Why did they have to get engaged?
It made no sense!
This book had a very strong start.
Mostly because of Thayer.
She wasn’t what I was expecting at all, but I honestly straight up loved her. And I kept loving her throughout the entire book.
I loved her personality, and I loved how she knew her worth and wasn’t scared to shoot down anyone who tried to bring her down.
She was also really good to Bennet without throwing herself all over him.
I liked how he was actually the one to pursue her more than she pursued him.
Cause he was the one in the wrong all those years ago!
I didn’t really understand all the corporate talk. So maybe Bennet had made all the right choices he could make when dealing with the trouble in his company.
But all I read was that he had used money he didn’t really have and almost drove his business to the ground.
It wasn’t all that flattering.
And it felt like he was lusting after her more than he was in love with her.
It just didn’t touch my heart you know?
It drove me a little crazy not knowing what this betrayal he believed Thayer had made was.
We discovered it soo late.
And it was so lame when I learned what it was.
Like, if he had just talked to her and asked her if she had talked about it, then everything would have been fine immediately.
Instead they went ten years hating each other. And he abandoned her when she actually needed him too.
There were so many ways people could find out about what had happened to Bennet’d father anyway. Not to mention how the news would have spread eventually.
I wanted to love Quinn because she seemed like a genuinely nice person when she was away from Millie. And I did like the vulnerable moments she had around Thayer.
But every time Thayer asked her anything of importance, Quinn would lie or evade, or make light of something. Then the conversation dropped or they got interrupted.
It was just annoying.
And when they finally had a conversation about everything, Quinn didn’t listen to a single word Thayer said.
It was even more annoying.
Apparently Bennet had trash talked Thayer to his brother, Holden. And Holden mentioned he even hated Thayer because of that trash talk.
We never saw Holden learn the truth. Or even the two of them interacting.
Like, Bennet owed Thayer a HUGE apology for basically spreading rumours about her to people in his life, to the point where they disliked her.
Agh.
They found out Millie was behind leaking the information about his father, and the affair with Adam. Yet she didn’t appear in the book again.
She was literally always there though the rest of the book, with her nose in everyone’s business, like and annoying gnat, and we don’t even get a confrontation?
Like I mentioned: There was no reason for them to get engaged.
Millie made up that she had heard rumours about Bennet and Thayer getting engaged. After they had told people they had been serious about each other for a month.
A month!
And Bennet responded saying they had been thinking about it. Which somehow translated to needing to buy a ring cause now everyone was talking about it.
They could have easily said they wanted to wait until after Quinn and Adam’s wedding. Or that they want to do it in the future.
Or, I don’t know, a million other things that make a lot more sense than being in a relationship for a month, and conveniently getting engaged when Bennet needs a business associate to sign over a bunch of money, but he values family, and Bennet is a playboy.
Christ.
Overall this was not a bad book, and it had potential.
But I was also just so aware of how far along on the page I was, and just wanted to skip to the next one.
Because it felt like so much unnecessary inner monologue, and descriptions.
Like, maybe they would look at something and start describing what that thing looked like when they were in the middle of a conversation.
Or they would sit down in the middle of the conversation and describe how the material felt or if the chair was soft and so on.
You get the memo?
Eventually it felt faster paced, but that was just because I didn’t read all the paragraphs where nothing happened.
And I didn’t miss anything by doing that.