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First Light
First Light
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On the harsh militant world of Sindorus, where even colours are considered sinful, three people living very separate lives are about to have those lives change forever. As deceptions are torn away, and ancient secrets brought to light, they each must struggle to find the missing pieces to the puzzle...answers that will unlock their true destiny.
Idrith, bitter and trapped in a life he never chose, is the first to discover his own fear-filled mystery. Obsessed with finding the truth behind the lies he turns to the one person he has always tried to avoid -- the mysterious pilgrim, Harmion.
Aztar's military promotion comes with an unexpected burden. A serious problem threatens the security of the entire Northerner regime and it seems that their only hope may lie in the hands of someone he was raised to think of as his enemy and inferior. Each day they struggle together to find a solution, but at night Aztar struggles alone as the secret he's kept hidden since childhood returns to torment him.
In a world where most women have no control over their lives Daen was allowed to grow up unrestricted and far better educated than normal. Now her father's health is failing and the running of their family estate lies in her hands...and with it the security of everyone she loves. Knowing that desperate situations call for courageous action, Daen is about to take a step that will change all their lives forever.
About the Author
MICHELLE FROST has written everything from reviews on mustard and shampoo to horoscopes and an astrology advice column for a small South African newspaper. She won second prize in the Klein Karoo Arts festival, 2001, for a short story later published in the book e-rupsie/e-ruption.Michelle has had other short stories and poems published in various publications and countries. This is her first book.
On the harsh militant world of Sindorus, where even colours are considered sinful, three people living very separate lives are about to have those lives change forever. As deceptions are torn away, and ancient secrets brought to light, they each must struggle to find the missing pieces to the puzzle...answers that will unlock their true destiny.
Idrith, bitter and trapped in a life he never chose, is the first to discover his own fear-filled mystery. Obsessed with finding the truth behind the lies he turns to the one person he has always tried to avoid -- the mysterious pilgrim, Harmion.
Aztar's military promotion comes with an unexpected burden. A serious problem threatens the security of the entire Northerner regime and it seems that their only hope may lie in the hands of someone he was raised to think of as his enemy and inferior. Each day they struggle together to find a solution, but at night Aztar struggles alone as the secret he's kept hidden since childhood returns to torment him.
In a world where most women have no control over their lives Daen was allowed to grow up unrestricted and far better educated than normal. Now her father's health is failing and the running of their family estate lies in her hands...and with it the security of everyone she loves. Knowing that desperate situations call for courageous action, Daen is about to take a step that will change all their lives forever.
About the Author
MICHELLE FROST has written everything from reviews on mustard and shampoo to horoscopes and an astrology advice column for a small South African newspaper. She won second prize in the Klein Karoo Arts festival, 2001, for a short story later published in the book e-rupsie/e-ruption.Michelle has had other short stories and poems published in various publications and countries. This is her first book.
- GenresFantasy
308 pages, Paperback
First published December 1, 2008
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About the author
Michelle Y. Frost
6 books32 followersMichelle Yvonne Frost was born in Bulawayo, Rhodesia/Zimbabwe. She is the author of two novels, FIRST LIGHT and WISDOMS OF THE LIGHT. She won second place in the 2001 Klein Karoo Arts Festival for the visionary sci-fi short story NO MORE EMPTY FACES and won second place in the 2010 John Muir Trust Wild Writing competition for LEAP OF FAITH.
She has worked as a librarian, commercial artist, astrologer and advice columnist. Her autobiography, ELEPHANT SONGS, is about her mystic experiences as a seer and empath.
Michelle now lives in Moray, Scotland with her family.
She has worked as a librarian, commercial artist, astrologer and advice columnist. Her autobiography, ELEPHANT SONGS, is about her mystic experiences as a seer and empath.
Michelle now lives in Moray, Scotland with her family.
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March 23, 2014
This was SO NOT my kind of book.
People with weird names, living in a place with two moons, for crying out loud!
BUT - the story won me over. It was completely involving, even mesmerizing at times.
We meet:
A monk who struggles to find something to believe in.
An artist who crosses the line into illegality by painting with colors.
Two men who need to solve the mystery of weaponry that is rapidly disintegrating.
The author has done a great job of creating a believable world, peopled with characters that we can like and root for. It is well written and unpredictable, and I'm looking forward to the next adventure.
People with weird names, living in a place with two moons, for crying out loud!
BUT - the story won me over. It was completely involving, even mesmerizing at times.
We meet:
A monk who struggles to find something to believe in.
An artist who crosses the line into illegality by painting with colors.
Two men who need to solve the mystery of weaponry that is rapidly disintegrating.
The author has done a great job of creating a believable world, peopled with characters that we can like and root for. It is well written and unpredictable, and I'm looking forward to the next adventure.
October 22, 2014
I read this quite a while ago (2 years?) & felt it had a few too many problems to give it 4 stars. Maybe it does, but then again, I still remember it very well & think about it occasionally. No 3 star book does that, so i think I was being grumpy. (No, don't laugh. It happens occasionally.)
;-)
This is Frost's first book. It's got a bit of steam punk, which wasn't really fleshed out, but has a REALLY cool system of magic based on color. It's haunting & the main reason I think of this often. Well worth a read.
;-)
This is Frost's first book. It's got a bit of steam punk, which wasn't really fleshed out, but has a REALLY cool system of magic based on color. It's haunting & the main reason I think of this often. Well worth a read.
August 2, 2020
"I am the string that links the beads."
Excellent story involving an ensemble cast who don't work out their interrelatedness until later in the story. The story telling was simplistic at first but improved as the book progresses. Even so, one romantic attachment at the end comes with so little foreshadowing that it rings as contrived.
"Nothing to see except pale shivering sand as far as the horizon and beyond." Is that like, "to infinity and beyond?"
A good read.
Excellent story involving an ensemble cast who don't work out their interrelatedness until later in the story. The story telling was simplistic at first but improved as the book progresses. Even so, one romantic attachment at the end comes with so little foreshadowing that it rings as contrived.
"Nothing to see except pale shivering sand as far as the horizon and beyond." Is that like, "to infinity and beyond?"
A good read.
March 3, 2014
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Books with settings in other worlds have so much potential. I decided to read this one because of how colours were/are a bad thing. How can this be? Aren't colours all around us? I was intrigued. I just hoped that the author could write a satisfying story about it. To my delight, the plot was well thought out and it was very believable. I loved how the characters shifted how they saw the world when any illegal colours were brought into their lives. It was as if they went from seeing a tree in black and white to actually seeing it as various shades of greens and browns.
In Frost's world, owning anything colorful can land you in serious trouble. For example, pictures in your home can be pencil or charcoal sketches, but a colorful painting of a bowl of fruit is illegal. But you're not limited to just paintings. Colorful outfits and even stained glass are illegal. If you're caught with any sort of coloured item, you could do some serious jail time, or even be sentenced to death. Why is this? Because colour can corrupt the mind.
Setting up the story takes time so be patient in the beginning. Frost has to introduce readers to each main character and explain their back stories. Then Frost begins weaving in the seemingly innocent pieces of the plot that will be tied together in the end. First Light is a complex story that is well written and executed. This is made more impressive by the fact that this is Frost's first book.
There are three main characters, and four other characters that are all tied together. The three main characters--Idrith, Daen, and Aztar--each have parts of the story told through their point of view since they live in different areas of Sindorous. This was a great decision by Frost. They each interact with Harmion who helps move the story along. In fact, readers will hate Harmion for his actions. There is a reason for what he does though, and by the end of the book, his betrayal makes sense.
The book tells a complete story, but leaves certain threads undone so readers will want to pick up the second book. It should be interesting to see what the group of characters with their special talents can do when the act together to change things in Sindorous.
A special note to potential readers, don't judge this book by it's cover. Yes, I'm one of those people who sometimes selects books because of the cover (and the synopsis), but definitely don't skip over this one. Pick it up and read it.
The writing style is easy to read. Middle graders can easily read this, but the plot is so complex that I recommend it for teens and adults. It can easily be a family book. There's symbolism in the book and of course, some mystery.
Books with settings in other worlds have so much potential. I decided to read this one because of how colours were/are a bad thing. How can this be? Aren't colours all around us? I was intrigued. I just hoped that the author could write a satisfying story about it. To my delight, the plot was well thought out and it was very believable. I loved how the characters shifted how they saw the world when any illegal colours were brought into their lives. It was as if they went from seeing a tree in black and white to actually seeing it as various shades of greens and browns.
In Frost's world, owning anything colorful can land you in serious trouble. For example, pictures in your home can be pencil or charcoal sketches, but a colorful painting of a bowl of fruit is illegal. But you're not limited to just paintings. Colorful outfits and even stained glass are illegal. If you're caught with any sort of coloured item, you could do some serious jail time, or even be sentenced to death. Why is this? Because colour can corrupt the mind.
Setting up the story takes time so be patient in the beginning. Frost has to introduce readers to each main character and explain their back stories. Then Frost begins weaving in the seemingly innocent pieces of the plot that will be tied together in the end. First Light is a complex story that is well written and executed. This is made more impressive by the fact that this is Frost's first book.
There are three main characters, and four other characters that are all tied together. The three main characters--Idrith, Daen, and Aztar--each have parts of the story told through their point of view since they live in different areas of Sindorous. This was a great decision by Frost. They each interact with Harmion who helps move the story along. In fact, readers will hate Harmion for his actions. There is a reason for what he does though, and by the end of the book, his betrayal makes sense.
The book tells a complete story, but leaves certain threads undone so readers will want to pick up the second book. It should be interesting to see what the group of characters with their special talents can do when the act together to change things in Sindorous.
A special note to potential readers, don't judge this book by it's cover. Yes, I'm one of those people who sometimes selects books because of the cover (and the synopsis), but definitely don't skip over this one. Pick it up and read it.
The writing style is easy to read. Middle graders can easily read this, but the plot is so complex that I recommend it for teens and adults. It can easily be a family book. There's symbolism in the book and of course, some mystery.
April 28, 2016
*Received a copy for an honest review.*
First Light follows a ragtag group of individuals as life transports them from the steady humdrum lives they are currently living into something more. Forced into a life in service to the church, Idrtih is isolated amongst the monks he lives with. His position gives him power, but despite that, their leader is determined to make his life miserable. When he finds a hidden chamber, his whole life changes one forbidden tidbit at a time.
As a woman born to status with a doting father in an isolated area, Daen is allow to grow up in an unconventional manner. She is educated and enjoys spending her time they way she wishes without societies standards holding her back. Estranged from her promised husband, an ailing father means one thing to her home, the end. So it's up to her to ensure their continued survival. When a fate leads to a business proposition, she takes the job knowing in advance the danger she faces should she be discovered.
After years of hard work, Aztar finally has his coveted position. There's only one problem, it comes with a major problem. But can he find the solution in time? Or will all his searching only leave him with more questions?
As the three continue on their journey with their companions, we learn more and more about this complex world. It's sort of a large scale fantasy based world, but with element that are comparable to a steampunk universe. There is a lot to learn and a lot more to ferret out of the shadows. Overall I really liked the world presented to us. It's a kettle, we have a kingdom versus the rebels, a church that is military like in it's set up and governing body, a gentleman with connections to all the major players, and a puzzle of light to solve.
I had plot path ideas when I first started reading. Not one of those, 'I already KNOW what's going to happen' sort of idea, but more like I think this book is going to be comparable to ____. (It's really hard for me to explain this in a coherent manner.) But the more I read, the more things were different than I had imagined they would be. Not that it is a good or a bad thing, just different than I was expecting. Looking back, I like the direction the author took, and how this book sailed away from my expectations.
There is so much material in this book beyond the literal story itself. The light, all the colors, bits of freedom and control, and more, all add layers to this story that make you stop and think about not only their world, but our world too. It's been a long time since I read a book that had an enjoyable story and also make me thing about anything other than 'who lives/dies' or 'who ends up with whom.'
Like any story, the good, comes with the bad. The only negative thing that really stood out to me while I was reading was towards the beginning. In the first quarter of the book, give or take, we are given a lot of information. Some is about their world, some about the characters, but it's a lot to take in. If I could change one thing about the story, I wish we had a tad more action bits scattered in there to counterbalance the info. I wouldn't call it an info-dump, it could just be my impatient side coming out to play since I wanted them to dive into the light mystery that much quicker.
Overall I liked the story. It was good, quick, and adventurous, and I am looking forward to reading book two.
First Light follows a ragtag group of individuals as life transports them from the steady humdrum lives they are currently living into something more. Forced into a life in service to the church, Idrtih is isolated amongst the monks he lives with. His position gives him power, but despite that, their leader is determined to make his life miserable. When he finds a hidden chamber, his whole life changes one forbidden tidbit at a time.
As a woman born to status with a doting father in an isolated area, Daen is allow to grow up in an unconventional manner. She is educated and enjoys spending her time they way she wishes without societies standards holding her back. Estranged from her promised husband, an ailing father means one thing to her home, the end. So it's up to her to ensure their continued survival. When a fate leads to a business proposition, she takes the job knowing in advance the danger she faces should she be discovered.
After years of hard work, Aztar finally has his coveted position. There's only one problem, it comes with a major problem. But can he find the solution in time? Or will all his searching only leave him with more questions?
As the three continue on their journey with their companions, we learn more and more about this complex world. It's sort of a large scale fantasy based world, but with element that are comparable to a steampunk universe. There is a lot to learn and a lot more to ferret out of the shadows. Overall I really liked the world presented to us. It's a kettle, we have a kingdom versus the rebels, a church that is military like in it's set up and governing body, a gentleman with connections to all the major players, and a puzzle of light to solve.
I had plot path ideas when I first started reading. Not one of those, 'I already KNOW what's going to happen' sort of idea, but more like I think this book is going to be comparable to ____. (It's really hard for me to explain this in a coherent manner.) But the more I read, the more things were different than I had imagined they would be. Not that it is a good or a bad thing, just different than I was expecting. Looking back, I like the direction the author took, and how this book sailed away from my expectations.
There is so much material in this book beyond the literal story itself. The light, all the colors, bits of freedom and control, and more, all add layers to this story that make you stop and think about not only their world, but our world too. It's been a long time since I read a book that had an enjoyable story and also make me thing about anything other than 'who lives/dies' or 'who ends up with whom.'
Like any story, the good, comes with the bad. The only negative thing that really stood out to me while I was reading was towards the beginning. In the first quarter of the book, give or take, we are given a lot of information. Some is about their world, some about the characters, but it's a lot to take in. If I could change one thing about the story, I wish we had a tad more action bits scattered in there to counterbalance the info. I wouldn't call it an info-dump, it could just be my impatient side coming out to play since I wanted them to dive into the light mystery that much quicker.
Overall I liked the story. It was good, quick, and adventurous, and I am looking forward to reading book two.
August 10, 2016
On the harsh militant world of Sindorus, where even colours are considered sinful, three people living very separate lives are about to have those lives change forever. As deceptions are torn away, and ancient secrets brought to light, they each must struggle to find the missing pieces to the puzzle...answers that will unlock their true destiny.
Idrith, bitter and trapped in a life he never chose, is the first to discover his own fear-filled mystery. Obsessed with finding the truth behind the lies he turns to the one person he has always tried to avoid -- the mysterious pilgrim, Harmion.
Aztar's military promotion comes with an unexpected burden. A serious problem threatens the security of the entire Northerner regime and it seems that their only hope may lie in the hands of someone he was raised to think of as his enemy and inferior. Each day they struggle together to find a solution, but at night Aztar struggles alone as the secret he's kept hidden since childhood returns to torment him.
In a world where most women have no control over their lives Daen was allowed to grow up unrestricted and far better educated than normal. Now her father's health is failing and the running of their family estate lies in her hands...and with it the security of everyone she loves. Knowing that desperate situations call for courageous action, Daen is about to take a step that will change all their lives forever.
A little slow to get into but the farther I got into the story, the more I got into it. Turned into a great read. I loved the characters & the story line.. The ending was both amazing & very surprising. This is the first book I've read by this author and I'd love to read more.
Idrith, bitter and trapped in a life he never chose, is the first to discover his own fear-filled mystery. Obsessed with finding the truth behind the lies he turns to the one person he has always tried to avoid -- the mysterious pilgrim, Harmion.
Aztar's military promotion comes with an unexpected burden. A serious problem threatens the security of the entire Northerner regime and it seems that their only hope may lie in the hands of someone he was raised to think of as his enemy and inferior. Each day they struggle together to find a solution, but at night Aztar struggles alone as the secret he's kept hidden since childhood returns to torment him.
In a world where most women have no control over their lives Daen was allowed to grow up unrestricted and far better educated than normal. Now her father's health is failing and the running of their family estate lies in her hands...and with it the security of everyone she loves. Knowing that desperate situations call for courageous action, Daen is about to take a step that will change all their lives forever.
A little slow to get into but the farther I got into the story, the more I got into it. Turned into a great read. I loved the characters & the story line.. The ending was both amazing & very surprising. This is the first book I've read by this author and I'd love to read more.
December 6, 2009
I must admit I'm a sucker for good covers, so when I picked up First Light, I was sceptical.
I need not have been, as it turns out. The book had me enthralled from the very first page to the very last! Not one second was boring and not one word was irrelevant! One of my favourite parts about the book is how all the characters link in the most unpredictable and fascinating ways! I was delighted every time a new link between characters was revealed. Another favourite part was how much I identified with quite a few of the characters. They were so *human* that they came to life in my head! The plot was amazing, to say the least. Very original with lots of twists.
I laughed, cried and felt like I was "in" on everything going on in the book.
All in all, it was an awesome read and I really hope to see more from this author some time in the very near future! ;)
It's definitely re-readable and I'm off to do just that! Re-read!
I need not have been, as it turns out. The book had me enthralled from the very first page to the very last! Not one second was boring and not one word was irrelevant! One of my favourite parts about the book is how all the characters link in the most unpredictable and fascinating ways! I was delighted every time a new link between characters was revealed. Another favourite part was how much I identified with quite a few of the characters. They were so *human* that they came to life in my head! The plot was amazing, to say the least. Very original with lots of twists.
I laughed, cried and felt like I was "in" on everything going on in the book.
All in all, it was an awesome read and I really hope to see more from this author some time in the very near future! ;)
It's definitely re-readable and I'm off to do just that! Re-read!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 19, 2014
When I first started this book I had high expectations. I mean, after having seen so many great reviews and so many great things having been said, especially the claim that it was an "Award Winning Author" (per the cover), I thought to myself "Thank God, finally a good book!"
Well, lets just say that things didn't quite turn out the way that I'd anticipated. I suppose the best way to start is by telling you a little bit about the characters and the plot line.
There are three main characters in this story, each one from the same world, but different ways of life. There is Idrith who is angry at the cards that he has be dealt in life. Then there is Aztar, who is a military man that has a great burden to bear, and finally there is Daen who is a female brought up with a sliver spoon.
The world is called Sindorus and it is a place without color as color is illegal, and anyone who uses things of color is considered an outlaw and is then condemned by the law--sometimes to death.
So, while I thought that the premise of the story was interesting and intriguing, I am sorry to report that things were not as expected.
Following you'll find my Pros and Cons:
I'll start with the Pros since there are not many to be had.
* The story idea. I find that the premise is pretty unique and potentially a great basis for a fantasy story. There was something about the story line that was otherworldly and reminded somewhat of The Last Air Bender. Not sure why that was, but I guess that's the direction my imagination went in. Which is weird because I'd read a review that said it had an underlined Steampunk quality--it didn't. But, oh well, not a big deal there.
Well, that was about it with the Pros. Shall we move on?
The Cons:
* My biggest peeve was the length of the chapters. Each chapter ranged from 20-30 pages, give or take one or two. WHAT?! Um... #NOPE! That's just flat out exhausting.
* The there was the pacing. Now, don't get me wrong, I realize that books sometimes have to take their time in order to establish a firm and believable plot. But, seriously? After the 3rd chapter, which was approximately 60 pages in, I was absolutely frazzled. Tuckered out, even. I was anxious for the story to get into the full swing of things. But, well, let's just say it didn't happen.
* Then there was the problem with the cover. Now, I realize that this is probably just a "ME THING", however, I truly believe that a cover should reflect the content of the story. In the process of reading and doing research on this book I realized that there are three different covers. My problem? None of them actually matched the content of the story.
Really? *insert side eyes and crooked mouth here*
*My last problem with this book was something that I did not notice right off the bat, but now I realize why. I was so worn out from the writing style, that I completely missed the syntax errors. It was just one of those things I suppose. So, here is my question... "Award Winning" really? Makes you wonder who is giving out the awards.
In all truth, I am not trying to be mean, I'm just calling it like it is. While this book had the potential of being a great and creative story, due to the lackluster delivery I am unable to give this story more than 2 stars. Which is a crying shame because after the first few chapters, when I was actually interested and impressed by the story I was rating it at an 4. It says a lot when a story drops that many digits by the end. Not good at all.
You see, I was so excited by the initial thought of this book, and impressed by the first two chapters, but after that it all went down hill quickly.
That's just my truth.
Well, lets just say that things didn't quite turn out the way that I'd anticipated. I suppose the best way to start is by telling you a little bit about the characters and the plot line.
There are three main characters in this story, each one from the same world, but different ways of life. There is Idrith who is angry at the cards that he has be dealt in life. Then there is Aztar, who is a military man that has a great burden to bear, and finally there is Daen who is a female brought up with a sliver spoon.
The world is called Sindorus and it is a place without color as color is illegal, and anyone who uses things of color is considered an outlaw and is then condemned by the law--sometimes to death.
So, while I thought that the premise of the story was interesting and intriguing, I am sorry to report that things were not as expected.
Following you'll find my Pros and Cons:
I'll start with the Pros since there are not many to be had.
* The story idea. I find that the premise is pretty unique and potentially a great basis for a fantasy story. There was something about the story line that was otherworldly and reminded somewhat of The Last Air Bender. Not sure why that was, but I guess that's the direction my imagination went in. Which is weird because I'd read a review that said it had an underlined Steampunk quality--it didn't. But, oh well, not a big deal there.
Well, that was about it with the Pros. Shall we move on?
The Cons:
* My biggest peeve was the length of the chapters. Each chapter ranged from 20-30 pages, give or take one or two. WHAT?! Um... #NOPE! That's just flat out exhausting.
* The there was the pacing. Now, don't get me wrong, I realize that books sometimes have to take their time in order to establish a firm and believable plot. But, seriously? After the 3rd chapter, which was approximately 60 pages in, I was absolutely frazzled. Tuckered out, even. I was anxious for the story to get into the full swing of things. But, well, let's just say it didn't happen.
* Then there was the problem with the cover. Now, I realize that this is probably just a "ME THING", however, I truly believe that a cover should reflect the content of the story. In the process of reading and doing research on this book I realized that there are three different covers. My problem? None of them actually matched the content of the story.
Really? *insert side eyes and crooked mouth here*
*My last problem with this book was something that I did not notice right off the bat, but now I realize why. I was so worn out from the writing style, that I completely missed the syntax errors. It was just one of those things I suppose. So, here is my question... "Award Winning" really? Makes you wonder who is giving out the awards.
In all truth, I am not trying to be mean, I'm just calling it like it is. While this book had the potential of being a great and creative story, due to the lackluster delivery I am unable to give this story more than 2 stars. Which is a crying shame because after the first few chapters, when I was actually interested and impressed by the story I was rating it at an 4. It says a lot when a story drops that many digits by the end. Not good at all.
You see, I was so excited by the initial thought of this book, and impressed by the first two chapters, but after that it all went down hill quickly.
That's just my truth.
March 28, 2014
I received a copy in exchange for my honest review.
This is an awesome book. We are introduced to the three main characters in the first three chapters. We meet Idrith, a young man who lives in a monastery. This was not by his choice. Idrith, as a young boy goes to live with his uncle due to a scandal and death in his family. Life with his uncle is not easy. He knows his uncle can't stand him. He and his cousin Aztar become very close. They share secrets they would not dare tell anyone else. Idrith follows his father into the monastery. His father is well liked. For Idrith it seems more like a prison until he meets Harmion and finds a secret room.
Daen's family owns land that once grew Rae trees. Rae trees are vital to Sindorous. As the trees have died they have started to raise milk giving animals. Daen's mother died giving birth to her. Unlike most women, Daen was raised with many of the freedoms that boys had. She was free to read more than others, climbed trees, and ask as man y questions as she wanted. This was great until she was promised in marriage so that her family land would always be hers. The nobleman's son she was to marry had great aspirations. He definitely would not allow her the freedoms she had grown up with because that could cause a scandal. When her betrothed keeps putting off the wedding her future father-in-law sends her a slave girl as a gift. This girl is a big help to her ailing father. She also introduces her to Harmion who helps her with her art.
Aztar has one goal, to become a Controller before the age of 30. Most people don't make it before age 40. He has attended the military academy and is moving up at a very fast rate for such a young age. Imagine his surprise when he is called in by the Zah-Riel and made a Controller at age 29 and given a secret mission. The one hitch is he must work with a southerner named Anachar. There are prejudices that abound between the people of the north and south. Aztar is beginning to overcome those prejudices as he works with Aachar. A letter from his cousin Idrith, delivered by a friend of Anachars proves both worrisome and beneficial at the same time. The friend turns out to be Harmion.
It didn't take me long after I started the book to start making connections to other books. One of the things that is evident from the very beginning is that people are not to have anything to do with colors. They are not allowed to have colorful clothing or pictures, etc. Everything is drab. As a teacher I immediately thought of two books "Truesight" by David Stahler. This is about a society that is blind in so many ways following a leadership that only pretends to be blind to keep the people in line. The other book is called "The Giver" by Lois Lowry. In this society everyone does what they are told. No one sees color except Jonas who is being trained by The Giver. He becomes angry when he learns the truth. It is the same with the people in this book. When they learn the truth they are called to action.
The lessons and themes in this book are many. The danger is everywhere. Will the individuals find common ground and find the connections that will bind them together, or will the darkness within the Zan-Riel cover them all?
This is a must read book. I look forward to reading the sequel and anything else this author writes. I was so engrossed I finished the book in one day. Definitely a book I recommend to all fantasy lovers.
This is an awesome book. We are introduced to the three main characters in the first three chapters. We meet Idrith, a young man who lives in a monastery. This was not by his choice. Idrith, as a young boy goes to live with his uncle due to a scandal and death in his family. Life with his uncle is not easy. He knows his uncle can't stand him. He and his cousin Aztar become very close. They share secrets they would not dare tell anyone else. Idrith follows his father into the monastery. His father is well liked. For Idrith it seems more like a prison until he meets Harmion and finds a secret room.
Daen's family owns land that once grew Rae trees. Rae trees are vital to Sindorous. As the trees have died they have started to raise milk giving animals. Daen's mother died giving birth to her. Unlike most women, Daen was raised with many of the freedoms that boys had. She was free to read more than others, climbed trees, and ask as man y questions as she wanted. This was great until she was promised in marriage so that her family land would always be hers. The nobleman's son she was to marry had great aspirations. He definitely would not allow her the freedoms she had grown up with because that could cause a scandal. When her betrothed keeps putting off the wedding her future father-in-law sends her a slave girl as a gift. This girl is a big help to her ailing father. She also introduces her to Harmion who helps her with her art.
Aztar has one goal, to become a Controller before the age of 30. Most people don't make it before age 40. He has attended the military academy and is moving up at a very fast rate for such a young age. Imagine his surprise when he is called in by the Zah-Riel and made a Controller at age 29 and given a secret mission. The one hitch is he must work with a southerner named Anachar. There are prejudices that abound between the people of the north and south. Aztar is beginning to overcome those prejudices as he works with Aachar. A letter from his cousin Idrith, delivered by a friend of Anachars proves both worrisome and beneficial at the same time. The friend turns out to be Harmion.
It didn't take me long after I started the book to start making connections to other books. One of the things that is evident from the very beginning is that people are not to have anything to do with colors. They are not allowed to have colorful clothing or pictures, etc. Everything is drab. As a teacher I immediately thought of two books "Truesight" by David Stahler. This is about a society that is blind in so many ways following a leadership that only pretends to be blind to keep the people in line. The other book is called "The Giver" by Lois Lowry. In this society everyone does what they are told. No one sees color except Jonas who is being trained by The Giver. He becomes angry when he learns the truth. It is the same with the people in this book. When they learn the truth they are called to action.
The lessons and themes in this book are many. The danger is everywhere. Will the individuals find common ground and find the connections that will bind them together, or will the darkness within the Zan-Riel cover them all?
This is a must read book. I look forward to reading the sequel and anything else this author writes. I was so engrossed I finished the book in one day. Definitely a book I recommend to all fantasy lovers.
September 19, 2014
Reviewed on behalf of The Review Board
Sindorus is a harsh militant world. Daen is an exception to the norm … a northern female brought up knowing how to read and write, and make her own decisions. Idrith chose monastic life young, when tragedy struck his family. Aztar, in his quest for the approval of his father, sets his sights on becoming the youngest Zah Har Controller ever. The Zah Riel has built this society and its religion based on secrets and lies. Pilgrim Harmion has a mission that will change everything.
I found myself hooked by this book straight away. There were some slow bits where my attention wanted to wander, but on the whole, it was a good read. The author has a fantastic imagination, and is obviously at home in the fantasy genre.
Unfortunately, the book has been let down badly by appalling spelling, punctuation and grammar. A lot of these mistakes are basic, and would be weeded out with even a perfunctory proofread. Words have been confused, such as using ‘taught’ for ‘taut’, ‘past’ for ‘passed’, etc. There are lots of words missing, and lots left in where they want removing. There are also clumsy sentences, such as the following: “He picking up the dragons, holding them out in his hand.” And “… perhaps they some kind of escort for his bride, …”.
The narrative is full of comma splices, introductory clauses left without commas, split infinitives, and commas in strange places. The writing is extremely passive in nature, and the action is delayed time and again by the insertion of ‘began to’ and ‘started to’. On one notable paragraph, I counted four ‘began to’ formulations, one after another. There were also a lot of filter words. All of which distance the reader from the characters and the action.
I spotted a number of plot holes and inconsistencies—some of which could be down to spelling errors/missing words/etc. While others are more obvious contradictions to what has been written previously.
All of this is such a shame, as this has the potential to be a brilliant book. In the end, I had to make a concerted effort to ignore (over and over) the errors, and attempt to just read. Sometimes it took a while to work out what the sentence should say.
If this book was edited and proofread, I would give it an easy top star rating. However, as it stands, I cannot give it any higher than 2 stars, which translates into 4 out of 10 stars using The Review Board’s rating system.
I feel the need to restate here, that this author has an excellent imagination and her book has some great potential. It is simply the lack of editing or proofreading that has let this down so much.
Sindorus is a harsh militant world. Daen is an exception to the norm … a northern female brought up knowing how to read and write, and make her own decisions. Idrith chose monastic life young, when tragedy struck his family. Aztar, in his quest for the approval of his father, sets his sights on becoming the youngest Zah Har Controller ever. The Zah Riel has built this society and its religion based on secrets and lies. Pilgrim Harmion has a mission that will change everything.
I found myself hooked by this book straight away. There were some slow bits where my attention wanted to wander, but on the whole, it was a good read. The author has a fantastic imagination, and is obviously at home in the fantasy genre.
Unfortunately, the book has been let down badly by appalling spelling, punctuation and grammar. A lot of these mistakes are basic, and would be weeded out with even a perfunctory proofread. Words have been confused, such as using ‘taught’ for ‘taut’, ‘past’ for ‘passed’, etc. There are lots of words missing, and lots left in where they want removing. There are also clumsy sentences, such as the following: “He picking up the dragons, holding them out in his hand.” And “… perhaps they some kind of escort for his bride, …”.
The narrative is full of comma splices, introductory clauses left without commas, split infinitives, and commas in strange places. The writing is extremely passive in nature, and the action is delayed time and again by the insertion of ‘began to’ and ‘started to’. On one notable paragraph, I counted four ‘began to’ formulations, one after another. There were also a lot of filter words. All of which distance the reader from the characters and the action.
I spotted a number of plot holes and inconsistencies—some of which could be down to spelling errors/missing words/etc. While others are more obvious contradictions to what has been written previously.
All of this is such a shame, as this has the potential to be a brilliant book. In the end, I had to make a concerted effort to ignore (over and over) the errors, and attempt to just read. Sometimes it took a while to work out what the sentence should say.
If this book was edited and proofread, I would give it an easy top star rating. However, as it stands, I cannot give it any higher than 2 stars, which translates into 4 out of 10 stars using The Review Board’s rating system.
I feel the need to restate here, that this author has an excellent imagination and her book has some great potential. It is simply the lack of editing or proofreading that has let this down so much.
April 10, 2014
This and my other reviews can be found at http://amethystbookwyrm.blogspot.co.uk/
Thanks to Alexander Frost for giving me this book to review.
In the world of Sindorus colours are considered sinful and if you own or make anything colourful and are found, you would be executed. Idrith is stuck in a life he did not want, being a monk, but when he finds a secret room with a colourful window, it becomes a place he can be himself free from the life he is trapped in. Daen is unlike most women as she is more educated and has more freedom, but with her father’s health failing and her being responsible for the people on the estate, she must take a step with her art that will change her life. Aztar’s military promotion is not as stress free as he thought as he has to find a solution to a problem which could threaten the whole of Sindorus. With these 3 people struggle with their own problems, they find the missing pieces to a puzzle which will unlock their destiny.
Fight Light is a good fantasy book with an interesting and unique idea about how colours are seen as bad which is unusual as it is everywhere in our world. It was a bit slow to start but when you get to know the characters you want to find out what happens next. However, I did not like how the characters never felt like they were in any danger and no matter what, everything would be ok.
I liked Daen as she was kind, would do anything to look after her father and treated equally and never looked down on those that worked for her. I felt really sorry for Idrith as he seemed lonely and has nothing to look forward to in life and would do much to find out the truth and bring colour to his life. I found it hard to connect to Aztar as he would not stand up for himself against his father and did not question the Zah-Riel. There was a romance at the end of the book but it did not seem that them two had any chemistry and there was no build up to it.
I am interested to see what happens next and I would recommend First Light to fans of unique fantasy books.
Thanks to Alexander Frost for giving me this book to review.
In the world of Sindorus colours are considered sinful and if you own or make anything colourful and are found, you would be executed. Idrith is stuck in a life he did not want, being a monk, but when he finds a secret room with a colourful window, it becomes a place he can be himself free from the life he is trapped in. Daen is unlike most women as she is more educated and has more freedom, but with her father’s health failing and her being responsible for the people on the estate, she must take a step with her art that will change her life. Aztar’s military promotion is not as stress free as he thought as he has to find a solution to a problem which could threaten the whole of Sindorus. With these 3 people struggle with their own problems, they find the missing pieces to a puzzle which will unlock their destiny.
Fight Light is a good fantasy book with an interesting and unique idea about how colours are seen as bad which is unusual as it is everywhere in our world. It was a bit slow to start but when you get to know the characters you want to find out what happens next. However, I did not like how the characters never felt like they were in any danger and no matter what, everything would be ok.
I liked Daen as she was kind, would do anything to look after her father and treated equally and never looked down on those that worked for her. I felt really sorry for Idrith as he seemed lonely and has nothing to look forward to in life and would do much to find out the truth and bring colour to his life. I found it hard to connect to Aztar as he would not stand up for himself against his father and did not question the Zah-Riel. There was a romance at the end of the book but it did not seem that them two had any chemistry and there was no build up to it.
I am interested to see what happens next and I would recommend First Light to fans of unique fantasy books.
June 4, 2014
You know the feeling when you’ve only read a couple of pages of a book and you think “this book will blow away my mind”? That’s the exact feeling I had when I read First Light. The author immediately grabbed my attention with the description of Idrith’s life in the monastery. From the beginning it was clear that he wasn’t there out of his free will. So I immediately began to guess why he was monk if he didn’t want to be one. All the other characters were as mysterious as Idrith was.
There author wrote from three different perspectives, Idrith’s, Daen’s and Aztar’s. They each had their own unique voice, as they lived three completely different lifes. Aztar a soldier, Idrith a monk and Daen a strong headed women were women actually don’t have power. I loved it how they all had their own story to tell but how they were at the same time part of something that was far bigger than them. They were linked from the beginning without their knowledge. That was one of my favorite parts of the book. All the characters were linked together in such unpredictable and fascinating ways. For that reason alone First Light is worth your time. All the small revelations kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time.
Something else I loved about this book was that you could relate to all the characters in some ways. From the stoic Idrith to the good humored Aztar and the loving Daen. They all had these aspects woven into their personalities that made them human.
This book made me feel overwhelmed at times in a good way because of its complexity. Michelle Frost is a master in developing plotlines. I still can’t believe how she pulled it off to finish the book with no lose ends at all! Everything made sense and fitted perfectly together. She definitely deserves more recognition for her work than the few ratings she has so far. So people if you read this go order this book immediately, I promise you that it won’t let you down!
*Note I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review*
There author wrote from three different perspectives, Idrith’s, Daen’s and Aztar’s. They each had their own unique voice, as they lived three completely different lifes. Aztar a soldier, Idrith a monk and Daen a strong headed women were women actually don’t have power. I loved it how they all had their own story to tell but how they were at the same time part of something that was far bigger than them. They were linked from the beginning without their knowledge. That was one of my favorite parts of the book. All the characters were linked together in such unpredictable and fascinating ways. For that reason alone First Light is worth your time. All the small revelations kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time.
Something else I loved about this book was that you could relate to all the characters in some ways. From the stoic Idrith to the good humored Aztar and the loving Daen. They all had these aspects woven into their personalities that made them human.
This book made me feel overwhelmed at times in a good way because of its complexity. Michelle Frost is a master in developing plotlines. I still can’t believe how she pulled it off to finish the book with no lose ends at all! Everything made sense and fitted perfectly together. She definitely deserves more recognition for her work than the few ratings she has so far. So people if you read this go order this book immediately, I promise you that it won’t let you down!
*Note I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review*
April 23, 2014
free book for honest review. juliesbookreview.blogspot.com
On the harsh militant world of Sindorus, where even colours are considered sinful, three people living very separate lives are about to have those lives change forever. As deceptions are torn away, and ancient secrets brought to light, they each must struggle to find the missing pieces to the puzzle...answers that will unlock their true destiny.
Idrith, bitter and trapped in a life he never chose, is the first to discover his own fear-filled mystery. Obsessed with finding the truth behind the lies he turns to the one person he has always tried to avoid -- the mysterious pilgrim, Harmion.
Aztar's military promotion comes with an unexpected burden. A serious problem threatens the security of the entire Northerner regime and it seems that their only hope may lie in the hands of someone he was raised to think of as his enemy and inferior. Each day they struggle together to find a solution, but at night Aztar struggles alone as the secret he's kept hidden since childhood returns to torment him.
In a world where most women have no control over their lives Daen was allowed to grow up unrestricted and far better educated than normal. Now her father's health is failing and the running of their family estate lies in her hands...and with it the security of everyone she loves. Knowing that desperate situations call for courageous action, Daen is about to take a step that will change all their lives forever.
A little slow to get into but the farther I got into the story, the more I got into it. Turned into a great read. I loved the characters & the story line.. The ending was both amazing & very surprising. This is the first book I've read by this author and I'd love to read more.
Jennifer
On the harsh militant world of Sindorus, where even colours are considered sinful, three people living very separate lives are about to have those lives change forever. As deceptions are torn away, and ancient secrets brought to light, they each must struggle to find the missing pieces to the puzzle...answers that will unlock their true destiny.
Idrith, bitter and trapped in a life he never chose, is the first to discover his own fear-filled mystery. Obsessed with finding the truth behind the lies he turns to the one person he has always tried to avoid -- the mysterious pilgrim, Harmion.
Aztar's military promotion comes with an unexpected burden. A serious problem threatens the security of the entire Northerner regime and it seems that their only hope may lie in the hands of someone he was raised to think of as his enemy and inferior. Each day they struggle together to find a solution, but at night Aztar struggles alone as the secret he's kept hidden since childhood returns to torment him.
In a world where most women have no control over their lives Daen was allowed to grow up unrestricted and far better educated than normal. Now her father's health is failing and the running of their family estate lies in her hands...and with it the security of everyone she loves. Knowing that desperate situations call for courageous action, Daen is about to take a step that will change all their lives forever.
A little slow to get into but the farther I got into the story, the more I got into it. Turned into a great read. I loved the characters & the story line.. The ending was both amazing & very surprising. This is the first book I've read by this author and I'd love to read more.
Jennifer
March 20, 2014
First Light is a fascinating story of life in Sindorous where colors have been banned and the residents have been taught to believe that enjoying color is inherently evil. They have also been taught to pre-judge people based on their heritage. This works well for those in power in a hierarchical society whose rulers use dogma and force to keep people under their control. There is much in this fictional world that will cause readers to make comparisons to the real world in which we live.
This is a story that gradually reveals information about the three main characters and how their lives intersect. I don't want to explain too much, because I feel like that takes the enjoyment out of reading it. I will say, however, that by the end, the plot reminded me a bit of a Shakespearean play - in a good way. The revelation of how the main and secondary characters are related to one another is well done and believable.
I found this book to be both enjoyable and thought-provoking. I really appreciated the author's depiction of a world in which people are not allowed to see or create colorful things. It made me really think about how much I enjoy color and yet how I take it very much for granted.
On the downside, I found some of the dialogue to be too contemporary, or at least, to not fit with the style of the rest of the dialogue. There is also a romance that is a little hard to believe and, therefore, not as satisfying as it might be.
All in all, I enjoyed this book and I would definitely like to read more by this author.
December 6, 2009
I picked up the book gingerly, wanting to like it, but afraid I wouldn't. I know and love the author's other written works. Would this one meet the challenge? Without a doubt, yes!
From the start, I was drawn into the strange mystery of a world that, while it was so foreign to my concept of living, was also uncomfortably familiar... a world about hope in dark places and how one person at a time can make a huge difference. I wanted to know why the characters felt and behaved as they did. I wanted to dig deeper into the book to find the thread that pulled them together. This book kept me turning pages, eager for more.
What I loved about the book is how the author wove a thread through so many lives, connecting them in unexpected ways. I sincerely hope Michelle Frost writes again if this is what she's capable of!
From the start, I was drawn into the strange mystery of a world that, while it was so foreign to my concept of living, was also uncomfortably familiar... a world about hope in dark places and how one person at a time can make a huge difference. I wanted to know why the characters felt and behaved as they did. I wanted to dig deeper into the book to find the thread that pulled them together. This book kept me turning pages, eager for more.
What I loved about the book is how the author wove a thread through so many lives, connecting them in unexpected ways. I sincerely hope Michelle Frost writes again if this is what she's capable of!
June 21, 2009
The cover does nothing for the book, for those of us that do sometimes judge a book by it's cover. The book actually starts a little slow IMO, but developes into a really good read. Michelle Frost has created a very good storyline, with a world of interesting characters, and excelent plot.
I would certainly recommend this book to any one that has an interest in Fantasy, Science Fiction Mysteries.
The first chapter of this book can be read on Scribd here:
http://www.scribd.com/doc/16544334/Fi...-
I would certainly recommend this book to any one that has an interest in Fantasy, Science Fiction Mysteries.
The first chapter of this book can be read on Scribd here:
http://www.scribd.com/doc/16544334/Fi...-
January 8, 2014
Liked this...
Hope that there is a follow up...
Different and quite unusual - liked the charactures alot - I want to know what happens with them...
Please Michelle write a sequel...
Pretty please
Hope that there is a follow up...
Different and quite unusual - liked the charactures alot - I want to know what happens with them...
Please Michelle write a sequel...
Pretty please
January 12, 2014
Just finished re-reading this...
Cannot believe how much that I did not remember
Just as good the 2nt time around
Cannot believe how much that I did not remember
Just as good the 2nt time around
August 24, 2018
I've always loved the way Michelle Frost weaves a story, so when she published this book, I was intrigued. The premise of the book itself fascinates me and I couldn't wait to see how the story would unfold. As usual, she doesn't disappoint. Highly recommended! The book left me wanting for more.
August 2, 2018
I just finished the kindle ebook and have to say that this seemlessly well-written novel smoothly and incessantly kept my interest from start to finish. The author's development of characters, setting and the issues of the day were wonderfully rendered while the story piqued my emotions in all the right places. Though Ms. Frost's south African roots seemed the obvious choice for background reflect, the story's metaphorical layers have great relevance for the times in which we live as well as for the patterns found within this current version of humankind (Homo sapiens). A wonderful read--one that people from ages 10 to 100 can enjoy and benefit from.
June 17, 2014
Reviewed by Lynn for Bex 'n' Books
Disclosure: I received this book from the author for an honest review.
In the world of Sindorus, everything is bleak. Where even color is illegal. There are three main characters Idrith, where not by his own choice was sent to live out his life in Amyth, a monastery. Here he suffers from headaches and an Abbot that enjoys making Idrith's life miserable. Until one day Idrith discovers a secret room. With windows of colors like he has never seen. Now he is looking for answers.
Then we have Daen, a Northern women that was raised by her father. Taught to read and write. She was an artist that spent a lot of her time drawing. She was promised to a nobleman in marriage. Over the years he has kept putting off the marriage, which makes her and her father happy. Needing a way to make money and buy herbs for her ill father, she starts selling her paintings which leads to someone sending her color paints to make make her painting with.
Last we have Aztar, a nobleman, whom dreams of being the youngest controller for Zah-Rel. Aztar is a cousin to Idrith and the fiancé of Daen.
Harmion is the person who brings these three lives together. He encourages Idrith to look for answers, Daen to paint with colors and points Aztar the way to answers about Rae.
By the end of the book it all is coming together and the past comes alight.
Pretty much the first half of the book gives you the background of each character and sets the story up. Learning the prejudices the people have against each other that live in other areas of their world. How they have blindly followed along without knowing the truth. How it only takes a few people to start questioning to make changes in their world. Once I got about half way I really started to enjoy the story. The story does wrap up in the end but yet there is enough for a sequel. So either way you are not left hanging.
Michelle Frost weaves the tale seamlessly, it just flows along. At one point I wasn't sure there was any way to finish the story satisfactory by the end. But she accomplishes this and then some.
Wonderful story for lovers of fantasy/ steam-punk novels.
Disclosure: I received this book from the author for an honest review.
In the world of Sindorus, everything is bleak. Where even color is illegal. There are three main characters Idrith, where not by his own choice was sent to live out his life in Amyth, a monastery. Here he suffers from headaches and an Abbot that enjoys making Idrith's life miserable. Until one day Idrith discovers a secret room. With windows of colors like he has never seen. Now he is looking for answers.
Then we have Daen, a Northern women that was raised by her father. Taught to read and write. She was an artist that spent a lot of her time drawing. She was promised to a nobleman in marriage. Over the years he has kept putting off the marriage, which makes her and her father happy. Needing a way to make money and buy herbs for her ill father, she starts selling her paintings which leads to someone sending her color paints to make make her painting with.
Last we have Aztar, a nobleman, whom dreams of being the youngest controller for Zah-Rel. Aztar is a cousin to Idrith and the fiancé of Daen.
Harmion is the person who brings these three lives together. He encourages Idrith to look for answers, Daen to paint with colors and points Aztar the way to answers about Rae.
By the end of the book it all is coming together and the past comes alight.
Pretty much the first half of the book gives you the background of each character and sets the story up. Learning the prejudices the people have against each other that live in other areas of their world. How they have blindly followed along without knowing the truth. How it only takes a few people to start questioning to make changes in their world. Once I got about half way I really started to enjoy the story. The story does wrap up in the end but yet there is enough for a sequel. So either way you are not left hanging.
Michelle Frost weaves the tale seamlessly, it just flows along. At one point I wasn't sure there was any way to finish the story satisfactory by the end. But she accomplishes this and then some.
Wonderful story for lovers of fantasy/ steam-punk novels.
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