Kenna
There's something about their relationship that is a little YA.
Okay, so someone's trying to kill Kenna. That's the plot of this book.
There's an opportunity here for Evander to cause some conflict in this book.. can he do it? Maybe her conscience against killing people... maybe to plant doubt about Mordran and Idra... who they really are, their relationship motives, what really drives them? He's already kind of tried with Mordren. Evander is kind of likable, and it could be believable that he wants what's best for Kenna... it could also be believable that he wants Kenna for himself... what will he do?
The birthday party scene was fun, but it kind of highlights how little is happening. I liked her conversation with Eilan about why he doesn't date... they can't really accept only part of him... and I know idra and Hadeon will get together.
So they're face to face with their armies against Anron... and I have no clue what this environment looks like. Grass? Trees? Numbers? Nada. So much detail is lacking. Really, what happened? Is it windy? Is it warm out? Is it winter? No idea what the atmosphere is. Are they standing close? How can I hear the enemy taking, but they can't hear the talking on this side? I dont have enough world building.
The whole sequence from the king being murdered to their escape to them quickly deciding what to do next and who to gather... to Hadeon deciding he'll give himself up so that he can be with and protect Ellyda, who was captured, was really good. Only a few minutes, but when it's good, it's good. But it's a little annoying that this happened directly after such a flat scene.
Oof, that's rough. Your stepfather hired the Assassin's to kill you.
I struggled a little bit with this one, not because it wasn't enjoyable but because it's just not reaching the potential that I know this author can do.
Their relationship is a tiny bit cringe. There have been a couple sweet moments like when they said I love you and how it's shown that he sees her for who she is, and he likes her that way. But the other stuff is a little cringe. Reminds me of people who need to make sure others see and hear what they're doing... like there's a bit of a show to it - even to each other. I don't like it.
I considered stopping here but I really do want to see the land of the high elves. I also like the potential for them dealing with Anron, instead of her struggling through it.
I decided to stop here. Prisoner Healer is giving the effort I want now. A reluctant 4.
Ranking:
-Book 3: she teams up with Mordran to kill Prince Volkan. Meanwhile, learning the family dynamic between him and his friends and meeting the high elves. They fail, and she becomes a spy/slave in his court. Huge shift in quality in this book. Very focused and intentional with every chapter. 4 (24 "wicked")
-Book 5: Someone's trying to kill Kenna. Her birthday. The war starts, and the king dies. All the princes get the black bracelets, and she saves everyone in the end.
(23 "wicked") A reluctant 4.
-Book 4: Volkan's slave. Kenna is being used to toy with Mordren. Kenna plotting to mess with Volkan from within. 4. After book 3 because the world in book 3 was just a little bigger. It got smaller in this book. (24 "wicked")
-Book 2: Her family admits they sold her (she wasn't taken). She's all on her own. She meets Valerie and Theo. She plays games with Mordren, and he plays back. She tricks him into buying her freedom from the Stone Prince. 4 (23 "wicked")
-Book 1: Intro to the story. She helps her family pay off a gambling debt. Evander, her "mark," is secretly a spy for the princess who attempted to kill the king. 3.5 (15 "wicked")