars? An Orion's belt? Make it 4. I'm in a good mood. Hell, 5.
Lucidity is the key word here that opens an unlocked lock. Lucidity to its most tactile degree.
Like, way lucid, way lucider then stone statuette or 3D-Rom escapade (wait, that's not a good one). I mean, that funky space between words, a lot of us are into that. And lots can be done with it. But these po's are the exact opposite of any kind of obfuscating creativity, any construction in the realm of wonderment. There's no not having a basic-(yet,-primeval?)-through-line through these things. If I were to use a painter parallel, hmmm, perhaps Bonnard, a lot of pedestrian things made yur-sublime.
It goes about this with an innocuousness too, that's the damn kicker. They hover really close to triviality, that's where the action's at. It's dangerously banal. Too accessible.
The best poems are the subject-centered ones and it's through very common nouns, paired with plain language (air flavored ice cream language, banish all dictionaries language) and WAM, BAM you got some kickass poems. I think the achievement is unique. Sometimes, he'd get pulled into more time-memory-presence poems, I'd set the book-on-chest and think “You know who really awesome poems about time and stuff, John Koethe”. And in that boxing match, Dangerous Shirt guy gets clobbered. The everyman simulacra are more in the poet's powers.
Would it still be a life without still lifes? Hmm? Mmm, you see, I got you there.