This review will contain spoilers. HOWEVER, I have not clicked the "hide spoilers" button because I will be talking about micro aggressive, problematic issues this book has regarding Sabrina (which is why I gave it 1 star among other issues) and I would like WOC to know and allies in general. This review will only make sense if you read the book.
Also, please read the entirety of this review before you feel like you need to come at me. This is not me trying to attack Sophie Lark or The Savage but simply to point out some things that aren’t ok whilst giving a review of this book.
When I finished reading The Spy a while ago I was super excited for Adrik and Sabrina's story. They both seemed like super cool, badass and independent characters. Plus, Sabrina being bisexual and Latina made me excited because I'm also Bi and Latina. At this point I had only read the Kingmakers series. Before The Savage came out I decided to read the Brutal Birthright Series which I was super excited to read because I heard a black woman (Simone) and a Latina (Camille) were the heroines of books in that series. This is something rarely seen in books and mafia books which got me hyped.
Imagine my surprise when I get to "Bloody Heart" (Dante and Simone's book) and I'm reading a spicy scene in Dante and Simone's book where they are reunited and as Simone is giving him the best head of his life she thinks "He can be my master and I’ll be his slave, if that’s what it takes to get him back”… followed by him spanking her with a belt repeatedly. The spanking would not have been an issue if Simone had not referred to herself as a slave and her white lover as her master (ugh!). Now you might be wondering “but hey! This is a review for The Savage not Simone’s book, what does this have to do with Sabrina?”. Again, please bear with me, emphasis on the please. MY JAW DROPPED because I couldn’t believe a white woman wrote this, her editor read this, and whoever else did and let it get published because WTF? Why would you as a white woman feel ok writing this? This is basic common sense to not do this.
After this book I took a break because I still couldn’t believe it. I had forgotten about The Savage and then it came out. I read it because I was curious as to how Sophie Lark would write about Sabrina, another woc, plus I have kindle unlimited so I thought I’m not really spending my money on it in case this is a train wreck.
Sabrina is introduced as this woman who wants to feel free in life, live by her choices/mistakes. She is extremely capable in various regards and is aware of her intelligence and beauty but doesn’t want to be treated as a piece of meat or just as a sexual object. She also has a temper and can be extremely reckless but hey we all have faults. She meets Adrik for their first date and is convinced that he will treat her as other men have before. However, Adrik surpasses that and treats her as she has wished to be treated all along by a man. They go their separate ways for months but keep in contact then they meet again in Oregon and have lots of sex again. Their connection felt a lot like instant love/lust. Although we get told that they talk/text a lot throughout their time apart, which is what helps build their connection, we don’t really get to see that. However, their time together before leaving to Moscow was really the best part of the book and super cute in my opinion. I loved the arcade date and seeing Nix and Sabrina’s friendship a bit more.
At this point Sabrina has to decide whether she goes back to Kingmakers or goes to Moscow with Adrik. She’s afraid to go with him “I don’t want to be your soldier. I want freedom, not a new master”. She wants to be his equal, his partner, something she reiterates aloud to him time and time again and something he promises to her. She goes with him hoping to create an empire together as equals as he has promised her.
One of my biggest issue with this story is that Adrik does not see her as his equal. Sabrina was reduced to such a grotesque sad version of who she initially started out as by Sophie Lark and Adrik. That probably wasn’t intended but that’s how it came across. Why? you ask (hopefully) Keep reading please.
From the beginning Sophie and Adrik put a lot of emphasis on her body. Which of course women can be proud of their bodies but for woc whose bodies are often oversexualized there is a thin line where it goes from empowering to fetishizing. Something which was emphasized when Sabrina kept being referred to as exotic while her body was being compared to objects such as Maseratis. Calling woc “exotic” repeatedly is problematic and microaggresive to say the least. A simple google search on “why is calling woc exotic problematic?” will have a lot of aritcles pop up (around 22 million), including scholarly journals written by woc. We first see Sabrina being called exotic by Zoe in the Rebel. If you’re Latino you will understand why having a Spaniard woman calling a Latina exotic is problematic. Hint; colonization, creation of caste system, Spanish putting down Latinos and fetishizing us, dehumanizing us, etc. So, when white people call woc “exotic”, this is not a compliment as it dates back to white people othering woc, dehumanizing us, fetishizing us. It makes woc feel like we are being treated as objects and this is just the tip of the ice berg. Again, this is repeated with Adrik referring to her as exotic multiple times. Animals are exotic not woc. I will not go into further detail on this because it’s not my job as a woc to educate white people on why this is problematic.
My other issue with the way Sabrina is written is that we repeatedly get told that she is Puerto Rican and super close to both her parents, including her mother (Camille) who is her Puerto Rican parent. However, we don’t really see this (her culture) playing a part in any way on who she is. We get one tiny flashback scene of her mom making empanadillas. That’s all. This wasn’t surprising as in Camille’s book, we also get repeated reminding that she is Latina but besides being told this or emphasizing their brown skin repeatedly or in Sabrina’s case how exotic she is, we don’t get anything else showing us how their culture has shaped them. I’m not saying give me a Puerto Rican stereotype where Sabrina is dropping Spanish words at random, while daddy yankee’s gasolina plays in the background while eating mofongo every other chapter but put effort into who she is and the culture that is supposedly important to her because of her mom and Puerto Rican grandpa but we don’t get to see how it has shaped her. Which is more aggravating as I see that Sophie puts this great effort into researching Russian culture to the point that we get a history lesson on Russia, it’s leaders, drinking culture, wedding culture, etc. Yes, the majority of the book takes place in Moscow but again, the lead is a Latina and we don’t get anything else into her culture besides 1 sentence of her mom cooking empanadas, while being reminded how exotic her brown skin and body are.
The story progresses and Adrik goes on to degrade Sabrina verbally and physically. Sabrina once again points, screams out, that Adrik is not treating her like an equal and his partner in front of Jasper. Adrik’s big man ego can’t handle being talked to this way in front of his friend so he exposes Sabrina’s breasts in front of Jasper and goes on to shove his hand down her pants to basically put her in her place. Does he grovel? Nope, just bathes her and asks for forgiveness once. What does Sabrina say? “I’d forgive much worse than that”. The girl, who throughout this book and the other kingmakers books would drop anyone who would treat her like shit is being written as accepting being degraded, humiliated and apparently much worse if it came down to it. Why? Because she is in “love” and their “love” is different than “normal love”… that is not love, this entire relationship is so unhealthy to say the least. This is coming from someone with her degree in psychology and working on her M.S. in counseling psych. Yes, there are multiple times Adrik says in the book he respects Sabrina and her intelligence yet that’s not really shown in the way he continues to treat her.
Other things happen, Sabrina is still upset she isn’t being treated as he promised aka his partner and equal in the business. She’s tired of it and decides to confront Adrik. He basically admits that he never planned for that to happen and he just told her that (manipulated her) so she would follow him to Moscow. Once again proving that he sees her as nothing but for something for him to have. “You don’t care what I want! You don’t care what I feel!”. They break up, she leaves. Sabrina’s character goes even more downhill. Her recklessness comes out and she makes decisions that will hinder herself and Adrik’s business. However, in my opinion she really didn’t owe him shit since she came up with the product that is making Adrik rich.
Her self-destructive tendencies come out and the weird codependency from their relationship comes out as well. So much so that Sabrina turns to the drugs she’s making “I take the drug more often than I need for testing. I take it almost every day because it’s the only relief from the hurting”. She doesn’t eat, doesn’t sleep, doesn’t take care of herself and starts popping pills. Again, emphasizing how unhealthy their relationship is/was. Meanwhile throughout this breakup, Adrik is just sad and angry but nothing really happens to him. Sabrina’s recklessness, temper is something that has been pointed out by herself and other character’s in the book. I understand that characters sometimes need to hit rock bottom to grow up however, when the female lead is the only one suffering and to the extent that it’s almost suicidal due to the fall out of a toxic, codependent relationship just leaves a bitter taste.
Moving on, in what felt like a rushed ending and epilogue, Sabrina almost gets beat to death and a Bounty is put on her. She goes back to Adrik and she apologizes to him. I understand that she did mess with his business but did we also get an apology from Adrik for how he treated her throughout this time, how me lied to her, manipulated her? Nope, at least we don’t see it in the book. He does have one phone convo with Ivan on how he can become better but gain this felt so rushed and we didn’t really get to see how he changed for the better or in fact their relationship. At the end of the book Sabrina did not feel like she had any of the qualities that made her Sabrina. I understand people change, it’s normal but her character felt like an empty shell of what she once was. I know this is a dark romance, mafia story, I have read plenty but she was continuously treated in the worst way by someone she gave her heart to and I wanted so much better for her as a Latina and a woman.
To Sophie Lark and her passionate lark fans/followers:
First, I doubt you will read this review but in case you do, I want you to know this was not meant as an attack. Frankly, I hope you don’t take this rudely but I don’t care whether you get cancelled or not. I know that no matter what any author does there will always be people that support them (jk rowling and her billion dollar empire being an example). That’s just the truth. I will give the benefit of the doubt and hope that none of the problematic things I have pointed out regarding microaggressions were done with the intent to harm, it doesn’t seem like your character. However, it’s still not ok to have written those things out. You as a white woman should have never written a black woman referring to herself as a slave and her white man as her master. You as a white woman should have put more effort into Camille and Sabrina showing their Latinidad or how it plays a role in their life/how it shaped them because YOU decided to write Puerto Rican characters who deserve that effort. You as a white woman should not have written white characters (Adrik and Zoe) referring to a brown skin Latina as exotic repeatedly. You as a white woman should not have taken Shiva a sacred deity of Hinduism and compared Sabrina to her during a sexual act. This is not me trying to be offended it’s just pointing out things that are wrong and that you wrote because you (or your team) don’t have the knowledge or put in the effort to correct these things or inform yourself because you’re white. Although you’re a woman you will never experience what woc go through, each being a different experience on their race, ethnicity and the deeper their skin color goes. Frankly, please hire someone on your team that can catch these problematic/micro aggressive issues before they’re published. If you already have someone, hire someone better. Again, this is not an attack but a review written out in hopes that you do better by the woc in your books and the woc who read them because I have seen proper representation written about poc by authors who were not of the specific race/ethnicity they have written about.
To WOC who have read any of the Lark books I mentioned and enjoyed them or overlooked the issues I mentioned. This is not a dig at you, I just simply want better for us, that’s all. As a woc I should not have to look over such problematic issues/sentences written in books because the lack of representation is so low in the literary world, especially in romance. Crumbs don’t make a person feel full. I hope this opens the door to conversations and experiences by woc in the comments. Will I read more books by Sophie Lark? I honestly don’t know, I love her immersive writing style but I just honestly feel sad and disappointed.
And lastly to the inevitable poc pick me’s that will comment “I’m a Latina and I wasn’t offended by that, etc” (each poc community has them, iykyk). Don’t bring your self-hatred, self-internalized racism into the comment section. Please look inwardly and I hope you’re able to heal from that one day. You don’t agree and these issues don’t affect you or you don’t care? Ok, well move on but again I want better and I know better can be done.