Hawke Lightseeker has little time to relax after his victory over a ruthless guild. A new threat is rising: an ancient Labyrinth has begun to disgorge Chaos-tainted monsters upon the countryside. He must join forces with old foes to confront those responsible: the Court of Thorns, Chaos-worshipers who seek nothing less than the destruction of the Realms and the overthrow of the Makers.
To survive, Hawke must master his new abilities and learn how to use them. And he must do so without losing his humanity.
C.J. discovered his obsession with making up crap and writing it down at the age of 6, when he wrote his first short story, back in the days when the Cold War was still on and the only mobile devices were the wrist watch and the walkie-talkie. He's been making up crap and writing it down for fun and profit ever since.
The last book introduced guns, where somebody figured out how to hack the system using magic for chemical reactions the makers had blocked. Sounds over powering?
Guess again, magical guns are a minor ability compared to what the higher level characters can do, the ones with ??? In their stats, due to their higher level compared to Hawke. And you get to see “cheerleader” at a much higher power level.
Larry the Revenant is back, and he has gained power, and is working hand in hand with the court of thorns. The court of thorns is a Fae court, that wants to destroy the current world system the makers rule.
Using a D&D type system, the author introduced even more overpowered man based abilities! Mana Core’s? And we find out more about the Fae, how the realms were created, and the makers.
And I appreciate the humor, a couple of times I laughed out loud. Or had to stop and take a quick break to look up a video clip. Tip - When you see the matrix reference, go lookup the video clip...
The series has an incredible depth of logic in the world building. The author, C.J. Carella’s background is in gaming. And it shows. The series compares favorably to the Russian Authors that pioneered the LitRPG genre with classics such as the Shaman, sleepless ones, etc. After being introduced to LitRPG by this series, I started reading the Russian LitRPG Classics in the English translations and they are great and pioneering a lot of new LitRPG sub genres.
I read the preview chapters of this book on the authors webpage. It was stated there that said chapters were unedited at that time and that the whole book was going to be professionally edited prior to the full release.
If the book has gone through any editing whatsoever between then and now(2021.09.06) then I would suggest appending the Prefix (Un) to the word professional.
The story is what it is, about on par with earlier books in the saga, love it like it hate it, you more or less know what you will be getting, that is if you ain’t one of those weirdos who start of reading series out of order for some reason.
I knocked off 1.5 stars from my evaluation of this book mostly for technical writing issues/mistakes seemingly unedited and some minor personal preference issues as to story, characters and such.
If it wasn’t for the annoyance factor the book would probably have garnered a 4/5 rating from me.
Waited until the (Current) end of the series to do a review.
Now, whilst the title says “Good”, the actual state is not:
Numerous grammatical errors. (The fort’s wall = The fort is wall) Numerous typos. Words that aren’t actually words being used. (Not common, but happened a handful of times.) (“Speeded”, anyone?)
Now, aside from those, I like the book series, am looking forward to it continuing, and would recommend the book to friends if I had any.
Note to author: Take your time. Hire someone to proofread at least twice. (Or multiple someones.)
Side note: This review encompasses books 1, 2, 3, 4, and 5. So errors from the other books are being factored into this review.
Exciting times (for the readers) and dangerous, terrifying times (for the characters) in the fifth out of six books in the Eternal Journey series. We find out more about the Realms, see some higher ones, and the big twist at the end is fantastic while setting the hook hard to read the next book.
Overall, not a terrible read. Still has a better than most litrpg system, but lacks in other areas. Simplistic. If food, it’d be gas station food, but at least not the kind that would make you sick.