This was not as good as the reviews lead me to believe.
I enjoyed how distant and uninterested Harper seemed in the billionaire Daniel in the beginning. I was rooting for her to hold out and make Daniel work a littler harder than he usually had to for a woman’s attention . . . but then he buys her one drink and she falls right into his hands just as he expected she would. I was disappointed to say the least. All that potential tension . . . POOF! Vanished straight into a pineapple umbrella cocktail.
Also, that was the least believable Category 5 hurricane I think I’ve ever read about in any novel. It was so random and clearly added to get the two ‘love interests’ to share a bed together . . . in a hallway. The hotel staff starts boarding up the MORNING it’s set to arrive? A Cat 5 . . . And they wait till the last possible second to prepare?
What the heck? I’ll give her credit. I don’t think I’ve ever seen that method used in a romance book before . . . but perhaps for good reason. The only damage was a few palm fronds scattered in the parking lot. I feel like a quick google search “cat 5 aftermath” would have done the author some service here. Although I have family in Florida so perhaps that’s why this rubbed me the wrong way.
The fact that’s how they ended up in a bed together seemed way to convenient and like a last minute choice by the author. It also disappointed me.
Then there’s his big moment. Daniel decides he wants to take a woman on a date—something he’s never considered doing before. What’s his big billionaire bank account plan? Fly her in a helicopter . . . to a luxury hotel . . . on the beach! But like, not the same luxury hotel on the beach they’re currently staying in . . . it’s a different one.
They’re in Hawaii . . . And all he can come up with is a hotel dinner on the beach? Was there literally no other place he could’ve taken her? No other effort could’ve been put into it? A private dinner someplace only reachable by helicopter with a few staff members to server them? Then a nice secluded swim in some little known tide pool only the locals know about? No? None of that?
I mean, to put it in perspective, my husband rented a helicopter to take us on a private night time tour of Boston when we visited . . . and he’s definitely not a billionaire.
This date seemed a little . . . flat. But I don’t know. Maybe I can look past that considering he’s never gone on a date before? Maybe he didn’t know what he was doing.
Then we get to the whole “the pair are forced to break up” part, and it was a roller coaster and one I wanted off of. Katy Perry’s - Hot N Cold comes to mind. One minute she’s breaking up with him over a vague-as-hell text Daniels father sent him. The next she’s nuzzling his chest. The next she’s dancing with some other rich guy she just met (don’t even get me started on whatever that was supposed to be about), then she’s nuzzling Daniels chest, then she’s storming off and they aren’t speaking to each other, then he’s rushing into the room to see if she’s okay all over a nightmare, then they’re not talking again, then she’s eating breakfast with him, then she’s storming out of his penthouse leaving behind the watch he bought her.
Like, it just ruined the pacing entirely of the book, like the author had several plans on how she was going to handle the story, and just left parts in that were drafts meant to be deleted.
It just didn’t flow together at all and left me no longer caring what was happening at the hotel.
The weird “three rich guys” subplot was just that. Strange indeed. For a woman who was swearing off men on her vacation, she sure knows how to give them all her attention. I feel like this was a weird and weak attempt at making Daniel jealous, but she later realized a CEO at one of his hotels, putting his hands on/arguing with a guest in public—over a woman, probably wouldn’t be a good look, so she decided to just water the drama down, instead of removing it in favor of something else.
I didn’t really care for it. Also, why were the three of them showering her with gifts, when only one was making an obvious attempt at courting her. Like, I know us ladies don’t get much good attention from men but this was a little cheesy to me. Not just competition from one man, but poor Daniel had to compete with three rich Harvard trust fund babies. But it wasn’t really a competition because the second the group learns it’s Daniel that broke her heart, they just roll over like “Oh, that guy. Yeah he’s more competition than we care to go up against. When he breaks your heart again, we’ll all go for ice cream, bestie!”
It was weird. Although Mr. Harvard planned a better date than Mr. Dynasty. Just my opinion.
It just seemed like the author was forcing too much of the plot of the characters which made them feel like they were acting out of character. Lots of moments made me roll my eyes. The surprise Valentine’s Day party gave me flashbacks to really cringy fanfics I used to read as a teenager and I almost stopped reading the book after she got invited by the three Harvard boys to make Daniel jealous.
I quite literally set it down and told my husband I couldn’t read that. It was too much. But he insisted I continued because he was enjoying my constant commentary and said he was invested on how it played out.
So I marched on . . . for my husband and his secret love of hearing me complain about romance dramas.
The ending was just too neatly wrapped up for my taste.
I probably won’t be reading anymore of this series.