Note: I’m only talking about Brianne’s book in this review.
Honestly, the book was horrible. One, Dante is the lamest mafia boss ever. What type of boss needs his son’s teenage best friend to be his bodyguard? He can’t hire any grown thugs to shield him? Two, I was forced to read yet another story by this author that consisted of pages and pages dedicated to eating food and talking over lunch. When will she add more depth and nuance to her characters’ conversations? When will there be a much needed improvement in plot and dialogue? And, of course, the book ends with a wedding, the only plot device she seems capable of inventing, at this point.
Why must every storyline she conjures involve a wedding and/or a pregnancy? Quite frankly, I’m running out of patience with this author and this series.
Chloe and Lucca got engaged in book 4 and we’ve yet to see a wedding between them, but, since then, Drago and Kat have gotten married, Maria and Dominic have gotten married, Maria’s gotten pregnant, and Dante’s gotten remarried? Wtf? I’m done after Lucca 2. Seriously, I’ll be reading just for my #Chlucca wedding and that’s it.
Also, she promised to resolve the controversy surrounding One-Shot but we’re about to be on Book 10 and there’s still no resolution, meanwhile, we’ve waited six books for answers. We know virtually nothing about Lucca—we don’t know his background/backstory, we don’t see him as a young boy growing into a man like we did Dominic, we don’t learn what he did to become a Made Man at 17, we don’t see him with the football team even though we were told he used to play football back in book 1, we don’t see him bond with his siblings, even though we’ve been told him and Maria are close, Leo looks up to him and wants to be just like Lucca one day, and he’s protective of Nero, as shown when he threatened Elle in the hospital in book 1 for refusing to see him. And we don’t see him have any meaningful interactions with Sal, his supposed best friend.
We barely see him do anything but smoke cigarettes (or play with his Zippo and pile of ash), meddle around in other characters’ business, make light threats he doesn’t deliver on, and cook for Chloe—is he still the greatest threat the mafia has ever seen???? What exactly is so scary about him, because I’m not seeing it!
Even more frustrating and annoying, readers don’t get to see glimpses of Chloe pre-trauma, they’re deprived of scenes of her from the past, even after it was said in her book that she was besties with Cassandra for over 10 years, back when she was outgoing and sociable.
Even more incredulous and impossible to believe, we don’t see any fallout for Lucca murdering her parents when she’s literally the mayor’s daughter—this should have been breaking news, especially considering the fact that she’s now an orphan??? We don’t hear about her parents’ will or estate and learn what they left for Chloe—and they’d definitely have one, considering their status. We don’t even know who’s mayor of Kansis City now—has there been another election? Wouldn’t Chloe be obligated to attend? Wouldn’t there have been a public funeral for her father, considering that the death/murder of a mayor is a big deal???
We don’t hear about Chloe’s old housekeeper, Lana—what happened to her? We don’t see Chloe being discussed on the news or in the newspapers when her story definitely would be—hello, the world thinks she’s been in a life-changing car accident that made headlines and left her facially disfigured with permanent scars and now her parents die and you don’t think readers are going to expect news vans following her around, reporting on the fact that tragedy seems to follow the “Scarred Beauty around?
Chloe has suffered literally multiple forms of trauma: physical, psychological, and emotional. The girl has literally been tortured by knife, stabbed in multiple parts of her body, kidnapped multiple times (once by Lucifer, once by Lucca, and again by Lucifer), plus survived a second kidnapping attempt by Lucifer during Vincent’s book and has been physically abused and thrown to the floor and hit by her father (and forced to come to school with bruises on her eyes, hidden under makeup) and emotionally abused and neglected by her mother, in addition to being severely bullied and tormented at school for over three and a half years, living with the constant fear and threat of violence, facing intimidation and harassment by her very own lifelong ex-best friend, and then she falls in love/gets Stockholm syndrome as the result of being kidnapped by Lucca, a guy who literally is as violent as the people who have harmed her (although he has never harmed her) and likes to carve people up with knives, you know, the very same weapon that was used to repeatedly traumatize, brand, and mark her, yet we’re supposed to believe she’s able to survive this torrent of abuse and violence or even become a mafia queen without ever having an inkling of therapy or suffering some sort of breakdown as a result of her many traumas? It’s so unrealistic.
Chloe needs a goddamn therapist for her obvious PTSD, self-harm tendencies (digging her fingernails into her palms until they draw blood as a nervous/anxious habit), fear of touch, and other phobias, and I think the author is wrong for making it seem as though Lucca’s love is powerful enough to erase all the damage and victimization she has suffered and experienced.
Trauma and pain cannot be undone so easily and I think the author’s decision not to show Chloe going to a trauma therapist or getting a psychiatrist, in addition to a psychologist, was just not realistic.
The girl’s been shot at multiple times now (in Dante’s casino apartment, at the mall, and in Dante’s mansion), kidnapped multiple times, abused for over four years, brought back to the original setting/scene of her trauma (which should have re-traumatized her), and been told that the monster who inflicted her with scars and brutalized her so badly, Lucifer, wanted to keep her—the dude that originally wanted to kill her changed his mind after seeing that Lucca wanted her and instead wanted to keep her as his pet himself—and what would that have entailed? The rape of Chloe, I presume? Would he have forced her to be his wife? As if she hasn’t already undergone nearly every type of victimization and abuse possible! Why add the creepy sexual component? There’s enough deviance in this book series!
Ugh, I need this series to end already. I need Chloe to get her happy ending, that’s literally all I care about, at this point. Nobody deserves a happily-ever-after than her. Nobody has suffered more than her. For the love of god, please let the author finally resolve so many of these questions readers have been waiting to be answered and then end this series already, it’s dragged on for far enough. Oh, and after Chloe and Lucca’s wedding, no more weddings! Please, for the love of God! It’s getting tiresome!