Sorry, but I'm calling it quits at 60% on this one. It started off well enough---Max kidnaps Allie in order to gain information about her father, but he feels bad about "terrorizing" her (which, can we just pause to discuss for a moment? Yes, he drugged her and took her from her home, but he was about the nicest, gentlest kidnapper I've read about. He used soft ropes so she wasn't uncomfortable, didn't threaten her, didn't hurt her, and barely even intimidated her), gathers no information because she knows nothing, and lets her go....then basically stalks her to look after her. Not to mention, Max was too wishy-washy. I felt like he was trying too hard to be a bad guy, but didn't know how. He beat people up just fine with his cousins, but then he felt all guilty for gently kidnapping Allie and never laying a finger on her or even threatening her. Ugh. Grow a pair!
Things were just too slow-paced for me. There was too much "fluff" about Allie's thoughts, a lot of which were repetitive and obvious, and I found myself skimming full pages of that to get back to the "action". While it's not a bad story, between the drawn-out fluff, and the repetitive use of certain words (can someone please do a word-count and see how many times "monster" is used?? Also, "mercurial" seems to be a favorite of Ms. Sykes), I felt impatient more than interested most of the time.